读后续写 如何进行构思 promise话题写作-高考英语复习作文专题.pptx
Promise读后续写读后续写2 What is your promise?4If your promise will put you in danger,will you still keep it?Have you ever made a promise?1Have you kept your promise?3Lead inLead inPromisePromiseThis story took place in France during World War II.At the edge of a large forest lived a French girl named Marie.She spent her time looking after goats in the forest.One day,she was sitting on a fallen tree when she heard a voice from behind the bush.It said,“Dont look around,but listen carefully.You know the little window in the roof over your bed.Tonight,at 11 oclock,stand on your bed and hold your lighted lamp just under the window for ten minutes.And then put out the light and go to sleep.”The girl did as the unseen man told her.To her great joy,she heard a plane flying round and over her cottage.“Im helping the plane!”Marie said to herself.At that time thousands of French people were hiding in the forests and mountains to resist the Germans.They were in need of food and weapons,which had to be dropped to them from planes coming from England.In this way,Marie carried out her task.Then one morning Marie met the owner of the voice,a young French soldier.He sat near her and said,“Thank you,Marie,for what you have done for the country.Tonight is very important.Things of great value will be dropped here and the light must be shown at 3 oclock in the morning.Can you keep awake till then?”“I wont fail.”Marie nodded.Night fell.Suddenly,two German soldiers burst into her cottage,with the guns in their hands.They searched the cottage and remained in her room and she was forbidden to go outside.She sat still,wondering what she could do.She couldnt stand on the bed to show the light any more.She remembered her promise to the French soldier.At the same time,the two enemy soldiers were asleep and all was quiet.2What did the unseen man want Marie to do?4Why did the two German soldiers burst into the cottage?Who is the owner of the voice?1Did Marie do as she was asked?3QuestionsQuestions：2What did the unseen man want Marie to do?Who is the owner of the voice?1PromisePromiseWhy should she hold a lighted lamp?/What is the function of the lighted lamp?What was the relationship between France and Englandduring WWII?Did Marie do as she was asked?3PromisePromiseWhy did they choose Marie to help them at first?Why was the forest so important?What was the relationship between France and Germanyduring WWII?What kind of girl do you think Marie is?PromisePromiseCan she keep her promise easily?Why did the two German soldiers burst into the cottage?4Will she keep her promise?PromisePromiseDo you think the story is complete?If it is to be continued,what will it be about?2续写的短文字数为150左右；续写部分分为两段，开头已经为你写好;1RequirementsRequirements：DiscussionDiscussion：With time approaching,Marie got more and more anxious._ 1.What was the time?2.Why did she get more and more anxious?3.Did she come up with an idea finally?What was it?Noiselessly she got out of the cottage and set fire to it._ 1.Why did she get out of the cottage noiselessly?2.What would happen after she set fire to the cottage?(the two German soldiers/the plane/her feeling/promise)time NoiselesslyitWriting TimeWriting Time：Evaluation StandardEvaluation Standard是否与所给短文故事情节衔接是否与段落开头语衔接词汇的准确性和丰富性语法结构和句式多样化评分标准是否完成Discussion:How to continue a storyDiscussion:How to continue a story?HomeworkHomeworkPolish your continued story&write it on your notebook.The original versionThe original version She couldnt stand on the bed to show the light.She remembered her promise to the French soldier.The German enemies were asleep.Just then she had an idea.Noiselessly she got out of the room and set fire to the cottage.In a moment the cottage was burning.She ran off to the forest.In the morning,the French soldier came.”You have done well,Marie,”he said,“You did not fail.The plane brought us what we need.Your parents are safe.Come and join us.”THANK YOU
