书面表达系列讲练议论文.ppt
书面表达系列讲练书面表达系列讲练议论文议论文v书面表达（满分书面表达（满分30分）分）v某天，你班贴出了一张通知，请根据通知、内容要点和要求写一篇英文发言某天，你班贴出了一张通知，请根据通知、内容要点和要求写一篇英文发言稿。稿。v内容要点：内容要点：1、你对、你对“周五读报活动周五读报活动”的看法；的看法；v 2、陈述你的理由（可举例说明）；、陈述你的理由（可举例说明）；3、你的具体建议。、你的具体建议。v 要求：要求：1、短文须写在答题卡的指定区域；、短文须写在答题卡的指定区域；v 2、短文词数不少于、短文词数不少于80（不含已写好的部分）；（不含已写好的部分）；v 3、内容充实，结构完整，语意连贯；、内容充实，结构完整，语意连贯；v 4、书写须清晰、工整。、书写须清晰、工整。v Dear fellow students,v Our monitor suggests that we have“Friday New Hour”.I think that_ _ anDear fellow students,Dear fellow students,Our monitor suggests that we have“Friday Our monitor suggests that we have“Friday New Hour”.New Hour”.I think that it is a good idea.I think that it is a good idea.v Everyone knows that we are busy all day.Everyone knows that we are busy all day.Seldom do we know what is happening both at Seldom do we know what is happening both at home and abroad,let alone what we can do for home and abroad,let alone what we can do for our our country.Bycountry.By reading newspapers we can get reading newspapers we can get more information about the outside world.So I more information about the outside world.So I think“Friday New Hour”can broaden our think“Friday New Hour”can broaden our mind and enrich our school life.Whats more,mind and enrich our school life.Whats more,it will help us improve our reading skills.it will help us improve our reading skills.v As for my suggestion,I think its better to As for my suggestion,I think its better to have it twice a week.And we should make a have it twice a week.And we should make a choice about what well read.I am sure choice about what well read.I am sure everyone will benefit a lot from this activityeveryone will benefit a lot from this activity步骤步骤Dear fellow students,Our monitor suggests that we have“Friday New Hour”.I think that it is a good ideaParagraph 1.你对周五读报的看法vParagraph 2.陈述你的理由（可举例说明）陈述你的理由（可举例说明）v Everyone knows that we are busy all day.Seldom do we know what is happening both at home and abroad,let alone what we can do for our country.So I think“Friday New Hour”can broaden our mind and enrich our school life.Whats more,it will help us improve our reading skills.v vParagraph 3.你的具体建议。你的具体建议。v As for my suggestion,I think its better to have it twice a week.And we should make a choice about what well read.I am sure everyone will benefit a lot from this activity.给阅卷人以好的第一直观印象给阅卷人以好的第一直观印象整整体体三三部部分分1.Heading（论点）（论点）点题；一两个句子；概括性；暗示性2.Body（论据)中心记述部分；层次分明3.Ending(再现论点）小结；呼应主题）范文v书面表达如何写？书面表达如何写？1、审题、审题文字信息文字信息图画信息图画信息题材、人称、时态、要点题材、人称、时态、要点2、以词及点：用一两个单词或短语写出每句、以词及点：用一两个单词或短语写出每句 话的细节要点。话的细节要点。3、联词成句：用联词成句的方法将上述要点、联词成句：用联词成句的方法将上述要点 的词语扩展成句子。的词语扩展成句子。4 联句成文：联句成文：主语和谓语主语和谓语背景（适当增加时间、地点条件等）背景（适当增加时间、地点条件等）逻辑关系逻辑关系开头与结尾开头与结尾语篇衔接语篇衔接5、检查修改，规范抄写、检查修改，规范抄写五个步骤 技技 巧巧1.使用较高级的词汇使用较高级的词汇3.使用恰当的连接词使用恰当的连接词词汇反映你知识贮存量的词汇反映你知识贮存量的多少，也是衡量英语水平多少，也是衡量英语水平的一个重要标志。的一个重要标志。运用得当的句子结构可以运用得当的句子结构可以给文章增色不少，从而使给文章增色不少，从而使整篇文章因此而生辉整篇文章因此而生辉 。使用恰当连接词，对写一使用恰当连接词，对写一篇有篇有“英语味英语味”的文章很的文章很重要，能使文章上下衔接重要，能使文章上下衔接自然、紧凑。自然、紧凑。增强书面表达效果的技巧增强书面表达效果的技巧2.使用较丰富的句式使用较丰富的句式vPractice 书面表达书面表达（满分（满分30分）分）v高三年级是高中生活的最后一年，在这一年中，学生们高三年级是高中生活的最后一年，在这一年中，学生们面临着沉重的升学压力。因此，很多学生课间也坐在教面临着沉重的升学压力。因此，很多学生课间也坐在教室里用功，但学习效率和成绩并不理想。由此你想告诉室里用功，但学习效率和成绩并不理想。由此你想告诉他们：适当的休息很有必要。他们：适当的休息很有必要。v现在就请你以现在就请你以“A Ten-minute Break”为题，按下列要为题，按下列要点写一篇短文，让这些同学从中有所启发。短文的要点点写一篇短文，让这些同学从中有所启发。短文的要点如下：如下：v1十分钟的课间休息很有必要；十分钟的课间休息很有必要；v2要注意适当的休息方式；要注意适当的休息方式；3你是怎样利用这十分钟的。你是怎样利用这十分钟的。v 注意：注意：开头已经给出，不计入总词数；开头已经给出，不计入总词数；词词数数100左右。左右。提纲提纲范文范文v A Ten-minute Breakv As a Senior Three student,time seems much limited._Para.1.it is necessary to take a ten-minute break between classes.（必要的原因，从正反（必要的原因，从正反面论述）面论述）.审题：确定体裁审题：确定体裁，时态，时态.列要点，提纲列要点，提纲Para.2.During the ten-minute break,we do something to get rid of tiredness（从正反面论（从正反面论述）述）Para3.do some simple exercise or have a chat with classmates,or take a walk outside.（课间休息的方式）课间休息的方式）Group work Task 1 vTask 2 根据下列提示点，找出要用到的根据下列提示点，找出要用到的词汇，短词汇，短语，句型语，句型1.众所周知众所周知（我们有太多的考试和作业，我们有太多的考试和作业，使得使得我们我们尽量尽量充分利用充分利用时间）时间）课间十分钟非常必要。课间十分钟非常必要。否则否则，.2.课间十分钟，我们会做些课间十分钟，我们会做些消除消除疲劳的事，不要做使我疲劳的事，不要做使我们更疲劳的事。们更疲劳的事。3.课间十分钟，我是如何做的。课间十分钟，我是如何做的。题目v.v 要用到的词汇，短语，句型要用到的词汇，短语，句型v1.We all know that It is well-know to all thatvAs is known to all,v2.说明理由及结果时常用：说明理由及结果时常用：vAs a result of that,because of,in consequence,as a matter of fact,therefore,thus,otherwise.v3.表示对照的过渡词表示对照的过渡词：vBut,still,yet,however,on the other hand,on the contrary,in spite of,even though,whilev4.陈述个人观点、想法及做法的常用句型陈述个人观点、想法及做法的常用句型vPersonally.I prefer,For me,I would rather,as regards me,I tend to do,My own experience tells me that,As far as I am concerned,I often 返回返回v A Ten-minute Breakv As a Senior Three student,time seems much limited It is known to all that we have a lot of tests and exercises.As a result,more and more students try to study from early morning till late afternoon,even during the ten-minute break In my opinion,it is necessary to take a ten-minute break between classes Otherwise we will feel tired both physically and mentally v During the ten-minute break,we do something to get rid of tiredness What we need is to have a real rest,instead of getting more tired So doing nothing tiring in that period is really good for us v My ten-minute break is always pleasing Sometimes I do some simple exercise Sometimes I have a free chat with my classmates or just take a walk outside When the next class begins,I feel fresh again
