读后续写微技能之心理描写课件--高三英语二轮复习.pptx
读后续写微技能读后续写微技能内心活动描写内心活动描写Continuation Continuation writing strategywriting strategyShow,Dont TellShow,Dont Tell1.tell the difference between telling and showing;1.tell the difference between telling and showing;2.taste and appreciate“to show”sentences;2.taste and appreciate“to show”sentences;3.3.createcreate and and writewrite“to show”sentences.“to show”sentences.To-dolistHow did she feel?How did she feel?She felt _She felt _happyhappyexcitedexciteddelighteddelightedjoyfuljoyfulgladgladthrilled.thrilled.PictureTalkHow can you tell?How can you tell?She jumped high with She jumped high with joy.joy.She wore a shining She wore a shining smile on her face.smile on her face.The summer fresh air The summer fresh air is filled with laughter.is filled with laughter.We can show ones We can show ones emotion through emotion through actionsactions.We can show ones emotion We can show ones emotion through through facial expressionfacial expression.We can show ones emotion We can show ones emotion through through the environmentthe environment.ThinkandSayThe girl The girl jumpedjumped high with joy.high with joy.She wore a shining She wore a shining smile smile on her face.on her face.The summer The summer fresh airfresh air is filled with laughter.is filled with laughter.ThinkandSayShe felt happy.She felt happy.To tell:To tell:To show:To show:To tellTo tellTo showTo showVSVSTo show:To show:to write with more actions,facial expressions and to write with more actions,facial expressions and environment descriptions,allowing readers to experience environment descriptions,allowing readers to experience the same things as the characters do.the same things as the characters do.1.Hegiggledandscreamedwithexcitement.2.Heclappedhishandstogetherandjumpedupanddownwithjoy.3.Whenthemotherkissedthebabyonthecheek,hedanced,wavinghishandswithjoyandsweetness.4.Davidexcitedlytalkedaboutourexperience,eyeswithenthusiasm.5.Hereyesweretwinkledwithpleasure.6.Asmileliftedthecornerofhismouthwhenitcametowildcamping.7.Onhearingthegoodnews,tearsstartedwellingupinTinaseyesandfallingdownherpinkcheeks.8.Theviewsthereweresurprisinglybeautiful-thewarmsunshine,thefreshair,theclearwater.Wesatonthegrass,attractedbythesplendidnature.9.Theparkwasfulloffreshnessandbeautyofspring,withthesunshiningandbirdssinging.10.Iclosedmyeyestoenjoythegentlewindandthesoundsoftheclashingwaves.Gentlyopeningmyeyes,Isawmyparentstakingarelaxingstrollalongthebeach.TasteandAppreciateTaste and appreciate”to show”sentences and complete the table.Taste and appreciate”to show”sentences and complete the table.Taste and appreciate”to show”sentences and complete the table.Taste and appreciate”to show”sentences and complete the table.1.Hegiggledandscreamedwithexcitement.2.Heclappedhishandstogetherandjumpedupanddownwithjoy.3.Whenthemotherkissedthebabyonthecheek,hedanced,wavinghishandswithjoyandsweetness.To show happiness,To show happiness,we can use actions likwe can use actions like e giggle,scream,clap,jump,dance,wave,giggle,scream,clap,jump,dance,wave,TasteandAppreciatesing,cheer,laugh,hug.sing,cheer,laugh,hug.4.Davidexcitedlytalkedaboutourexperience,eyeswithenthusiasm.5.Hereyesweretwinkledwithpleasure.6.Asmileliftedthecornerofhismouthwhenitcametowildcamping.7.Onhearingthegoodnews,tearsstartedwellingupinTinaseyesandfallingdownherpinkcheeks.To show happiness,To show happiness,we can use we can use facial expressions likfacial expressions like eyes,e eyes,smile,mouth,tears,smile,mouth,tears,cheeks,cheeks,TasteandAppreciatelips,eyebrows,face,ears.lips,eyebrows,face,ears.8.Theviewsthereweresurprisinglybeautiful-thewarmsunshine,thefreshair,theclearwater.Wesatonthegrass,attractedbythesplendidnature.9.Theparkwasfulloffreshnessandbeautyofspring,withthesunshiningandbirdssinging.10.Iclosedmyeyestoenjoythegentlewindandthesoundsoftheclashingwaves.Gentlyopeningmyeyes,Isawmyparentstakingarelaxingstrollalongthebeach.To show happiness,To show happiness,we can use the we can use the environment like environment like sunshine,the air,tsunshine,the air,the water,grass,he water,grass,birds,birds,wind,wind,waves,the waves,the beach,beach,TasteandAppreciateflowers,trees,cloud,sky,leaves,rainbow.flowers,trees,cloud,sky,leaves,rainbow.01Actions Actions EnvironmentEnvironmenteyes,smile,tears,mouth,eyes,smile,tears,mouth,eyebrows,cheeks,lips,ears,eyebrows,cheeks,lips,ears,facefacegiggle,scream,clap,giggle,scream,clap,jump,dance,sing,cheer,jump,dance,sing,cheer,wave,laugh,hugwave,laugh,hugsunshine,the air,the water,sunshine,the air,the water,grass,birds,wind,waves,grass,birds,wind,waves,the beach,flowers,trees,the beach,flowers,trees,cloud,sky,leaves,rainbowcloud,sky,leaves,rainbowSummary1Facial Facial expressionsexpressionsHappinessHappinessTo showTo showCreateandWriteScene 1:JaneScene 1:Jane迷失山林，恐惧度长夜。迷失山林，恐惧度长夜。(20162016年浙江高考年浙江高考)Jane realized she was lost.She was Jane realized she was lost.She was frightenedfrightened.To tell:To tell:To show:To show:?CreateandWriteScene 1:JaneScene 1:Jane迷失山林，恐惧度长夜。迷失山林，恐惧度长夜。(20162016年浙江高考年浙江高考)ActionsFrightenedstop walkingstandtremblefeeljump/beatFacial expressionseyeslipstearscheeksThe environmentforesttreesskywindActions:Jane stopped walking aimlessly and stood there alone.Feeling helpless and frustrated,her body couldnt help trembling with fear.Her heart was jumping violently,as if to jump out of her body.Facial expressions:Eyes without hope,her lips turned white.Tears started streaming down her pale thin cheeks.The environment:The forest was broad,thick and dangerous.The sky was becoming cloudy and dark.The cold wind was blowing strongly and constantly,beating against the tall trees.Jane realized she was lost.She was Jane realized she was lost.She was frightenedfrightened.To tell:To tell:To show:To show:CreateandWriteTo describe facial expressionsTo describe facial expressionsTo showTo showones ones emotionemotionSummary2To write actionsTo write actionsTo add environment descriptionsTo add environment descriptionsSpecificDetailedVividScene:Scene:Jenny accidentally revealed(Jenny accidentally revealed(泄露泄露)Dellas)Dellas secret.Della scolded(secret.Della scolded(责骂责骂)her angrily and left)her angrily and left the classroom.the classroom.Create:Create:please write a detailed,specific and please write a detailed,specific and vivid description about vivid description about how Jenny felthow Jenny felt after after Della left.Della left.Assignment
