备考2023年高考英语复习双基专题 27-书面表达之读后续写必备句型与写作思路一（解析版）.docx

专题26书面表达之读后续写必备句型与写作思路（-）知文体特点读后续写新题型自2016年以来一直备受青睐，在未来三年可能都会写作之主流。认真研究读后续写，会 发现其写作式很有规律和技巧的，学生只要好好备考，基本上可以拿高分。读后续写是一种将阅读与写作相结合的考察形式，要求考生对所读材料进行续写，将其开展成一篇与 给定材料有所衔接，情节架构自然，而且结构完整的短文（教育部考试中心，2015年）。2015年8月， 教育部考试中心发布普通高等学校招生全国统一考试英语科考试说明（高考综合改革试验省份试用） （第一版），明确了考试内容和要求，考试形式与试卷结构，提供了一份参考试卷。首次提出了写作新题 型：读后续写或概要写作，两种形式在不同考次不定期交替使用。参考试卷的读后续写，记叙文，试题未 提供标题。紧接着，2016年浙江首次迎来了读后续写的考试时代。近七年（2016-2022）年高考英语书面表达（应用文）考查情况一览表体裁原文字数话题2022 年新高考全国I卷记叙文317患病男孩的奔跑浙江卷1月记叙文345我和学霸的伙伴2021 年新高考全国I卷记叙文306母亲节的礼物浙江卷6月记叙文315暑假打工薪水浙江卷1月记叙文348万圣节南瓜趣事2020 年全新高考全国I卷记叙文325帮助弱者脱困浙江卷7月记叙文330与熊对抗脱险浙江卷1月记叙文350抚慰狗狗心伤2018浙江卷6月记叙文325度假骑马迷路2017浙江卷6月记叙文348骑行途中偶遇狼浙江卷11月记叙文343健忘妈妈趣事2016浙江卷10月记叙文335吵架出走迷路从上表中我们不难发现，近几年高考读后续写真题命题形式表达在以下四个方面：一、有标题，情感（亲情）话题（如2021年新高考全国I卷）二、无标题，情感（亲情）话题（如2022年新高考全国I卷）三、无标题，情感（人与动物）话题（如2020年浙江卷1月）四、无标题，遇险话题（如2020年浙江卷7月）五、有标题，开放性话题（如2017年浙江卷11月）I didn*t really understand his world either： He was a livestock trucker, and I thought that I would surpass （超 过）anything he had accomplished by the time I walked across the stage at high school graduation.Summers in the mid-70s were spent at home shooting baskets, hitting a baseball, or throwing a football., preparing for my future as a quarterback on a football team. In poor weather, I read about sports or practiced my trombone （长号）.The summer before my eighth grade I was one of a group of boys that a neighboring farmer hired to work in his field. He explained our basic task, the tractor fired up and we were off, riding down the field looking for weeds to spray with chemicals. After a short way, the farmer stopped and pointed at a weed which we missed. Then we began again. This happened over and over, but we soon learned to identify different grasses like cockleburs, lamb-quarters, foxtails, and the king of weeds, the pretty purple thistle. It was tiring work, but 1 looked forward to the pay, even though I wasn't sure how much it would amount to.At home, my dad said, "A job's a big step to growing up. I'm glad you will be contributing to the household.H My dad's words made me realize that my earnings might not be mine to do with as I wished.My labors lasted about two weeks, and the farmer said there might be more work, but I wasn't interested. T decided it was not ir that I had to contribute my money.注意：1 .所续写短文的词数应为150左右；.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；2 .续写局部分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1 ： When I brought my paycheck home-it was $ 1 1 9-my dad wanted to talk to me.Paragraph2： I was surprised that my dad allowed me to use the money as I wished.参考答案：When I brought my paycheck home-it was$119-my dad wanted to talk to me. Knowing that he would talk about my earnings, I pulled a long face and intended to simply walk past him and slip back to my bedroom. "Come here, son/5 Dad exclaimed, wearing an accessible expression. My heart sank. What I had been looking forward to-a dreamy new football outfit would finally give way to family expenses. Reluctantly, I inched forward and submitted the paycheck. However, Dad slid the paycheck back into my hand, saying in a tender voice, "You've grown up. You have every right to decide what to do with the money.”I was surprised that my dad allowed me to use the money as I wished. My previous desperation was immediately erased by great bills. I stepped closer and hugged him tightly. Just at that moment I noticed his grey hair and stiff neck. Memories of his usual cry of pain on the neck came crowding in. I realized how much he had contributed to the family through his tiring work of being a trucker. Tears began to blur my vision, "Dad, thanks for your hard work these years. I shouldn't have been so selfish and not willing to contribute my money." On that day, I began to understand Dad's world and it seemed that he was also on the way into my world.【解析】L段落续写由第一段首句内容“拿到119美元的工资了，父亲却有话说。”可知，第一段可描写作者的工资到手 后，父亲想用这笔钱，得知消息后，作者的情绪变化。经过和爸爸意味深长的谈话后，虽然作者仍有想要 的东西，”迫于压力。却还是把钱交给了父亲.由第二段首句内容“父亲竟然让我自己决定如何支配这份工资。”可知，第二段主要描述作者内心活 动以及最终的决定，突出孩子长大后，对父亲和家人多了一份理解。2 .续写线索高兴一不情愿-惊讶一开心-发现-主动贡献.词汇 行为类 发现：talk/find 奉献：offer to contribute 情绪类不情愿的：unwilling/surprised/happy/willing自豪地：understanding and thankful二、有标题，情感话题典例1 （2021新高考全国I卷）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。A MOTHER'S DAY SURPRISEThe twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother's Day. How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed. They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge. They had watched their mother in the kitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do.The big day came at last. The alarm rang at 6 a.m. The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen. They decided to boil the porridge first. They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast. Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk. Jenna found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture. Next, Jeff turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan. Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread. The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds. Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread. This time, she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely.Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake. The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly. But the stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jeff to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But JefFs hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain. Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught the smell of burning. Oh dear! The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well.注意：1.续写词数应为15。左右。2 .请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared.The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.【答案】 As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. Father's appearing was like a savior to the two children. Under the guidance of their father, they took positive actions and started all over again. They made the bread and then went on cooking porridge. Father helped them adjust the fire, which was the key to success. It was all right this time. Delicious breakfast was ready. How happy they were!The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. When their mother saw the delicious and perfect breakfast in front of her, she was very surprised. It was not only the gift, but the love of the children for her that moved her very much. The two children could finish cooking a breakfast, which she didn't expect. The children said loudly, "Happy Mother's Day!” Mother hugged them tightly and kissed them again and again.【解析】【分析】本文以母亲节为线索展开，讲述了双胞胎Jenna和Jeff为了献给母亲一份美味的早餐，自己动手， 做起饭餐来，但是不幸的是，他们连连失败，后来在父亲的帮助下，获得成功，他们把早餐献给亲爱的母 亲，妈妈非常感动的故事。【详解】1 .段落续写：由第一段首句内容“当双胞胎失望地环顾四周时，他们的父亲出现了。”可知，第一段可描写他们的父亲 指导帮助他们准备早餐。由第二段首句内容“这对双胞胎把早餐端到楼上，叫醒了他们的母亲。”可知，第二段可描写母亲收到孩 子们的礼物早餐，非常感动。2 .续写线索：帮助指导积极献礼感动.词汇激活 行为类帮助：help/assist.指导：guide/conduct .献礼：present a gift/give a gift 情绪类.积极：positive/positively/take positive actions .感动：moved/touched【点睛】高分句型 1. Father helped them adjust the fire, which was the key to success, （which 引导的非限制性定语从 句）高分句型 2. It was not only the breakfast, but the love of the children for her that moved her very much.（使用 not only.but （also）句型及强调句型）三、无标题，遇险话题典例（2020浙江卷7月）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。One fall, my wife Elli and I had a single goal： to photograph polar bears. We were staying at a research camp outside “the polar bear capital of the world”the town of Churchill in Manitoba, Canada.Taking pictures of polar bears is amazing but also dangerous. Polar bears - like all wild animals - should be photographed from a safe distance. When I'm face to face with a polar bear, I like it to be through a camera with a telephoto lens. But sometimes, that is easier said than done. This was one of those times.As Elli and I cooked dinner, a young male polar bear who was playing in a nearby lake sniffed, and smelled our garlic bread.The hungry bear followed his nose to our camp, which was surrounded by a high wire fence. He pulled and bit the wire. He stood on his back legs and pushed at the wooden fence posts.Terrified, Elli and I tried all the bear defense actions we knew. We yelled at the bear, hit pots hard, and fired blank shotgun shells into the air. Sometimes loud noises like these will scare bears off. Not this polar bear though he just kept trying to tear down the fence with his massive paws （JR子）.I radioed the camp manager for help. He told me a helicopter was on its way, but it would be 30 minutes before it arrived. Making the best of this close encounter （相遇）,I took some pictures of the bear.Elli and I feared the fence wouldn last through 30 more minutes of the bear's punishment. The camp manager suggested I use pepper spray. The spray burns the bears' eyes, but doesn't hurt them. So I approached our uninvited guest slowly and, through the fence, sprayed him in the face. With an angry roar （用口|） , the bear ran to the lake to wash his eyes.注意：1 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；2 .续写局部分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。A few minutes later, the bear headed back to our camp.At that very moment, the helicopter amved.参考范文1A few minutes later, the bear headed back to our camp. Roars and screams pierced the silence with needle-like shrillness. The noises turned Elli and I pale with horror. I feared that the giant would destroy our whole fence. He roared repeatedly, shattering what was left of the silence. Elli seized this opportunity to take some pictures of the bear. The animal's noises echoed all around us. We betrayed our feelings by huddling together, shivering with fear. After thoroughly scrutinizing the area, he trotted forward a few steps.At that very moment, the helicopter arrived. My heart leaped with joy as I knew we were likely to be saved. Elli used pepper spray again to buy us enough time. But this time the bear became more alert. He regarded us with the merciless necessity of hunger, so we throw all the food we have. He then turned away and started devouring. As we were climbing the rope ladder, Elli prayed like thousand times to show thankfulness of being safe and sound.参考范文2A few minutes later,the bear headed back to our camp. Roars and screams pierced the silence with needle-like shrillness. The noises turned Elli and I pale with horror. I feared that the giant would destroy our whole fence.He roared repeatedly, shattering what was left of the silence. Elli seized this opportunity to take some pictures of the bear. The animaPs noises echoed all around us. We betrayed our feelings by huddling together, shivering with fear. After thoroughly scrutinizing the area, he trotted forward a few steps.At that very moment,the helicopter arrived. My heart leaped with joy as I knew we were likely to be saved. Elli used pepper spray again to buy us enough time. But this time the bear became more alert.He regarded us with the merciless necessity of hunger, so we throw all the food we have. He then turned away and started devouring. As we were climbing the rope ladder, Elli prayed like a thousand times to show thankfulness of being safe and sound. （ 154 词，21 分）四、有标题，开放性话题典例（2017浙江卷11月）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。A vacation with my motherI had an interesting childhood: It was filled with surprise and amusements, all because of my mother-loving, sweet, and yet absent-minded and forgetful. One strange family trip we took when I was eleven tells a lot about her.My two sets of grandparents lived in Colorado and North Dakota, and my parents decided to spend a few weeks driving to those states and seeing all the sights along the way. As the first day of our trip approached, David, my eight-year-old brother, and I unwillingly said good-bye to all of our friends. Who knew if we'd ever see them again? Finally, the moment of our departure arrived, and we loaded suitcases, books, games, camping equipment, and a tent into the car and bravely drove off. We bravely drove off again two hours later after we'd returned home to get the purse and traveler's checks Mom had forgotten.David and I were always a little nervous when using gas station bathrooms if Mom was driving while Dad slept:" You stand outside the door and play lookout while I go, and I'll stand outside the door and play lookout while you go." I had terrible pictures in my mind: "Honey, where are the kids?” “What?! Oh, Gosh. I thought they were being awfully quiet." We were never actually left behind in a strange city, but we weren't about to take any chances.On the fourth or fifth night, we had trouble finding a hotel with a vacancy. After driving in vain for some time, Mom suddenly got a great idea: Why didn't we find a house with a likely-looking backyard and ask if we could set up tent there? David and I became nervous. To our great relief, Dad turned down the idea. Mom never could understand our objections. If a strange family showed upon her front doorsteps, Mom would have been delighted. She thinks everyone in the world as nice as she is. We finally found a vacancy in the next town.注意：1 .所续写短文的词数应为150左右；.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；2 .续写局部分为两段，每段开头语已为你写好；,续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paral:The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us.Para2:We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way.参考范文：The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us. Thinking of this tent, Mom suggested that we go camping in the next village in excitement, with her eyes glittering. Considering her enthusiasm, we all agreed. When the door of our car opened, Mom stormed out instantly and urged us to put up the tent. David and I were asked to pick up some branches to build a fire. And when we came back, Dad and Mom had already lain down the grass comfortably in front of the tent, talking merrily with a local boy at our age, who kept glancing at this tent curiously. Soon we learnt that the boy in rags even didn't have a home to live in. Of course, Mom "fbrgot“ to take this tent with us again.We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way. And we also had a nice time living with my grandparents during that trip. But what impressed me most was that tent, which was forgotten deliberately by Mom. Though she did love going camping, she presented that poor boy with this tent out of sympathy. It was Mom that made my childhood colorful. And it was also she that showed me the true meaning