2020年全国I卷读后续写讲评-高三英语一轮复习.pptx

读后续写思路框架-2020年全国新高考一卷读后续写讲评读后续写基本流程（40m）1.读（5-8M）：原文阅读+信息梳理2.构思（5-8M）：情节预设，明确方向3.写（20-25M）：初稿勾勒，正规眷写词数要求150词，一段75词左右比较合理七个不：1.不增加人物2.不增加旁支情节3.不用过多对话4.不用负能量结局5.不在文末设置悬念6.不偏离原文主题7.不违背逻辑常理三个原则，四个步骤三个原则：1.原文一致原则2.正能量原则3.曲折性原则四个步骤：1.通读全文，理清脉络2.抓住关键，思索框架3.增加细节，展开续写4.检查优化，整洁眷写读后续写步骤1.通读全文，理清脉络2.抓住关键，思索框架3.增加细节，展开续写4.检查优化，整洁眷写一点两线：线索点，情感线，故事线边读边划：序号标出主要角色划出形容词划出动作词划出线索点什么人？做了什么事？结果怎么样？从中我们可以学到什么？续写整体逻辑：承接上文+线索点加情节构思+总结升华句细读两段开头提示，确定本段内容实践练习实践练习-黄鼠狼与爱神黄鼠狼爱上了一个相貌俊美的年轻人，祈求爱神把它变成一个女人。女神怜悯它的热情，就把它变成了一个美丽的少女。就这样，那个青年一见到她就爱上了，将她带回自己家。他们在屋里坐下，爱神想知道黄鼠狼的身形变了，习性是不是也变了，于是黄鼠狼忘记了当时的情形女神很生气黄鼠狼与爱神黄鼠狼爱上了一个相貌俊美的年轻人，祈求爱神把它变成一个女人。女神怜悯它的热情，就把它变成了一个美丽的少女。就这样，那个青年一见到她就爱上了，将她带回自己家。他们在屋里坐下，爱神想知道黄鼠狼的身形变了，习性是不是也变了，于是便把一只老鼠放到屋子中央。黄鼠狼忘记了当时的情形，站起来去追捕那只老鼠，想吃掉它。女神见了很生气，把黄鼠狼变回原来的样子。同样，有些人本性恶劣，即使相貌变了，他的的习性仍不会改变。主题升华主题升华什么人？结果怎么结果怎么样？样？存在问题1.书写-衡水体一周两页2.偏题，情节不合理3.词数不够真题实践真题实践The Meredith family lived in a small community.As the economy was in decline,some people in the town had lost their jobs.Many of their families were struggling tomake ends meet.People were trying to help each other meet the challenges.Mrs Meredith was a most kind and thoughtful woman.She spent a great deal of timevisiting the poor.She knew they had problems,and they needed all kinds of help.Whenshe had time,she would bring food and medicine to them.One morming she told her children about a family she had visited the day before.There was man sick in bed,his wife,who took care of him and could not go out to work,and their ittle boy.The little boy-his name was Bernard-had interested her very much.I wish you could see him,she said to her own children,John,Harry,and Clara.He is such a help to his mother.He wants very much to earn some money,but I dontsee what he can do.After their mother left the room,the children sat thinking about Bernard.I wish wecould help him to earn money,said Clara.His family is suffering so much.So do I,said Harry.We really should do something to assist them.For some moments,John said nothing,but,suddenly,he sprang to his feet andcried,I have a great idea!I have a solution that we can all help accomplish(完成).The other children also jumped up all attention.When John had an idea,.it was sureto bea good one.I tell you what we can do,said John.You know that big box ofcorn Uncle John sent us?Well,we can make popcorn(爆米花),and put it into paperbags,and Bernard can take it around to the houses and sell it.试题讲评who？Meredith family,kind;thoughtful;want to help othersBernard,poor;struggle;need helpwhat？The Meredith family helped Bernards family though.consequence？Bernard started out on his business.And?我们能从中学到什么？（注意分析全文时态）准备工作：sell popcornwhere？what？who?feeling?who?Bernard sell popcornwhere？how？consequence？value？范文展示When Mrs.Meredith heard of Johns idea,she thought it was a good one,too.So,they went to the local supermarket together.They bought a bag of corn and some special bags for popcorn.When they got home.they made a lot of popcorn and put it in the special bags.With the popcorn,they went to Bernards home.They told Bernard how to sell the popcon.Bernard and his parents were very grateful.And the Meredith family also felt very happy to help this family.With everything ready,Bernard started out on his new business.He took the popcorn around to the houses and sold all his popcorn.He earned a lot of money.Then,he wanted to be self-dependent.Therefore,he asked Mrs.Meredith to teach him how to make popcorn.After that,not only did he sell popcorn,but he also added cream and salt to the popcorn to make it taste better.Bernard grew up to be a remarkable man.He did not forget the help of Merediths family,and he also did what he could to help those in need.范文剖析When Mrs.Meredith heard of Johns idea,she thought it was a good one,too.So,they went to the local supermarket together.They bought a bag of corn and some special bags for popcorn.When they got home.they made a lot of popcorn and put it in the special bags.With the popcorn,they went to Bernards home.They told Bernard how to sell the popcon.Bernard and his parents were very grateful.And the Meredith family also felt very happy to help this family.wherewhat？who？feelingfeelingWith everything ready,Bernard started out on his new business.He took the popcorn around to the houses and sold all his popcorn.He earned a lot of money.Then,he wanted to be self-dependent.Therefore,he asked Mrs.Meredith to teach him how to make popcorn.After that,not only did he sell popcorn,but he also added cream and salt to the popcorn to make it taste better.Bernard grew up to be a remarkable man.He did not forget the help of Merediths family,and he also did what he could to help those in need.Rose given fragrance in hand.wherehow?consequencevalue