高分作文写作步骤及话题模板讲义--高考英语二轮专题复习.docx

高分作文写作步骤及话题模板一、写作思路与提分策略一、书面表达的写作思路1分析试题，列出要点假定你是李华，你校英文报”外国文化”栏目拟刊登介绍美国节日风俗和中学生生活的短文。请给美国朋友彼得写信约稿，要点如下： 栏目介绍； 稿件内容；稿件长度：约400词；交稿日期：6月28日前。 注意：词数100左右； 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 开头语已为你写好。Dear Peter,Id like to ask you to write an article for our schools English newspaper. Yours， Li Hua2完善句子，准确表达写作时，考生首先要将每个要点变换为一个完整的句子，然后再用英语进行表达，如上面试题：要点句子英文表达“外国文化”栏目报纸上有个“外国文化”栏目。There is a column called “Foreign Cultures”in the paper.美国节日风俗和中学生生活“外国文化”栏目介绍美国节日风俗及中学生生活。The “Foreign Cultures”column introduces American holiday customs and American students life to us.稿件长度：约400词文章长度约为400词。The article is OK to have about 400 words in it.交稿日期：6月28日前希望你在6月28日前把文章发给我。I hope you can send it to me before June 28.3增加细节，连句成文Dear Peter， Id like to ask you to write an article for our schools English newspaper. I mentioned it to you in my last letter.The paper is written and edited by us.It helps us learn something else and enriches our life in the school.There is a column called “Foreign Cultures” in it.It introduces American holiday customs and American students life to us.We all like it very much.I hope you will write an article for this column.The article is OK to have about 400 words in it.I hope you can send it to me before June 28.I hope to hear from you soon.Yours,Li Hua二、英语书面表达提分策略 根据评分标准可知，要点齐全、语句正确、词数达标的文章还只能得及格分数，要得高分还必须注意以下几方面。1调整结构，力求提高分 由于阅卷时间短，考生写作时在保证要点齐全的同时，必须做到文章主题突出、思路清晰，才能让阅卷老师在短时间内迅速找出得分点。为此，在上面试题中，考生可将正文部分分为三段。 第一段引入下文的写作。如试卷中所给出的”Id like to ask you to write an article for our schools English newspaper”就可作为第一段。 第二段扩展，根据第一段的内容进行细节描述、深层分析或提出具体的要求。如在上面试题中，考生就要抓住”article fornewspaper”，对报纸进行介绍，并对文章提出要求，以便对方进行写作。为了让人一目了然，考生应该分层写，即每一件事为一层，切忌层次不清，影响阅卷老师评分。第三段总结或表达希望。2润色加工，力求高档分 英语书面表达要求考生将试题信息用英语表达出来，这主要考查考生运用英语以及驾驭英语的能力。为此，考生必须在短文中突显得分的亮点，即在遣词造句和语篇连贯性方面下功夫。（1）句式多样化 （2）用词高级化 （3）句子短语化 （4）巧用连接词 总之，有高级词汇，分词，倒装，强调，修辞的句子，名言警句，使整篇文章句型丰富，不单一，有效地使用连接成分使文章连贯，方能在考试中拿到高分。3纠正差错，力求得满分 经过上述几方面的加工之后，还需复读全文，检查单词拼写是否正确，标点符号的使用是否有误。最后，再将短文工整地誊写到答卷上，力求文章得高分，甚至满分。Dear Peter, Id like to ask you to write an article for our schools English newspaper. Do you remember that I mentioned it to you in my last letter?The paper is written and edited by us students,which helps us learn something else and enriches our life in the school. Especially, there is a column called“Foreign Cultures”in the paper, which introduces American holiday customs and American students life to us.We are all fond of it. Id like you to write an article or something interesting for this column. 400 words or so would be fine. If you like, please send it to me before June 28.OK? Im looking forward to hearing from you soon.Yours,Li Hua二、 写作模板 一、英语作文的模板(1)不同观点列举型（ 选择型 ） There is a widespread concern over the issue that （作文题目）. But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person. A majority of people think that 观点一. In their views there are 2 factors contributing to this attitude as follows. In the first place, 原因一.Furthermore, in the second place, 原因二. So it goes without saying that观点一.People, however,differ in their opinions on this matter. Some people hold the idea that观点二. In their point of view, on the one hand，原因一. On the other hand, 原因二. Therefore, there is no doubt that观点二.As far as I am concerned, I firmly support the view that观点一或二.It is not only because _, but also because _. The more _, the more_.(2)利弊型的议论文1 Nowadays, many people prefer A because it has a significant role in our daily life. Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows. First (的优点之一). Besides,（的优点之二）. But every coin has two sides. The negative aspects are also apparent. One of the important disadvantages is that (的第一个缺点)To make matters worse, (的第二个缺点)Through above analysis, I believe that positive aspects overweigh the negative ones. Therefore, I would like to (我的看法) (From the comparison between these positive and negative effects of A , we should take it reasonably and do it according to the circumstances we are in. Only by this way can we 对前景的预测 )2 Nowadays, there is a widespread concern over (the issue that) 作文题目 . In fact, there are both advantages and disadvantages in题目议题 . Generally speaking, it is widely believed there are several positive aspects as follows. Firstly, 优点一 . And secondly优点二. Just As a popular saying goes, “every coin has two sides”,讨论议题is no exception, and in other words, it still has negative aspects. To begin with, 缺点一 . In addition, 缺点二 . To sum up, we should try to bring the advantages of 讨论议题.into full play, and reduce the disadvantages to the minimum at the same time. In that case, we will definitely make a better use of the讨论议题 .(3)解决问题类型 In recent days, we have to face I problem A , which is becoming more and more serious. First, 说明的现状 .Second,举例进一步说明现状. Confronted with A, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation.For one thing,解决方法一. For another解决方法二. Finally,解决方法三. Personally, I believe that我的解决方法. Consequently, Im confident that a bright future is awaiting us because带来的好处.二、英语作文经典范文（一）与报社等讨论稿（带手机利弊）Dear Editor，引出话题 Im a senior three student. Im writing to tell you my opinion on whether middle school students can go to school with mobile phones. 赞成I think they can do that. Because students can keep in touch with their friends and family wherever they are. Besides, the mobile phone is a way to have fun. 反对 However, every coin has 2 sides. There are some problems with using mobile phones. The ring of phones can disturb teachers and students in the classroom. Another students is that some students can spend too much time and money on phone calls and sending messages. 个人观点 In conclusion, I suggest students not use phones in the classroom. Also, as it is expensive, the owner should take good care of it. Yours sincerely, Li Hua（二）看对照表格写调查报告（孩子出国利弊）调查内容 A survey is taken on public opinions of the fact that many parents spend a large amount of money sending their children to study abroad, some of whom are middle school students. 调查结果From it we can see that 38 percent of those surveyed think it is worth the money letting children study abroad to get a better education so that they can get pay in return in the future. However, not all are for it / some are against it. 62% of them hold the view that it is difficult for young people to live and study in a foreign country. Its easy for them to fall / get into some bad habits and the cost of education in another country is ten times as much as that at home. 解决措施The survey shows that the government should set up different kinds of schools to meet the demands of different children. （句型do something /take measures / steps about sth.to do sth）三、英语写作其他常用的句型和短语第1组：Recently / Nowadays / In recent years, has become a more and more heated topic on There has been a heated discussion on There has been a hot debate that第2组：Different people have different opinions. People are divided in their opinions. Some cling to the idea that. Others hold the view/opinion that . As far as I am concerned / Personally, People vary in their opinions. Some are really angry at this proposal because they think that others believe that第3组：Several reasons can account for how this happens. First, Second, There are still some The causes may vary from person to person, but these two are common. The first is . The second is Probably, there are two reasons for . The first one might be that And the second reason could be that.There are two main reasons for this phenomenon. To begin with, Besides, 第4组：Its wise for sb to do sth.Its advisable to that Tom be assigned the job.It is urgent for the government to solve this problemWe Students Union deem it vital to create a good environment and learn English well so as to get well prepared for the future.第5组：There is no doubt that / Undoubtedly,.There is no possibility thatThere is no denying (the fact) that= No one can deny / ignore the fact that第6组：Every coin has two sides, Just as a proverb goes, “”Just as a famous saying goes, “”第7组：Their advantages outweigh any disadvantages they may have. does more harm than good 第8组：Faced with such a serious problem, we should first have a clear mind of what our students are thinking about and what difficulties they are confronted with.Sb. be faced with the difficulty = Sb. face the difficulty= When we are faced with such a ., we.= When we are facing such a serious ., we=Facing such a serious problem, we.第9组：To my surprise, Undoubtedly, .As a result, .Therefore, .In fact,Personally,However,第10组：With the development of economy and the well-off society, new demands are set for the quality of postgraduate education. 经济的发展和小康社会的发展,对研究生的培养质量提出了新的要求。With the development of economy and society, 随着经济、社会的进一步发展，With the increasing number of , comes a greater need to 第11组：前者, 后者The former, The latter, They lack the ability of They lack confidence and courage In a word, . In other words, Nowadays, In the recent years, à Recent, àLast but not least,.四相关过渡语（1）表示时间顺序: first, then, afterwards, meanwhile, later，first of all, finally, at last（2）表示空间顺序: near, next to, far from, in front of, on the left, on one side（3）表示比较、对照: like, unlike, such as, but, however, on the other hand, on the contrary, nevertheless, otherwise（4）表示因果关系: because, for, as a result, therefore, thus（5）表示递进关系: besides, whats more, what was worse, moreover, furthermore, in addition. （6）表示并列关系: and, as well as, also（7）表示总结性: in general, in a word, in short, on the whole, to sum up, in brief, to conclude.学科网（北京）股份有限公司