高考英语读后续写素材积累讲义.docx

英语高考读后续写素材积累一、 具有人物特点的语言描写7句1 She said she wanted to live somewhere removed, detached(分开的), where neighbors wouldnt stare at her belly, point at her, snicker(窃笑), or, worse yet, assault(攻击)her with insincere kindnesses. Nana的话语体现了她被人看不起的内心的感受：想远离这群对她嘲笑的人们。这些人是不尊重她的： stare at，point at，snicker(窃笑)，assault(攻击)her with insincere kindnesses。她是自卑的。2 But he said he liked the enchanting sounds the Arabic words made as they rolled off his tongue. He said they comforted him, eased his heart.这段话表达了玛丽雅姆父亲对语言的感受：喜欢这些迷人的声音enchanting sounds；rolled off his tongue；comforted him, eased his heart。3" If you really care about her, then you make her see that she belongs here at home with her mother. There is nothing out there for her. Nothing but rejection and heartache." 这是玛丽雅姆母亲娜娜对玛丽雅姆老师说的一段话。因为玛丽雅姆想出去与同龄人一起读书，老师为她到她母亲那里去说情。于是娜娜说了这番话。make her see that she belongs here at home with her mother，让她明白她属于这里，而且外面只会给她拒绝与令人心痛的事情。There is nothing out there for her. Nothing but rejection and heartache.我们可以看出她的思想是有局限性的。可是为何她要这么说?4 “Thats not a good idea,” said Nana. Her voice was calm, had the controlled, polite tone she used around Jalil, but Mariam could feel her hard, accusing glare.细节描写：对声音的形象描述calm, had the controlled, polite tone冷静，控制性的礼貌语气。作者还从听者角度来描述Mariam could feel her hard, accusing glare。在听的时候，玛丽雅姆能感觉到母亲严厉与责备的目光。从直接与间接的角度来描述母亲娜娜说话的样子以及话语传达的言外之意。5 “What rich lies!” Nana said after Jalil left. “Rich man telling rich lies. He never took you to any tree. And dont let him charm you.He betrayed us, your beloved father. He cast us out. He cast us out of his big fancy house like we were nothing to him. He did it happily.”这段话表明玛丽亚姆母亲娜娜的辛酸：未能受到丈夫的尊重，被排挤在外。她的话也表示了她对丈夫的控诉：He never took you to any tree. He betrayed us； He cast us out； He cast us out of his big fancy house like we were nothing to him. He did it happily.这些话也深刻揭示了当时社会对待娜娜这些底层人的冷漠以及不公。6 Nana said, “Learn this now and learn it well, my daughter: Like a compass needle that points north, a mans accusing finger always finds a woman. Always. You remember that, Mariam.” 娜娜要女儿玛丽亚姆记得男人永远不会对女人满意，男人总是责怪女人a mans accusing finger always finds a woman。而且要求她女儿：Always. You remember that, Mariam.这也为玛丽亚姆之后不幸的婚姻生活做了铺垫。她丈夫Rasheed对她的还不仅仅是责怪，而是虐待。娜娜的教育也造就了之后玛丽亚姆的忍耐与屈从。7 “And, believe me,” Nana said, “it was a relief to your father having me out of sight. It suited him just fine.”这段话表明娜娜对于丈夫已经不抱幻想。她已经彻底领教了社会的残酷，丈夫的无情。所以她才会说：believe me，it was a relief to your father having me out of sight .多么痛的领悟。二、 细腻的表情与情绪描写10句1When Nana saw the bowl, her face flushed red and her upper lip shivered, and her eyes, both the lazy one and the good, settled on Mariam in a flat, unblinking way. 看到碗的反应，神态。写作技巧：作者从脸，嘴唇、眼睛等各个方面进行描述。her face：flushed red her upper lip： shiveredher eyes： settled on Mariam in a flat, unblinking way.flush  fl：When my girl friend feels embarrassed , her face flushed tomato red.  当我的女朋友感到难堪的时候，她的脸就变得通红。拓展学习：a flush of anger/embarrassment/excitement etca sudden feeling of anger, embarrassment etc= surgeShe felt a sudden flush of anger.flush  同义词:  blush  chase  color  even  flat  full  level  redden  rush  pale2 But later, when he broached Nana, she dropped the knife with which she was slicing (切片)onions. “What for?” 用具体动作dropped the knife，刀子掉了，表示惊讶。拓展学习：drop  同义词:  abandon  cease  descend  dismiss  dive  end  fall  give up  let go  plunge  stop常用词组drop across  偶然遇见drop away  (一个一个地)离开, 散去drop behind  落 伍, 落后, 落在.之后drop by  美顺便访问一下drop on sb.  顺便走访(某人); 顺便进去drop into  1. 跌入, 落入2. 偶然进入(某地)3. 不知不觉地进入(某种状态)drop upon   偶然遇到; 偶然发现drop out  退出, (中、小学生)中途退学, 脱离drop through  落空; 毫无结果; 不再被讨论; 彻底失败drop to  下降到; 跌到3 She kept her gaze to the ground, on her feet, stepping on the gray stone path. She was aware of the presence of people in the garden, murmuring, stepping aside, as she and Jalil walked past. She sensed the weight of eyes on her, looking down from the windows upstairs.描述Mariam  到 Jalil家沉重的心情。她的目光：盯着地面，然后移到她的脚，踩在灰色的石板路上。 She kept her gaze to the ground, on her feet, stepping on the gray stone path.这句话将她这种紧张不自在都体现出来了。她的感觉：她感觉到大家都看着她sensed the weight of eyes on her，反映出玛丽雅姆是个敏感的女孩，第六感告诉她，人们关注她，而且不太友好。文中多处使用分词murmuring, stepping，looking down，语言简洁有力。4 When she saw her friend at the door, his white beard and his amiable, toothless smile, Mariam felt tears stinging the corners of her eyes again. 哭的细节描写： felt tears stinging the corners of her eyes again(文章中多次出现toothless smile来描述老师的外貌，是累赘吗？为何这么写？用重复的手法强化老师的特定形象，一个人因为关爱，因为美德，即使外表不好看，在我们的心里，他再丑都是美，都是他独有的特点) 5 “I keep,” Mariam began. She had to stop, feeling like a rock had lodged itself in her throat. “I keep thinking of what she said to me before I left. She”表示难过的细节描写：feeling like a rock had lodged itself in her throat感觉就像一块石头落在她的喉咙里，表明她难过的心情。6 Mariams chest was tightening. The room was reeling up and down, the ground shifting beneath her feet.听到消息后，Mariam的反应Mariams chest was tightening，而且连房间也 reeling up and down上下摇摇欲坠，地面 shifting beneath her feet在脚下移动， 很形象地表明她的震惊与不能接受。7 He shook the rice angrily from his fingers and pushed the plate away, spilling sauce and rice on the sofrah. Mariam watched as he stormed out of the living room, then out of the house, slamming the door on his way out.表达生气的细节描写：shook，pushed the plate away，stormed out，slamming the door一连串的动作表示了玛丽雅姆丈夫的生气情绪。8 “Whats the matter?” Mariam asked, hating the apologetic tone of her voice. She could feel her pulse quickening, her skin shrinking.玛丽雅姆问的时候，憎恨自己抱歉的口气hating the apologetic tone of her voice。她是个善良的女人，可在那样的社会她无奈无助。她的生活是依附与她丈夫的。而且她已经害怕她丈夫这种粗暴的行为，却无能为力。她的脉搏加快，皮肤起皱She could feel her pulse quickening, her skin shrinking。9 There was an unpleasant hum in Mariams head. Her throat burned. She drank some of the water.表达Mariam到楼下后与大家见面后的紧张,an unpleasant hum in Mariams head. Her throat burned。10 She was in a strangers house, with all its different rooms and its smell of cigarette smoke, with its unfamiliar cupboards full of unfamiliar utensils, its heavy, dark green curtains, and a ceiling she knew she could not reach. 用描述陌生的周围环境来表达玛丽亚姆在新家的孤单：with all its different rooms；with its unfamiliar cupboards full of unfamiliar utensils,其中一个different 与两个unfamiliar更明确表明了她在陌生环境中的不自在。学科网（北京）股份有限公司