英语书面表达高分技巧及策略.ppt

高考英语书面表达评分原则高考英语书面表达评分原则1 评分时，先根据评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。最后给分。2 词数词数少于少于80或多于或多于120的，从总分中减去的，从总分中减去2分。分。3 评分时应注意的主要内容为：评分时应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性及上下文的连贯性。和语法结构的数量和准确性及上下文的连贯性。4 拼写与标点符号拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面。评分时是语言准确性的一个方面。评分时应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。5 如如书写书写较差以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次较差以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。语言地道，语言地道，流畅流畅,规规范范覆盖所有内覆盖所有内容要点容要点主要内容：主要内容：内容要点；内容要点；词汇和语法的数量和准确性；词汇和语法的数量和准确性；上下文的连贯；上下文的连贯；语言的得体性语言的得体性应用了较多应用了较多的语法结构的语法结构和词汇和词汇有效地使有效地使用了语句用了语句间的连接间的连接成分成分 技技 巧巧1.使用较高级的词汇使用较高级的词汇3.使用恰当的连接词使用恰当的连接词词汇反映你知识贮存量的词汇反映你知识贮存量的多少，也是衡量英语水平多少，也是衡量英语水平的一个重要标志。的一个重要标志。运用得当的句子结构可以运用得当的句子结构可以给文章增色不少，从而使给文章增色不少，从而使整篇文章因此而生辉整篇文章因此而生辉 。使用恰当连接词，对写一使用恰当连接词，对写一篇有篇有“英语味英语味”的文章很的文章很重要，能使文章上下衔接重要，能使文章上下衔接自然、紧凑。自然、紧凑。增强书面表达效果的技巧增强书面表达效果的技巧2.使用较丰富的句式使用较丰富的句式4.4.语言地道，流畅语言地道，流畅,规范规范一一.使用较高级词汇使用较高级词汇1 1合理使用副词，增强文章的情感性和可读性。合理使用副词，增强文章的情感性和可读性。Victory belongs to the people.Victory certainly belongs to the people.I like reading while he likes likes watching TV.I like reading while he enjoys watching TV.2合理使用动词和动词短语，使表达更生动。合理使用动词和动词短语，使表达更生动。在山脚，有一条小河在山脚，有一条小河.1)At the foot of the mountain,there was a small river.2)At the foot of the mountain,there flowed a small river.1.Suddenly I thought out a good idea.A good idea suddenly struck me.Exercise 12.She cant correctly pronounce the word.(一般一般)She has trouble in pronouncing the word.(高级高级)3.In our school,there are twenty-six classrooms.Our school is made up of twentysix classrooms.Twentysix classrooms make up our school.状状语语从从句句定定语语从从句句省省略略倒倒装装并并列列句句虚虚拟拟感感叹叹句句名名词词性性从从句句 运用多种语法结构，句式灵活多变，可运用多种语法结构，句式灵活多变，可以使文章增色不少。以使文章增色不少。二丰富的语法结构二丰富的语法结构We were glad to see the crops and vegetables growing very well.How glad we were to see the crops and vegetables growing very well！使用较丰富的句式使用较丰富的句式1使用感叹句使用感叹句2.2.使用强调句使用强调句Weak as I am,Ill make the effort.2)Though Im weak,I will make the effort.（倒装句）（倒装句）Because her mother was ill,she didnt go to work.(强调句型强调句型)It was because her mother was ill that she didnt go to work.3 使用倒装句使用倒装句4.4.使用各种从句使用各种从句The girl was spoken highly of.Her composition was well written.（定语从句）（定语从句）The girl whose composition was well written was spoken highly of.5.5.使用非谓语动词使用非谓语动词2）He is so kind that he can help me.(不定式不定式)1）She walked out of the room and many students followed her.（过去分词）（过去分词）Followed by many students,she walked out of the lab.He is so kind as to help me.6.使用虚拟语气使用虚拟语气I passed the physics exam because of your help.I couldnt have passed the physics exam but for your help.If you had not helped me,I could not have passed the physics exam.句型多样化句型多样化1.I still remember the day.I first came to Beijing on that day.I still remember the day when I first came to Beijing.2.He made a promise.He didnt keep it.Exercise 23.She wont go home.She will go home after the exam.She wont go home until after the exam.He made a promise,but he didnt keep it.4.China is a big country.It has a large population.合并合并China is a big country with a large population.6.If it is necessary,you can turn to your teacher for help.(省略省略）If necessary,you can turn to your teacher for help.5.We suffered from cold and hunger in those days.The days are gone.(倒装）倒装）Gone are the days when we suffered from cold and hunger.The days when we suffered from cold and hunger are gone.On one side of the road there is a new classroom building.On the other side,where the playground used to be now stands another new buildingour library.(NMET1999 范文)As far as I know,everyone is happy about this new arrangement of things.(NMET2001 范文)Whats more,I can go to bed earlier.(NMET2001 范文）三、使用恰当的连接词三、使用恰当的连接词欣赏高考作文，注意其关联词欣赏高考作文，注意其关联词1.1.表示平行、对等或选择关系表示平行、对等或选择关系and，bothand,as well as,together with,neithernor,also,not onlybut also,eitheror,as well.2.2.表示转折关系表示转折关系but,yet,however,nevertheless(然而然而),in spite of,although,otherwise,while,after all.高考大纲中常用的高考大纲中常用的连接词连接词3.3.表示对比关系表示对比关系4.4.表示因果关系表示因果关系on the contrary,instead of,on one handon the other hand,just like,unlike,in the same way,at the same timeso,for,therefore,as a result(of),because,owing to,due to,thanks to,on account(理由理由)of.5.5.表示时间、顺序关系表示时间、顺序关系6.6.表示递进、强调关系表示递进、强调关系shortly afterwards,first,second,then,next,finally,for one thing,for another,in the end,eventually(最后最后,终于终于)besides,furthermore(此外此外),whats more,in addition,moreover(而且而且),worse still,to make matters worse,indeed,certainly,surely,above all7.7.表示解释、说明关系表示解释、说明关系8.8.表示结论表示结论namely(也就是也就是),actually,such as,for example,for instance,that is to say,in other words,and so on,to tell you the truth,according to thisin short,in brief,in a word,in general,as you know,as far as I know,on the whole,in conclusion,at last,finally1.Tom was walking in the street_ he heard someone cry for help2.We can go downtown and do some shopping._,we can pay a visit to some places of interest.3.I shared the cost of the gas with my friends._,I saved$80.4.Eating sugar is bad for our teeth._,it may make us fat.In additionAs a resultWhats worsewhen1.请在下列句子中填上恰当的关联词请在下列句子中填上恰当的关联词Exercise 3As students,we often take examinations at school,_ sometimes we have too many examinations which are too difficult for us._,some of us are lazy and dont work hard at their lessons._when taking examinations,they sometimes cheat in order to get better results to please their parents and teachers.My Opinion on Cheating in ExaminationsIt is known to us all that some students cheat in examinations at school.butOn the other handSo2.Complete the following passage,using proper transitional words _,it is wrong to cheat in examinations _ it breaks the rules of schools.We students should be honest and try to get good results by studying hard_ cheating in examinations._,we should improve our study methods and get well prepared for examinations.In my opinionbecauseinstead ofWhats more四中文写作对英文遣词造句的干扰四中文写作对英文遣词造句的干扰1.Zhang Hang studies in Shanxi Province,Xian city,Hongqi Middle School.2.Tom has 5 classes in the morning,afternoon has 2 classes._Hongqi Middle School,Xian city,Shanxi Province _and 2 in the afternoon A “Chinglish”型。型。4.Our country has taken place great changes.5.Her age is young.正:Great changes have taken place in our country.She is young.6.高考：高考：high examNational College Entrance ExaminationB “缺胳膊少腿缺胳膊少腿”型：型：1.However,other students against the idea.2.He seated on the grass.C“画蛇添足画蛇添足”型：型：1.But there are 60%of the students are against the idea of entrance fee.2.He dressed his clothes quickly.areHe seated himself on the grass/He was seated on the grass.But there are 60%of the students against the idea of entrance fee.himselfD“张冠李戴张冠李戴”型：型：The time past quickly.I was so pleased to hear from your letter.The price of my car is very expensive.passedhear from youreceive your letterhighE“瞻前不顾后瞻前不顾后”型。型。1)Although he was very tired，but he went on working in the office.2)On one hand，60%of the students are against the idea，but 40%of the students think it is reasonable.on the other hand1.In the morning,I got up.I walked to school.I saw smoke rising from a building.It must be on fire.I dialed 119.Fire engines arrived.The fire men put out the fire.改写下列段落，使其流畅。改写下列段落，使其流畅。Practice makes perfectKey:In the morning I got up early and walked to school.Suddenly,I saw plenty of dark smoke rising from a building nearby.I knew it must be on fire.So I went to the nearest telephone booth and dialed 119 immediately.Three minutes later,some fire engines arrived and the fire was put out eventually.Homeworkl I like English.I listen to English broadcast.I read English materials.I practice my spoken English.I won the English competition this year and published articles.I will work harder.Please write a compositionThank you