2023年新高考英语作文读后续写高分万能句 03 话题分类家人朋友亲情与友情（人与社会）.docx

专题03话题分类十家大、用友、亲情与友情（人与社会）目录：1 .精选名校最新2022年12月2023年1月名校联考、模拟试题.读后续写话题分类背诵模板2 .读后续写话题分类写作步骤.读后续写话题分类写作热词3 .读后续写话题分类高分佳句1. （2022年山西省太原十二中模拟） 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文I was eight the first time I played checkers. Tve played about a thousand games since then, but none was so memorable as that first one.It was icy January in Kansas. When the snowstorm hit, cutting off our power, we were thrown into darkness though it was still around noon. No heat, no light. The winter became terrible for everyone-especially for me and my six year old brother.Methodically Grandpa gathered up his winter coat, scarf and gloves, and disappeared into snow. Several minutes later, he returned, carrying much wood. Glancing casually at my brother and me, he said, 4lCome on boys. Time to build a fire. ”But the fire wasn't enough to sustain the attention of two young boys. "Maybe,“ Grandpa remarked, carefully considering the situation. llwe could do something I used to do as a boy. Let's go camping.''My brothers and I looked at each other in amazement.“Get your sleeping bags, pillows and stuffed animals, and meet me back here.”1（ took us only minutes to gather our sleeping gear. When we returned Grandpa had rearranged the furniture, clearing an open space in front of the fire, in short order, we had a fine campground.“Now then” Grandpa began, unfolding a strange looking game board, "who's up fbr a little game of chcckcrs? “What arc checkers?” my brother and I asked.“Never played, eh? Well. it's time you boys learned,Grandpa said.For the next hour or so. Grandpa coached us on the fine art of playing checkers. 1 became a fair player after losing four games in a row. Then I defeated Grandpa. When I asked him if hel let me win, he merely winked （眨 眼 and set the board up for the next game Afterward. Grandpa used his old guitar to sing us some campfire songs to which we sing along.Then suddenly, the power came back on. Mom and Dad gave a cheer, but fbr my brother and me, it was the end of a grand adventure. This wasn't how we wanted the night to end.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如卜.格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。She looked up questioningly. u0h, Mom. We are going on a trip to Egypt. Remember how you used to tell me bed-time tales of the ancient Egypt? Let's visit it fbr real this time. I know you are a little picky. I have taken care to get good accommodations in Cairo and.” Aamer went on and on talking while his mother smiled with a sense of happiness filling her heart.【导语】本文以时间为线索展开，扎希达的丈夫因心脏病去世已有5年了，她每天日复一日地生活，和儿 子阿尔默的交流沟通也很让人难受，有一天阿尔默订购了两张和妈妈一起去埃及的机票，并细心地挑选了 住宿，这让扎希达感到很开心和幸福“第一步：段落续写：由第一段首句内容“几天后，一位邮递员在阿尔默外出工作时按响了门铃。”可知，第一段可描写阿尔默 在回到家后看到了信封。由第二段首句内容妈妈，这里看看我的信封里有什么！阿尔默像个孩子一样高兴地喊道。”可知, 第二段可描写信封中有去埃及的机票，阿尔默和妈妈起去了埃及，母亲心里充满了幸福感。第二步：续写线索：接收邮件放在桌上回家查看母亲查看兴奋幸福第三步：词汇激活【行为类】.伤害：harm/damage.回来：retum/go back.看见：spot/catch sight of【情绪类】.怀疑地：questioningly/skeptically.快乐：happiness/pleasure【点睛】高分句型 1 Not trusting her fingers to tear open the envelope without harming the contents within and considering it as important, she placed it on the table.（运用 了现在分词作状语）高分句型 2J Grabbing it swiftly, he began tearing it open, his eyes shining with excitement.（运用 了现在分词作 状语和独立主格结构）6.（2023年河北保定高三统考期末）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。One warm, sunny morning, Marsha jumped right out of bed.Today was the first day of summer vacation and also the last day she'd be spending with Tanya, her very best friend. Tanya was going to camp in another state. She'd be gone all summer. Marsha and Tanya always spent their summers together. This one would be no fun without her!Marsha's mom came in."What's the matter, Rabbit? she said.“1 miss Tanya already. Isn't that silly?” Marsha said."No,"her mother said softly/'Missing a best friend isn't silly at all. " Marsha's eyes were wet.“1 know how you feel.,4tYou do?,askcd Marsha. Marsha's mom nodded.“I had a best fHend when i was your age. And she went away to camp, too.，ui felt pretty sad,“ Marsha's mom said. "I wanted my best friend to think about me. So I gave her something.”“What?”asked Marsha.441 gave her my best necklace,her mom said.“You did?,asked Marsha.uWell,I wanted her to have it,“ Marsha's mom said,“Maybe you could give Tanya one of your favorite things to take to camp. How about a doll? Then she will never forget that you are her best friend.''Marsha wiped her eyes."Mom, that's a great idea!” she said.“Are you going to give Tanya your Glenda Glitter doll? said Marsha's mom."Yes, Mom,"she said.”This is the one I want her to have. But now I'm going to get Glenda all nice and clean. v Soon, Glenda Glitter looked just like new.Next it was time to dress the doll. Marsha ran to her room. In a flash she was back. Her hands were full of doll's dresses. "This is the one I like best J she said."And I know Tanya likes it best, too.”“Let's see.I think I can fix this little rip（口 子）Marsha's mom was good at fixing things. The doll dress soon looked good as new.“Look, Mom!”she said. uGlcnda looks bcautiful.“You know, Killen,“said Marsha's mom, “Tanya will like this present so much.,t4Tanya will be leaving soon,“she said.Wc better hurry up.''Marsha and her mom walked over to Tanya's house. They rang the bell. 注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Marsha hid the doll behind her back.Tanya and Marsha pul their presents in each other's hands.【答案】Paragraph 1: Marsha hid the doll behind her back. Marsha and her mom went inside. They said hello to Tanya and her mom. "We're still packing,“ Tanya's mom said. Marsha went over to Tanya. "I have something fbr you,” said Marsha. "Wait!” Tanya said , " I have something fbr you, too." She turned and ran out of the room. Tanya was back in a flash. She was holding something behind her back. Marsha still had her hands behind her, too. “OK," said Tanya, uon the count of three, hands in front." “1, 2, 3 "Marsha said.Paragraph 2: Tanya and Marsha put their presents in each other s hands. uBut thafs your 伉 vourile!” both girls yelled with excitement at once. "My mom said that this doll would help you think of me at camp,“ Marsha said to Tanya. "My mom said this necklace would help you think of me,“ Tanya said to Marsha. The girls looked at each other. They looked at their moms. Marsha's mom smiled. "Remember the necklace that I gave my best Giend?” she asked. "Well, that best friend was” "Me!" said Tanya's mom h叩pily. "And this is still my favorite necklace!,【导语】本文以故事发展为线索展开，玛莎的好朋友塔尼亚要去另外一个州露营，整个暑假都不会再见到 她，玛莎很失落，玛莎的妈妈建议玛莎送个礼物给塔尼亚，玛莎想到把自己最喜欢的洋娃娃送个塔尼亚， 准备好以后，玛莎和妈妈来的塔尼亚的家。塔尼亚表示她也要送给玛莎一个礼物，结果她们送出的都是自 己最喜欢的东西。第一步：段落续写：由第一段首句内容“玛莎把洋娃娃藏在背后。”可知，第一段可描写玛莎和妈妈来到塔尼亚的家后表示要 送给塔尼亚礼物，同时，塔尼亚也要送给玛莎礼物。由第二段首句内容“塔尼亚和玛莎把礼物放在对方手中。”可知，第二段可描写她们看到礼物后发现她们 都把自己最喜欢的东西送给对方了。第二步：续写线索：塔尼亚要离开准备送塔尼亚礼物来到塔尼亚的家塔尼亚也要送给玛莎礼物拿出礼物都送出了自己最喜欢的东西第三步：词汇激活【行为类】和某人打招呼：say hello to somebody/greet somebody跑出去：run out/rush out返回：be back/return【情绪类】激动地：with excitement/excitedly高兴地：happily/merrily【点睛】高分句型 1 My mom said （hat （his doll would help you think of me at camp.（由连接词（hal 引导的宾语从句 作said的宾语）高分句型2 Remember the necklace that I gave my best friend?（由关系代词that引导的限制性定语从句）（2023年湖南怀化，高三统考期末）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。I liked sitting with my dad in his study every night when I was young after he came home from the office. I'd watch as he put his personal items away: his watch, wallet, comb and car keys would always occupy the same spot on （he table every time. It was as if he could see invisible lines drawn specifically fbr these things, not a centimeter more or less.What impressed me was Dad's comb which was jade green. I heard he bought it when he married Mum, which made the comb two years older than I was. Every night, he would smile, hand me the comb and say, “Be a good girl and help Daddy clean it, OK?”This task brought me such joy at the age of five. I would excitedly turn the tap on, and then brush the comb with a used toothbrush as hard as I could. Satisfied that I'd done a good job, I would proudly return the comb to Dad. He would smile at me and place the comb on top of his wallet.Two years later, Dad left his sales job and started his own wholesale business. I started primary school. That was when things started to change. Dad's business wasn't doing so well, and our stable life started getting shaky. He didn't come home as much as he used to just a couple of times a week. And when he did come home, it was always late and I'd already be in bed. I started to get mad. Why didn't he listen to Mum and just stick to his old job? Why took the risk and placed the whole family in trouble? Over the years, I stopped waiting for him to come home, and stopped going downstairs to check on him. Today, Tm no longer a kid.Now I have grown up. Tvc graduated from college and got a job. Dad's business has also started to get back on track. Things are better now. Yet the uncomfortable silence between Dad and me persisted. Two days before my birthday last year, Dad came home early. As usual, I helped him carry his bags into his study. When I turned to leave, he said, “Hey, would you like to help me clean my comb? ” 注意：L续写词数应为15()左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Paragraph 1:Looking at him a while, I took the comb and headed to the sink.Paragraph 2:/ handed the clean comb back to Dad.【答案】Looking at him a while, I took the comb and headed to the sink. I was very surprised that my father still remembered it after these years. Suddenly scenes from my childhood came back lo me, which made my eyes misted. I turned the tap on, and then brushed the comb with a used toothbrush just like what I had done in my childhood. As I washed the comb, I couldn't help recalling those happy days that I spent with lather. After a while, the comb was pretty clean.I handed the clean comb back to Dad. He looked at it and smiled. But this time, I noticed something different. My dad has aged. He has wrinkles next to his eyes, yet his smile is still as heartwarming as beforethe smile of a father who just wants a good life for his family. Dad carefully placed his comb on top of his wallet. After so manyyears, I guess some things never change. And for that, Im glad.【导语】本文以洗梳子为线索展开，讲述了作者小时候每天晚上帮父亲洗梳子，两人的感情也越来越深厚。 后来，随着父亲回家次数的减少，作者洗梳子的次数也越来越少，当作者成年后，对父亲仍然心怀芥蒂。 直到两年前作考生R的时候，两人又因洗梳子重归于好。第一步：段落续写：由第一段首句内容“看了他一回儿，我拿起梳子，走向水槽”可知，第一段可描写作者洗梳子的过程及心 理活动。由第二段首句内容“我把洗干净的梳子交给父亲“可知，第二段可描写父亲看到梳子后的反应及作者打开 心结，理解了父亲。第二步：续写线索：洗梳子惊讶回忆还梳子父亲的微笑理解第三步：词汇激活【行为类】记得：remember/keep sth in mind/bear sth in mind打开：turn on/switch on回忆：recall/reminisce/recollect【情绪类】惊讶：be surpriscd/be amazed【点睛】【高分句型1】高兴：be glad/be cheerful/be delightedSuddenly scenes from my childhood came back to me, which made my eyes misted.（运用 了which引导的非限制性定语从句）【高分句型2】 As i washed the comb, I couldn't help recalling those happy days that I spent with fhther.（运用 了 as引导的时间状语从句及that引导的定语从句）7. （2023年全国高三一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Some years before, when we moved to town, Mother had decided to start a day nursery. She had no training, but that didn't stand in her way. Through correspondence courses（函授课程）in child care, she qualified herself for the task. Soon she had a full enrollmenl（招生）and a waiting list. But neither （he nursery nor the motel my parents bought later had provided enough income to send my sister and me to college.A few months after we had sold the motel, Mother an ived home with a used typewriter. From that day on, as soon as the table was cleared and the dishes were done, Mother would disappear into her sewing room to practice. The slow tap, tap, tap went on some nights until midnight.It was nearly Christinas when 1 heard Mother got a job at the radio station. I was not the least bit surprised, or impressed. But she was extremely happy.Monday, after her first day at work, I could see that the excitemem was gone. Mother looked （ired and upset.I responded by ignoring her.Sitting beside her on the couch, I began very slowly to understand. I could sense her pain and the tension of holding back the strong emotions that were interrupted by my arrival. Suddenly, something inside me turned. I reached out and put my arms around her. She broke then. She put her face against my shoulder and sobbed. I understood for the first time her vulnerability（脆弱）.A week later Mother took a new job selling dry goods at half the salary the radio station had offered. "It's a job I can do,“ she said simply. But the evening practice sessions on the old green typewriter continued. I had a very different feeling now when I passed her door at night and heard her tapping away. I knew there was something more going on in there than a woman learning to type. 注意：1 .续写词数应为150左右.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Two years later, I left for college and Mother decided to quit her old job.The old green typewriter sits in my office now. unrepaired.【答案】Two years left for college and Moiher decided lo quil her old iob. Mother had an ofllce job with better pay and more responsibility. I have to believe that in some strange way she learned as much from her moment of defeat as I did, because several years later, when I had finished college and proudly accepted a job as a newspaper reporter, she had already been a journalist with our hometown paper for six months. One day when I asked her to give me the old typewriter, she agreed, but told me not to have it fixed.The old green lypewriter sits in my office now, unrepaired. It is a souvenir, but what it recalls for me is not quite what it recalled for Mother. When I'm having trouble with a story and think about giving up or when I start to feel sorry for myself and think things should be easier for me, I roll a piece of paper into that cranky old machine and type, word by painful word, just the way mother did. What I remember then is not her failure, but her courage, the courage to go ahead, it's the best souvenir anyone ever gave me.【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者一家人搬到一个小镇，母亲决定开一所托儿所，于是开始接 受培训，并有资质开了一个托儿所，但是为了给作者和妹妹提供足够上大学的钱，母亲决定换一个工作， 于是买了一个二手的打字机，每天练习打字。随后母亲在广播电视台找到了一份工作，但是母亲感觉很疲 累，很痛苦，觉得自己不能胜任这份工作。接着母亲换了一份卖干货的新工作，但是母亲每天仍然练习打 字，以便以后能胜任更好的工作的故事。第一步：段落续写：由第一段首句内容“两年后，我离开家去上大学，母亲决定辞去以前的工作''可知，第一段可描写作者的 母亲找到了一份很好的工作，并在自己的岗位上学到很多，而作者也像母亲一样找到了一份好工作。由第二段首句内容“那台旧的绿色打字机现在放在我的办公室里，没有修理”可知，第二段可描写作者把 打印机放在办公室作为纪念品，不断激励自己，就像母亲一样，要勇往直前。第二步：续写线索：母亲辞去工作母亲找到工作母亲学到很多作者找到工作将打字机放在办公室当做 纪念品一决定向母亲一样勇往直前第三步：词汇激活【行为类】考虑：think about/consider前行：go ahead /move ahead同意：agree/approve【情绪类】痛苦的：painful/miserable抱歉的：sorry/pitiful【点睛】高分句型 1. I have to believe that in some strange way she learned as much from her moment of defeat as I did, because several years later, when I had finished college and proudly accepted a job as a newspaper reporter, she had already been a journalist with our hometown paper for six momhs.（由 that 弓卜导的宾语从句，because 弓卜导的 原因状语从句）高分句型 2. It is a souvenir, but what it recalls for me is not