2021届高考英语(统考版)二轮备考提升指导20书面表达含解析.pdf

-1-2021 届高考英语（统考版）二轮备考提升指导 优培 20 书面表达（2020全国 III 卷书面表达）假定你李华，你和同学根据英语课文改编了一个短剧。给外教 Miss Evans 写封邮件，请她帮忙指导。邮件内容包括:1.剧情简介；2.指导内容；3.商定时间地点。注意：1.词数 100 左右；2.结束语已为你写好。_【答案】Dear Miss Evans,How is everything going!I am writing in sincerity to ask you a favor regarding a play we adapted according to the textbook.Wed like to combine your culture with ours by adapting the classic novel The Steamboat for a short English play.The play is set on a big storm after midnight,on the raft down the river navigation,we see a steamboat that is going to sink.We saved a scared boy.However,the adaption is quite a challenge.Having written the English script,we dont want anything inappropriate to spoil the play.So would you please spare some time to review the draft script attached to this email and make necessary changes?If it is convenient,may I pay you a visit at your office next Tuesday to give you more details?Given your busy schedule,Id be very appreciative if you offer to give some professional advice.Lookforward to your early reply.Best regards!Yours truly,Li Hua【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邮件，请求外教 Miss Evans 对于 the Steamboat 改编短-2-剧的支持。第一步：审题 体裁：应用文 时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时，一般过去时和一般将来时。结构：总分总法 第一段说明写这封邮件的目的；第二段详细说明英语戏剧的剧情介绍和指导内容细节问题；第三段表达感谢，并期待早日得到回复。第二步：列提纲（重点词组）write to；according to；combine；adaption；challenge；attached to；convenient 第三步：连词成句 根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。第五步：润色修改【名师点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句，如：If it is convenient,may I pay you a visit at your office next Tuesday to give you more details?这句话运用了 If 引导的条件状语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。（2020天津卷书面表达）假设你是晨光中学高三学生李津。你校于 6 月 8 日举办了成人礼活动，你的英国朋友 Chris 很想了解该活动。你于当晚给 Chris 回一封电子邮件，介绍关情况，内容包括：（1）成人礼活动内容（成长点滴回顾、观看校友抗疫事边录像）；（2）对活动的感受；（3）对自己未来的展望。注意：（1）词数不少于 100；（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；-3-（3）开头已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：成人礼 the coming-of age ceremony 新冠脑炎 COVID-F9 Dear Chris,Im so glad to hear from you._ _ _ _ _ Yours,Li Jin【答案】Dear Chris,I am so glad to hear from you.The coming-of-age ceremony was held in our school on June 8th this month.During the coming-of-age ceremony,the headmaster congratulated us on stepping into the adult,reviewing the growth period that we had experienced.After that,we all watched the video of alumnus fighting against the epidemic.Through the activity,what I felt is that I am able to shoulder the responsibility and make us stronger and more determined.When faced with the difficulties and failures,I must overcome them.In the future,I will be a good doctor to heal the wounded and rescue the dying,devoting myself to my work.Best wishes！Yours,Li Jin【解析】这是一篇应用文，要求写一封信。第一步：审题。审题的目的是获取重要信息。通过审题我们可以确定几个方面的信息。第一，写作内容。第二，人称为第一人称。第三，时态为一般现在时，一般过去时和一般将来时。第二步：布局段落，确定主要段落，次要段落，段落数量。这篇写作段落数量为三段。第一段：成人礼活动内容（成长点滴回顾，观看校友抗疫事迹录像等）。第二段：对活动的感受；对自己未来的展望。第三段：表达期望。第三步：确定关键词汇和短语。如 congratulate sb on sth.，be faced with，heal the wounded and rescue the dying，devote oneself to doing sth.。-4-第四步：确定较为高级的句型。如that引导的定语从句和现在分词作状语（During the coming-of-age ceremony,the headmaster congratulated us on stepping into the adult,reviewing the growth period that we had experienced.），that 引导的表语从句（Through the activity,what I felt is that I am able to shoulder the responsibility and make us stronger and more determined.），时间状语从句的省略句（When faced with the difficulties and failures,I must overcome them.）。第五步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连接词进行过渡衔接，如 After that，besides，however。第六步：注意书写，保持卷面整洁，避免划线，乱擦。【名师点睛】文章思路清晰，语言规范，段落整齐，语篇连贯，层次清晰。使用了较为高级的句式，如 that引导的定语从句和现在分词作状语，that 引导的表语从句，时间状语从句的省略句等高级句式的应用提升了写作的档次，整个短文显示出了作者高水平的英语表达能力。（专练 1）目前，你校有许多学生因为各种原因很少参加体育锻炼。假定你是张华，请你就此事向你校英语报写一封信，倡导同学们积极参与体育锻炼。内容包括：1.学生们不参加体育活动的原因；2.进行体育活动的好处。注意：1.词数 100 左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.文章开头和结尾语已给出，不计入总词数。Dear schoolmates,Nowadays,most students dont do sports for kinds of reasons._ Yours sincerely,Zhang Hua 提分训练-5-【答案】Dear schoolmates,Nowadays,most students dont do sports for kinds of reasons.They think that it is a waste of time and we may get injured in the process.In my opinion,it is very necessary for us to take part in sports activities.First,by doing some sports,like playing football,pingpong and so on,we can relax ourselves from concentrating a long time in class.There is no doubt that when we get back to study,we can study better.Second,doing sports is good for our health,so we will be unlikely to fall ill.Third,doing sports can help us form a new hobby,like swimming,hiking and so on.In this way,our life will be more colorful.In all,we can benefit a lot from doing exercises.Yours sincerely,Zhang Hua【解析】这是一篇提纲类作文。要求写一封信，倡导同学们积极参与体育锻炼。话题贴近考生生活，比较好写。所给要点非常明确，所以考生根据提示，文章可以分为两大部分：首先阐述学生们不参加体育活动的原因，然后陈述进行体育活动的好处。考生根据提示先列出主体句，然后再拓展细节内容，以使文章内容丰满，避免内容空洞。（专练 2）假定你是校学生会主席李华，你校将举办一次关于国际贸易的研讨会。请你给交换生 Mary 写一封电子邮件，邀请她参加。内容包括：1.时间：10 月 15 日下午 3:00-6:00；2.地点：学校礼堂；3.内容：观看国际贸易相关视频；专家分析国际贸易形势；互动交流。注意：1.词数 100 左右（开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数）；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：研讨会 seminar Dear Mary,Im Li Hua,chairman of the Student Union of our school._-6-_ Im looking forward to hearing from you.Yours sincerely,Li Hua【答案】Dear Mary,Im Li Hua,chairman of the Student Union of our school.Im writing to invite you to attend a seminar about international trade.It is scheduled to be held at the school hall from 3 p.m.to 6 p.m.on October 15.You are supposed to get there 20 minutes before it starts.During the meeting,we will first watch some videos related to international trade.Then,some experts will make speeches on the recent international trade situation.After that,there will be about one hour for communication between experts and the audience.Im sure the seminar will benefit you a lot.Not only will you be able to have a better understanding of international trade,but also you will know the latest world trade situation.Im looking forward to hearing from you.Yours sincerely,Li Hua【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作提纲作文，要求写一封电子邮件。第 1 步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封电子邮件。假设你是学生会主席 Li Hua，你校将在本周举行一场关于国际贸易的研讨会，你要邀请交换生 Mary 参加此次活动。文章可分为三部分：1）开篇讲述写作原因；2）主要活动内容；3）向对方表达期待。第 2 步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：国际贸易（international trade），学生会（Student Union），研讨会（seminar），relate to（与有关），international trade situation（国际贸易形势）等。第 3 步：根据提示及关键词（组）连词成句，需注意这是一封电子邮件，讲述的是本周将要发生的事情，因此时态用一般将来时即可。同时，这是一篇提纲式作文，一定要按照题目中出现的要点进行写作，切记不可遗漏要点。第 4 步：连句成文，可使用连词对文章进行润色，注意不要全用简单句，适当使用复合句，如 not only.but also，可使用有关连词 then，after that 等，全篇书写要清晰、规范、不得有涂改、书写错误等。【名师点睛】本文内容完整，语言规范，要点顺序正确，词数适当。时态、句型使用正确，是一篇比较规范的应试作文。首先，文章结构规范。文章严格遵守电子邮件写作格式要求。开篇问候，正文讲述事情的要点，结尾表达作者的期待。其次，文章要点突出。在文章正文部分将提纲中的三个要点进行了主要阐述；-7-最后，文章语法正确。根据文章要求该活动在“10 月 15 日”进行，是一个即将发生的活动，因此全文应使用一般将来时。文章还使用了较多高频词汇及词组，如 It is scheduled to be held at（按照时间定于），be able to（能够）等。文章中还使用了 not only.but also.等高频句型。