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中考作文专题深圳中考作文考查灵活，以应用文为主（写信、通知、报道），提示要点少，需要学生思考编写要点。这也就要求学生具备良好的行文逻辑，丰富的词汇量，切忌死套句型（不适用深圳中考）。如何写好一篇作文：1. 学会基本句式：主谓宾；写对时态、人称2. 在“主谓宾”的基础上添加adj.和adv.，描写更加清楚生动3. 每篇作文运用固定句型、过渡词汇4. 掌握各个类型作文的好词好句5. 格式标准注意：1. 基本的语法不要出错2. 内容要规划合理：不要一味去想着写很多“高级句型”。作文一定要先将要点表达清楚，内容合理有逻辑。有好的内容，好句型好词汇才是锦上添花！3. 不要写自己无法掌控的句子，学会断句，长句变短句子，学会基本的简单句，再利用句型组合成长句子4.不要写一些无效从句：I like this book which is very interesting. 这种从句，没有必要写，累赘。你直接写：I like this interesting book.题目解读：（以2021年真题为例）深圳是一座科技之城、创新之城, 为培养学生对科技的兴趣, 你的学校上周举办了科技节。假定你是你校英语报的小记者, 请你编写一篇新闻报道, 介绍这次活动。要点1 活动目的2 活动项目 模型制作比赛 3活动亮点学生发明的服务于校园的机器人=（外表, 功能） 4学生感受提示词 1. 科技节 science festival 2. 实验 experimentShenzhen is well-known as a city of technology and innovation. Last week, _一、 基本句式：主 谓 宾 （谁做了什么事情）写句子，先找出“主谓宾”例如：我的学校上周举办了科技节 主语 谓语 宾语My school held science festival （谓语动词要选择正确的时态）找出“主谓宾”，再写其他的修饰成分（时间地点放最后、形容词副词跟着修饰的词）My school held science festival last weekend.例如：科技节的目的是培养学生对科学的兴趣。Aim is to develop interest.l 科技节的目的：The aim of science festivall 学生的兴趣：students interestl 对科学的兴趣：interest on science.组装句子：The aim of science festival is to develop students interest on science.Have a try:1. 我们将会举办模型制作比赛2. 初三的学生将会参加一些有关机器人的科学实验3. 机器人可以完成一些简单的任务，例如打扫教室和丢垃圾4. 学生将会得到丰富的奖品5. 我们的学校希望越来越多学生可以爱上科技6. 学生发明了很多美观的并且十分有帮助的机器人7.我很开心能够参加科技节，并且在学到了很多有用的知识句子翻译答案：注意时态1.我们将会举办模型制作比赛We held model-making competition.2.初三的学生将会参加一些有关机器人的科学实验Grade 9 students took part in some scientific experiment about robot.3.机器人可以完成一些简单的任务，例如打扫教室和丢垃圾Robots could finish some simple tasks, such as sweeping the classroon and throwing away the rubbish. （as介词+doing)4.学生将会得到丰富的奖品Students got a lot of prizes.5.我们的学校希望（越来越多学生可以爱上科技）Our school hopes that more and more students will love science.（“越来越多学生爱上科学”是宾语，又是句子，所以要写成宾语从句，不要漏掉that）6.学生发明了很多美观的并且十分有帮助的机器人Students invented a number of good-looking and really helpful robots.7.我很开心能够参加科技节，并且在学到了很多有用的知识I was so glad to take part science festival and learnt so much useful knowledge. l 找准“主谓宾”“谁做了什么事情”，再往句子里面加形容词、副词，加时间、地点。基础差的学生一步一步来，做不到一步到位没有关系的，多练习就好。l 学会基本的简单句了，下一步就是学习我们可以套用的句型、好词。真题练习：（2020）深圳市正在争创全国文明城市。假定你是鹏城中学学生会主席, 希望同学们为“创文”做出自己的贡献。请你按照所提示的要点, 代表学生会写一篇倡议书。环境保护垃圾分类；绿色出行公益慈善志愿服务；人际交往诚信友善；1. 词数80左右（开头和结尾已经给出, 不计入总词数）；2. 要点齐全, 可适当发挥；3. 条理清晰, 语句通顺, 意义连贯, 书写规范；4. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。参考词汇：分类sort out志愿者volunteer贡献contributionDear friends,As we know, Shenzhen is working hard to win the title of China's National Civilized City.All in all, Shenzhen is our home. Its time to take action.l 把三个要点组成句子l Have a try （先找准“”主谓宾哦）1. 所以，作为深圳的初中生，我们也要为此做出自己的贡献2. 首先，保护环境是非常有必要的，所以在日常生活中，我们要做到垃圾分类、绿色出行。例如我们要尽量乘坐公共交通上学。3. 除此以外，我们也要参加公益慈善去帮助有需要的人们，例如做志愿者和捐款。4. 最后，在和别人相处的时候，我们必须要保持诚信和友善。同时，我们也要避免讨论别人的隐私，以表示我们对他人的尊重。答案：1. 所以，作为深圳的初中生，我们也要为此做出自己的贡献So, as middle school students in Shenzhen, we should also make our contributions.2. 首先，保护环境是非常有必要的 （用it is adj. to do sth.）所以在日常生活中，我们要做到垃圾分类、绿色出行（翻译成人话：以一个环保的方式出行）。例如我们要尽量乘坐公共交通上学。l First of all, it is neccessary for us to protect environment. l So, in our daily lives, we should sort out rubbish and travel in a greener way. l For example, we can take public transportation to shcool as much as possibly.3. 除此以外，我们也要参加公益慈善（写你会的表达：有意义的活动 / 背：charity 慈善）去帮助有需要的（in need; 有困难的in trouble都放在后面）人们，例如做志愿者和捐款。 Besides/Whats more, we are supposed to take part in some meaningful activities to help people in need, such as（介词+doing） being a volunteer and donating money.4. 最后，在和别人相处的时候，我们必须要保持诚信和友善。同时，我们也要避免讨论别人的隐私，以（为了）表示我们对他人的尊重。l Last but not least, when we get along with others , we must be honest and friendly. l Meanwhile, we also had better avoid talking about others privacy, in order to show our respect.（2019）假设你是李华，你的英国朋友 Tony 对“中国红”一词很感兴趣，想了解“中国红”在中国人日常生活中的体现，请你根据以下表格信息写一封回信帮助他了解。提示词：婚礼 wedding，中国结 Chinese Knot，红包 red packet， 代表 stand for Dear Tony,Its great to receive your letter. Im writing to tell you something about Chinesered.I truly hope my letter will help you understand better about Chinese red.Yours, Li Hual 要点组成句子l Have a try （先找准“”主谓宾哦）1. 红色是中国最受欢迎的颜色之一2. 它通常代表幸福，并且中国人相信红色可以带来好运3. 中国人通常会在非常重要的场合使用红色，例如婚礼、春节等等4. 人们会使用红色的物品来装饰家里。比如在春节期间人们会制作红色的剪纸和中国结。除此以外，人们还会给小孩发红包，挂红色的灯笼，为了表达对新的一年美好的祝愿。5. 因此，红色在中国人的日常生活中扮演着非常重要的角色。答案：1. 红色是中国最受欢迎的颜色之一 Red is one of the most popular colors in China2. 它通常代表幸福，并且中国人相信红色可以带来好运 It usually stands for happiness and Chinese people believe red can bring good luck to them.3. 中国人通常会在非常重要的场合使用红色，例如婚礼、春节等等 We will use red in greatly important occasions, such wedding, Spring festival and so on.4. 人们会使用红色的物品来装饰家里。比如在春节期间人们会制作红色的剪纸和中国结。 People also use red objects to decorate their own house. For example, during Spring festival, we will make red paper cutting and Chinese Knot.5. 除此以外，人们还会给小孩发红包，挂红色的灯笼，为了表达对新的一年美好的祝愿。 Whats more, People will give out red packet to children and hang red lanterns in order to express best wishes to coming year.6. 因此，红色在中国人的日常生活中扮演着非常重要的角色。Therefore, red plays an important role in Chinese daily life.（2018）英国某中学邀请你校学生代表团于7月中旬去访问交流，假如你是成员之一，请在欢迎会上致辞答谢：要点：1.感谢邀请和接待；2.希望在文化习俗、创新与发明方面有交流；3.重点介绍一个中国传统节日；4.邀请他们来深圳；提示词： 习俗custom 创新 innovation 接待reception要求：1.80个词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数内；2. 必须包括以上全部要点，可以适当发挥；3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；4. 条理清楚，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范。Ladies and gentlemen, Good evening!Its really a great honor for me to speak here.Thats all. Thank you!l 要点组成句子l Have a try （先找准“”主谓宾哦）1. 我非常感谢你们的邀请和接待2. 首先，我希望我们有更多的机会去交流文化习俗、创新与发明3. 并且，在中国，有着许多重要的传统节日，例如中秋节4. 中秋节代表着团圆，通常在农历八月十五日。在这一天，家人会团聚，一起吃月饼赏月。同时，关于中秋节，我们还有一个美丽的神话故事，嫦娥奔月。5. 最后，我真诚地邀请你们来深圳游玩，一座现代化城市。答案：1. 我非常感谢你们的邀请和接待 I extremely appreciate your invitation and reception.2. 首先，我希望我们有更多的机会去交流文化习俗、创新与发明 First of all, I hope we can have more chances to exchange our culture,customs, innovations and inventions.3. 并且，在中国，有着许多重要的传统节日，例如中秋节 Whats more, there are a lot of important traditional festivals in China, such as Mid-autumn Festival.4. 中秋节代表着团圆，通常在农历八月十五日。在这一天，家人会团聚，一起吃月饼赏月。同时，关于中秋节，我们还有一个美丽的神话故事，嫦娥奔月。l It stands for family reunion and usually is celebrated on August 15th of the lunar calendarl On that day, all the family members get together, enjoy delicious mooncakes and appreciate the moon.l Meanwhile, there is a beautiful fairy tales about Mid-autumn Festival, the Goddess Chang's fly to the moon5. 最后，我真诚地邀请你们来深圳游玩，一座现代化城市。Finally, I sincerely welcome all of you to Shenzhen, a young and modern city.如何写好一篇作文：1. 学会基本句式：主谓宾；写对时态、人称2. 在“主谓宾”的基础上添加adj.和adv.，描写更加清楚生动3. 每篇作文运用固定句型、过渡词汇4. 掌握各个类型作文的好词好句5. 格式标准现在我们已经完成第一步，接下来要实现第二步和第三步。二、作文必用句型（以2021真题为例）：1. not only.but also ：连接两个要点 l Last week, our school held a science festival. It aims to not olny develop students' interest in science and technology, but also broaden their horizons. Not only, but also放句首，还可以使用倒装句：l Not olny does it aim to develop students' interest in science and technology, but also broaden their horizons. 一些学生不仅参加模型制作比赛，而且还做了一些科学实验。l some students not only took an active part in the model-making competition, but also carried out science experiments.2. It is adj. for sb. to do sth.l It is easy for robots to finish some simple taks, like sweeping the floor and throwing away rubbish.l It is important for students to take part in such a meaningful activity.3. 使用一个定语从句：l Last week, our school held a science festival, which aims to develop students' interest in science and technology and broaden their horizons. 4. 使用一个状语从句（if, when, though)l 以下句型可以学习，不一定每一篇都要运用到：5. Only 的倒装句 ：l 只有有积极的态度，你才可以摆脱学习带来的压力Only when you takehave a positive attitude, will you be able to free yourself from the stress that comes from study.l 只有坚持不懈地学习，我们才能一步一步取得进步，直到成功Only by sticking to studying persistently ，can we make progress step by step till success. 6. 过渡句（1）我曾经经历过同样的情况。l I was once in the same situation as yours. l I once had the same experience as yours.l I once experienced the same situation as yours.（2）每个人都会经历失败，我也不例外。l Everyone experiences failure and I am no exception.（3）像你一样，我也经历过考试失败。l Like you, I have also experienced failure in the exams.（4） 俗话说，失败乃成功之母。l As a famous saying goes, “Failure is the mother of success. “不管怎样，罗马不是一天建成的。l Anyway, Rome is not built in a day. 7. 信件/邮件的开头结尾（1）收到来信l 很开心收到你的来信l I am glad to have received your letter.l I am delighted to hear from you. （2）I'm writing to you for.+写信的目的（3）表示邀请：I am writing to invite you to 8. 提建议：I suggest that we should9. 表示有帮助：l It is really helpful tol It is of great benefit（好处）/importance（重要性）/ to10. 表达观点：l in my opinionview, l from my point of view, .l from my own perspective, 11. 表达“我赞同/我支持.”l I am strongly for the ideaplan for the following reasonsl I am in favor of the ideaplan for the following reasonsl I cant agree more with the ideaplan for the following reasonsl I support the ideaplan for the following reasons12. 表达“对.很喜欢”l Sb. be attracted by sthl Sb.be fascinated with/by sth.l Sb.be crazy about sth第一次听灰姑娘的故事，我就被它深深地吸引了。The first time I listened to the story of Cinderella, I was fascinated with it.13. 时间的表达：总原则：从小到大l 7月4日下午2：00at 2 pm on July 4that 2 oclock in the afternoon on July 4thl 10月22日上午9:00at 9 am on Oct.22l 2015年11月30日晚上10点半at 10:30 pm on Nov.30, 2015l 在2015年12月in December, 201514. 描写“活动”l During our stay there, wel When we stay there, wel When/While staying there, we l Staying there, we我们在那里的时候，我们给他们表演我们精心准备的节目，比如唱歌、跳舞、讲笑话等。l When we stay there, we will put on the performances well prepared for them, such as singing, dancing, telling jokes and so on.l While staying there, we will give the performances, which have been prepared for them, such as15. 表示“计划”l It is planned/schedule thatl As planned/scheduled, l According to our plan, 按照计划，我们将在早上8点从学校出发去敬老院。l It is scheduled that we will set off from school for the nursing home at 8 am.l As scheduled, we will set off from school for the nursing home at 8 am.16. 表示“目的”/“希望”l in order to do/so as to do/to dol hopingl which aims to/aiming tol with the/an aim to重阳节即将到来，我计划和同学们一起去敬老院陪老人家过节。l With the Double Ninth Festival around the corner, I decided to go to the nursing home with the aim to celebrate this special day with the old there.三、必背词汇Part 11. 积极的 positive2. 消极的 negative3. 乐观的 optimistic4. 悲观的 pessmistic5. 鼓励某人做某事 encourage/motivate sb. to do6. 没有学习动力 have no motivation to study7. 对学习不感兴趣 have no interest in study8. 考试不利 fail the exam9. 采取积极的态度 adopt a positive attitude to10. 失去信心 lose ones confidence in 11. 学习方法 learning method12. 克服 overcome13. 面对 be faced with14. 反思 reflect on15. 寻求帮助 ask sb. for help / turn to sb. for help16. 挫折/困难 frustration / obstacle17. 沮丧的、挫败的 depressed/upset and frustrated18. 坚持不懈 stick to sth. / do sth.persistentlyPart 21. 注意，留意 pay attention to2. 努力做 make great efforts to do3. 呼吁某人做某事 call on sb to do.4. 采取行动 take action (immediately)5. 采取措施 take (effective) measures6. 对做出贡献 make contributions to7. 对有巨大的影响 have a great effect/influence on8. 各种各样的 a variety of/ various9. 雾霾 haze/smog10. 关心 care/concern11. 发生 occur/take place12. 对向谁表示感谢 thank to sb for sth/doing sth13. 不断增多 be increasing rapidly/ be on the increase14. 对造成巨大的伤害 do great harm to sth15. 保护环境 protect the environment16. 意识到 (come to) realize/be aware of17. 去年以来 since last yearPart 3 ：A list of things you can do to protect the environment1. plant trees2. go to school by bus/on foot3. take the public means of transport4. live a low-carbon life5. participate in volunteer work6. appeal to/call on people to protect 7. arouse peoples awareness of environmental protection8. hold a speech contest on how to protect Part 41. 奥运会 OlympicsOlympic Games2. 2022年北京冬奥会 The 2022 Beijing Winter Olympics3. 主办 host4. 主办城市 the host city5. 合作 work withcooperate with6. 参加志愿者工作 take part in the volunteer work/work as a volunteer7. 擅长英语 have a good command of English8. 获得职位 have the chance of being employed/9. 表示“获得奖”gain the award/prize10. 陪伴 company11. 庆祝 celebrate / in celebration of （不可以作谓语）12. 纪念 in memory of （不可以作谓语）13. 表演节目 put on a performancePart 51. 社会实践 social practice2. 优异的学业成绩 excellent academic performance3. 在方面经验丰富 (have) rich experience in4. 历史悠久 has/with a long history5. 享誉盛名 enjoy/with a great reputation6. 校园优美 with a marvelous/gorgeous campus7. 学费 school/tuition fees8. 生活费 living expense9. 被.录取 be admitted to10. 有资格 be qualified for11. 方便 convenientconveniently12. 对环境友好的 be environmentally-friendly13. 开拓视野 broaden ones horizons14. 丰富知识 enrich ones knowledge 15. 促进交流 promote communication16. 提升能力 improve ones abilitiesskills17. 培养兴趣 develop ones interest in18. 有途径获取 have access toPart 51.生平概况：生日；出生地；家乡；出身（1）出生于某地某时 be born in.on.（2）在某人多少岁时 at the age of （3）出生于一个农民/知识分子家庭/书香门第 was born into a peasant / intelligent family/ a family of scholars（4）过着幸福/艰苦的生活 live a happy / difficult life2. 性格有毅力的 determined 有能力的 capable热心肠的 warmhearted 随和的 easy going 精力充沛 energetic慷慨的 generous 聪明的 intelligent杰出的 out-standing自信的 confident3. 教育背景（1）考取.大学、被.大学录取 be admitted touniversity（2）从.毕业 graduated from.（3）出国留学 go abroad for further education（4）专业是./主修.专业 major in I majored in English.4.从事.工作、工作背景work as .devote oneself to= be devoted to 5.评价 （1） 国内外著名、闻名海内外 famous / well­known at home and abroad（2）获得.（名次）gain /win/be awarded the first prize/place （3）树立榜样；模范先锋 set a good example to sb（4）高度赞扬 speak / think highly of（5）做出巨大贡献 make great contributions to（6）被授予.称号 be honored asPart 61.表示平行、对等或选择关系: and，as well as，together with，also, not only.but also, as well.2.表示转折关系: but，yet，however，nevertheless（然而）， in spite of，although3.表示对比关系: on one hand.on the other hand4.表示因果关系: so，therefore，as a result（of），because，owing to, thanks to,5.表示递进、强调关系: besides，furthermore，what's more，in addition，moreover6.表示解释、说明关系: actually，such as，for example，for instance，that is to say，in other words,8.表示结论: in short，in brief，in a word，in general，as you know，as far as I know, in conclusion, at last,四、 中考真题范文：（2021）Shenzhen is well-known as a city of technology and innovation. Last week, our school held a science festi