上海市部分地区2022-2023学年高三上学期英语期末（高考一模）汇编：写作 含答案.docx

上海市静安、宝山、嘉定、浦东、金山五区2022-2023届高三一模英语试题汇编写作2023届上海市静安区高三一模英语试卷VI. Guided Writing56. Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.你所居住的小区，虽地处闹市，但因建成较早，当年规划的300个停车位早已不能满足500 户居民的停车需求。小区业委(owners，committee)现正就如何缓解小区停车难这一问题征 求居民们意见。在小区公众号留言，谈谈你的看法。留言中包括：1 .你的建议；.你的理由。(文中不得出现考生姓名，学校等真实信息)2023届上海市宝山区高三一模英语试题VI. Guided Writing56. Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.随着数字技术的广泛使用，现在，学校里有些老师喜欢给学生布置线上作业，也有一些老师 仍然喜欢布置线下作业，还有一些老师喜欢布置线上和线下混合式作业。作为一名高三学生, 请你给老师写一封邮件，提出你关于作业方面的建议。邮件内容必须包括：1 .你觉得哪种作业形式更适合你们班级；.简单陈述你的理由，说明其利弊。文 中 不 要 出 现 真 实 姓 名 和 学 校 名2023届上海市嘉定区高三上学期一模英语试题VL Guided writing （25 分）56. Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.假设你是光明中学的学生张华。你们学校拟开设劳动课程，现给出如下方案，学校委托学生 会征询大家的意见。内容高一：电器使用和维护高二：植物种植与养护高三：物品整理和收纳时间每学期最后两周，每周2整天地点理科实验专用教室给学生会写一封邮件，内容须包括:1）你认为该方案中存在的问题；2）你的建议和理由。上海市浦东新区2022-2023学年高三上学期期末教学质量检测英语试卷（一模）VL Guided Writing76. Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.假设你是明启中学高三学生李华，目前担任学校社团负责人。近期，你校被评为社团明星学 校，为了在报纸上分享你校社团情况，请你以“Clubs in My School”为题，写一篇文章，内 容须包含：1 .对你校社团进行分类；.具体描述每一类社团的特色。2023届上海市金山区高三上学期一模英语试卷VI. Guided Writing56. Directions:川代te an English composition in 120150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.假设你是光明中学高三学生李明。近期，年级组正在策划18岁成人礼仪式，其中一个环节 为“说说你的故事”，筹备组现面向本校全体高三学生征集真实故事案例。请给筹备组写一 封邮件，内容须包括：1）你印象最深的一件事情；2）此事对你的启发和影响。答案：2023届上海市静安区高三一模英语试卷Dear owners' committee,As a resident of this community, I have the following suggestions on how to alleviate theparking problem in this community:First, I think the community can scientifically and reasonably plan the parking spaces, number them, and guide the car owners to check the number. At the same time, we can also talk with residents in the community to reduce the public green space and increase the number of parking spaces. Second, we could seek help from the relevant departments, putting forward the proposal of building a large parking lot or three-dimensional parking building; Meanwhile, we can negotiate with the surrounding shops to implement the method of "dislocation parking“ to relieve the tension of parking in the community. Third, I strongly recommend that public transportation and public bicycle travel should be advocated. By doing these not only can we could relieve the pressure of tight parking space, but also build up our bodies, which could be called win-win.The above is my opinion,which I hope will be helpful to you.【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给业主委员会写一封建议信，针对“小区停车 难”问题提出自己的建议和理由。【详解】1 .词汇积累建议：suggestion-* advice首先：first first and foremost其次：second in addition 有益处：helpful-* beneficial2 .句式拓展简单句变复合句原句： As a resident of this community, I have the following suggestions on how to alleviate the parking problem in this community.拓展句： As a resident of this community, 1 have the following suggestions on how we could do something to alleviate the parking problem in this community.【点睛】【高分句型 1 First, I think the community can scientifically and reasonably plan the parking spaces, number them, and guide the car owners to check the number.（运用 了动词的并歹U 结构）【高分句型 2 Third, I strongly recommend that public transportation and public bicycle travel should be advocated.（运用了虚拟语气以及that引导的宾语从句）2023届上海市宝山区高三一模英语试题Dear Mr. Hu,I'm writing to express my opinion about the online homework. With the scientific development, the Internet is developing rapidly. Online homework will become a trend. Therefore, I think that online homework can be more suitable for our Senior Three students.The contents and forms of online homework are relatively rich, which not only can promote students to actively complete their homework, but also can greatly relieve the tense learning atmosphere. Besides, online homework can shorten the time of teachers' correcting homework so that they can help us with important learning problems, because senior three students need more help from teachers. Although online homework also has drawbacks, such as computer time, I think we can control ourselves as teenagers.I hope my suggestions will be helpful to you.Yours,Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给老师写一封邮件，提出你关于线上作业和线 下作业更适合自己班级的建议。【详解】1 .词汇积累适用：be suitable for 一 apply to 积极地：actively > positively 止匕外：Besides > Whafs more 有用：be helpful to 一 be beneficial to 2 .句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：I'm writing to express my opinion about the online homework.拓展句：I'm writing to express my opinion about the online homework, which I think is useful to our study.【点睛】【高分句型 1 The contents and forms of online homework are relatively rich, which not only can promote students to actively complete their homework, but also can greatly relieve the tense learning atmosphere.（运用了 which引导的非限制性定语从句）【高分句型 2 1Besides, online homework can shorten the time of teachers, correcting homework so that they can help us with important learning problems, because senior three students need more help from teachers.（运用了 so that引导的结果状语从句和because引导的原因状语从句） 2023届上海市嘉定区高三上学期一模英语试题 Dear Students' Union,I'm writing to put forward some advice on the labor course planned by you. It is of great benefit for us students to take a labor course with an intention of building up our body and learning more life skills.However, according to the schedule, the content of the labor course, which T think is not appropriate for the senior 1 students, is supposed to be adjusted because they should be developed some basic skills of school life so that they can adapt to the independent school life quickly.Furthermore, as far as the time given the labor course is concerned, it is not enough at all. In order to pay more attention to the labor course, students should be offered more time to experience more activities related to the labor course.r m deeply convinced that as long as you take my advice into account, this labor course will be interesting and rewarding.Yours sincerely, Zhang Hua【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生给学校学生会写一封邮件，就学校拟开设劳 动课程的方案提出问题，并给出建议和理由。【详解】1 .词汇积累提出：put forward come up with方案：schedule >plan止匕夕卜：furthermore 一 what's more考虑：take. into account 一 take into consideration2 .句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：I'm writing to put forward some advice on the labor course planned by you.拓展句：I'm writing to put forward some advice on the labor course which is planned by you.【点睛】【高分句型 1 It is of great benefit for us students to take a labor course with an intention of building up our body, learning more life skills.（运用了 it作形式主语，不定式短语作真正主 语）【高分句型 2 However, according to the schedule, the content of the labor course, which I think is not appropriate for the senior 1, is supposed to be adjusted because they should be developed some basic skills of school life so that they can adapt to the independent school life.（运用了 which引导的非限制性定语从句，because引导的原因状语从句以及so that引导的 目的状语从句）上海市浦东新区2022-2023学年高三上学期期末教学质量检测英语试卷（一模）Clubs in My SchoolTo enrich students, life, our school organizes a variety of clubs in my school. Almost every student in our school participates in a club, which makes their school life colorful. Generally speaking, the clubs in my school can be classified into two types: sports club and art club.Sports club are popular among students. There are basketball club, football club, swimming club and so on, which are organized by students with the same interest. So students there can make friends. Besides, they can not only play sports in free time, but also they can learn some sports skills.Art club including music club, painting club and so on, gives students a chance to admire the art. Also, it provides students some knowledge about art. Meanwhile, students there can have the access to the instrument, such as piano, Erhu and so on.All the students in my school like the clubs. So I think the clubs are very significant.【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生以“Clubs in My School”为题，写一篇文章， 内容须包含：对你校社团进行分类；具体描述每一类社团的特色。【详解】1,词汇积累等等：and so on>and the like此外:Besides一In addition机会：chance一opportunity同时：Meanwhile>At the same time2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句： Art club including music club, painting club and so on, gives students a chance to admire the art.拓展句： Art club which includes music club, painting club and so on, gives students a chance to admire the art.【点睛】高分句型 1 Almost every student in our school participates in a club, which makes their school life colorful.（运用了 which引导的非限制性定语从句）高分句型 2 There are basketball club, football club, swimming club and so on, which are organized by students with the same interest.（运用 了 which 引导的非限制性定语从句） 2023届上海市金山区高三上学期一模英语试卷One possible version:During the past three years in the Guangming senior high school, I have had many unforgettable experiences. One of the most unforgettable things was when our class prepared for a group singing competition. In order to win the competition, we all went for it. During the week before the competition, we practised singing in our free time. Although it was a hard job, every participant took it seriously and did their best. Thanks to our effort, we won the first prize. Hearing the exciting news, we were all wild with joy. The movement reminded me of an old saying-No pains, no gains. It was hard work, but during the course of preparation, we developed deep friendship, confidence as well as understanding!【导语】本文是一篇开放作文。年级组正在策划18岁成人礼仪式，其中一个环节是“说说 你的故事”，要求考生给筹备组写一封邮件说说自己印象最深刻的一件事，以及此事对你的 启发和影响。【详解】1 .词汇积累难忘的：unforgettable>memorable为了： in order to>in an effort to困难的：hard- tough由于：thanks to一owing to2 .句式拓展 同义句 原句： Hearing the exciting news, we were all wild with joy. 拓展句： When we heard the exciting news, we were all wild with joy.【点睛】【高分句型 1 One of the most unforgettable things was when our class prepared for a group singing competition.（运用 了 when 引导的表语从句）【高分句型 2 Although it was a hard job,every participant took it seriously and did their best.（运用了 although引导的让步状语从句）