Unit4SectionBWriting写作课件--人教版八年级英语下册.pptx

Unit 4Why dont you talk to your parents?WritingLearning ObjectivesAfter the class,students will be able to:1.know the structure of an argumentation;2.describe different opinions and express their own opinions on after-school classes.Whats the topic of the reading?different opinions on after-school classesWriting英语周报(EnglishWeekly)正在以“Shouldstudentstakeafter-schoolclassesonweekends”为题进行征文，请你更具提示内容用英语写一篇关于课外辅导课的征文投稿。提示内容：1.一些父母赞同：能帮助孩子进入一所好的大学;更容易成功2.一些父母不赞同：压力太大，不利于孩子发展；需要时间在周末休息3.你支持哪一方观点并阐述理由。要求：1.100-120词左右。语言规范、意思连贯、表达完整。2.文中不得出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。Recently,I have read the survey from parents about”after-school classes for children”_Writing英语周报(EnglishWeekly)正在以“Shouldstudentstakeafter-schoolclasses”为题进行征文，请你更具提示内容用英语写一篇关于课外辅导课的征文投稿。提示内容：1.一些父母赞同：能帮助孩子进入一所好的大学;更容易成功2.一些父母不赞同：压力太大，不利于孩子发展；需要时间在周末休息3.你支持哪一方观点并阐述理由。要求：1.100-120词左右。语言规范、意思连贯、表达完整。2.文中不得出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。一一.审题审题：style(style(体裁体裁):_):_ person(person(人称人称 ):_):_ tense(tense(时态时态):_):_ paragraph(paragraph(段落段落):_):_写作步骤：写作步骤：议论文议论文第一人称或第三人称第一人称或第三人称一般现在时一般现在时4-54-5段段审题审题BeginningBodyEndingPara 1 Para 1(lead in)(lead in)Para 2Para 2(some parents agree+reasons)(some parents agree+reasons)Para 3Para 3(some perents disagree+reasons)(some perents disagree+reasons)Para 4Para 4(your opinion and reasons)(your opinion and reasons)Para 5Para 5(Summary)(Summary)列段落help kids get into a good university写作步骤：写作步骤：二二.列要点列要点1.一些父母赞同：能帮助孩子进入一所好的大学;想让孩子成功2.一些父母不赞同：压力太大；需要时间在周末休息3.你支持哪一方并阐述理由。help kids get into a good universitywant their children to be successfulStudents are too stressed outneed time to relax themselvesHow to express your opinion?How to express your opinion?1.In my point of view,I(dont)think/strongly believe that _.2.In my opinion,I think its fair/unfair for children to_.3.In my mind/eyes,I agree/disagree that_.4.Personally speaking,I firmly(坚决地坚决地)support(支持支持)the view that kids shouldnt take after-school classes.一些家长认为课后补习班能帮助孩子们进入好大学。周末他们带他们的孩子去各种各样的课后补习班。一些家长认为课后补习班能帮助孩子们进入好大学。周末他们带他们的孩子去各种各样的课后补习班。写作步骤：写作步骤：三、扩句子三、扩句子1.一些父母赞同：能帮助孩子进入一所好的大学添加结果添加结果extend sentence（扩写句）（扩写句）:Some parents think after-school classes can help kids get into a good university.Some parents think after-school classes can help kids Some parents think after-school classes can help kids get into a good university get into a good university so that so that they take their they take their children to all kinds of after-school classes on children to all kinds of after-school classes on weekends.weekends.一些家长认为课后补习班能帮助孩子们进入好大学。周末他们带他们的孩子去各种各样的课后补习班。一些家长认为课后补习班能帮助孩子们进入好大学。周末他们带他们的孩子去各种各样的课后补习班。写作步骤：写作步骤：三、扩句子三、扩句子1.想让孩子成功添加原因添加原因Some parents also want their children to be successful.extend sentence（扩写句）（扩写句）:Some parents also want their children to be successful Some parents also want their children to be successful because because they think getting good grades is the key to they think getting good grades is the key to success.success.一些家长认为课后补习班能帮助孩子们进入好大学。周末他们带他们的孩子去各种各样的课后补习班。一些家长认为课后补习班能帮助孩子们进入好大学。周末他们带他们的孩子去各种各样的课后补习班。写作步骤：写作步骤：三、扩句子三、扩句子2.一些父母不赞同：压力太大；Some parents believe that students are too stressed out.添并列句添并列句Some parents believe that students are too tressed out Some parents believe that students are too tressed out and and too much pressure is not good for students too much pressure is not good for students development and mental health.development and mental health.extend sentence（扩写句）（扩写句）:一些家长认为课后补习班能帮助孩子们进入好大学。周末他们带他们的孩子去各种各样的课后补习班。一些家长认为课后补习班能帮助孩子们进入好大学。周末他们带他们的孩子去各种各样的课后补习班。写作步骤：写作步骤：三、扩句子三、扩句子2.需要在周末好好休息添条件状从添条件状从Children need to have a good rest on weekends.Children need to have a good rest on weekends.If If so,they will study better on school days.so,they will study better on school days.extend sentence（扩写句）（扩写句）:Children need to have a good rest on weekends.Tips:Tips:Tips:Tips:注意并不是每个要点都要扩写，可选择一两个要点，注意并不是每个要点都要扩写，可选择一两个要点，注意并不是每个要点都要扩写，可选择一两个要点，注意并不是每个要点都要扩写，可选择一两个要点，并且是你能力范围内能正确表达出来的，否则字数会偏多。并且是你能力范围内能正确表达出来的，否则字数会偏多。并且是你能力范围内能正确表达出来的，否则字数会偏多。并且是你能力范围内能正确表达出来的，否则字数会偏多。引出话题：引出话题：Para 12.Recently,parents had a discussion about whether(是否是否)their children should take after-school classes.There are two opinions about it.(过渡句过渡句)The opinions are divided on this topic.（意见有分歧）（意见有分歧）1.Recnetly(最近最近),I have read the survey from parents about“after-school classes for children”.Different parents have different idea.(过渡句过渡句)Para 2Some parents thinks kids should take after-school classes.(观点观点1)Here are the reasons.（过渡句）（过渡句）First.Second.Finally.(23个赞成的理由个赞成的理由)Para 3However,some parents are strongly against it/dont hold the same view.(观点观点2)Their reasons are as follows.（过渡（过渡句）句）First of all,.Whats more,.In addition/Besides/Also,.(23个反对的理由个反对的理由)Para 4 Your opinionPersonally speaking,I firmly(坚决地坚决地)support(支持支持)the view that kids shouldnt take after-school classes.(on the one hand.on the other hand)+(2-3个理由个理由)Para 5 SummaryAll in all,/In a word/In short/From what I said,.范文范文Recnetly,I have read the survey from parents about“after-school classes for children”.Different parents have different ideas.Some parents thinks kids should take after-school classes.Here are the reasons.First,they think after-school classes can help kids get into a good university so that they take their children to all kinds of after-school classes on weekends.Second,they also want their children to be successful because they think getting good grades is the key to success.However,some parents are strongly against it.Their reasons are as follows.First of all,Some parents believe that students are too stressed out and too much pressure is not good for students development and mental health.Whats more,Children need to have a good rest on weekends.If so,they will study better on school days.Personally speaking,I firmly support the view that kids shouldnt take after-school classes.On the one hand,the kids already have enough stress from school.If they go to after-school classes,they will have so much stress that they cant stand.Then,they may start to hate studying.On the other hand,the kids study hard at school on weekdays,so they often feel tired after a weeks study.If they join in the after-school classes,it will waste their relaxing time.Whats more,it will affect(影响影响)their study and their grades may drop.In short,Its not wise of parents to push their kids so hard.life shouldnt just be about grades.Free time activities like sports and hanging out with friends are important for them,too.They should have their own time to relax and do what they love to do.T T h h a an n k k y y o ou u