专题03家人与亲人-备战2022高考英语读后续写热点话题体裁分类训练(高考模拟名校真题).docx
备战2022高考英语读后续写热点话题+体裁分类训练(高考模拟+名校真题)专题03家人与亲人1 . (2021.全国.高考真题)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使 之构成一篇完整的短文。A MOTHER'S DAY SURPRISEThe twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother's Day. How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed. They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge. They had watched their mother in the kitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do.The big day came at last. The alarm rang at 6 a.m. The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen. They decided to boil the porridge first. They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast. Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk. Jenna found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture. Next, Jeff turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan. Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread. The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds. Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread. This time, she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely.Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake. The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly. But the stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jeff to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeff's hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain. Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught the smell of burning. Oh dear! The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well. 注意:1 .续写词数应为15。左右。2 .请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared.We'd had this conversation before. Still, I couldn't help but feel sorry for her. I was sick of having to stay at home too. Even though Micah and I were home together more than we had been in years, we might as well have been living in separate worlds. "Wanna watch TV later?n I asked. '*No, thanks.*' Micah shook her head.nIn a few weeks you'll be going to sports camp/ I added "That's something you can look forward to." I closed the door. I was used to Micah's rejection, but it still hurt. Teenage independence is heathy, but I worried if I didn't find a way to bond with my girl soon, I might never be close with her again. She*d be 18 in the fall and had already convinced herself she didn*t need me anymore. Maybe she was right. No matter what I did, I couldn*t seem to reach her.注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2 .请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。That evening, I was surfing online and saw a friend's children playing with their new cat.nThis is the one I want," she said, smiling.参考答案1. As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. Father's appearing was like a savior to the two children. Under the guidance of their father, they took positive actions and started all over again. They made the bread and then went on cooking porridge. Father helped them adjust the fire, which was the key to success. It was all right this time. Delicious breakfast was ready. How happy they were!The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. When their mother saw the delicious and perfect breakfast in front of her, she was very surprised. It was not only the gift, but the love of the children for her that moved her very much. The two children could finish cooking a breakfast, which she didn't expect. The children said loudly, “Happy Mother's Day!" Mother hugged them tightly and kissed them again and again.【分析】本文以母亲节为线索展开,讲述了双胞胎Jenna和Jeff为了献给母亲一份美味的早餐,自己 动手,做起饭餐来,但是不幸的是,他们连连失败,后来在父亲的帮助下,获得成功,他们 把早餐献给亲爱的母亲,妈妈非常感动的故事。【详解】.段落续写:由第一段首句内容“当双胞胎失望地环顾四周时,他们的父亲出现了。”可知,第一段可描 写他们的父亲指导帮助他们准备早餐。由第二段首句内容“这对双胞胎把早餐端到楼上,叫醒了他们的母亲。”可知,第二段可描 写母亲收到孩子们的礼物早餐,非常感动。1 .续写线索:帮助指导积极献礼感动.词汇激活 行为类帮助:help/assist.指导:guide/conduct .献礼:present a gift/give a gift情绪类积极:positive/positively/take positive actions.感动:moved/touched【点睛】高分句型 1. Father helped them adjust the fire, which was the key to success, (which 引导的非 限制性定语从句)高分句型 2. It was not only the breakfast, but the love of the children for her that moved her very much.(使用 not only.but (also)句型及强调句型)2. I hesitated, wondering if I should help my father. "Then we'H make one together,“ he told me. First, Dad cut leftover board into strips and nailed them in a circle on a wood base, showing me how to make the rough edges smooth. Then he sawed the base in half and attached hinges to one side so the "log" would swing open and shut. He gathered pieces of wallpaper, matching patterns as carefully. He painted the outside with shades of brown, and added a tiny path to the front door-made from real concrete.In all, it took us one month of hard work. But the log house was the greatest gift a child could ask for. Long after I gave up playing with dolls, I would still sometimes bring it down from the upper floor just to admire it and remember those months I watched Dad bring my dream to life. Dad has spent his life creating, mending and improving the most valued parts of mine. He's given me the greatest treasure a father can give.【分析】本文以人物为线索展开,作者讲述了父亲亲自动手为自己制作玩具屋,给了作者一个父亲所 能给予的东西。【详解】.段落续写:由第一段首句内容“我犹豫了一下,想知道我是否应该帮助我的父亲。”可知,第一段可描写 作者和父亲一起制作玩具屋的经过。由第二段首句内容“总共,我们花了一个月,努力工作。”可知,第二段可描写作者非常珍 惜玩具屋以及感受到的浓浓的父爱。1 .续写线索:一起制作玩具屋父亲精心制作珍爱玩具屋感受父爱.词汇激活 行为类 ,把系在:attach.to./tie.to .收集:gather/ collect sth. together匹配:match/go with情绪类.喜欢:admire【点睛】高分句型 1. First, Dad cut leftover board into strips and nailed them in a circle on a wood base, showing me how to make the rough edges smooth.(运用了现在分词作状语和“疑问词+不定式” 作宾语)高分句型 2. But the log house was the greatest gift a child could ask for.(运用 了 省略了关系词 的定语从句)高分右J型 3. Long after I gave up playing with dolls, I would still sometimes bring it down from the upper floor just to admire it and remember those months I watched Dad bring my dream to life.(运用了 after引导的状语从句,不定式作状语,省略了关系词的定语从句)3. One night, Alexa did not turn on the lamp when I gave the command. I tried to say “Turn on the light“ to it countless times, but Alexa didn't work. “New technologies are always unreliable.my husband complained. I searched the Internet and immediately found the reason why Alex couldn't work. I just needed to tell Alex to set the light color to white or whatever color I wanted, and then it would turn on the light. Then Alex turned on the light itself.We should thank our children and grandchildren. It was our children and grandchildren that taught us to use technology so that I could find a solution on the Internet by myself. Without them, our life is always invariable and boring. Our children and grandchildren "fbrce“ us to accept and use technology, which seems to put us under pressure. However, the fact is that our children and grandchildren let us really accept and use technology to make our life more convenient.【分析】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了作者的孩子们为自己和丈夫推荐了许多现代科技产品,作者 从很有压力变得喜欢上它们,有一种成就感,但是作者的丈夫不太喜欢。去年圣诞节,孩子 们给作者的智能手机安装了 Alexa程序,可以打开或者关闭灯。【详解】.段落续写:由第一段首句内容“一天晚上,当我发出命令时,Alexa没有开灯。”可知,第一段可描写 作者和丈夫对此的不同反应,作者用孩子们教会的技能想到办法解决问题。由第二段首句内容“我们应该感谢我们的子孙。”可知,第二段可描写作者感受到孩子们教 会的科技是有用处的,感谢孩子们。1 .续写线索:Alexa不工作丈夫抱怨作者想办法Alexa被修好感谢孩子们科技的用处2 .词汇激活行为类打开:turn on/switch on教:teach/instruct找到:find/seek out情绪类感谢:thank/appreciate压力:pressure/stress【点睛】【高分句型 1 I searched the Internet and immediately found the reason why Alex couldn't work. (由关系副词why引导限制性定语从句)【高分句型 2 jHowever, the fact is that our children and grandchildren let us really accept and use technology to make our life more convenient.(由连接词 that 引导表语从句). "For me?” I asked with a weak smile. She said nothing, nodding her head. I took the box and carefully opened it. There inside, lay a golden chain. An idea suddenly occurred to me一she had made it for her mother, who would never again hold her or brush her hair or share a funny story. We couldn't see any smile on her face after her mother passed away three weeks before. I stood there, not knowing how to comfort her well.I carefully held out the chain. She took it, putting it on at the back of my neck. She stepped back as if to see whether all was well. I looked down at the golden chain, then back at her, "Maria, it is so beautiful. She would have loved it." Neither of us could stop the tears. She threw herself into my arms, her eyes filled with tears. At that moment I became her mother, for she had given me the greatest gift of all: herself.【分析】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了 1961年的圣诞节,作者在一个小镇上教三年级。班上27 个学生都在热切地准备着这个互赠礼物的好日子。其中一个女孩在整个过程中,都无动于衷, 只是远远地看着。我想知道这个安静的孩子发生了什么事,我为她做了一个特别的包希望能 看到她的笑容,但是却没有什么用。在赠送礼物的日子,她向我走来,手里拿着一个白色的 盒子,什么也没说。【详解】1 .段落续写:由第一段首句内容“给我的?我微微一笑。”可知,第一段可描写作者在接受女孩赠送的 “金色链子”礼物之后,接下来女孩的行为举动。由第二段首句内容“我小心地把链子递给他。”可知,第二段可描写作者把金链子再次还 给女孩后,女孩接下来的行为举动。2,续写线索:接受礼物打开看到礼物女孩的行为再次返还礼物女孩的行为 作者的感悟3 .词汇激活行为类突然意识到:occur to sb./ suddenly realize伸出:held out/reach out/stretch out充满着:filled with/full of情绪类.喜欢:loved it/be fond ofVlike .安慰,缓解:comfort/relieve【点睛】高分句型 1. she had made it for her mother, who would never again hold her or brush her hair or share a funny story.(运用了 who引导的非限制性定语从句,her mother在从句中作主语。) 高分句型2. She took it, putting it on at the back of my neck.(运用了非谓语动词中现在分词 作伴随状语。)高分句型 3.At that moment I became her mother, for she had given me the greatest gift of all: herself.(运用了 for引导的原因状语从句。)5 . Then, one day, her cell phone suddenly rang out, showing an African number. Sarah's heart missed a beat, and she quickly found a quiet corner to answer the call. The caller identified himself as Kposowa Halily, her birth father, and in between sobs, begged Sarah to forgive him for giving her up for adoption. He explained that he was called back to take over the tribe and there was no way he could take Sarah and her mum along. He told Sarah he had handed over the tribe affairs to his brother and was running a school for children orphaned by the war. He invited Sarah to come over and visit.Sarah talked it over with her American parents, who encouraged her to go and find her roots. That December, after a 20-hour flight, Sarah landed at a tiny airport near Freetown, SierraLeone capital. The man coming to pick her up in an old Toyota was a far cry from the royalfigure she had imagined. But one glance at the loving, wrinkled face melted years of bitternessand sent her flying into the open arms of her long-lost father. Sarah never regretted going backto Africa, where she found her roots and her mission to help the homeless kids in her fathermud-hut school.【分析】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了主人公Sarah被美国养父母收养长大后,努力寻找非洲亲生 父亲的故事。【详解】.段落续写:由第一段首句内容“然后有一天,她的手机突然响了起来,显示了一个非洲人的电话号码。” 可知,第一段可描写Sarah接到亲生父亲的电话,父亲解释放弃她的原因,以及父亲想要见 她的愿望。由第二段首句内容“Sarah和她的美国父母讨论了此事,他们鼓励她去寻找自己的根。”可知, 第二段可描写Sarah去非洲会见亲生父亲的经过以及最后父女团圆的结局。1 .续写线索:接到电话父亲解释原因邀请见父亲接受父亲与父亲一 起开办学校.词汇激活 行为类 .请求原谅:beg sb. to forgive/ask for forgiveness.管理:run/manage /take charge of .接某人:pick sb. up/meet sb.情绪类.哭泣:sob/cry/weep痛苦:bitterness/misery/suffering【点睛】高分句型 1. He explained that he was called back to take over the tribe and there was no way he could take Sarah and her mum along.(运用了 that引导宾语从句,不定式作目的状语,省略 了关系词的定语从句)高分句型 2, The man coming to pick her up in an old Toyota was a far cry from the royalfigure she had imagined.(现在分词作定语,省略了关系代词的定语从句)Para 1:He must have woken twemy times in the night, looking at his watch for a proper time to start. It was at a quarter to three when he got up and went out, careful of an occasional sound. The cows in the stable looked at him, sleepy and surprised. It was early for them, too, but they accepted him calmly for milking. He had never milked before, but it seemed easy for him, with the cows behaving well. Eventually the task, a special gift for father, went more easily than supposed, and with two full milk cans, he left the stable silently and went back to his bedroom.Para 2:He went back in his bedroom with only one minute to jump into bed before hearing his father get up. He covered his head to silence his breath of excitement. His father came in, "Rob! We have to get up and get everything started.” "All right.he replied sleepily. Yet he lay still, his dancing heart beating violently out from his body when the door opened again. His father came in with a crying laugh, pulling away his cover, "you thought you'd fool me, did you?” "It's fbr Christmas, Dad!, He happily replied. Dark as it was outside, he could feel two great arms around him, a hug to recognize his growth.【分析】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了父亲总是不忍心叫Rob起得很早跟自己去挤奶,这也让Rob 认识到了父亲对自己的爱,于是Rob在圣诞节这天起得很早,去把所有的挤奶工作都做完 了,以此作为给父亲的特别礼物。【详解】.段落续写:由第一段首句内容“他夜里肯定醒了 20次,看了看表,想要准时开始。”可知,第一段可 描写Rob早起去挤奶的经过。由第二段首句内容“他回到卧室,在听到父亲起床之前,他只有一分钟的时间跳上床。” 可知,第二段可描写父亲发现Rob的所作所为之后的感受和做法,以及Rob的感悟.续写线索:Rob早起Rob挤奶Rob回到卧室父亲来叫Rob父亲发现了 Rob 完成了挤奶工作Rob感悟1 .词汇激活 行为类离开:leave/g。away2 回去:go back to/return回答:reply/respond情绪类惊讶的:surprised/amazed高兴地:happily/joyfully【点睛】高分句型 1 He had never milked before, but it seemed easy for him, with the cows behaving well.(运用了 with的复合结构)高分句型 2 Yet he lay still, his dancing heart beating violently out from his body when the door opened again.(运用了 when引导时间状语从句)Para 1:A months ago, Uncle Ed came nd with a good idea and bought a robotic dog for Grandma A*鹿es. It has soft fur and barks when it senses motion nearby. Grandma quickly adopted the dog as her new Snoopy. Her condition has led her to believe that he is an animal and not a robot. She got used to Snoopy's barks and regarded them as requests for food or a nap. The food disappearing every night helped convince Grandma that Snoopy was a real dog. We found from the camera that the neighbor cat climbed over the fence and ate all the dog food.Para 2:Everyone in our family is pleased that Grandma has been s。kind to Snoopy. She would pet him gently and carefully prepare food and water for him. Once, when the dog didn*t move, eat and bark, she anxiously phoned Uncle Ed. She was afraid Snoopy was ill. Uncle Ed found he just needed changing battery. Our family is grateful that the robotic dog has brought Grandma Agnes companionship and someone to love. It's beautiful that her love of dogs can continue through this time in her life.【分析】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了艾格尼丝奶奶已经99岁了,还住在已经住了 60多年的那所 房子里,奶奶很喜欢她养的狗史努比,但是三年前史努比去世了,于是艾德叔叔给她买了一 只机器狗,奶奶和这只机器狗相处很愉快。作者的家人很感激这只机器狗给艾格尼丝奶奶带 来了陪伴和爱。【详解】1.段落续写:由第一段首句内容“几个月前,艾德叔叔想出了一个好主意,给艾格尼丝奶奶买了一只机 器狗。”可知,第一段可描写艾格尼丝奶奶和机器狗的相处经过。由第二段首句内容“我们家的每个人都很高兴艾格尼丝奶奶对史努比这么好。”可知,第二 段可描写艾格尼丝奶奶如何照顾机器狗以及作者一家对机器狗的看法。2,续写线索:买机器狗奶奶相信机器狗是真狗奶奶照顾机器狗家人感激机器狗 带来的陪伴3 .词汇激活行为类提出:come up with/put forward购买:buy/purchase习惯于:get used to / get accustomed to情绪类真实:real /true/actual高兴:pleased /glad【点睛】高分句型 1 It has soft fur and barks when it senses motion nearby.(运用 了 when 引导时间状语 从句)高分句型 2 Our family is grateful that th