教育专题：写作课课件.ppt

Unit 5 Writing陈小利陈小利A travel journalwhowhenwhatfeelingwhere Para1:Structure Para2:Para3:who when where(location)what .Person:I/weTense:the past and presentStructure of a travel journal scenery food people feelingsvWanzhou Senior Middle Schoolon the top of the hillin the east of.by mountainslies/is is located is situatedLocationis surrounded Wanzhou Senior Middle School is surrounded by thick forests.uI enjoyed a _ scenery from the hill top.uThe _ scenery attracted me most.uI found the scenery _.uThe _ scenery made me amazed.uWhat imperssed me deeply was the _ night view.attractivecharmingwonderfulamazingsplendidScenery The food tastes/is tastydelicious nicefantasticgoodFood People are easy-goingfrankwarm-heartedenthusiastickind-heartedPeoplebroadenexperiencerelaxenrichincreaseour knowledgeour minddifferent cultureourselvesour lifeFeeling 假如你是李假如你是李华华，上周跟同学去万州旅行，上周跟同学去万州旅行，请请根据以下要点写一篇旅行日志。根据以下要点写一篇旅行日志。要点如下：要点如下：地理位置地理位置印象深刻的人、物等印象深刻的人、物等旅行感受。旅行感受。注意：注意：100词词左右；可适当增加左右；可适当增加细节细节。Writing Show Time 书写工整书写工整要点齐全要点齐全较少的语法错误较少的语法错误语言得体语言得体行文连贯行文连贯词汇丰富、句式多变词汇丰富、句式多变A trip to Wanzhou Last month I went to Wanzhou with many other teachers.Situated in the northeast of Chongqing and surrounded by the Changjiang River and mountains,Wanzhou takes on a delightful look.On a Sunday morning,we went on a trip to the Taibai Hill,where we saw kinds of colorful flowers.Arriving at the top,we enjoyed a splendid view of the whole city.After lunch,we decided to take a boat trip along the Changjiang River.It was amazing to find many local people washing clothes by the river.At night,we had a fantastic dinner and what impressed us most was the tasty Wanzhou Grilled Fish.Wanzhou,with its attractive scenery,various food and her enthusiastic people,attracts people from home and abroad.You can not miss it.sampleHomeworkCopy the writing sample and polish your own work.Life is like a journey,what matters most is not the destination but the scenery along the way.