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Continuation writingOneweekendinJuly,Janeandherhusband,Tom,haddriventhreehourstocampovernightbyalakeintheforest.Unfortunately,onthewayanunpleasantsubjectcameupandtheystartedtoquarrel.Bythetimetheyreachedthelake,JanewassoangrythatshesaidtoTom,“Imgoingtofindabetterspotforustocamp”andwalkedaway.Withnopathtofollow,Janejustwalkedonforquitealongtime.Aftershehadclimbedtoahighplace,sheturnedaround,hopingtoseethelake.Tohersurprise,shesawnothingbutforestand,farbeyond,asnowcappedmountaintop.Shesuddenlyrealizedthatshewaslost.“Tom!”shecried.“Help!”Noreply.IfonlyshehadnotlefthermobilephoneinthatbagwithTom.Janekeptmoving,butthefarthershewalked,themoreconfusedshebecame.Asnightwasbeginningtofall,Janewassotiredthatshehadtostopforthenight.Lyingawakeinthedark,JanewantedverymuchtobewithTomandherfamily.Shewantedtoholdhimandtellhimhowmuchshelovedhim.Janeroseatthebreakofday,hungryandthirsty.Shecouldhearwatertrickling(滴落滴落)somewhereatadistance.Quicklyshefollowedthesoundtoastream.Tohergreatjoy,shealsosawsomeberrybushes.Shedrankandateafewberries.Neverinherlifehadshetastedanythingbetter.Feelingstrongernow,Janebegantowalkalongthestreamandhopeitwouldleadhertothelake.Asshepickedherwaycarefullyalongthestream,Janeheardahelicopter.Isthatforme?Unfortunately,thetreesmadeitimpossibleforpeopletoseeherfromabove.Afewminuteslater,anotherhelicopterflewoverhead.Janetookoffheryellowblouse,thinkingthatsheshouldgotoanopenareaandflagthemiftheycamebackagain.Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasdark._ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup._ReadingWhats the style of the passage?A.Narration 记叙文记叙文 B.Exposition 说明文说明文 C.Argumentation 议论文议论文 Who?When?Where?What?Why?How?ReadingStyle-Narration 记叙文记叙文Basic forms of the 6 questionsWho is the main character?When did the story happen?Where did the story happen?What happened in the story?Why was the matter caused?How was the matter solved/ended?Who?When?Where?What?Why?How?Jane TomOne weekend in JulyIn the forest Because Jane quarreled with Tom and walked away.Jane was lostMain IdeaOne weekend in July,Jane quarreled with her husband Tom and walked away.Later she found she was lost in the forest.OneweekendinJuly,Janeandherhusband,Tom,haddriventhreehourstocampovernightbyalakeintheforest.Unfortunately,onthewayanunpleasantsubjectcameupandtheystartedtoquarrel.Bythetimetheyreachedthelake,JanewassoangrythatshesaidtoTom,“Imgoingtofindabetterspotforustocamp”andwalkedaway.Withnopathtofollow,Janejustwalkedonforquitealongtime.Aftershehadclimbedtoahighplace,sheturnedaround,hopingtoseethelake.Tohersurprise,shesawnothingbutforestand,farbeyond,asnowcappedmountaintop.Shesuddenlyrealizedthatshewaslost.“Tom!”shecried.“Help!”Noreply.IfonlyshehadnotlefthermobilephoneinthatbagwithTom.Janekeptmoving,butthefarthershewalked,themoreconfusedshebecame.Asnightwasbeginningtofall,Janewassotiredthatshehadtostopforthenight.Lyingawakeinthedark,JanewantedverymuchtobewithTomandherfamily.Shewantedtoholdhimandtellhimhowmuchshelovedhim.Janeroseatthebreakofday,hungryandthirsty.Shecouldhearwatertrickling(滴滴落落)somewhereatadistance.Quicklyshefollowedthesoundtoastream.Tohergreatjoy,shealsosawsomeberrybushes.Shedrankandateafewberries.Neverinherlifehadshetastedanythingbetter.Feelingstrongernow,Janebegantowalkalongthestreamandhopeitwouldleadhertothelake.Asshepickedherwaycarefullyalongthestream,Janeheardahelicopter.Isthatforme?Unfortunately,thetreesmadeitimpossibleforpeopletoseeherfromabove.Afewminuteslater,anotherhelicopterflewoverhead.Janetookoffheryellowblouse,thinkingthatsheshouldgotoanopenareaandflagthemiftheycamebackagain.Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasdark._ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup._Inwhatorderisthematerialdeveloped?OneweekendinJuly,Asnightwasbeginningtofall,Janeroseatthebreakoftheday,Butanditwasgettingdarkagain.ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup.timesequenceBeginningClimaxEndingquarreledgotlostcriedwantedsaw,drank,ateheard,tookoff,thinkingthat.angryfrightenedregretful(helicopters)joyfulhopefulnomorehelicopterswokeuprescued?feelings?Theunderlinedwordswhere020304 yellowblousewalkedTomhelicopterJanelakestreamclimbedatadistancetohergreatjoyClassify10keywordsintodifferentgroups._:Jane,Tom_:walked,climbed_:helicopter,yellowblouse_:lake,stream,atadistance_:tohergreatjoycharactersbehaviorstoolsplacesfeelings细读两段续写的开头语，理顺续写段落的逻辑关系；细读两段续写的开头语，理顺续写段落的逻辑关系；围绕划定的围绕划定的1010个个关键词，合理创新故事情节。关键词，合理创新故事情节。Para.1:Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasdark.Para.2:ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup.Have a try!Paragraph1:Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasdark.coherent,correct,logical,reasonable,rich in vocabulary and sentence patternUnderline the key wordsThe dim hope in Janes eyes faded away.While walking along the stream in the darkness,Jane felt frightened as she seemed to hear wild beasts howling at a distance.“Is there any chance for me to survive here?I shouldnt have left Tom.Its all my fault”,Jane whispered,with regretful tears rolling down her face.As time went by,the night finally fell.Tired and exhausted,she had to give up walking and fell fast asleep.Para.2:ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup.WasJanerescued?WhorescuedJane?Howwassherescued?Howdidshefeelthen?After a washing,Jane continued to force her way ahead.About half an hours walk,to her great joy,she came to an open area.Just at that moment,a helicopter flew overhead.Jane jumped to her feet excitedly,waving her yellow blouse madly.Fortunately,this time the helicopter spotted poor Jane.Tom jumped off the helicopter and in no time did Jane rush to her husband,hugging him tightly.Tears of joy and guilt running down her face,Jane told her husband how much she loved and missed him.1.Read 2.Ask 6 basic questions (who?When?Where?What?Why?How?)3.Get the main idea4.Infer the ending (the plot,the underlined words,the given two sentences)5.Begin to write(language requirements-structure,style,vocabulary)6.Polish your writing7.Handwriting(neat and clear)Steps to complete a storyChecklistforcontinuationwritingHaveIincludedatleast5ofthegivenwordsandunderlinedthem?Doesthewritingfollowthegivensentencesnaturally?Doesthesecondparagraphfollowthefirstlogically?Doestheextendedpartconveyamessageorrelatetoacentralideaalreadyexpressedorimplied?HaveIemployedspecificwordstomakedetailsvivid?HaveIusedappropriatetransitionalwordstomaketheparagraphcoherent?Arethereanygrammaticalerrorsintenses,pluralsandverbforms?
