人教版高二英语下学期应用文 读后续写写作训练课件.pptx

【应用文写作应用文写作】第一节(满分15分)你校将举办英语演讲比赛。请你以Grow Up Healthy为题，写一篇发言稿参赛，内容 包括：简述现状；提出建议；发起倡议。注意：词数80左右；para.1:para.1:开场白开场白+列举学生当前存在的列举学生当前存在的 健康问题健康问题 Good morning,everyone!I am honored to.problems:There is a growing concern that problems:There is a growing concern that prolems.prolems.1.eating junk food 2.lacking exercise 3.being addicted to online games 4.feel stressed out or depressed para.2:solutions+benefits1.stick to a healthy diet ,such as eating more fruits and vegetables2.do regular exercise like running and playing basketball3.listen to some relaxing music4.less exposure to electronic devices 5 look at the bright side and stay possitive when facing challenges benefits:para.3:倡议+结束语+致谢Lets take action now!Thats all!Thanks for listening!Can you ride a bike?Did you remember who taught you to ride it?Did you fall off the bike and hurt your knees?How did you learn to ride it?pedal,turn and squeeze the front brake handle properly1.1.解读续写文本解读续写文本2.2.抓伏笔自问式思路启发抓伏笔自问式思路启发3.3.小情节构建及可读性细节描写小情节构建及可读性细节描写 01.解读续写文本-倒叙的写作手法After a very meaningful conversation with my dad about the old days,we came up with an object that we both remembered clearly.It was my very first bicycle.My mind told me I got it when I was seven,who was cheated to ride it for fifty yards alone the first time I tried!My dad put together all the small pieces of the bicycle from a beautiful material that he called,“Your own car.Of course I knew he had some magical ability,but I didnt think he could make such an awesome object.He added the seat and the pedals（踏板）so that I would not have any problems.My dad recalled the bicycle was the smallest he could find while I remember how huge it was.I was so afraid of it and there was no way that I was going to control that monster-sized material.The bicycle was left in my backyard as a decoration for a month because l refused to ride it.Honestly,I was scared to try it.After a month,my dad gave me a lecture to teach me what being a man was all about.I was finally determined to try it.My dad was proud of me and I felt very manly.He and I went to the park to see what we could do there.The park was empty when we arrived.I had no doubt that my dad told everybody not to be there because we had to use it.I felt sorry for other people，but I was proud to have such an omnipotent（全 能的）person as my dad.We found a smooth and open space.My dad was holding the back part of the seat to make sure I didnt fell.He promised me that I was not going to fall because he would be running right behind,holding the bicycle.After a very meaningful conversation with my dad about the old days,we came up with an object that we both remembered clearly.It was my very first bicycle.My mind told me I got it when I was seven,who was cheated to ride it for fifty yards alone the first time I tried!My dad put together all the small pieces of the bicycle from a beautiful material that he called,“Your own car.Of course I knew he had some magical ability,but I didnt think he could make such an awesome object.He added the seat and the pedals（踏板）so that I would not have any problems.My dad recalled the bicycle was the smallest he could find while I remember how huge it was.I was so afraid of it and there was no way that I was going to control that monster-sized material.The bicycle was left in my backyard as a decoration for a month because l refused to ride it.Honestly,I was scared to try it.After a month,my dad gave me a lecture to teach me what being a man was all about.I was finally determined to try it.My dad was proud of me and I felt very manly.He and I went to the park to see what we could do there.The park was empty when we arrived.I had no doubt that my dad told everybody not to be there because we had to use it.I felt sorry for other people，but I was proud to have such an omnipotent（全 能的）person as my dad.We found a smooth and open space.My dad was holding the back part of the seat to make sure I didnt fell.He promised me that I was not going to fall because he would be running right behind,holding the bicycle.theme:growing up to be a brave man and challenge oneselfRead 02 Read for Setting and CharactersS-Setting(when/where)where:when:in the parkin the parkwhen I was at the age of 7when I was at the age of 7C-CharactersI:Dad:bike:a 7-year-old boy who first learnt to ride a bile with the help of my a 7-year-old boy who first learnt to ride a bile with the help of my daddad an omnipotent(an omnipotent(全能的全能的)person who seemingly has magic power)person who seemingly has magic powermonster-sized materialmonster-sized material Read 03 Read for Conflicts Will my dad keep his promise?Why didnt dad keep his promise?fearfulmanly1.was scared to try it2.monster-sized3.promised he would be running right behind,holding the bicycle1.was cheated to ridetry it2.?held the back part of the seat firmly and puffed.3.3.小情节构建及可读性细节描写小情节构建及可读性细节描写1)驾驶自行车2)加速3)重重地落在路上4)膝盖和肘部有轻微划伤5)挤压前刹车手柄6)正确地 踩踏板、转向和刹车ride the bicycleaccelerateland hard on the road get some mild scatches on the knees and elbows squeeze the front brake handle how to pedal,turn and brake properly1).当轮子优美而平稳地转动时，我第一次感到了这种随心所欲的感觉。2).为了表现得像个男人，我试探性地问爸爸，如果他放开我，我能不能自己骑自行车。迎接我的只是喘息的声音。3).我的大脑一片空白，我非常害怕！As the wheels rolled beautifully and smoothly,it was for the first time that I felt this sense of freewheeling.Attempting to behave man,I tentatively asked my dad whether I could handle the bike on my own if he let me go.What greeted me was just puffing sound.My mind going blank,I was too scared!4).我几乎无法控制自己，我重重地落在路上，还没来得及握住前刹车手柄，我就从自行车上摔了下来。5).花了我几个小时的练习，在我终于学会了如何正确地睬踏板、转向、转弯和刹车之前。6).你永远也说不出这段经历是多么令人兴奋又令人畏惧。当我最终感受到了风呼啸而过的喜悦时，所有的努力都得到了回报Barely could I manage to keep control,and I landed hard on the road and fell right off the bike before I could squeeze the front brake handle.It took me a few hourspractice before I finally learnt how to pedal,steer turn and brake properly.You could never tell me how exciting but frustrating the experience was and all the efforts paid off when I eventually sensed the joy of hearing the wind whistling past my ears.范文欣赏Para1:I started to pedal and the bicycle moved.As the wheels responded Para1:I started to pedal and the bicycle moved.As the wheels responded beautifully andbeautifully and smoothly,it was forsmoothly,it was for the first time that I felt this sensthe first time that I felt this sense e of freewheeling.Carefullyof freewheeling.Carefully ri rididing the bicycle,my heart ng the bicycle,my heart beat fastbeat fast as the as the bicyle was accelerating bicyle was accelerating.Attempting to Attempting to behave manbehave manlyly,I tentatively asked,I tentatively asked my dad whether I could handle the bike on my own if hemy dad whether I could handle the bike on my own if he let let me me go.go.What greeted me was just puWhat greeted me was just puffing ffing sound.sound.Minutes Minutes wentwent by before it hit by before it hit meme that my dad would be worn outthat my dad would be worn out after following me for such a long after following me for such a long distance.Dad,you coulddistance.Dad,you could stop if you are tired.I yelled.No response!stop if you are tired.I yelled.No response!Para2:I turned around and found my dad was not behind.My mind Para2:I turned around and found my dad was not behind.My mind going blank,I wasgoing blank,I was too too scared!Barely could I manage to keep scared!Barely could I manage to keep control,and I landed hard on the roadcontrol,and I landed hard on the road and fell right off the bike and fell right off the bike before I could squeeze the front brake handle.Luckily I only got before I could squeeze the front brake handle.Luckily I only got some mild scasome mild scat tches on the knees and elbows.Minutes later,ches on the knees and elbows.Minutes later,my dad caught up andmy dad caught up and congratulated me on my being manly for I congratulated me on my being manly for I have succeeded in cycling for uphave succeeded in cycling for up t to50 o50 y yards andards and expexpl lained to me that ained to me that he simply forgot that he wasnt supposed to let me ride the monster he simply forgot that he wasnt supposed to let me ride the monster byby myself.Later,it took me a few hoursmyself.Later,it took me a few hours practice before I finally practice before I finally learnt how to pedal,steerlearnt how to pedal,steer tuturnrn and brake properly.You could never and brake properly.You could never tell me how etell me how excitingxciting but but frustratingfrustrating the the experience was and all the experience was and all the efforts paid off when I eventually sensed the joy of hearing theefforts paid off when I eventually sensed the joy of hearing the wind wind whistling past my ears.whistling past my ears.