专题09（书面表达全国通用） 10月月考专辑--2023届高三英语名校新题快递 原卷版.docx

2023届高三英语名校新题快递-10月月考专辑专题09书面表达全国通用原卷版江西省名校高中2022-2023学年高三上学期联合测评2022年6月5日，中国神舟14号载人飞船发射取得圆满成功！近些年，世界各国都在不断加强太空探 索。最近你校就“Is space exploration a waste of money and energy?”为主题组织了一场英语写作比赛。请根据你的观点，写一篇短文参赛，内容包括：1 .你的观点；2.选择该观点的原因。注意：1.词数100左右；2.短文题目和首句已为你写好。Is Space Exploration A Waste Of Money And Energy?As our society develops, we spend a lot on each field to make our life better than ever, such as space exploration.【解析】【导语】本篇书面表达是议论文。要求考生写一篇短文参加学校组织的以“Is space exploration a waste of money and energy?”为主题的写作比赛，考生在文章中要阐述自己的观点以及选择该观点的原因。【详解】1 .词汇积累展示：display一show一demonstrate止匕夕卜：what飞 moremoreoverfurthermore极其重要：be of great significance>be greatly important合作：work together>cooperate2 .句式拓展并列句变复合句原句： In my opinion, space exploration is of great significance and it should be considered first.拓展句： As far as I am concerned, space exploration should be considered first because it is of great significance. 【点睛】【高分句型 1 Given the fact that our resources are limited, more and more people begin to think about whether space exploration is a waste of money and energy.（运用 了 that 引导的同位语从句和 whether 引导的宾 语从句）高分句型 2 Firstly, space exploration can display the national strength and its scientific achievements, which can boost the people's confidence.（运用了 which引导的非限制性定语从句）【详解】1.词汇积累建议：suggestion一 advice止匕夕卜：besides > whafs more移除：remove> take away喜欢：enjoy一 be fbnd of2 ,句式拓展同义句转换原句： Having known that you have difficulties in online learning, I am writing to express my comfort and some suggestions to you.拓展句： Because I know that you have difficulties in online learning, I am writing to express my comfort and some suggestions to you.【点睛】【高分句型 1 It is normal that you feel it challenging to fit in with this new learning pattern.（运用 了 that引导的主语从句）【高分句型 2 】Besides, it is concentration that makes you fully engage in online lessons, so try to remove any kind of distraction from your desk.（运用了 强调句结构）2023届广东省六校高三上学期第二次联考正值你校举办科技节，校英语报特开设“My Future Invention”专栏，面向学生征稿。请你根据以下要点写一 篇稿件：1 .创造的名称；.创造的功能；2 .对创造的未来的展望。注意：1 .写作词数应为80左右；.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。My Future Invention【解析】【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给你校英语报开设的“My Future Invention”专栏，写一篇稿件, 内容包括：创造的名称；创造的功能；对创造的未来的展望。【详解】1 ,词汇积累提高：improveenhance此外:Besides>In addition确保：ensure一make sure提供：offerprovide2 .句式拓展简单句变复合句原句： To improve the convenience of transport and raise the efficiency of commute in daily life, I design a little invention and name it Flying Skateboard.拓展句：I design a little invention and name it Flying Skateboard, for the purpose that I want to improve the convenience of transport and raise the efficiency of commute in daily life.【点睛】高分句型 1 No matter which mode the travellers choose, gliding or flying, just tell the board where they intend to go and press on the button, and the best route will be mapped out straight away.（运用 了 no matter which 引导的状语从句和where引导的宾语从句）高分句型 2 Whafs more, the skateboard can be charged automatically wherever the sun shines, which means a possible reduction in the use of fossil fuels.（运用 了 which 引导的非限制性定语从句）高分句型 3Not only does it offer riders more exposure to the open air with unusual views to admire, but also it promotes a greener lifestyle by saving energy and cutting emissions down.（运用 了侄ij装,not only.but also 连接 句子时，not only位于句首，该局部用局部倒装）江苏省苏州市2022-2023学年高三上学期八校联考假定你是李华，上周你校举办了首届生活技能云端展示活动，主题为“劳动创造美好生活(Work Creates aBetter Life)。”请你为校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括：1 .活动主题；.展示内容（烹饪、急救等）；2 .活动反响。注意：1 ,写作词数应为80左右；2.标题已给出，不计入总词数；3,可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。The First Online Life Skills Show【解析】【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一篇报道，关于上周学校举办了首届生活技能云端展示活动，主题为“劳动创造美好生活（Work Creates a Better Life）。"【详解】1.词汇积累 展示：show- demonstrate机会：opportunity chance以为自豪：feel proud o J take pride in天赋，天资：talent gift 2 ,句式拓展 陈述句变被动句 原句：Last week, our school held the First Online Life Skills Show.拓展句：Last week, the First Online Life Skills Show was held by our school.【点睛】【高分句型 1 Last week, our school held the First Online Life Skills Show, whose theme nWork Creates a Better Life'* is stressed.（运用了 whose引导的非限制性定语从句）【高分句型 2 It was a good opportunity for them to show their talents and skills.（运用 了 it 作形式主语,动词 不定式作真正的主语）河北省邢台市六校联考2022.2023学年高三上学期第一次月考假如你是高三学生李华，你所在年级下周要举办新学期、新计划为主题的例会，请你写一篇发言稿参加会 议，内容包括：1 ,新学期的任务与计一划；2.号召同学们一起为理想而努力。注意：1.词数80左右。2 .请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Hello, everyone,We are now in Senior III, facing new chances and challenge.【解析】【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一篇发言稿，参加学校要举办的以新学期、新计划为主题 的例会。内容包括：新学期的任务与计划；号召同学们一起为理想而努力。【详解】1.词汇积累机会：chance> opportunity止匕夕卜：besides一 whafs more希望：hope一 expect准备：prepare for> get ready for2 ,句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：From now on, I hope every one of us will struggle to the end to make our dream come true.拓展句：From now on, I hope every one of us will struggle to the end so that we can make our dream come true.【点睛】【高分句型 1 J Time and tide waiting for no one, we are supposed to make detailed time schedule to go through all the lessons to improve ourselves in all aspects.（运用 了独立主格结构）【高分句型 2】After all, god helps those who help themselves.（运用了 who 引导的定语从句）湖南省长沙市雅礼中学2022-2023学年高三上学期月考二假如你是李华，你校外教Daniel正为每周的“English Come广征集自由讨论的话题，欢迎同学们畅所欲言。请你给他写一封建议信，内容包括：1 .你建议的话题（至少两个）；.你的理由；2 .你的希望。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2,内容应包括以上要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;3.请按如下格式作答。Dear Daniel,Yours sincerely,Li Hua【解析】【导语】这是一篇应用文。要求考生给外教Daniel写信，就“English Corner”的话题提出自己的建议，并说 明原因。【详解】1.词汇积累高兴的：gladdelighted建议：advicesuggestion著名的：renowned>famous/well-known一定：be bound to>be sure to2.句型拓展简单句变复合句原句：I'm Li Hua from Senior 3.拓展句：I'm Li Hua from Senior 3, who is one of the faithful fans of the English Corner.【点目青】高分句型 lFood is a topic that will never be outdated, and I'm pretty sure the students will be interested in it.（运用了 that引导的定语从句）高分句型 2|By exchanging information ranging from the plots to the film reviews, students are bound to benefita lot both in their spoken English, and their thinking, which will undeniably help the activity enjoy an increasingpopularity.（运用了 which引导非限制性定语从句）江苏省泰州中学2022-2023学年高三上学期第一次月检假定你是李华，上周末你因故没有完成外教Mr Smith布置的影评作业，请给他写一封邮件，内容包括:1 .表示歉意；.解释原因；2 .弥补措施。注意：1,写作词数应为80左右；.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【解析】【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生因为上周末没有完成外教Mr Smith布置的影评作业写一封道 歉信。【详解】L词汇积累极其地：awfully>extremely完成：finish一accomplish表达：express>convey阻止某人做某事：prevent sb. from doing sth.一stop sb. from doing sth.3 .句式拓展简单句变复合句原句： Last Saturday morning, I fell ill suddenly and had a high fever.拓展句：Last Saturday morning, I fell ill suddenly and had a high fever, which made me feel very uncomfortable 【点睛】【高分句型 11 I'm awfully sorry to tell you that I didn't finish the film review you assigned last Friday. （运用了 that引导的宾语从句）【高分句型 2】I sincerely hope that you will understand my situation and accept my apology.（运用 了 that 弓| 导的宾语从句）山东省潍坊市五县市2022-2023学年高三10月统考你校将以世界文化遗产为主题，举办英语征文比赛。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括:L文化遗产的重要性；2.保护文化遗产的建议。注意：1.词数80左右；2 .请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。【解析】【导语】本篇书面表达是开放作文。要求考生为学校举办的以世界文化遗产为主题的英语征文比赛写一篇 短文投稿。【详解】L词汇积累共 同的：common>mutual提供：provide一offer代替：replace>take the place of保护：protection一conservation合作：team up一cooperate2 .句式拓展简单句变复合句原句： Cultural heritage is the common treasure of mankind.拓展句： Cultural heritage is the common treasure of mankind, which is highly valued.【点睛】【高分句型 1 Jit provides a strong symbol of the past from which we can reflect on the present and future.（运用了 which引导的定语从句）高分句型 2 Therefore, it is important to protect cultural heritage because preserving it promises great benefits for the future.（运用了 because引导的原因状语从句）江苏省南京市2023届高三上学期10月学情调查考试假设你是李华，最近你要参加主题为“My Dream University”的英语演讲比赛。你的外国好友Jack经常 参加各种大型比赛，比赛经验非常丰富。赛前你向他寻求意见，请根据以下要点写一封邮件，内容包括：1 .陈述写信目的；2 .寻求具体意见；3 .表示真诚感谢。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。重庆市育才中学校2022-2023学年高三上学期入学考试你校正在组织英语演讲比赛活动，请你用英文发表关于学生如何保护视力的演讲，内容包括:1 .中学生视力现状；.保护视力的建议。注意：L词数80左右；.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。How to Protect Our Eyesight湖北省襄阳市重点高中2022.2023学年高三上学期第二次月考假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Peter对中国书法很感兴趣，并想学习它，发来邮件希望你给他一些指导。请回复一封邮件，内容包括：L你的建议；2.你的祝福。注意：1,词数80左右；2,可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：书法calligniphyDear Peter,Yours,Li Hua安徽省皖豫名校联盟2022-2023学年高三上学期第一次考试你校英文报打算举办一次主题为“环境保护”的海报设计大赛，请你为其写一那么征稿启事。内容包括:1 .活动目的；.具体要求；2 .发动大家参加。注意：1 .词数100左右；.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Poster Design Competition【答案】 One possible version:【解析】【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生为“主题为，环境保护的海报设计大赛''写一那么征稿启事。内 容包括：1 .活动目的；2.具体要求；3.发动大家参加。【详解】1 .词汇积累举办：holdorganize积极的：positive一optimistic最重要的是：most importantly-above all参力口 ： take part in一 participate in2 ,句式拓展简单句变复合句原句： Most importantly, your poster needs to reflect the theme in a creative and persuasive way.拓展句： The most important thing is that your poster needs to reflect the theme in a creative and persuasive way.【点睛】【高分句型 1 To raise all the students9 awareness of protecting the environment, our school will hold a poster design competition.（运用了不定式作目的状语）【高分句型 2 I think it's your time to show your concern for the ecosystem as well as your ability to create.（运 用了省略that引导的宾语从句）山西省朔州市2022-2023学年高三上学期开学摸底测试英语课上，你们班准备就“分数与能力”进行一次讨论。请发表你的看法，内容包括:1 .简要评论现状；2 .你的观点及建议。注意:1 .词数100左右；.题目已为你写好。Score and Ability【解析】【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。要求考生就“分数与能力”简要评论现状，并说明自己的观点及建议。【详解】1 .词汇积累进入大学：enter a college一be admitted into a collegey在某种程度上：to some extent一in some degree证明：prove>demonstrate然而：however>nevertheless2 ,句式拓展句型转换湖南省长沙市长郡中学20222023学高三上学期月考卷（二）假定你是某国际学校的学生会主席李华，你所在城市近年来交通拥堵越来越严重，请你以学生会的名义 向全校师生写一封绿色出行的建议书。内容包括：1 .绿色出行的意义；2 .绿色出行的方式；3.提出号召。注意：L写作词数应为80左右；3 .可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；4 .请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。The Students5 Union【解析】【导语】这是一篇应用文。要求考生对自己所在城市的交通拥堵问题，以学生会的名义向全校师生写一封绿色出行的建议书。【详解】L词汇积累代表：on behalf of represent呼吁：appeal to call on行动起来：act > take action为做贡献、促成： contribute to一make contributions to2.句式拓展同义句转换原句： With private cars increasing, the traffic jams in our city have become more and more serious,.转换句： As private cars are increasing, the traffic jams in our city have become more and more serious,. 原句：In my opinion, a score doesn't mean everything. It just proves that the student is good at studying, not including his ability in other things.拓展句：In my opinion a score doesn't mean everything, which just proves that the student is good at studying, notincluding his ability in other things.【点睛】【高分句型 1J It just proves that the student is good at studying, not including his ability in other things. （运用了 that引导宾语从句）【高分句型 2】We should put our ability first as it makes us a better man.（运用了 as 引导原因状语从句）【点睛】高分句型1To achieve that, I suggest that we should first further raise awareness of the importance of green travel. （suggest 后的宾语从句运用了 Should do的虚拟语气） 高分句型2Besides, it's significant for us to ride bicycles or choose public transport instead of private vehicles as much as possible, which can avoid traffic jams and improve our health.（运用 了 it 作形式主语和 which 引导的非限制性 定语从句）河南省局部名校2022-2023学年高三上学期10月联考假定你是李华，你的新西兰朋友Allen热爱中国文化，来信询问重阳节的有关情况。请你给他回信， 内容包括：1 .节日的寓意；2 .节日的习俗。注意:1 .词数100左右；2.开头和结束语已为你写好。参考词汇：菊花chrysanthemumDear Allen,Yours,Li Hua【解析】【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给热爱中国文化的新西兰朋友Allen回信，介绍重阳节的有 关情况。【详解】1 .词汇积累相信：believe>be convinced of各种各样的：various-a variety of/diverse关心： care about一be concerned about帮助：help-assist/aid/be of helpful to2 .句式拓展简单句变复合句原句： The festival falls on the ninth day of the ninth lunar month according to the Chinese lunar calendar.拓展句： The festival, which falls on the ninth day of the ninth lunar month according to the Chinese lunar calendar, is widely celebrated.【点睛】高分句型 1 In ancient times, people believed that the double ninth day was worth a celebration as "double ninth" is pronounced the same as the word “forever" which means a long lifb.（运用 了 that 弓I 导的宾语从 句和which引导的定语从句）高分句型2 Please let me know if you need further information.（运用了祈使句和if引导的状语从句）河南省实验中学2022-2023学年高三上学期第二次月考你校英文网站开辟了一个专栏：Campus Lifeo本期话题是关于“学习习惯的重要性请你以“Better LearningHabits Lead to Better Results”为题，用英语写篇短文投稿，内容包括：1 .谈谈两者之间的关系；.举例说明；2 .提出建议。注意:1.写作词数应为80左右；,请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Better Learning Habits Lead to Better Results【答案】【解析】【导语】这是一篇开放作文。要求考生举例说明好的学习习惯和好的学习结果之间的关系，并提出建议。【详解】1 .词汇积累困难的：toughdifficult 养成：develop>form 建议：advice一suggestion 放弃：quit一give up2.句型拓展简单句变复合句原句：Their speaking ability develops by reflecting on their performances.拓展句：It is by reflecting on their performances that their speaking ability develops.【点睛】高分句型 lThe fact is that it can be quite difficult to have a better outcome without better learning habits.（运用了 that引导的表语从句）高分句型 2Only in this way can we receive better results which meet our expectations.（运用了局部倒装和 which引导的定语从句）高分句型 3|Many people fail to achieve ideal results even though they have strong interests in what they learn.（运用了 even though引导的让步状语从句和what引导的宾语从句）甘肃省张掖市2022-2023学年高三上学期第一次诊断考试假定你是李华，你校九月份举办了“尊师重学”系列活动，请给你的英国笔友Peter写一封电子邮件，介绍相 关情况。内容包括：L活动目的;2.活动内容（如演讲比赛等）3.活动的收获和意义。注意：1.字数80左右；2.适当增加内容，以使行文连贯。Dear Peter,Yours,Li Hua【解析】【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生就学校九月份举办了“尊师重学”系列活动，给英国笔友Peter 写一封电子邮件，介绍相关情况。【详解】1 .词汇积累 举行：launch>hold参力口 ： participate in>take part in止匕夕卜：in addition>what,s more方法：ways一methods2 ,句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：In order to improve the learning spirit, our school launched a series of "respecting teachers and valuing education, activities in September.拓展句：Our school launched a series of "respecting teachers and valuing education, activities in September, whose aim is to improve the learning spirit.【点睛】高分句型 1 In order to improve the learning spirit, our school launched a series of "respecting teachers and valuing education" activities in September.（运用 了动词不定式作目的状语）高分句型 2| Getting close to our teachers and following their ways, we will study harder and get better.（运用 了 现在分词作状语）浙江省强基联盟2022-2023学年高三上学期10月联考假定你是李华，你将作为交换生前往新西兰学习三个月并寄宿在Wilson家。为了更好地融入住家，请给 Wilson写封邮件，内容包括：1 .自我介绍；.告知到达时间；2 .询问住家的兴趣爱好及其他信息。注意：1.词数80左右；.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【解析】【导语】这是一篇应用文。假定你是李华，你将作为交换生前往新西兰学习三个月并寄宿在Wilson家。为 了更好地融入住家，请给Wilson写封邮件介绍自己，告知到达时间以及他的兴趣爱好。【详解】1 .词汇积累.充满：be full of >be filled with1 .与某人相处：get along with sb一be on good terms with sb.2 .帮助：help assist.至！J 达：arrive>get2.简单句变复合句原句：I will arrive at noon on December 24th.扩展句：It is at noon on December 24th that I will arrive.点睛高分句型 1 By the way, I'd like to know your interests and hobbies, which can help me to know aboutyou and your family, （which引导的非限制性定语从句）【高分句型 2 If you have any requirements and expectations for me, you can tell me. （if 引导的条件状语从句）江苏省南京师范大学附属中学2022-2023学年高三上学期第一次月考假如你是李华，你校英语俱乐部将举办一次以“元宵节”为主题的英语沙龙（salon）.请给你校英国交换生George写封邮件，邀请他参加.内容包括：1 .沙龙的目的；.时间和地点；2 .活动安排.注意：1 .写作词数应为80左右；.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答.Dear George,Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国交换生George写封邮件，邀请他参加以“元宵节”为主 题的英语沙龙。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态主耍为一般现在时和一般将来时。结构：总分法总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。要求：1 .沙龙目的；.时间和地点；2 .活动安排。第二步:列提纲（重点词组）aimed at.; a better communication platform; hold a salon; with the theme of; a variety of ; range from; have a wonderful time; par