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    初中八年级英语写作专题训练50题含参考范文.docx

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    初中八年级英语写作专题训练50题含参考范文.docx

    初中八年级英语写作专题训练50题含范文一、材料作文1.假如你是Mary,在英语课前演讲中,你要介绍一个优秀的女航天员,请你根 据表格中所提供的信息用英文介绍一下她的个人情况。Name王亚平Age41岁Birthday1980年1月21日Birthplace山东省(province)烟台市Job宇航员(astronaut)Breakfast面包和牛奶r JLunch鸡蛋、胡萝卜和米饭Dinner草莓、西红柿和鸡肉Hobbies (爱好)做运动、听音乐【答案】例文:Helio, everyone! I want to introduce an astronaut. Her name is Wang Yaping. She is 41 years old. She was born on 21st Jan. 1980 in Yantai city of Shandong Province. She likes to have bread and milk for breakfast. And she has eggs, carrots and rice for lunch. She has strawberries, tomatoes and chicken for dinner. Her hobbies arc doing sports and listening to music. Do you like her?【答案】范文:My Last weekendI had an interesting weekend. On Saturday morning, I stayed at home and finished all my homework. On Saturday afternoon, I went to the beach and played football with my friends. It was kind of hot, but very interesting. On Saturday night, we camped by the sea. Wc told stories, listened to songs under the moon. On Sunday morning, we swam in the sea and picked many nice shells. And we also took some photos.【详解】1.题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文,以“My Last weekend”为题写一篇短文介 绍一下上周末的活动,根据表格提示,要求要点覆盖全面,可适当扩充;注意写作时 要点齐全,同时也要紧扣主题。2.写作指导:本文用到的般过去时态,人称用第人称。注意动词过去式的变化, 注意连词的使用。全文要点明确,结构严谨,语法运用准确,上卜.文注意连接的流畅 度。11.学校正在开展以“我的朋友”为主题的英语演讲。假如你是李明,在学校里交 了一个新朋友Bill。请你根据下面表格的提示写一篇演讲稿,介绍一下你的新朋友 BilU姓名Bill年龄14岁外貌个子高,黑色短头发,常戴眼镜爱好喜欢读书,擅长弹吉他,最喜欢的食物是西红柿面。活动上周六天气晴朗炎热,早上我们去了超市买了一些食物。下午去了公 园放风筝,晚上一起去看了电影。要求:1 .参考提示内容,可适当发挥;.语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;2 .文中不得出现任何真实信息;4.词数:不少于40词。(开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数)Hello, everyone! I made a new friend at school.That's all. Thank you.【答案】例文Helio, everyone! I made a new friend at school. His name is Bill. He is 14 years old. He studies at No. i Middle School. He is tall and he has short black hair. He often wears glasses. He likes to read books and is good at playing classical music. His favorite food is tomato noodles.Last Saturday it was sunny and hot. We went to the supermarket to buy some food in the morning. In the afternoon, we went to the park to fly a kite. Wc went to the movies together in the evening.That's all. Thank you.【详解】1.题干解读:本文属于材料作文写作,写作时按演讲稿的格式来写。以“我 的朋友”为主题,根据所提示的内容介绍朋友Bill的相关信息,包括姓名、年龄、外 貌、爱好及上周六参加的活动。2.写作指导:本文主要采用第三人称来写,在记叙上周六活动时采用第一人称来写; 时态主要以一般现在时为主,在记叙上周六活动内容时采用一般过去时。写作时承接 短文开头,再依次说明Bill的姓名、年龄、外貌及其爱好,作为第一段;第二段记叙 上周六和Bill 一起做的事情,按照时间顺序来描述事件,注意人称和时态的正确使 用;最后一段结尾按已给出的抄写。12.双减政策下,学生有更多的时间和精力在德、智、体、美、劳全面开展,研 学旅行(study tour)已经成为素质教育的重要局部,在学生当中越来越受欢迎。研学 旅行的目的是为了让学生接触社会和自然,在体验中学习和锻炼,从而培养优秀品质 和精神等。请你描述自己曾经的一次研学旅行经历。内容提示:1 .研学地点、时间、交通工具,研学多长时间,研学过程。2 .研学旅行的收获和感受。3 .研学旅行的重要性。要求:1 .书写规范、表达要点齐全,并适当发挥;.词数::70词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数);2 .文中不得出现真实姓名、校名。Study tour is more and more popular these days. Now, let me tell you one of my study tours to you.【答案】范文:Study tour is more and more popular these days. Now, let me tell you one of my study tours to you.This is a school tour. It's a good way to put what you have learnt into practice. We went to AnhuiScience and Technology Museum last Sunday. We get there by bus. We saw many fantastic inventions and did some scientific experiments. Then vve went to Hefei Wildlife Park. We got close contact with different kinds of wild animals and birds and learned a lot about their living habits. It took us a day to take part in this activities.Wc were tired but happy. This activity not only made us relaxed, but also ict us learn something new.【详解】I.题干解读:该题目属于记叙文写作,在写作时应承接短文开头,根据汉语 提示的内容,表达自己曾经的一次研学旅行经历。内容包括:研学地点、时间、交通 工具、研学多长时间、研学过程;研学旅行的收获和感受;研学旅行的重要性等。2.写作指导:本文应该用第人称为主来表达内容,时态采用般过去时。在表达内 容时,力求语句通顺,语法正确,保证提示内容完整,条理清嘶,行文连贯。13. Julie是你的美国新朋友。端午节斯间,她来到了中国,和你一起度过了快乐 时光。请你根据表格中的内容提示用英语写一篇短文,在英语课上介绍Jul沁和你们的 节日活动。姓名Julie外貌漂亮,长卷发,瘦高个爱好游泳,擅长弹钢琴性格友好,乐于助人节日活动第一天:看龙舟赛,吃粽子笫二天:去农场,骑马感受注意:(1)短文必须包括表中所有内容,可适当增加细节;你的感受至少1句;(2)文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名:(3)词数:8()左右,短文开头仅供选择使用,不计入总词数。参考词汇:端午节the Dragon Boat Festival;龙舟赛dragon boat races短文首句:Julie is my new American friend.【答案】例文:Julie is my new American friend. She is a very beautiful girl. She has big eyes and long curly hair. She is tall and thin. She likes music, playing chess and swimming. She often helps others, so her classmates all like her. During the Dragon Boat Festival, she came to China. I'm very happy to see her. The next day wc went to visit a farm. The farmers showed us around the farm. Then we rode the horse, fed the chickens and milked a cow. It was so interesting. After that, we helped the farmers pick strawberries. We were so happy that we forgot the time. We were tired but happy. We learned a lot about fanning. We had a great time.【详解】I.题干解读:题目要求根据表格中提示,写一篇英语短文介绍自己的美国朋 友Julie和你们在端午节期间的活动。可适当发挥。2.写作指导:写作时要结合第三人称和第人称,使用般现在时和般过去时来写 作;可采用一段式,文中要包含Julie的姓名、外貌、爱好、性格等信息及你们在端午 节的活动和感受。要做到无单词拼写和语法错误。14.学校团委正举行“畅想未来”的英语征文活动,请根据提示,以“My idealschool life-为题,写一篇80词左右的短文。现在未来至少写两点现在的情况1多彩的校园生活(课外活动)2多样的学习方式(网上学习)3和谐的人际交往(交友互助)4丰富的校外活动(学校旅行)要求:1.所写内容必须包括表格中所有的信息,并适当发挥:2.开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数;3.不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。My ideal school lifeI'm a Grade 8 student.This is my ideal school life. I hope my dream will come true some day.【答案】例文My ideal school lifeI am a student in Grade 8.1 have too much homework every day and I don't have time for afler-school activities. I think my school life is terrible.Everyone has their own ideal school. I think my ideal school life is meaningful and colorful. I'm very happy to study in the school.We have five classes every day. I like all the lessons, because the lessons are very interesting. And wc can choose our favorite lessons to learn. At noon, wc have an hour's rest time. During the rest time, we can chat with classmates.I hope our after-school activities are rich and colorful. We can play many ball games after school every day. There are many organizations and clubs in our school. I would like to join in the organizations which I am interested in. I would like to join many clubs, too.This is my ideal school life. I hope my dream will come true some day.【详解】1.题干解读:该题目属于材料作文写作,要求按照所给的要点提示写篇短 文,介绍我理想的学校生活二注意写作时要点要齐全,同时也可进行合理而又紧扣主 题的发挥。2.写作指导:本文应该用第一、三人称来表达;时态采用一般现在时;文章开头己给 出,写作时,注意承接上文,根据要点提示具体介绍我认为的理想的学校生活:多彩 的校园生活,多样的学习方式;文中一定要包含题干中列出的所有要点;可以运用一 些短语和常用句型为文章增添色彩:注意单词书写的准确度,语法运用的准确度,I: 下文注意连接的流畅度,以及逻辑合理。15.人人都有梦想,假设你是埃米,请以“My Dream Job”为题写一篇短文,畅想一下你的未来。内容包括:1 .你想做什么样的工作?2 .你喜欢这项工作的原因是什么?3 .为这个工作你准备了什么或应该怎样做好准备?作文要求:1.不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名;2.语句连贯,词数80左右。My Dream Job(答案One possible version:My dream JobI'd like to be a teacher when I grow up. Teachers help young people get knowledge and make them not only become cleverer and cleverer, but also be a good person, so teachers should be kind, friendly and helpful. In order to be a knowledgeable and skillful teacher, now I must study hard at all my subjects. I must learn a lot. Of course I should be kind to my friends and be polite to my teachers and parents to build up my good personality.I believe I can make my dream come true by working hard.【详解】题干解读:题目要求以“My Drcam Job”为题写一篇英语短文;要求包含所有 提示内容,不能出现真实信息。写作指导:此作文时态宜用一般现在时,采用第一人称口吻。此作文可采用2段落格 式,第一段:介绍自己梦想的工作是什么,为什么喜欢这项工作以及为这个工作准备 了什么;第二段:总结全文,相信通过努力能够实现自己的梦想。16.书面表达。假如下面是你父母为你制订的一些家规。请你以“My Family Rules”为题,写一篇50词 左右的英语短文。1 .每天早上六点必须起床,七点去上学;.下午六点之前必须到家;2 .不能在外面吃饭;.在上学日的晚上,不能看电视和玩电脑游戏;3 .晚上九点半之前必须上床睡觉。【答案】My Family RulesI have many rules in myfamily.Every morninghave to get up at six o'clock and goschool at seven o'clo ck.Lmust gct】omc bcfore six o'clock in the aftcrnoon.I can't cat out.I can't watch T V or play comDuler games on school nighls.And I musi go【o bed before nine thirty in the eveningdon't like Ihese rulesihink ihey are lerrible【详解】试题分析:这是一篇给材料作文,介绍你父母为你制订的一些家规。结合所 给材料,可知本文主要考查一般现在时态,人称为第一人称单数,注意主谓一致问 题,注意,些的常见句式的应用,比方:I have to;I must; I can't; I don'tlike;I think等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词,注意多种句式交替运用。写 作中注意表达顺序,符合逻辑关系。字数50词左右,不要写的太少。写好时,再阅读 一遍,减少语法错误,不要犯单词拼写上的错误。【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,语言简练。结构清晰完整,表达准确流利,要点齐全。 开头介绍了我家有很多规那么;接下来具体介绍规那么的内容:起床,上学,回家,看电 视,玩游戏,睡觉:最后我认为这些规那么太糟糕了。词汇灵活准确,句子通顺、行文 连贯、表达清楚,上下文连贯。没有语言和拼写错误。字数符合要求17. 一年中有许多的周末和假期,周末、假期都是快乐的时光,我们要利用好假 期,做好计划,既要休息、娱乐,又要兼顾学习,请把My plan for 补充完整并以此为题写一篇周末或者假期的计划。My Plan For1. have a good rest2. do homework3. visit注意:文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。书写规范,语言通顺,意思连贯,条理清楚。My Plan For【答案】例文:My Plan For the WeekendThe weekend is coming. I have a good plan. On Saturday I want to have a good rest, because I'm busy with the exam this week. Tin going to the park with my parents. I'm going to play games and sing songs in the park. On Sunday morning I plan to do my homework. On Sunday afternoon I'm going to visit my grandparents.I'm sure I will have a good weekend.【详解】I.题干解读:该题目是写一篇关于周末或假期的计戈I,要求根据表格内容提 示写一篇小短文,可适当发挥。2.写作指导:本文主要采用第一人称表达;时态上以一般将来时为主。写作时要书写 规范,,语言通顺,,意思连贯,表达具有条理性。18.在你的成长过程中,父亲会给你的一生带来很大的影响,请根据表格中的提示向 读者介绍你的父亲,具体要求如下:My Father年龄外貌五十多岁;不高不矮兴趣爱好兴趣广泛,尤喜阅读;最爱红色,因为性格特点精力充分,富有条理;充满爱心,乐于助人(至少举一例)给我帮助悉心照料;倾听心声;我的感受良师益友,注意:1 .要点齐全,而且有适当拓展,但不得逐字翻译;.条理清晰,语意连贯,字迹工整。2 .词数90左右。My father has influenced me a lot since I was born.答案My father has influenced me a lol since I was bom.He is in his fifties. He is neither too tall nor too short and has a lot of interests, especially reading. Red is his favorite color because it represents power and strong fcclings.lt can make him more powerful. He is energetic and organized. He also has a heart full of love.He is very helpful. He often helps the children who have lost their parents.He takes good care of me and can listen to my worries and happiness patiently.I think he is not only my good teacher but also my good friend. I love him very much.【详解】这篇作文要求我们根据表格中的提示,写篇短文,介绍自己的父亲。通过 审题可知,首先文章的主要内容包括:父亲的年龄外貌、性格特点、兴趣爱好、给你 的帮助以及自己的感受。这些内容是给我们写作中的要点提炼,我们不能逐词翻译, 而应把它变成完整的句子,连贯成充实的文章。其次短文应用一般现在时态、第三人 称He来表达,这时就需要特别注意谓语动词的形式,要用三单的形式。写作时,应 注意根据表达的需要分段描写,这样可以使文章有层次,结构清晰。还应注意英语表 达习惯和汉语的不同,句式可以简单句为主,如使用较常见的主谓宾结构或者主系表 结构。为提升文章水平,调整文章节奏,可穿插使用并列句和复合句,以及些复杂 句式。同时注意语句之间使用恰当的连接成分,增强文章的连贯性。点睛:这是一篇优秀的作文。首先短文内容完整,包括了题目中要求的所有信息,没 有遗漏要点,并且表达清楚、细致,作者也发挥了想象力,对文章的具体内容以及自 己的感受这一局部的进行了补充,使其更加的充实。其次短文使用了正确的时态和人 称,文章以一般现在时态为主,第三人称单数来表达,正确使用be动词的形式,注 意了谓语动词形式的变化。语法规范、准确。另外文章中也使用了 些较好的短语和【详解】1.题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文,介绍宇航员王亚平的个人信息。2.写作指导:本文采用一般现在时,人称以第三人称为主。根据提示材料,从她的姓 名,年龄,出生地,饮食习惯以及爱好等方面来介绍她。写作时保持主谓一致性,做 到无语法和标点错误。2.假设你是Mike,请根据以下提示,用英语写一篇短文介绍自己的学校及个人 学习生活情况。NameM汰eSchoolNo. 8 Middle SchoolSchool lifeteachers and students.subjects: like. bestaftcr-school activities; in the Reading Club .要求:1.短文必须包含表格中所有的提示要点,可以适当发挥;2. 60词左右。开头和结尾已经给出,但不计入总词数。Hello, everyone! Tm Mike.I'd like to talk about my school and my school life now.I love my school very much【答案】One possible version:Hello, everyone. I'm Mike. I'd like to talk about my school and my school life now.I study at No. 8 Middle School. It is big and beautiful.Our teachers are all very kind to us. We like them very much. And the students can help句型,这些句式、短语的使用,提升了文章的档次,表达了作者的写作功底,使文意更加连贯,表达也更加流畅。如 He is neither too tall nor too short and has a lot of interests, especially readings Red is his favorite color because it represents power and strong feelings、He often helps the children who have lost their parents.s I think he is not only my good teacher but also my good friend 等。19 .今年五月,为提高枣阳知名度,促进枣阳旅游业的开展,枣阳教育局面向全 市中小学生选拔“枣阳文旅代言人”,宣传枣阳基本情况、地方文化、名胜古迹及土特 产等。假如你被荣幸地选定,请你用以下内容用英语简要为枣阳代言。要点提示:20 枣阳基本状况:地理位置(湖北西北);人口(120万);气候宜人。21 主要特色(如:文化、土特产、风景名胜等),主产大米、棉花,盛产桃子,是 全国著名的“桃之乡”;是汉光武帝刘秀(Emperor Guangwu of Han Dynasty)的故乡, 也是英雄航天员聂海胜的故乡;著名景点有汉城(Han City)、白水寺(Baishui Temple) 玫瑰海(RoseSea)等。22 欢迎大家到枣阳玩。写作要求:L文中必须包含所有提示要点,可适当发挥使行文连贯:23 条理清晰,字迹工整,词数不少于90;24 文章开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数;25 文中不得出现真实人名和校名等相关信息。 Ladies and gentlemen,I'm honored fbr being elected as one of the spokespersons for Zaoyang.Thanks for listening.【答案】例文:Ladies and gentlemen.I'm honored fbr being elected as one of the spokespersons fbr Zaoyang.Zaoyang lies in the northwest of Hubei. It has a population of 1.2 million. Whenever you come, you will keep a big smile on your face. The weather there is comfortable and pleasant, the sky is blue and the air is fresh.Zaoyang mainly produces rice and cotton, and is rich in peaches. It is a famous 4thometown of peaches“ in China. It is the hometown of Emperor Guangwu of Han Dynasty, as well as the hometown of the heroic astronaut Nie Haisheng. There are many famous scenic spots such as Han City, Baishui Temple, Rose Sea and so on.In a word, welcome to my beautiful hometown一Zaoyang!Thanks for listening.【详解】1.题干解读:本篇书面表达是一篇材料作文。题目要求是假如你被选定为“枣 阳文旅代言人“,请你用英语根据要点提示简要为枣阳代言,宣传枣阳基本情况、地方 文化、名胜古迹及土特产等。2.写作指导:写作时,以第三人称为主,其他人称为辅;主体时态使用一般现在时。 内容包括三个方面:(1)枣阳的地理位置;(2)主要特色。可以从文化、土特产、风 景名胜等角度进行陈述;(3)邀请。注意要保证内容完整、布局合理、思路清晰、行 文连贯、语言丰富、表达准确、书写规范。20.书面表达假如你是李华,你们学校正在开展”爱心传递,从我做起”主题教育活动。请你用英 语写一篇短文给某英文网站投稿,谈谈你为什么要献爱心,当别人需要帮助时你通常 做什么,以及你这样做的感受。提示词语:help, books, money, warm clothes, try one's best, proud 提示问题: Why do you show your kindness to others? What do you usually do when someone needs help? I low do you feel?At my school, wc are talking about what we can do to give hands to others in trouble.答案 At my school, we are talking about what we can do to give hands to others in (rouble. It is very important fbr us to show our kindness to others because everyone needs help when they get into trouble. I usually send my books or money to the children in poor areas. When winter comes, I often offer some warm clothes to them. I always write to the children and know what they need. Then I try my best to meet their needs in their daily life.Now we have become close friends. I feel very proud when they tell me they have made great progress at school.【详解】这篇作文要求我们给某英文网站投稿,谈一谈自己学校正在开展的"爱心传 递,从我做起”主题教育活动,介绍下我们为什么要献爱心;当别人需要帮助的时 候,你可以做什么以及自己的感受。题目中给出了一些提示词语和提示问题,我们应 以这几个问题为指导,确定文章的中心,组织语言,用正确的英语表达出来。审题可 知,这篇短文应使用一般现在时,第一人称来表达,注意正确使用谓语动词的形式。 写作时,应注意英语的表达习惯和汉语是不同的,不能按照汉语的思维逐词翻译,写 汉语式的英语。应从句子的整体结构出发,写完整的句子。可以简单句结构为主,如 主谓宾结构或主系表结构,穿插使用并列句后复合句,调整文章节奏,提升文章档 次。同时注意语句之间使用一些连接成分,使文意连贯。【点睛】这是一篇优秀的作文,短文作者根据题目要求,介绍了自己学校开展的“爱 心传递,从我做起”主题教育活动,并结合自己的实际,表达了自己对这个活动的感 受。首先短文内容完整,包含了题目中要求的所有内容,没有遗漏要点,并且表达清 楚、有层次,根据表达需要,增加了一些细节,使文章内容更加充实;其次短文中使 用了正确的时态和人称,语法规范,语言地道、得体,符合英语的表达习惯。句子结 构以简单句为主,也使用了时间状语从句、原因状语从句、宾语从句、非谓语动词等 更杂结构。短文中使用了丰富的句型和短语,增强了文章的表现力,如It is very important for us to show our kindness to others because everyone needs help when they get into troubleWhen winter comes, I often offer some warm clothes to them、I feel very proud when they tell me they have made great progress at school.等。21.疫情之下,越来越多的人选择云游。有的同学喜欢线上云游,有的同学那么喜 欢线下旅游。21世纪英文报对在校学生进行“online toin”的调查问卷。请你根据调查问 卷和你的实际情况,写一篇英语短文向报刊投稿。Questionnaire1. Do you like online tour or not? Put a tick (y) or a cross (x) in the box.oONLINE TOUR2. What do you think of it?3. Why do you like/dislike it?本卷须知:1 .短文须包括所有提示内容,可适当发挥,要求语句通顺、意思连贯;.词数90左右,作文的开头已给出,不计入总词数;2 .短文中不得提及真实人名、

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