冰激凌读后续写高中英语续写写作--高考英语作文备考.pptx
CONTINUOUS WRITING-ICE CREAM阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。It was a hot day in the middle of July.I decided to walk to the neighborhood store where it sold my favorite thing,ice cream.I pulled friend towards the ice cream store,almost passing out from the burning sun on the way.As we walked on,my friend kept saying that it was toohot.She thought that she was stupid to decide to come withme to buy ice cream.I felt sorry and tried to encourage her.Were almost there.Just think of the cool and sweet taste ofice cream in your mouth.Itll be worth the walk,I told her.But I had to admit that the store was quite a distance from ur houses.During the journey,my mouth began to becomedry and I wanted to drink.When we were about a block away from the store,I noticed an old lady who was walking in our direction.She was about 70 years old.She had a big back problem,so she was unable to keep her back straight.阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。She was struggling,pushing a shopping cart full of things like the soap,bread and water.With each step toward her,we began to see her appearance more clearly.It appeared that she was often unhapp and easy to get angry.I looked at my friend to see if she had noticed her.I couldsee that she had and that she disliked the old lady due to the ladys appearance.As we approached the lady pushing the shopping cart(购物推车),my friend directed me away from the old lady and the cart.I began to observe other passers-by.They were also trying to avoid her Suddenly I heard a terrible sound behind me.I quickly turned around to see what it was.l found the ladyscart had been knocked over by something on the ground.注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。Paragraph 1:Things in the shopping cart like the soap all dropped on the ground.Paragraph 2:Then my friend continued walking on while I went to the lady.分析 PARA.ONE这位老妇人慢慢地弯下腰(bend down)，努力去捡起掉落在地上的东西。妇人发现捡起东西对他来说很困难。(sb.find it hard to do sth.)对他来说捡起地上的东西是困难的。她看起来很无助，但是路人似乎都不愿意去帮她。没有人帮助她。The old lady bent down slowly and tried to collect the things that were dropped on the ground.The lady found it hard to collect her things.It was difficult for her to pick up the things on the ground.(be willing to do sth.)She looked helpless,but the passers-by seemed unwilling to help her.No one helped her.I was about to help that old woman when my friend pulled me.但是其他路人不愿意帮助她。我们能做什么来帮助她呢？(what)我们怎么帮助这个老妇人呢？(how)我在那儿站了一会儿。我决定去帮助她。我正要去帮助那个老妇人，就在这时我朋友拉住了我。(be about to do when)But other passers-by were unwilling to help her.What can we do to help her?How can we help this old lady?I made the decision to help her.I stood there for a moment.分析 PARA.ONE我说：“和我一起去帮她。”但是我的朋友给了我一个消极的回答但是我朋友看起来不愿意那样做。并且她拒绝了我。老妇人又沮丧又尴尬。天气太热了。这跟你没关系。我们不知道她是哪种人。I said,“Help her with me.”But my friend gave me a negative reply.But my friend looked unwilling to do so,and she refused me.The old lady was upset and embarrassed.Its none of your business.There is nothing to do with us.It has nothing to do with us.It is very hot.We dont know what kind of person she is.分析 PARA.ONE分析PARA.TWO我帮她捡起了掉在地上的东西。I helped her pick up the things on the ground.妇人对我来帮助她感到很惊讶。It was surprised/grateful for the lady that I came and offered my help.我从心底里感到高兴。I felt happy from the bottom of my heart.尽管我没买到冰激凌，但我发现帮助别人比冰激凌更甜（更让我感到快乐）。Even though I didnt buy the ice cream,I found it sweeter for me to help others.I found helping others made me happier than the sweet taste of ice cream.冰激凌比以前更美味了。The ice cream was more delicious than before.参考答案Paragraph1:Things in the shopping cart like the soap all dropped on theground.I watched in shock as the lady bent down slowly and tried hard to collect her things.I turned to my friend and asked,Shall we go and help her?It is not we who knocked her shopping cart over,my friend said impatiently,walking ahead.I stood there for a moment,suddenly feeling sorry for this pitiful lady.II help her,I said with determination.Paragraph 2:Then my friend continued walking on while I went to the lad.et me help you,I said as I helped her get the carlThe lady looked up and said tearfully,Thank you!Then Ihelped her put things back into her cart.To my surprise,so many passers-by joined me,including my friend.With everything put into her cart,my friend and I helped push it into her house.If it were not for the accident,we would have had delicious ice cream to eat,but we didnt feel regretful,for what we did was meaningful.感谢观看单击此处添加副标题
