Unit1ReadingforWriting写作指导课件--高中英语人教版（2019）必修第一册.pptx
应用文写作M1U1 Reading for Writing:Write a letter of adviceTalk and lead inTalk and lead inAdvice：How to lose weight？I suggest that you should I suggest that you should pay attention to losing pay attention to losing weightweight.I suggest that you should I suggest that you should sleep sleep early and do more exerciseearly and do more exercise.better?JojoTip1:Advice should be specific(具体化具体化).LilyRead and understandRead and understandWhat is Worried Friends What is Worried Friends problem?problem?What is Susan Luos advice?What is Susan Luos advice?I recommend that you talk to your friend about his behaviour.It is not unusual I recommend that you talk to your friend about his behaviour.It is not unusual for teenagers of your generation to be attracted to computer games and the for teenagers of your generation to be attracted to computer games and the online world.But spending too much time online is unhealthy and makes it very online world.But spending too much time online is unhealthy and makes it very difficult to focus on other things in life.Some students even become addicted to difficult to focus on other things in life.Some students even become addicted to the Internet and cannot concentrate on school and family life.I think you should the Internet and cannot concentrate on school and family life.I think you should encourage your friend to try new hobbies.Why not discuss the problem encourage your friend to try new hobbies.Why not discuss the problem together?I am sure he will listen to you,since you are his good friend.together?I am sure he will listen to you,since you are his good friend.What do you think of Susans advice?What do you think of Susans advice?I recommend that you talk to your friend about his behaviour.I recommend that you talk to your friend about his behaviour.It is not unusual for teenagers of your generation to be attracted to computer games and the online world.But spending too much time online is unhealthy and makes it very difficult to focus on other things in life.Some students even become addicted to the Internet and cannot concentrate on school and family life.I think you should I think you should encourage your friend to try new hobbiesencourage your friend to try new hobbies.Why not discuss the problem Why not discuss the problem together?together?I am sure he will listen to you,since you are his good friend.Tip2:Advice should be convincing(有有说服力服力).I recommend that you talk to your friend about his behaviour.I recommend that you talk to your friend about his behaviour.It is not unusual It is not unusual for teenagers of your generation to be attracted to computer games and the for teenagers of your generation to be attracted to computer games and the online world.But spending too much time online is unhealthy and makes it very online world.But spending too much time online is unhealthy and makes it very difficult to focus on other things in life.Some students even become addicted to difficult to focus on other things in life.Some students even become addicted to the Internet and cannot concentrate on school and family life.the Internet and cannot concentrate on school and family life.I think you should I think you should encourage your friend to try new hobbies.Why not discuss the problem encourage your friend to try new hobbies.Why not discuss the problem together?together?I am sure he will listen to you,since you are his good friend.I am sure he will listen to you,since you are his good friend.Why did Susan mentionWhy did Susan mention（提及）（提及）the other information?the other information?reasonsspecific假定你是李华，你的英国朋友假定你是李华，你的英国朋友假定你是李华，你的英国朋友假定你是李华，你的英国朋友PeterPeter初来乍到，总感觉很难适应新环境，初来乍到，总感觉很难适应新环境，初来乍到，总感觉很难适应新环境，初来乍到，总感觉很难适应新环境，写信向你寻求建议。请你用英文给写信向你寻求建议。请你用英文给写信向你寻求建议。请你用英文给写信向你寻求建议。请你用英文给PeterPeter回邮件。内容要点如下：回邮件。内容要点如下：回邮件。内容要点如下：回邮件。内容要点如下：表示理解；表示理解；表示理解；表示理解；提出建议（不少于提出建议（不少于提出建议（不少于提出建议（不少于2 2点）。点）。点）。点）。注意：可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。字数注意：可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。字数注意：可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。字数注意：可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。字数8080左右左右左右左右词汇：适应词汇：适应词汇：适应词汇：适应 adapt toadapt toAnalyze and practiseAnalyze and practiseDear Peter,假定你是李华，你的英国朋友假定你是李华，你的英国朋友PeterPeter初来乍到，总感觉很难适应新环境，写信向你初来乍到，总感觉很难适应新环境，写信向你寻求建议。请你用英文给寻求建议。请你用英文给PeterPeter回邮件。内容要点如下回邮件。内容要点如下 表示理解表示理解；提出建议（不少于提出建议（不少于2 2点）点）A.Knowing that you have come to China recently,Im writing with delight to show my warm welcome to you.B.Knowing that you have difficulty adapting to a new environment,Im writing to offer my advice as I understand how you feel.A.Knowing that you have come to China recently,Im writing with delight to show my warm welcome to you.B.Knowing that you have difficulty adapting to a new environment,Im writing to offer my advice as I understand how you feel.Dear Peter,Knowing that you have difficulty adapting to a new environment,Im writing to offer my advice as I understand how you feel.假定你是李华，你的英国朋友假定你是李华，你的英国朋友PeterPeter初来乍到，总感觉很难适应新环境，写信向你初来乍到，总感觉很难适应新环境，写信向你寻求建议。请你用英文给寻求建议。请你用英文给PeterPeter回邮件。内容要点如下回邮件。内容要点如下 表示理解表示理解；提出建议（不少于提出建议（不少于2 2点）点）A.You are supposed to get used to life in China.B.You are supposed to make more Chinese friends.C.You are supposed to make more Chinese friends who will help you whenever youre in trouble.specificconvincingDear Peter,Knowing that you have difficulty adapting to a new environment,Im writing to offer my advice as I understand how you feel.You are supposed to make more Chinese friends who will help you whenever youre in trouble.A.Its a good idea to know the environment.B.Its a good idea to take part in some activities,which will help you get used to the life here easily.C.Its a good idea to read more Chinese books whenever you are in trouble.假定你是李华，你的英国朋友假定你是李华，你的英国朋友PeterPeter初来乍到，总感觉很难适应新环境，写信向你初来乍到，总感觉很难适应新环境，写信向你寻求建议。请你用英文给寻求建议。请你用英文给PeterPeter回邮件。内容要点如下回邮件。内容要点如下 表示理解表示理解；提出建议（不少于提出建议（不少于2 2点）点）specificconvincingTip3:Advice should be relevant(相关性相关性).A.Its a good idea to know the environment.B.Its a good idea to take part in some activities,which will help you get used to the life here easily.C.Its a good idea to read more Chinese books whenever you are in trouble.Dear Peter,Knowing that you have difficulty adapting to a new environment,Im writing to offer my advice as I understand how you feel.You are supposed to make more Chinese friends who will help you whenever youre in trouble.Its a good idea to take part in some activities,which will help you get used to the life here easily.Is there any other advice?I recommend that you should I recommend that you should take a tour around this place take a tour around this place so that youll so that youll have a better understanding of where you livehave a better understanding of where you live.假定你是李华，你的英国朋友假定你是李华，你的英国朋友PeterPeter初来乍到，总感觉很难适应新环境，写信向你初来乍到，总感觉很难适应新环境，写信向你寻求建议。请你用英文给寻求建议。请你用英文给PeterPeter回邮件。内容要点如下回邮件。内容要点如下 表示理解表示理解；提出建议（不少于提出建议（不少于2 2点）点）Is it specific?Is it convincing?Is it relevant?A.Looking forward to your reply.A.Looking forward to your reply.B.I hope you will find my advice useful.B.I hope you will find my advice useful.A.Looking forward to your reply.A.Looking forward to your reply.B.I hope you will find my advice useful.B.I hope you will find my advice useful.Dear Peter,Knowing that you have difficulty adapting to a new environment,Im writing to offer my advice as I understand how you feel.You are supposed to make more Chinese friends who will help you whenever youre in trouble.Its a good idea to take part in some activities,which will help you get used to the life here easily.I recommend that youI recommend that you should take a tour around this place so that youll have a better understanding of where you live.假定你是李华，你的英国朋友假定你是李华，你的英国朋友PeterPeter初来乍到，总感觉很难适应新环境，写信向你初来乍到，总感觉很难适应新环境，写信向你寻求建议。请你用英文给寻求建议。请你用英文给PeterPeter回邮件。内容要点如下回邮件。内容要点如下 表示理解表示理解；提出建议（不少于提出建议（不少于2 2点）点）Dear Peter,Knowing that you have difficulty adapting to a new environment,Im writing to offer my advice as I understand how you feel._,you are supposed to make more Chinese friends who will help you whenever youre in trouble._,its a good idea to take part in some activities,which will help you get used to the life here easily._,I recommend that you should take a tour around this place so that youll have a better understanding of where you live.I hope you will find my advice useful.Yours faithfully,Li HuaThink over coherenceThink over coherenceFirstlyBesidesAbove all 假定你是李华，你的国外笔友假定你是李华，你的国外笔友假定你是李华，你的国外笔友假定你是李华，你的国外笔友AnnAnn最近因为父母工作的关系转到新的班级，她在最近因为父母工作的关系转到新的班级，她在最近因为父母工作的关系转到新的班级，她在最近因为父母工作的关系转到新的班级，她在交朋交朋交朋交朋友友友友方面遇到了一些问题，因此向你寻求交朋友的方法。内容包括：方面遇到了一些问题，因此向你寻求交朋友的方法。内容包括：方面遇到了一些问题，因此向你寻求交朋友的方法。内容包括：方面遇到了一些问题，因此向你寻求交朋友的方法。内容包括：1.1.表示理解；表示理解；表示理解；表示理解；2.2.提供建议提供建议提供建议提供建议。注意：注意：注意：注意：1.1.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;2.2.字数字数字数字数8080左右。左右。左右。左右。Practice and writePractice and writeDear Ann,_Yours faithfully,Li HuaEvaluate and improveEvaluate and improve After reading the first paragraph,After reading the first paragraph,I know/understand I know/understand what the problem is Yes/No After reading the ending,I find itAfter reading the ending,I find it appropriate Yes/No After reading the second paragraph,I know After reading the second paragraph,I know what the advice is Yes/No After reading the advice,I find itAfter reading the advice,I find it specific Yes/No convincing Yes/No relevant Yes/NoTotal:_Evaluate and improveEvaluate and improveAfter reading the first paragraph,After reading the first paragraph,I I know/understand know/understand what the problem isAfter reading the ending,I find itAfter reading the ending,I find it appropriate After reading the second paragraph,After reading the second paragraph,I know I know what the advice is After reading the advice,I find itAfter reading the advice,I find it specific convincing relevant Total:_Dear Ann,Knowing that you have trouble making friends,Im writing to give my advice as I know your feeling.First,you should make more Chinese friends.Besides,youre supposed to make friends with those who share the same hobby with you.Lastly,I recommend that you should join some clubs so that you can meet more people.Illbegladifyoufindmyadvicehelpful.Yours faithfully,Li HuaEvaluate and improveEvaluate and improve After reading the first paragraph,After reading the first paragraph,I know/understand I know/understand what the problem is Yes/No After reading the ending,I find itAfter reading the ending,I find it appropriate Yes/No After reading the second paragraph,I know After reading the second paragraph,I know what the advice is Yes/No After reading the advice,I find itAfter reading the advice,I find it specific Yes/No convincing Yes/No relevant Yes/NoTotal:_1.Invite another partner to evaluate your letter according to the checklist;2.Polish your letter of advice according to your partners evaluation.HomeworkHomeworkThank you for watching!
