非谓语动词在写作中的运用-课件.ppt

Non-finite Verbs in writing非谓语动词在写作中的应用非谓语动词在写作中的应用Teaching goal:Master the use of non-finite verbs in writing.Teaching important point:Three forms of non-finite verbs.Teaching important difficult point:How to use non-finite verbs to make sentences.Forms of non-finite verbs V-ingV-edto VEg.work-working-worked-to workRevision.Do 1-15 on Page 21-22.总复习目标总复习目标Revion.Revion.1.They arrived at the school.They felt the happy atmosphere.2.I am given another chance.I will succeed.3.He wants to improve his English.He studies harder.Arriving at the school,they felt the happy atmosphere.Given another chance,I will succeed.To improve his English,he studies harder.Join the sentences with non-finitive verbs.On National Day,I had very bad luck.When I woke up,I found it was too late for school.And I found the alarm clock was turned off.I hurried downstairs and found my bike which was broken was stolen.I felt exhausted when I arrived at school.After the school guard told me,I knew it was holiday for National Day.Then when I came back home,I realized I had left my keys in the door and I found my house was broken into.Read the passage aloud.On National Day,I had very bad luck._(wake)up,I found it was too late for school and the alarm clock _ (turn)off.I hurried downstairs and found my _(break)bike _(lose).So I had to run to school._ (exhaust),I arrived at school._(tell)by the school guard,I knew it was holiday for National Day.Then when _(come)back home,I realized I had made my keys _(leave)in the door and I found my house _(break into).WakingturnedbrokenlostExhaustedToldcomingleftbroken intoRead again and compare.用非谓语结构改写和美化句子用非谓语结构改写和美化句子1.因为因为在这国家没有朋友在这国家没有朋友，她觉得要想找，她觉得要想找到工作是不可能的。到工作是不可能的。用连词用连词becauseBecause she had no friend in the country,she found it impossible to find a job.用非谓语结构用非谓语结构Having no friend in the country,she found it impossible to find a job.2.这本这本用简易英语写成的用简易英语写成的书很容易读懂书很容易读懂用定语从句用定语从句 The book,is easy to understand.用非谓语结构用非谓语结构 The book,is easy to understand用非谓语结构改写和美化句子用非谓语结构改写和美化句子which was written in simple English,written in simple English,3.他们是他们是来自于几个国家的来自于几个国家的游客。游客。用定语从句用定语从句 They are visitors who come from several countries.用非谓语结构用非谓语结构They are visitors coming from several countries.用非谓语结构改写和美化句子用非谓语结构改写和美化句子4.发现他好朋友沮丧发现他好朋友沮丧，他竭尽所能让他，他竭尽所能让他朋友开心。朋友开心。用并列句用并列句He found his best friend frustrated and he did everything he could to make him happy.用非谓语结构用非谓语结构Finding his best friend frustrated,he did everything he could to make him happy.用非谓语结构改写和美化句子用非谓语结构改写和美化句子 It is high time we took part in some activities.We want to make ourselves more healthy.It is high time we took part in some activities to make ourselves more healthy.4.用非谓语结构合并下列句子用非谓语结构合并下列句子用非谓语结构改写和美化句子用非谓语结构改写和美化句子Nowadays,some students often cheat in exams.It is popular among students who are lazy and dont work hard at their lessons.They cheat for they want to get higher marks so that they can be praised or even admired.Also,some students who work hard at their lessons will cheat in exams because they are afraid of failing in exams.用非谓语结构美化文章用非谓语结构美化文章Nowadays,some students often cheat in exams.It is popular among students who are lazy and dont work hard at their lessons.Nowadays,cheating in exams is popular among students who are lazy and dont work hard at their lessons.用非谓语结构美化文章用非谓语结构美化文章They cheat for they want to get higher marks so that they can be praised or even admired.They cheat to get higher marks so that they can be praised or even admired.用非谓语结构美化文章用非谓语结构美化文章Also,some students who work hard at their lessons will cheat in exams because they are afraid of failing in exams.Being afraid of failing in exams,some students who work hard at their lessons will also cheat in exams.用非谓语结构美化文章用非谓语结构美化文章Nowadays,cheating in exams is popular among students who are lazy and dont work hard at their lessons.They cheat to get higher marks so that they can be praised or even admired.Being afraid of failing in exams,some students who work hard at their lessons will also cheat in exams.用非谓语结构美化后的文章用非谓语结构美化后的文章建议建议有足够的睡眠是必要的。有足够的睡眠是必要的。原因原因1.它能有效的改善我们的课堂学习。它能有效的改善我们的课堂学习。2.保持健康的身体是进一步学习及工作保持健康的身体是进一步学习及工作的基础。的基础。要求：要求：1.1.用用2-32-3句话句话表达表格内容表达表格内容 2.2-32.2-3句话要有句话要有连贯性连贯性necessary an effective way to improve our learning in the class.the basis for our further study and work.高考临近，保持良好的心态有助于减轻焦虑，高考临近，保持良好的心态有助于减轻焦虑，还能增强克服困难的勇气还能增强克服困难的勇气。Having a try翻译翻译:高考临近，保持良好的心态有助高考临近，保持良好的心态有助于减轻焦虑，还能增强克服困难的勇气于减轻焦虑，还能增强克服困难的勇气。高考临近。高考临近。(National College Entrance Examination)保持良好的心态很重要。保持良好的心态很重要。(have a right attitude)它有助于减轻焦虑它有助于减轻焦虑（relax）和勇敢地克服困难和勇敢地克服困难。Step2：分别翻译这几个简单句：分别翻译这几个简单句National College Entrance Examination is coming.It is important to have a right attitude.It helps us to relax and overcome difficulties bravely.Having a tryStep1：拆分成几个简单句：拆分成几个简单句(中文中文)Step3：合并句子：合并句子 With National College Entrance Examination coming,it is important to have a right attitude to relax and overcome difficulties bravely.National College Entrance Examination is coming.It is important to have a right attitude.It helps us to relax and overcome difficulties bravely.Sentence1:Having a tryStep3：合并句子：合并句子 With College Entrance Examination coming,it is important to have a right attitude which helps us to relax and overcome difficulties bravely.College Entrance Examination is coming.It is important to have a right attitude.It helps us to relax and overcome difficulties bravely.Sentence2:Tip:Try to use differentways to express.Having a try建议建议 有足够的睡眠是必要的。有足够的睡眠是必要的。原因原因1.它能有效的改善我们的课堂学习。它能有效的改善我们的课堂学习。2.保持健康的身体是进一步学习及工作保持健康的身体是进一步学习及工作的基础。的基础。要求：要求：1.1.用用2-32-3句话句话表达表格内容表达表格内容 2.2-32.2-3句话要有句话要有连贯性（连贯性（20112011高考模拟）高考模拟）Having a trynecessary an effective way to improve our learning in the class.the basis for our further study and work.建议建议 有足够的睡眠是必要的。有足够的睡眠是必要的。原因原因1.它能有效的改善我们的课堂学习。它能有效的改善我们的课堂学习。2.保持健康的身体是进一步学习及工作保持健康的身体是进一步学习及工作的基础。的基础。Having a tryIt is necessary to have enough sleep.Having enough sleep is necessary.It will be an effective way to improve our learning in the class.Keeping healthy is the basis for our further study and work.To Keep healthy is the basis for our further study and work.Passage：Having enough sleep is necessary,because it will be an effective way to improve our learning in the class.Moreover,to keep healthy is the basis for our further study and work.Tip:Never ignore the conjunction.Having a try With College Entrance Examination coming,it is important to have a right attitude which helps us to relax and overcome difficulties bravely.Having enough sleep is necessary,because it will be an effective way to improve our learning in the class.Moreover,to keep healthy is the basis for our further study and work.Besides,doing exercise regularly is of great benefit to our health.Last but not least,it is very important to keep a balanced diet.二二.使用使用非谓语动词非谓语动词使句子简洁高档使句子简洁高档三三.巧用巧用倒装倒装增强句子表现力增强句子表现力四四.尝试多尝试多 样化表达方样化表达方式式一一.使用较使用较高级词汇高级词汇使文章增加吸引力使文章增加吸引力强调句强调句With短语复合结构短语复合结构定语从句定语从句名词性从句名词性从句(主宾表同从句主宾表同从句)各种状语从句各种状语从句被动语态被动语态书面表达评分档次书面表达评分档次情景作文共分情景作文共分6 6档给分档给分 第第1 1档档 18-20 18-20 分分 第第2 2档档 15-17 15-17 分分 第第3 3档档 12-14 12-14 分分 第第4 4档档 6-11 6-11 分分 第第5 5档档 1-5 1-5 分分 第第6 6档档 0 0 分分08北京高考：北京高考：假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华，为校刊英语园地写一篇题为假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华，为校刊英语园地写一篇题为“Our Spring Outing”的英文稿件。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，叙述上周你的英文稿件。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，叙述上周你们班从准备春游到春游结束的完整过程。们班从准备春游到春游结束的完整过程。注意：词数不少于注意：词数不少于60。提示词：游乐园提示词：游乐园 amusement park 垃圾箱垃圾箱 bin 讨论讨论爬山爬山捡拾别人的垃圾捡拾别人的垃圾投放垃圾投放垃圾常用语常用语：1.Last Friday left me a deep impression,which I will never forget.Last week,I/my brother had an unforgettable experience.2.In order to improve our abilities of facing danger,our school organized an activity.按时间顺序描写按时间顺序描写3.Early in the morning,we met at the school gate and went toby bus.One Sunday morning,my classmates and I went to the park for an picnic.4 After doing,we went to do.5.Having done,we.6.And then,we.结尾语：结尾语：I was tired,but I was happy that I did a good deed.I have learned a great deal through the activity.It is an unforgettable day/experience 评论语评论语/感慨感慨1.I think the activity is both necessary and meaningful.It not only makes us aware of the importance of self-protection/helping others/protecting our environment but also develop our abilities of dealing with things /communicating with others.2.The activity can develop/promote our sense of social responsibility.心情语心情语 We were in high spirit.With excitement filling our heart,we said thanks/goodbye to sb.With our hearts filled with excitement,we.To our joy/delight,we saw.景色：景色：1.The view was beautiful.2.The sun was shining.3.Gently came the soft wind.4.The weather was clear,the wind calm and the sun shining 时间顺序：时间顺序：要点：要点：细节：细节：适当添加适当添加：时间顺序：时间顺序：要点：要点：细节：细节：适当添加适当添加：时间顺序：时间顺序：要点：要点：细节：细节：适当添加适当添加：时间顺序：时间顺序：要点：要点：细节：细节：适当添加适当添加：Early in the morningset off climb爬山、天气爬山、天气心情，景色心情，景色When we got to the top of到处垃圾到处垃圾情绪情绪-惊讶惊讶心情心情Finally或或few hours later,或或After.投放垃圾投放垃圾可回收可回收,不可回收不可回收感受感受Before the Spring outing讨论讨论不同的想法不同的想法心情心情 好作文的要素：好作文的要素：具体生动具体生动We started our spring outing on a fine day.In high spirits,we started our spring outing on a fine day.In high spirits,we started our spring outing early in the morning on a fine day.Flowers greeted Flowers greeted us with their sweetest smiles and we were us with their sweetest smiles and we were soaked up in the warm sunshine.soaked up in the warm sunshine.1.上周我上周我们班组织了一次春游们班组织了一次春游。2.我们先召开了班会我们先召开了班会讨论春游去哪儿。讨论春游去哪儿。3.我们提出了很多不同的想法我们提出了很多不同的想法,例如去游乐园例如去游乐园,去划出和去爬山。去划出和去爬山。1.Last week our class organized a spring outing.2.We first held a class meeting,discussing where to go for our spring outing.3.We came up with several choices,such as going to an amusement park,going boating and going mountain climbing.4.Finally,we decided to go mountain climbing.1.第二天，第二天，我们我们一大早儿就一大早儿就出发出发了。了。2.当当我们爬山我们爬山的时候的时候,我们享受着温暖的阳光我们享受着温暖的阳光和和欣赏着美丽的景色欣赏着美丽的景色。3.没过多久没过多久我们便来到了山顶。我们便来到了山顶。1.The next day,we set off early in the morning.2.While climbing the mountain,we enjoyed the warm sunshine and a beautiful view.3.It didnt take us long to arrive at the top of the mountain.4.最后我们决定去爬山。1.然而，当我们到达山顶的那一刻然而，当我们到达山顶的那一刻我们惊讶地发现我们惊讶地发现这里到处都是这里到处都是游客留下的游客留下的垃圾垃圾。2.我们我们毫不迟疑地毫不迟疑地开始捡垃圾开始捡垃圾。1.However,we were shocked to see litter here and there left by tourists the moment we reached there.2.Without any hesitation,we set out to pick up the litter at once.1.捡完所有垃圾后，我们把垃圾分别扔到附近的可回收和不可回捡完所有垃圾后，我们把垃圾分别扔到附近的可回收和不可回收的垃圾桶里。收的垃圾桶里。2.虽然很累，但我们很有成就感。虽然很累，但我们很有成就感。3.因为我们为保护环境尽了我们的绵薄之力。因为我们为保护环境尽了我们的绵薄之力。1.Having collected all the rubbish,we put the rubbish into the nearby recycling bin and non-recycling bin respectively.2.Tired as we were,we had a sense of achievement 3.because we did our small part to protect the environment.最基本的范文最基本的范文 Last Thursday,we_ a class meeting _where to go for our spring outing.We _up with several choices,such as_ boating,_a mountain,and _to an amusement park.Finally we decided_ mountain climbing.The next day,we set off early in the morning,while _the mountain,we _ the warm sunshine and a beautiful view.However,when we _the top,we _to see litter here and there,such as bottles and bananas peels.Then we started _the litter.Afterwards,we put the rubbish into the nearby _bin and_ bin respectively.We _tired but happy.hadto discusscamegoingclimbinggoingto goclimbingenjoyedreachedwere shockedto pick uprecyclingnon-recyclingwere37 Last week,our class organized a spring outing.To make this memorable activity more wonderful,we discussed the destination carefully and finally decided to go mountain climbing instead of other choices like playing in an amusement park and going boating.With high spirits,we started our spring outing on a fine day.Flowers presented us with their sweetest smiles and were soaked up in the warm sunshine.However,we were shocked when we reached the top of the mountain.Waste bottles and used packages were thrown everywhere which totally ruined the beauty of the nature.Feeling a great pity for the tourists,we picked up the rubbish and carefully divided them into two groups:the recycle ones and the non-recycle ones.After that,we put the rubbish38into the bin differently.We call on awareness on protecting our environment which is of great importance.Though cleaning up the rubbish was a tough task,our hearts were filled with joy and we will remember this outing for ever.19 Gently comes the Spring.As the wind softly blows,it brings back the vitality to the great outdoor.Students in our class were excited,too,and eager to have a spring outing in the weekend last week.A heated discussion was held:Some students suggested we go boating,some insisted that going hiking was the best idea,while some thought the amusement park was of more fun.Finally,we decided to go hiking in the mountains on a sunny day.The flowers were blooming happily and sent their welcome to us.With excitement in our heart,we climbed the mountain easily and reached the peak soon.优秀作文欣赏 To our surprise,what we found on the peak was not only beautiful scenery,but also rubbish here and there.Feeling so bad for the environment spot,we changed our plan and began picking up the rubbish.Afterwards,we brought the rubbish down the mountain and sorted them into“can be recycled”and“cant be recycled”.We finally dropped them into different bins set at the foot of the mountain.Fun as we had during the trip,we still felt so sorry for the ruined nature.I think it is everyones duty to take care of the environment so that we can contribute to a better living and relaxing space for others.得分：18分 内容要点齐全，连贯，恰当使用了连接成分，所用句式和词汇较丰富；体现了较强的语言运用能力。假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华，为校刊英语园假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华，为校刊英语园地写一篇题为地写一篇题为“Our Social Practice Activity”的英语稿的英语稿件。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，叙述上周你们班从准件。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，叙述上周你们班从准备参观首都博物馆到参观结束的完整过程。备参观首都博物馆到参观结束的完整过程。注意：次数不少于注意：次数不少于60 Our class visited the Capital Museum last week,and it is one of the most impressive social practice activities since high school.Last Thursday before our visit,my classmates and I searched for as much information as possible through the Internet,such as its location and the latest exhibitions and shows.On Friday morning we gathered at the entrance at nine oclock,and then a beautiful guide showed us around the exhibition on the traditional buildings in Beijing,where we learned the development of our city architecture.After that,we got to know our folk culture by watching the digital film and learning to make some papercuts and paint masks in DIY areas.Before we left at twelve,we also went to the craft show that I was interested in.Finally we left the Capital Museum unwillingly.The capital Museum is very large and attractive and the activities there aroused our great excitement and interest in our traditional culture and custom.We enjoyed the visit so much that most of my classmates decided to come again later.Our Spring Outing National College Entrance Examination is coming.To relax ourselves,our class had a meeting to discuss where to go for our spring outing.Having a barbecue is our choice.The next day,we set off early in the morning.We climb