专题05 应用文写作（第09期）-2023届江苏高考英语模拟试题分项汇编（教师版）.docx

专题05应用文写作（第09期）-2023届江苏高考英语模拟试题分项汇编【2023届江苏省苏北四市（徐州连云港宿迁淮安）高三上学期第一次调研测试】假定你是李华，上周你校 举办了中国传统文化周活动。请你为校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括:1 .活动目的；.活动内容；2 .活动反响。注意：1 .写作词数应为80左右:2 .请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。A Traditional Chinese Culture Week【参考范文One possible version:A Traditional Chinese Culture WeekA traditional Chinese culture week campaign was launched last week in our school to enhance students'confidence in our national culture.During the campaign, we students were encouraged to participate in numerous cultural activities, including singing Chinese folk songs, attending Chinese calligraphy classes and introducing traditional Chinese festivals. Every one of us chose one to our (aste and we enjoyed ourselves very much.The campaign was a success and has gained in popularity among us students, which will encourage us tofurlher spread Chinese culture in future.【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生为上周你校举办的中国传统文化周活动写一篇报道，内容包 括：活动目的：活动内容：活动反响。1.词汇积累增力： enhance>boost参力口： participate in*take part in【参考范文】Dear Mr Smith,My name is Li Hua, one of your customers. I ordered an original novel Little Prince a month ago on your website. Today I received the package with disappointment.It's partly broken when delivered to me. What's worse, some pages of the book are damaged and stained, no longer readable. Attached to the email is a picture of these pages.I hope you either deliver a new book to me or give my money back.Looking forward to your reply.Yours sincerely,Li Hua【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给网站客服Smith先生写一封电子邮件，投诉海外网站买了一 本原版小说小王子包裹已破，书页污损的问题。1 .词汇积累订购：order >give an order fbr更糟的是：What's worse* Even worse照片：picture >photo期望：look forward to> expect.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句： My name is Li Hua, one of your customers.拓展句： My name is Li Hua, who is one of your customers.【点睛【高分句型1 It,s partly broken when delivered to me.（运用了 when引导的时间状语从句和省略结 构）高分句型 2 Adached to the email is a picture of these pages.（运用 了倒装结构）【江苏省扬州中学2022-2023学年高三上学期期末】假如你是李华，你听说好友小明因为压力太大想辍学。 请你根据以下要点提示给他写一封信：1.劝小明正确对待压力，并提出减轻压力的几个方法；2.希望小明接受自己的建议。注意：1.词数80左右：2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Xiao Ming,Yours truly,Li Hua【参考范文】Dear Xiaomi ng.I'm soiTy to learn that you intend to drop out for high stress. As one of your best friends, I hope that you can give up (he idea.First of al I,you should have a right attitude towards stress. Stress is a small part in our normal life.Second, I sug gest you calm down and find out the cause of your stress and manage to come up with ways of dealing with it. As to how to reduce stress, you may take exercise, listen to music or turn to your teachers or classmates for help.I hope that you can take my suggestion into account and I'm convinced that you will make a right decision.Yours truly,Li hua【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封信给好友小明，让小明正确对待压力和提出一些建议。 第一步：审题体裁：应用文人称：第一、二人称时态：根据提不，时态应为一般现在时。结构：总分总法要点：1 .劝小明正确对待压力，并提出减轻压力的几个方法；.希望小明接受自己的建议。第二步：列提纲(重点词组)intend (o； drop out； best friends； give up； have a right altilude towards； normal life； calm down； find out； manage to do： come up with； deal with： as to； take exercise； listen to； turn to sb. for help； take sth. into account； make a right decision 等第三步：连词成句I'm sorry to learn that you intend to drop out for high stress.1. As one of your best friends, I hope that you can give up the idea.2. You should have a right attitude towards stress.4.1 suggest you calm down and find out the cause of your stress and manage to come up with ways of dealing with i5. As to how to reduce stress, you may take exercise, listen to music or turn to your teachers or classmates for help.6.1 hope that you can take my suggestion into account and Tm convinced that you will make a right decision. 根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）.表文章结构顺序:First of all； Second；1 .表并列补充关系:as to； and： or：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，第五步：润色修改【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。 作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句,如：I'm sorry to learn that you intend to drop out for high stress.这句话 使用了由that引导的宾语从句；I hope that you can give up the idea.这句话也使用T由that引导的宾语从句; I suggest you calm down and find out the cause of your stress and manage to come up with ways of dealing with it. 这句话使用了省略that的宾语从句；I hope that you can take my suggestion into account and I'm convinced that you will make a right decision. 这句话 使用了由and连接的并列句等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文 章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。【江苏省南京市第三高级中学2022-2023学年高三上期期末英语达标训练】你所在班级正在进行“迎北京冬 奥”英文手抄报评选活动。你将代表学习小组向全班展示本组作品。请你写一篇英文发言稿，须包括以下要 ，八、.主要栏目；1 .设计亮点；.呼吁投票。注意:1.写作词数应为80左右；.请按如卜格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Good morning. It's my pleasure to present my group's wallpaper.参考范文】Good morning. It is my pleasure to present my group's wall paper. The “Beijing Olympic Winter Games is around the corner"，our group's wallpaper is well designed in both layout and content. In the wallpaper, various columns are available, ranging from the latest updates on the event's preparation to the detailed introduction of several most anticipated games to be held. Appealing as all these columns are, the one we are most keen on is the legendary stories of athletes. Through these stories, not only can we get to know them better, but also we will definitely be inspired by them. Do vote for us if you are fond of our wallpaper. Thanks for your attention.【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一篇英文发言稿，向全班展示你组参加“迎北京冬奥”英文手抄报的作品。I.词汇积累各种各样的：various>varied 快要来了 ： be around the comer>be drawing near（在至!）内）变动：range>vary from.to.喜爱：be fond of>bc keen on 2.句式拓展简单句变复合句 原句：In the wallpaper, various columns are available, ranging from the latest updates on the event's preparation to the detailed introduction of several most anticipated games to be held.拓展句：In （he wall paper, various columns are available, which range from the latest updates on the event's preparation to the detailed introduction of several most anticipated games to be held.点睛高分句型 I JAppealing as all these columns are, the one we are most keen on is the legendary stories of athletes.（运用了 as引起的表语提前的部分倒装，that引导的定语从句，省略了引导词that）高分右J型 2Through these stories, not only can wc get to know them better, but also wc will definitely be inspired by them.（运用了部分倒装句）【江苏省淮安中学2022-2023学年高三上学期期末达标模拟检测】假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Jackson来 信询问你未来的人生规划，请你回信，内容包括:1 .你的人生规划；.解释原因；2 .请他提出建议。注意：1 .词数80左右;.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Dear Jackson,Yours, Li Hua 【参考范文】Dear Jackson,I'm writing to share with you my life plan in the future. When I grow up, I want to be a journalist. I think working fbr a newspaper and reporting news from all over the world would be really exciting. Journalists are to be very enthusiastic, independent and good at communicating with people. Hence I am trying to improve my speaking and writing skills. And of course, absorbing as much knowledge as possible at this stage in my life is what I must do.Whal do you (hink of my life plan? Any suggestions are welcome.Yours,Li Hua 【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Jackson来信询问你未来的人生规划，请 你回信。1 .词汇积累 将来：in the fiiture> hereafter擅长：be good at > be skilled in当然：of course* certainly考虑：think o J think about2 .句式拓展 合并简单句 原句：Journalists are to be very enthusiastic, independent and good a（ communicating with people. Hence I am trying to improve my speaking and writing skills.拓展句：Journalists are to he very enthusiastic, independent and good at communicating with people, so I am trying to improve my speaking and writing skills.【点睛】【高分句型1 When I grow up, I want to be a journalist.（运用了 when引导的时间状语从句）【高分句型 2 And of course, absorbing as much knowledge as possible at this stage in my life is what I mustdo.（运用了 what连接的表语从句）许 多：numerous>masscs of获得:gained>obtaincd2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句： A traditional Chinese culture week campaign was launched last week in our school to enhance students'confidence in our national culture.拓展句： A traditional Chinese culture week campaign was launched last week in our school, whose purpose was to enhance studcnts'confidence in our national culture.点睛高分句型 I During the campaign, we students were encouraged to participate in numerous cultural activities, including singing Chinese folk songs, attending Chinese calligraphy classes and introducing traditional Chinese festivals.（运用了非谓语动词作宾语）高分句型 2 The campaign was a success and has gained in popularity among us students, which will encourage us to further spread Chinese culture in fbture.（运用了 which 引导的非限制性定语从句）【江苏省南通市2022-2023学年高三上学期12月月考】假如你是李华，一名高三学生。英语作文读后续写 这一项让你备受困扰。你计划向南京师范大学张教授（此领域的专家）写一封求助信。希望他帮你在情节构思、 语言组织和表达等方面给予指导。内容包括：1 .介绍困扰；.希望得到帮助。注意：1.词数80左右：2 .可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：读后续写continuation writingDear Professor Zhang,Yours sincerely,Li Hua【参考范范文】Dear Professor Zhang,I am Li Hua, a senior three student. Recently, I've been struggling with my continuation writing. Learning that you are an expert in it, I am writing to seek advice from you.I am encountering some problems which bother me a lot. First of all. I have difficulty in designing plots. In addition, I am at a loss how （o apply proper expressions to my writing, which makes me frustrated.Facing the problems, Tm anxious to get your help. Could you please offer me some advice on how to solve these problems? Looking forward to your reply!Yours sincerely,Li Hua【解析】本文是一篇应用文写作。要求考生写一封求助信，向南京师范大学张教授求助如何写读后续写。1 .词汇积累寻求：seek>look fbr首先：first of all>to start with困难:difficulty>trouble另外：in addition>代.句式拓展简单句变更合句原句：Facing the problems, I'm anxious to get your help.拓展句： When I face the problems, I,m anxious to get your help.点睛）高分句型 1 Learning that you are an expert in it, I am writing to seek advice from you.（that 引导的宾语 从句）高分句型 2In addition. I am at a loss how to apply proper expressions to my writing, which makes me frustrated.（which引导的非限制性定语从句）【江苏省无锡市江阴市2022-2023学年高三上学期1月期末】上周你校举办了一场篮球比赛活动。请你写一 篇英文报道，内容包括：1 .活动目的：2 .活动过程；.活动意义。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右。2.请按如卜格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。【参考范文】Possible version I:Last Friday witnessed a basketball game on the playground, which was meant to enrich students5 campus life.With a whistle, a fierce basketball game kicked off at 1:00 p.m. All the players went all out to shoot, showing tremendous enthusiasm. As they fiercely competed, loud applause and deafening cheers filled the air. During the game, the players also demonstrated the sportsmanship of friendship first and competition second.The match was undoubtedly a success. It not only contributed to a close bond between students, but also enriched our school life.Possible version 2:Last Friday witnessed a basketball match in our school, whose aim was to help build up our body.The principal delivered an opening lecture at 1:00 pm, after which the match began. Representatives from each class went all lengths to shoot. The other students cheered with enthusiasm. After several rounds, Class One Grade Three snatched the final championship.The match was undoubtedly a success. It not only contributed to a close bond between students, but also enriched our school life.【解析】本篇书面表达属于新闻报道，要求考生报道校内的一场篮球比赛活动，包括活动目的、过程及意 义。1 .词汇积累激烈的：fierce>intense极 大的：tremendous>hugc亳无疑问：undoubtedlywithout doubt促进：contribute to>promote.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句： All the players went all out to shoot, showing tremendous enthusiasm.拓展句： All the players went all out to shoot, who showed tremendous enthusiasm.【点睛）【高分句型 1 Last Friday witnessed a basketball game on （he playground, which was meant to enrich students5 campus life.（运用了 which引导的非限制性定语从句）高分句型 2 As they fiercely competed, loud applause and deafening cheers filled the air.（运用 J as 引导的时 间状语从句）高分句型 3 It not only contributed to a close bond between students, but also enriched our school life.（运用 not only.but also句型）【江苏省扬州市高邮市第一中学等2校2022-2023学年高三上学期1月期末】假定你是学生会主席李华，因 为感染新冠病毒人数还在不断增加，请你代表学生会就如何过好即将到来的寒假，给全体学生一曲建议。 内容包括：I .做好个人防护。2 .注意劳逸结合。注意：1 .写作词汇应为80左右；.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：新冠病毒novel coronavirusDear students,Students' Union参考范文】Dear students,With many people being infected with novel coronavirus, we'd like to make some constmctive suggestions to help you spend a meaningful winter holiday.To begin with, confronted with the serious condition, we students had better have personal protection in public and stay at home to have enough rest if possible. In addition, so precious is the time that we can't afford to waste it as senior students. It is advisable that we should keep a balance between relaxation and study.Hopefully, the advice will of benefit to you.Students' Union【解析】本文是一篇应用文写作。要求考生代表学生会就如何过好即将到来的寒假，给全体学生一些建议。 1.词汇积累建议：suggestionadvice首先：to begin with>first of all另外：in additionwhat's more放松：relaxation>easing2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：With many people being infected with novel coronavirus, we'd like to make some constructive suggestions to help you spend a meaningful winter holiday.拓展句： As many people are infected with novel coronavirus, we'd like to make some constructive suggestions to help you spend a meaningful winter holiday.点睛高分句型 1 In addition, so precious is the time that wc can't afford to waste it as senior studcnts.（so 位于 句首的倒装句和that引导的结果状语从句）高分句型 2It is advisable that we should keep a balance between relaxation and study.（that 引导的主语从句）【江苏省南通市如皋市2022-2023学年高三上学期I月期末】假定你是学生会主席李华，随着防疫政策的调 整，周围越来越多的人感染，请你围绕“从我做起，共战疫情”这一主题，给全校学生写一封倡议书。要点如 下：1 .倡议的原因和目的；.倡议的具体内容；2 .发出倡议。注意：1 .词数100左右;.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【参考范文One possible version:Dear schoolmates,With the adjustments of the anti-pandemic policy, more and more people around us have caught the virus. Faced with the risk of being affected, we students should respond actively to the appeal from the authority and experts.First of all, stay at home and don't go out if not necessary. In addition, do wear masks while in the open air, which can reduce the chance of contracting the virus. Washing hands as often as possible is needed, too. More importantly, we ought to lake a positive attitude to the campaign with the disease.Let's work hand in hand to overcome anxiety and do our bits.The Students' Union 【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生围绕“从我做起，共战疫情”这一主题给全校学生写一封倡议书, 介绍倡议的原因、目的和具体内容。1 .词汇积累首先：first of all»firstly止匕夕卜：in addition»what's more机会：chance一opportunity克月艮：overcome*conquer.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句： More importantly, wc ought to take a positive attitude to the campaign with the disease.拓展句：More importantly, wc ought to take a positive attitude to the campaign with the disease, which will help us overcome anxiety.【点睛 X 高分句型 1 Faced with the risk of being affected, we students should respond actively to the appeal fromthe authority and experts.（运用了过去分词短语在句中作状语）【高分句型 2 In addition, do wear masks while in the open air, which can reduce the chance of contracting the virus.（运用了 which引导的非限制性定语从句）【江苏省南京市2022-2023学年高三下学期1月六校联合调研测试】假定你是李华，上周外教Mr. Green布 置了一份作业，截止时间是本周五，但是你因故不能如期提交。请你给Mr. Green写一封邮件，申请延期提 交作业，要点如下：1 .表示歉意；.解释原因。注意：1.词数80左右;.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Mr. Green,Yours sincerely, Li Hua【答案】Mr. Green,I am writing to show my deep apology for not being able to submit my homework on Friday.As one o