2021年广州高考英语一模读后续写课件.pptx
2021.2021.广州一模广州一模 Continuation Writing1)Understandtheplotthroughanalyzingthepassage2)Givetheoutlineofacontinuingstorybywriting4sentences3)DevelopareasonableendingtoastoryTeaching aimsAfterlearningthislesson,studentswillbeableto:1.Read for characters2.Read for plot3.Read for emotional changes4.Read for conflict/problems5.Read for themeHow to analyze a story?5Rs methodStep 1 Read and analyze the story：5Rs1.Read for characters:Ben,his motheran antique,his mothers favourite possession a vasewhowherewhenHowwhywhatendingbeginningBen，his mother one day Ben accidentally broke an antique vaze and then lied to his motherBecause fearing punishmentat homeStep 1 Analyze the story：5Rs2.Read for plot:Read for the plot It took place in a teachers family.One day,Ben was playing basketball in the living room after school,when he accidentally threw the ball at a vase sitting on the shelf.The vase dropped to the floor and a large piece broke off.What made Ben more upset was that the vase was not a common decoration but an antique,which was handed down through generations from the 18th century.It was also his mothers favourite possession.To cover his terrible action,the terrified boy glued the pieces together hastily（匆忙地）（匆忙地）and put the vase back to its place.setting:indicatinggoodwaysofeducatingchildrenBen broke the vase and glued the pieces togetherAs the mother herself dusted the vase every day,she naturally noticed the cracks(裂纹)that evening.To her surprise,the repair work was actually very good.At dinner time,she asked her boy if he broke the vase.Fearing punishment,the suddenly inspired boy said that a neighbours cat jumped in from the window and he couldnt drive it away no matter how hard he tried.It raced around the living room and finally knocked the vase off its shelf.His mother was quite clear that her son was lying,for all the windows were closed before she left for work each morning and opened after she returned.However,in the face of her sons nervous eyes and the suspicious looks of the other family members.Bens mother remained calm.She realized she shouldnt just simply blame and punish her son for lying.She came up with another idea.His mother found the cracks,Ben said that a neighbours cat did that.His mother came up with another idea to educate Ben Read for the plot Beforegoingtobed,theboyfoundanotefromhismotherinhisroom,askinghimtogotothestudyatonce.Theboythoughthewouldnowbepunishedbut,ashehadalreadylied,hewasdeterminedtodenyeverythingtotheend,nomatterhowangryhismumbecame.Inthestudy,calmlybathedinthelight,hismothersfaceshowednosignofanger.Onseeinghersonpushopenthedoorandcautiouslyenter,shetookachocolateboxoutofadrawerandgavehimone.Ben was still determined to deny everything.His mother took a chocolate box and gave Ben one Read for the plot Ben broke the vase and glued the pieces togetherHis mother found the cracks,Ben said that a neighbours cat did that.His mother came up with another idea to educate BenBen was still determined to deny everything.His mother took a chocolate box and gave Ben oneStep 1 Analyze the story：5Rs3.Read for emotional changes:5.Read for theme Honesty，ResponsibleBen:upset,terrified,fearing punishment,nervous,cautiouslyHis mother:surprise,quiteclear,calm,nosignofanger4.Read for conflict/problems：Ben broke the vase and lied to his mother:a neighbours cat broke the vasePara 1 The mother said,This chocolate is a reward for your imagination:a window-opening cat!”._ Para 2 Now with some chocolates in hand,the boys bad attitude disappeared._Step 2:Outline the possible plots or events in each paragraph.the boy was touched by what his mother did and said.In para 1 the boy got more chocolates and did or said sth with bad attitude Tip 1:Predict the ending of para.1 based on the two given sentences.HowBenreactedtomotherwithbadattitudeandhowhismothergavehimmorechocolates.How he say sorry to his mother and especially what he did after his attitude changed倒着写Para 1 The mother said,This chocolate is a reward for your imagination:a window-opening cat!”._ Para 2 Now with some chocolates in hand,the boys bad attitude disappeared._Step 3:Try to give the four sentencesBen的不好的态度和妈妈给他巧克力的情节Ben坦白事实，跟妈妈道歉4.结局和主题句结局和主题句2.衔接给衔接给Ben巧克力的情节巧克力的情节1.衔接衔接Ben的回应或反应的回应或反应3.衔接衔接Ben的回应或反应的回应或反应Step 4:Writing and showing Para 1 The mother said,This chocolate is a reward for your imagination:a window-opening cat!”._ Para 2 Now with some chocolates in hand,the boys bad attitude disappeared._Step 5:Appreciate the possible version 4.结局或主题句结局或主题句2.衔接给衔接给Ben巧克力的情节巧克力的情节1.衔接衔接Ben的回应或反应的回应或反应3.衔接衔接Ben的回应或反应的回应或反应1Alarmed,hequiveredabit.2“Thesearerewardsforyourpresenceinthestudy（书房）andtherestoration（修复）respectively.”3.Hisheartwaspoundingwildlyandnolongercouldheholdout.4.Mumgatheredhimtoherchestaffectionatelysayinghonestyfaroutweighsanythingelse-whetheranantiqueorherfavourite.Steps to continue a storyStep 1:Analyze the story:5Rs methodStep 2:Infer the development Step 3:Outline the possible plots or events in each:4 sentences Step 4:Continue the storyStep 5:Polish your writingAssignment 1.Writing based on the outline and using sentence patterns.2.Share your writing with your classmates 3.Try to learn from your classmate and meantime give some advice on improving their writing.Bullying can only be temporary,and honesty is the long-term policy欺人只能一时，而诚信才是长久之策。形容词形容词“with”的复合结构的复合结构非谓语动词非谓语动词情感描写的表达情感描写的表达Step 5:Writing based on the outline and using sentence patterns.Themothersaid,Thischocolateisarewardforyourimagination:awindow-openingcat!Alarmed,hequivered（颤抖）abit.Herealizedperhapsinallhasteandterrorwhathemadeupdidntholdmuchwater.”Believeitornot”,heyelled,holding his head high,andinsistedthathewastellingthetruth.Glancingatthechocolateoutofthecornerofhiseyes,hefelthimselfbeingtortured（折磨）byhisburningdesireforit.Abruptly,hismotherapproachedhimandpressedanother2chocolatesintohissweaty（出汗的）hands.“Thesearerewardsforyourpresenceinthestudy（书房）andtherestoration（修复）respectively.”OnepossibleversionforPara.1Nowwithsomechocolatesinhand,theboysbadattitudedisappeared.Hisheartwaspoundingwildlyandnolongercouldheholdout.“Mom,Thecatwaswronged（冤枉了）andIlied.hisvoicewaschoked.InaserioustoneMumstated”Icertainlyknowthetruth.ButIwaswaitingforyoutospititoutyourself.”Benfeltaheavyloadtakenoffhismind.”Thentheboxwenttohishand.“theseforyourfinaladmission（承认）ofyourmistake.”Mumgatheredhimtoherchestaffectionatelysayinghonestyfaroutweighsanythingelse-whetheranantiqueorherfavourite.(90words)OnepossibleversionforPara.2
