2023年高考英语复习全国通用第20讲短文改错(练)(原卷版).pdf
第 20 讲 短文改错（练）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改 10 处，多者（从第 11 处起）不计分。（一）、My friend travels to many places when she was young.But she cant drive it now due to a problem with her hand.On the phone she said she wanted to go and see the gardens with full blooms.So we drove to the garden on the side of the mountain and spent a happier day there.After see the beautiful flowers,we had tea and snacks together on benches overlooking the wide mountain and sky landscape.It was lovely to listen for her talk about her school life.At school she had subjects such as cooking,baking,or crafting.She was delighted to talk and what delighted I was to hear about her colorfully life!（二）、I think there should be a specially festival for teenagers in China calling Teenager Volunteer Day.As is known to all,most teenagers in China are bring up as the only child in the family.Usually given too much care and attention,and they are likely to take everything for granted.In Teenager Volunteer Day,teenagers are encouraged to do voluntary works wherever they are needed.They may help to raise money for those which suffer from a serious disease,go to a nursing home to do what is good for the elderly or collecting books for children in poor areas.The more voluntary work they do,more considerate and responsible you will be.（三）、Dear Li Hua,Im writing to tell you something about Edinburgh which you ask about in the last e-mail.Edinburgh,located in the southeast of Scotland,was the capital city of Scotland as well as their political and cultural center.It covers a area of 264 square kilometers with only a small population 1.33 million.With the airport lain in the center of the city,it is convenient for people to go around.Close to the seaside,Edinburgh has a mild climate,that makes it one of the most popular tourism city in the UK.It also has absolute splendid ancient architecture,like the Edinburgh Castle.I will be happy to guide you around our city if you will come here.Yours,Harry（四）、One day,my teacher told me some exciting news.I was one of the students whom had the chance to play the piano in the concert.Heard this,I filled up of a mix of excitement and horror.In order to perfect my piece,I practiced hard than before.The big day arrived.When it was my turn to play,and I felt a little terrifying.But I slowly make my way up to the stage.With a few mistake made during the performance,I finished the whole piece.It was my first time perform in public,and I realized that the most important thing are to be confident and take action when we do everything.（五）、On the cold morning,my brother suddenly became unconscious.He then rushed to hospital and it turned out that she had a severe brain disease.When he finally came back home,we did that most families would do.We tried to help him as many as we could.One afternoon,he was at home alone for a few hours.When we returned,all the furnitures in his bedroom had been rearranged.My mom asks in surprise,“Who did that?”My brother replied delighted,“Me.”At that moment,we were all greatly amazed at that he had recovered a lot and had the strength to moving things.
