外研九年级上作文指导.pptx
I spent my National Holiday in ShandongI went to Shandong for a holiday durinng my last National Festivel.第1页/共12页 Shandong is the most beautiful place that I have ever been to,and I wont forget those days that I spent there.第2页/共12页Transportation:by train/take a train by bus/take a busWeather:sunny,coolI went there first by train then by bus.Its sunny but a little cool.When I arrived there,it was sunny but a little cool.When I arrived there,I was so happy that the weather there was quite similar to that in Dalian which was sunny but a little cool.第3页/共12页Pancakes and Chinese Onions第4页/共12页What did I do?1.2.3.4.Climb the Mount TaiVisit ConfuciusTempleHave some typical fooddrop in at a kite museumI visited ConfuciusTempleI climbed the Mount TaiI had some typical foodI dropped in at a kite museum第5页/共12页 I climbed the Mount Tai I visited ConfuciusTempleI had some typical foodI dropped in at a Kite MuseumOn the first dayWhichOn the second dayWhichAfter that WhichOn our way back home,what impressed me most was the sunrise.I was amazed to第6页/共12页FeelingsTired/relaxed/enjoyable/unforgettablePleasant/interesting/fun/dull/boring/excitingAlthough I felt tired,It was a fantastic trip.What an exciting and unforgettable trip!It is such an enjoyable trip that I will never forget it.I had a good time there,and its really an unforgettable tripShandong has left me a wonderful impression andIm looking forward to going back there again.第7页/共12页How to introduce your trip?1.starting2.body3.endingWhenWhereHowWeatherWhat(activities)feelings1234Your trip（Shandong is the most beautiful place that I have ever been to,and I wont forget those days that I spent there.）时态：人称：（It is such an enjoyable trip that I will never forget it.）第8页/共12页 同学们,你一定欣赏过异乡的风景,品尝过异乡的美食,感受过异乡的风土人情学校的语言天地要举办一次英语征文活动,内容为介绍你的一次难忘的旅行经历,现在请你根据下面的提示,写一篇短文。内容提示:1.Where and when did you go?2.How did you go there?3.What was the weather like?4.What did you do there?5.How did you feel?要求:(1)中心突出,语意连贯,层次清晰,书写规范,可适当发挥 (2)词数80词左右An unforgettable trip to_第9页/共12页书面表达评分标准（一）评分原则1.共20分，按5个档次给分；2.采用整体评分的方式，评分时，首先考虑短文内容是否符合题目要求，根据任务完成的情况初步确定所属档次；然后按该档次的具体要求进行衡量，确定和调整档次，最后给分；3.评分的主要参考指标为：内容要点全面、语言得体、结构清晰、上下文语意连贯、符合逻辑，字数80词左右，其中内容要点可用不同方式表达，鼓励对紧扣主题的适当发挥。4.若书写较差，影响理解从所得分中减去2分；5.评分时对于拼写与标点符号错误，应视其对交际的影响程度酌情扣分。6.英语、美语拼写及词汇用法均可接受。第10页/共12页（三）各档次评分参考标准一档（17-20分）出色完成了试题规定的任务，有很好的能力用自己的话表述观点，围绕主题的合理发挥，内容符合逻辑，覆盖了所有要点，组织结构清晰，表达意义得体，选词贴切，语言准确无误或有少量拼写错误，标点、大小写正确。二档（13-16分）较好完成了试题规定的任务。有能力用自己的话表述观点，有围绕主题的适当发挥，内容比较符合逻辑，覆盖了所有要点，组织结构比较清晰，表达意义的选词贴切，标点、拼写大体上正确，语言较准确，不影响读者的理解。三档（9-12）基本完成了试题规定的任务。有一定的能力用自己的话表述观点，覆盖了所有主要内容，意思基本连贯，但语言有一些错误（句子结构、动词时态、搭配、拼写、标点 等），表达基本清楚。第11页/共12页感谢您的观看。第12页/共12页
