高三英语写作专项读后续写写作动作描写课件.pptx

1.两个黄鹂鸣翠柳。简化：两个黄鹂在柳树上唱歌。Twogoldenoriolessingamid/inthewillows.2.整个晚上，他们载歌载舞。简化：整个晚上，他们唱歌和跳舞。Allnightlong,peopledanceandsing.3.先帝创业未半而中道崩殂。简化：在实现梦想之前，你爸爸死了。Yourfatherdiedbeforerealizinghisdreams.动作链可以和情感，环境，心理，语言等结合，形成动作面。Burningwithanger,heglaredatmewithhisbigfrighteningeyes,yelling,“Youresuchanidiot.”此处的burningwithanger是情感描写，glare和yell是动作链，同时将动作和语言描写结合在了一起，形成了饱满的动作面，属于高分表达。Asnightwasbeginningtofall,Janesatonthegrass,staringatthevastsky,frightenedandstarved.此处将环境描写，动作描写以及情感描写结合在一起，形成了饱满的动作面。Afterheranintotheroom,hesavedthelittlegirl.Runningintotheroom,hesavedthelittlegirl.He,runningintotheroom,savedthelittlegirl.Hesavedlittlethegirl,sendinghertohospital.他在别墅里他在别墅里救下了这个小女孩救下了这个小女孩。Inthevilla（别墅），（别墅），hesavedthelittlegirl.让我惊讶的是，他让我惊讶的是，他救下了这个小女孩救下了这个小女孩。Tooursurprise,hesavedthelittlegirl.他在消防员的帮助下，他在消防员的帮助下，救下了这个小女孩救下了这个小女孩。He,withthehelpofafirefighter,savedthelittlegirl.他他救下了这个小女孩救下了这个小女孩，感觉非常紧张。，感觉非常紧张。Hesavedthelittlegirl，feelingverynervous.1.让我惊讶的是，他在消防队员的帮助下让我惊讶的是，他在消防队员的帮助下救下了这个小女孩救下了这个小女孩，感觉非常紧张。，感觉非常紧张。Tooursurprise,he,withthehelpofafirefighter,savedthelittlegirl,feelingnervous.2.他跑进屋里他跑进屋里救下了这个小女孩救下了这个小女孩，感觉非常紧张。，感觉非常紧张。Runningintotheroom,hesavedthelittlegirl,feelingnervous.3.在别墅里，在别墅里，他在消防队员的帮助下他在消防队员的帮助下救下了这个小女孩救下了这个小女孩，再跑出房间。，再跑出房间。Inthevilla,he,withthehelpofafirefighter,savedthelittlegirl,runningoutoftheroom.上车 get into the car1.get into the car拦下车上车告诉司机目的地 She hailed a taxigot into and told the driver her destination.扔肉 throw the meat拿出肉瞄准狼扔出去He pulled out the meataimed at the wolf and threw it straight to the fierce animal.2.throw the meatExercise 1抱住女儿抱住女儿 With a giant smile on her face,she dashed forward,knelt down and gathered her daughter into her arms.-冲向前冲向前-蹲下来蹲下来-一把抱住一把抱住He queued for 3 hours,and was told that the tickets had been sold out.Having queued for 3 hours,he was told that the tickets had been sold out.票卖完了Exercise 2 排了三个小时的队排了三个小时的队，他被告知票被买完了他被告知票被买完了。她欣喜若狂(心理),在雨中又 唱(面部)又跳(肢体)。She was overwhelmed with joy,singing and dancing in the rain.2.贝贝坐在泳池边，双臂低垂，思考自己是白熊猫还是黑熊猫。With his arms dropping,Beibei sat beside the pool,wondering whether he was white or black.她站在空旷的路边，仰望天空，感受着这份珍贵的平静。Standing beside the empty road,she looked up into the sky,feeling the precious peace from within.Exercise 1被老师的话所鼓舞，Lucy 举起了手,小声说:“我来。”Encouraged by the teachers words,Lucy raised her hand,whispering,“I volunteer.”Exercise 29.9.无边的青草，到处游走的羊，夕阳和夜幕上无数的星星让我着迷。无边的青草，到处游走的羊，夕阳和夜幕上无数的星星让我着迷。Thelimitlessgreengrass,thewanderingsheep,thesettingsunandthecountlessstarsabovethecurtainofnightkeptmefascinated.10.10.在那个繁星满天的夜晚，我们欣赏着月亮从远处的山上升起，伴随着顽在那个繁星满天的夜晚，我们欣赏着月亮从远处的山上升起，伴随着顽皮的大卫的有趣故事，我们感到我们进行了一次最愉快的野营旅行。皮的大卫的有趣故事，我们感到我们进行了一次最愉快的野营旅行。Thatstarrynight,admiringthemoonrisingabovethedistantmountainandaccompaniedbytheamusingstoriesofnaughtyDavid,wefeltwedhadthemostenjoyablecampingtrip.