山东省部分地区2019-2020学年上学期高二英语期中试题精选汇编：写作专题（部分含解析）.doc

山东省部分地区2019-2020学年上学期高二英语期中试题精选汇编写作专题山东省聊城市2019-2020学年高二英语上学期期中联考试题第四部分书面表达（满分25分）56.假如你是李华，你所在的城市要举行运动会，组委会现征集志愿者。请给组委会负责人王先生写一封信，申请成为一名志愿者。要点如下：1.个人情况；2.为什么申请当志愿者；3.你将如何当好这个志愿者。1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文流畅；3.开头及结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Mr.Wang，_Looking forward to hearing from you.Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Mr. Wang,My name is Li Hua, a high school student in our city.Knowing that the sports meeting will be held in our city, I cant wait to write to you to apply to be a volunteer.As a sports lover, I have a general idea of the rules of different events. In addition, I am also good at communicating with others and eager to lend a hand to people in need.With the spirit of voluntary work rooted in my heart, I am sure that I can be a qualified volunteer you need.If I am honored enough to be accepted as a volunteer, I will serve the players heart and soul.Looking forward to hearing from you.Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封申请信，申请成为一名志愿者。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：应用文人称：第一人称为主时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时结构：总分法要点：1.个人情况；2.为什么申请当志愿者；3.你将如何当好这个志愿者。第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）a high school student；the sports meeting；cant wait to；apply to；volunteer；a general idea；events；in addition；be good at；communicate with；be eager to；lend a hand；in need；root in；qualified；honored enough；heart and soul；look forward to；hear from等第三步：连词成句1. My name is Li Hua, a high school student in our city.2. Knowing that the sports meeting will be held in our city, I cant wait to write to you to apply to be a volunteer.3. As a sports lover, I have a general idea of the rules of different events. 4. I am also good at communicating with others and eager to lend a hand to people in need.5. With the spirit of voluntary work rooted in my heart, I am sure that I can be a qualified volunteer you need.6. If I am honored enough to be accepted as a volunteer, I will serve the players heart and soul.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）as；in addition；also；and；if等连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，第五步：润色修改【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多句型，如：My name is Li Hua, a high school student in our city.使用了同位语；Knowing that the sports meeting will be held in our city, I cant wait to write to you to apply to be a volunteer.使用了现在分词作状语；I am also good at communicating with others and eager to lend a hand to people in need.使用了and连接的并列句；With the spirit of voluntary work rooted in my heart, I am sure that I can be a qualified volunteer you need使用了with伴随状语和that引导的宾语从句；If I am honored enough to be accepted as a volunteer, I will serve the players heart and soul.使用了if引导的条件状语从句等；还使用了一些固定短语：cant wait to，apply to，be good at，communicate with，be eager to，lend a hand，in need，heart and soul，look forward to，hear from等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。山东省临沂市2019-2020学年高二英语上学期期中联考试题第一节 应用文写作(满分15分)46.假设你是李华，你的美国笔友David 最近在与父母沟通方面遇到困难，写信向你求助，希望你在与父母沟通方式上给予建议。请给David回复邮件。内容包括：1.与父母沟通的主要方式是什么；2.沟通方式的优缺点。_【答案】Dear David,Glad to receive your letter. Knowing that you are not getting on well with your parents, I want to give you some help. My suggestions are as follows.Face-to-face communication, I think, shows the love and respect between us. Although the generation gap is wider than before, the best way to solve the problem is heart-to-heart talking. Talking face to face, we can listen to what each other thinks about the same problem directly. You can explain your thoughts in detail to your parents. However, when we face some embarrassing situations, probably WeChat or texting works better.Finally ,best wishes to you and hope you can get on well with your parents soon.Yours,Lihua【解析】【分析】这是一篇应用文。本篇要求考生给朋友David写信，在与父母沟通上给他一些建议。【详解】体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态应以一般现在时为主结构：总分总 要求：1. 写信目的2. 与父母沟通的主要方式是什么；3. 沟通方式的优缺点。第二步：列提纲（重点词组）get on with sb./ as follows/ a way to do sth./ broaden/ face to face/ strengthen/ in detail/ with patience/ communicate with/ be glad to do sth.第三步：连词成句I am glad to receive your letter. Knowing that you are not getting on well with your parents, I want to offer you some help.My suggestions are as follows.Face-to-face communication, I think, shows the love and respect between us. Although the generation gap is wider than before, the best way to solve the problem may still be a heart-to-heart talking. We can listen to what each other thinks about the same problem directly by talking face to face.You can also explain your thoughts in detail to your parents. However, when facing some embarrassing situations, probably WeChat or texting works better.Finally, best wishes to you and hope you can get on well with your parents soon.第四步：连句成篇（加入衔接词或从句）表示并列的连词：and/but/or/so状语从句连词：because/ if/ though/ although定语从句连词：which/ that/ when/ where第五步：修改润色（加入高级词汇或短语）【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了一些高级表达，例如：Knowing that you are not getting on well with your parents, I want to give you some help.中使用了现在分词作状语，that引导宾语从句；Talking face to face, we can listen to what each other thinks about the same problem directly.中使用了现在分词作状语，what引导宾语从句。这些从句的使用使文章色彩纷呈。山东省济宁市2019-2020学年高二英语上学期期中试题第一节 应用文写作（满分15分）假如你是李华，最近在英语阅读理解学习上遇到了困难，英语老师说只有扩大词汇量才能做好阅读理解，但你在记忆单词方面有困难，所以现在你向常常给予你帮助的已经回国的外教Mark写信求助，希望他能提供一些记忆单词的建议。注意:1）词数:80词左右； 2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_Dear Mark, How are you these days? I miss you a lot. Thank you so much for your help with my English study. Now I am faced with some new learning problems. So Im writing to seek help. I have some difficulty in comprehensive reading. My English teacher often says that only if we enlarge our vocabulary can we have a better academic performance. But I feel it difficult to remember words well, because I often feel nervous while reading English. So I really hope that you can give me some good advice on how to memorize new words. I would be grateful if you could give me some suggestions. Looking forward to your reply. Yours sincerely, Li Hua山东省临沂市罗庄区2019-2020学年高二英语上学期期中试题第二节  读后续写（满分25分） 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。Merna, a girl who lived in Poland, was in love with a Polish soldier, who marched away to fight in World War I. Later on, she began to dream about him.The first dream came in October, 1918, about a month before the end of the war. In the dream she saw her boyfriend in a dark place among some rocks or stones. He was trying to move some of them, but he could not do so. So he stopped trying and sat down on the ground alone in the dark.She had this dream several times, but then in the following summer it changed. In the new dream she saw a castle on a hill. Part of the castle had fallen down and there were a lot of stones on the ground below the broken part. She went towards the stones in her dream, and then she heard the voice of her boyfriend. The voice came from under the stones, and so she tried to lift some of them. But she was too weak to do this, and she had to go sadly away.This dream took the place of the old one, and she saw the same stones several times in her sleep on other nights. She told her mother about it, and a lot of other people heard about the dream. But they did not care very much. A girls dreams were not important to other people.Merna decided that she ought to find that castle. She was quite sure that it was a real one, but there were a lot of old castles in that part of Poland. There was little hope of finding a special one among so many. But the dreams continued, and one day Merna could not bear it any longer. She had to find that castle. So she began a long journey on foot.注意： 1. 所续写短文的词数应为l50左右； 2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语； 3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好，不计入总词数； 4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1:Day after day she went onwards, looking for the castle. _Paragraph 2:Merna knew it was the voice of her boyfriend. _第二节 读后续写（25分）参考范文：（1）Day after day she went onwards, looking for the castle. One day, she came to a village. There on the top of a hill stood the castle, as she had seen it so often in her dreams! She ran towards the castle and cried wildly, “That's the castle!'” The villagers were astonished at her story but they didnt believe it. She asked them to help her lift up the stones at the bottom of the castle.They found nothing on the first day, but after working for two days they heard a man's voice calling from below.Merna knew it was the voice of her boyfriend. The villagers quickly made the hole bigger and soon brought him out. He had been in the darkness for two years and had lived on the food found in the castle. When he entered the castle during the war, part of the castle was hit and destroyed, and his way out was closed by falling stones. So he could not get out and he had to remain there until Merna brought him help.（2）Day after day, she went onwards, looking for the castle. But in vain.Merna was almost on the edge of desperation when an old castle on a hill in the distance came into her sight. Her heart beat fast. As she ran closer to it, she was more sure that it was the rightcastle in her dream! She searched around the castle and called the name of her boyfriends name hurriedly and hopefully. Suddenly, a weak voice came from under the stones.Merna knew it was the voice of her boyfriend. She was overjoyed. She tried to lift the stones while kept encouraging her boyfriend to hold on. Finally, the boy was saved. Afterwards, her boyfriend told her he had been trapped in the fallen castlesince a fierce battle there in October, 1918. Luckily, it happened to be the storeroom of the castle. But the food run out several days ago. He had to struggle to survive on the rainwater leaking in. But for Mernas dream and her insistence, he would die soon. (156)（3）Day after day, she went onwards, looking for the castle. Merna was weakened by the long journey. But the scene of the dream appeared again and again, motivating her to move on. After what seemed a long time, she reached a village, most of which was damaged by the war. But there, on the top of a hill in the village, a castle attracted her attention. Even though part of it collapsed, it was exactly the castle in her dream. Merna rushed up the hill, staring at the rocks and stones, crying her borfriends name. She believed he must be somewhere here. All of a sudden, there came a weak voice.Merna knew it was the voice of her boyfriend. She tried to remove the stones, but she was too weak to lift one. To save her boyfriend, she decided to ask the villagers for help. Moved by their affection, the villagers joined Merna to clear the stones. With their joint efforts, the man was saved, who got injured and buried under the fallen castle. It was their love and persistence that save Mernas boyfriend. (166) 评分原则1. 本题总分为25分，按5个档次给分。2. 评分时，先根据文章的内容丰富性和语言表达的质量初步确定其所属档次。3.所续写短文的词数应为150左右（词数少于130的，从总分中减去2分）。4.对于文中有下划线的词可以有词形的变化。但用不够5个划线词的，每缺少一个词降一档；忘记划线者，减去5分。5.评分要点：（1）第一段应承接开头句子主要描写找到城堡并发现男友的过程。（2）第二段则应描写施救过程和男友长期被困的情境或解释男友长期被困的原因。（3）续写中应对短文中的梦中情境予以呼应。 山东省济宁市泗水县2019-2020学年高二英语上学期期中试题应用文写作（满分15分）随着网络的流行，很多中学生都开启了自己的微博或开始使用微信。请针对这一现象写一篇80词左右的短文，内容包括以下几点：1. 学生开微博或使用微信的好处；2. 可能出现的负面影响；3. 你的看法和建议；4. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。With the popularity of the Internet, many high school students open their own microblogs or begin to use We-Chat._第二节读后续写 （满分25分）阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。Bill was seven years old. His dad had just got transferred to New York. They had shifted intoa rented house. The house was surrounded by lots of bushes and vines. It was raining very heavily on the day they shifted. Bill went out and felt those refreshing raindrops with a cool breeze on his face. It was a cold, dark night. They had their meal and went to sleep early. Somehow in the midnight, Bill heard a loud noise outside the main door. Bill gathered courage and looked out through the window close to the door and Bill was really amused by what he saw outsi