中考英语复习初中英语书面表达写作技巧指导复习ppt课件.ppt

中考英语书面表达写作训练brainstormMy FatherAgePersonalityApperancesJobHobbies (2013山东聊城中考)在父亲节（6月16日）来临之际，请你根据下表提供的信息，写一篇以“My Father”为题的英语作文，介绍其大体情况，并谈谈你对“父亲”的评价。年龄年龄40岁岁外貌外貌又高又胖，短头发，大眼睛又高又胖，短头发，大眼睛职业职业数学教师（工作努力，上课活泼数学教师（工作努力，上课活泼生动，深受学生喜爱）生动，深受学生喜爱）性格性格诚实，善良诚实，善良爱好爱好打乒乓球打乒乓球【注意】1.字数：80左右。2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。认真认真审题审题，找出文章要表达的中心。找出文章要表达的中心。写作第一步审1.父父亲的年的年龄、外貌、外貌、职业、性格及、性格及爱好好2.对父父亲的的评价价用简单的句子或短语用简单的句子或短语列出列出文章要点。文章要点。列列写作第二步1.My father is2.He likes3.lively,is loved by加加加首尾加首尾，使结构完整。可以采取总分总结构或者总分结构，开头或结尾的句子应注意简洁，漂亮。写作第三步：连连恰当运用关联词句，使得文章层次清晰，各个部分衔接自然。写作第四步：1.and,or,but,so,because,if,unless,though,first,firstly,second,secondly,then,also等等。等等。2.eitheror,neithernor,not onlybut(also),bothand等等3.on the one hand on the other hand,in the end,all in all,in fact 等等等等美美选好词句，美化美化文章。在有把握的情况下展示自己的语言功底。写作第五步：书面表达写作技巧审列列加加连连美美1.书写美写美观、大方、清楚；、大方、清楚；2.时态、人称、大小写及、人称、大小写及标点运用准确无点运用准确无误；3.句子句子连贯完整，恰当使用完整，恰当使用连接接词；4.能能够部分或少量使用复合句。部分或少量使用复合句。Myfatherisa40-year-oldmathteacher.Heistallandfatwithshorthairandbigeyes.Healwaysworkshard.Hisclassislivelyandinterestingandisdeeplylovedbyhisstudents.Myfatherisanhonestandkindman.Heoftenhelpsotherchildrenandmewithourmath.Myfathershobbyisplayingtabletennis.Weoftenplaytabletennistogetheratweekends.Myfatherisnotonlythesweetestoneintheworldbutalsothegreatestone.Ihavelearnedalotfromhim.Ilovemyfatherverymuch.健康很重要。在学习和工作的压力日趋增大的今天，会休息的人才会有健康的身体。人们是如何度过假期的呢？国际健康组织对此作了一次调查，右图是他们此次的调查结果。根据你所得的信息，请为国际健康组织写一篇完整的调查报告,并提倡大家进行假日休闲。审审travelstay at homevisit friends or parentswork 根据以下关键词及图表用简单的根据以下关键词及图表用简单的英语句子英语句子列出文章的要点列出文章的要点如何度假如何度假调查报告调查报告倡议假日休闲倡议假日休闲stay at homeworkvisit friends or parentstravel How do people spend their vacation?Here is a survey report.A lot of people travel.Some people stay at home.Some other people visit friends or parents.A few people work.Enjoy your vacation.列列How do people spend their vacation?We made a survey and here is our survey report.A lot of people travel.Some people stay at home.They watch TV or surf the Internet.Some other people visit friends or parents.A few people work.Come and enjoy your vacation.The people who relax will work well.How do people spend their vacation?We made a survey and here is our survey report.According to it,most people travel.And some people stay at home.Also some other people visit friends or parents.However,a few people work.Come and enjoy your vacation.People who relax will work well.连连We interviewed people about the ways to spend the vacation and here is our survey report.According to it,most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays.Then some people like to stay at home,watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest.And to visit friends or parents also makes them relaxed.However,a few people have to work.Come and enjoy your vacation.People who relax will work well.美美1.书写美写美观、大方、清楚；、大方、清楚；2.时态、人称、大小写及、人称、大小写及标点运用准确无点运用准确无误；3.句子句子连贯完整，恰当使用完整，恰当使用连接接词；4.能能够部分或少量使用复合句。部分或少量使用复合句。以以“I have a dream”为题写一篇不少于为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，个词的短文，标点符号不占格。标点符号不占格。Sentence patterns for reference(以下句型以下句型供参考）供参考）My dream is to be/to do/to goI enjoy/like/preferTo make my dream come true,I If my dream comes trueHomework I have a dreamAnybody has a dream.But different people have different dreams.Most people always dream to be popular or rich.But my dream is very special,I just want to be a bird.Why do I have such a dream?Just because I admire theyre free,they can do everything they want.When theyre flying in the sky,they look beautiful,even theyre the most beautiful animals.I really want to enjoy the feeling of flying in the sky.However,I know it wont be achieved any more.Its just a dream,in my heart.PassageOnePassageTwo I have a dreamMy dream is to be a basketball player.I like it because I think it very interesting.It can make me become very happy and healthy.To make me dream come true.I need try to do it.And I need to spend some time on it.I need to practice every day.If my dream comes true,I will try to do it.All of us have holidays in our daily life,but how do people spend their holiday?We did a survey and here are the results.from Tian WenhuiIts nothing better than having a rest after working!So how do people rest themselves on vacation?According to our survey,there are several ways.from Luo ZhiminAll in all,different people have different ways to relax themselves.But I suggest that we should enjoy the holiday,then we may work better.from Yu HuiSo this year,why not consider going outside?Spend your healthy holiday and then get more energy for work or study.from Zhang Li ai 书面表达备考指导书面表达备考指导中考英语复习中考英语复习 The school life in Grade9进入九年级，同学们学业压力变重，在学习和工作的压力日趋增大的今天，会缓解的人才会有健康的体魄。中学生是如何度过假期的呢？某杂志社想对中学生作一次调查，右图是他们此次的调查结果。根据你所得的信息，请为杂志社投稿写一篇完整的调查报告,并提倡大家进行假日休闲。visit friends or parentstravelstay at homeworkLets share some pictures!The houses are different in style but they have the same steps of building.How?Put them in orderPut them in order_ designing the house_ designing the house_ decorating_ decorating (装饰，装修)_ collecting material_ collecting material_ building_ buildingBuilding a house:1423_read topic carefully and outline-drawing (认真审题 罗列提纲)_ beautifying（美化）_ material collecting_ writing1234Writing an article:Writing articles is just like building houses.书面表达:(English composition)是江西中考英语中的必考题，分值为15分，约占卷面总分的1/8。中考英语书面表达评分标准一档13-15分 信息完整，表达流畅，无语言错误或基本无语言错误（非常优秀）二档10-12分 信息基本完整，表达较流畅，有少量错误，但不影响意思表达（基本优秀）三档7-10分 能传达部分信息，表达不够流畅，但句子基本可读（合格）9分四档4-6分 只能传递少量信息，表达不通畅，只有少量句子可读（不及格）五档1-3分 能传递个别信息，表达不清楚，只有个别句子可读（不及格）大病：大病：离题离题、句子结构、句子结构、要点漏写、要点漏写、词序、语态、时态等方面。词序、语态、时态等方面。常见病：常见病：名词单复数、第三人称单数、名词单复数、第三人称单数、拼写、标点符号、大小写方面。拼写、标点符号、大小写方面。不治而亡：不治而亡：抄袭本试卷阅读理解，照抄抄袭本试卷阅读理解，照抄 要点提示词，东拼西凑。要点提示词，东拼西凑。How can we write a good composition?What is a good composition?What is a good composition?“一点一点”:有有“亮点亮点”.有独到之处。有独到之处。“二整二整”:书写工整书写工整,卷面整洁。卷面整洁。“三要三要”:要点，字数要达标要点，字数要达标,词汇和语法结构要准确、词汇和语法结构要准确、上下文要连贯。上下文要连贯。“四不行四不行”:漏掉内容不行漏掉内容不行,写错体裁不行写错体裁不行,用错人称不用错人称不 行，用错时态不行。行，用错时态不行。1.Cross-question(审题)u Style(体裁）u Content(题材)u Person（人称）u Tense（时态）进入九年级，同学们的学业压力变重，在学习和工作的压力日趋增大的今天，会缓解的人才会有健康的身体。中学生是如何度过假期的呢？某杂志社想对中学生做一次调查，右图是他们此次的调查结果。根据你所得的信息，请为杂志社投稿，写一篇完整的调查报告,并提倡大家进行假日休闲。Cross-question(审题)visit friends or parentstravelstay at homeworkStyle(体裁）：_Person（人称）：_Tense（时态）:_调查报告第三人称一般现在时1.Cross-question(审题)据实描写：适当发挥：度假方式细节及提倡假日休闲HeadBeginning Body TailEnding2.An outline drawing（列要点）u List key points (列要点)如何度假如何度假调查报告告倡倡议假日休假日休闲根据关键词及图表用简单的句子列出文章的要点。List key pointsvisit friends or parentstravelstay at homework列要点时，内容上不能有遗漏，如有漏点，按点扣分！Terrible!List key points1.A lot of people travel.2.Some people stay at home.3.Some other people visit friends or parents.4.A few people work.Enjoy your vacation.visit friends or parentstravelstay at homework加：加首尾，使文章结构完整。可以采用总分总，分总结构。做到开门见山，首尾呼应。How do people spend their vacation?We made a survey and here is our report.（the beginning 开开头已已给出，不出，不计入入总词数）数）A lot of people travel.Some people stay at home.Some other people visit friends or parents.A few people work.(the key points)Come and enjoy your vacation!（the ending）加(add)4.Sentence Making and Beautifying word phrase sentence BeautifyingpassageWriing skill(一）一）:Make the sentences longer.How do people spend their vacation?We made a survey and here is our report.(the beginning)A lot of people travel.Some people stay at home.Some other people visit friends or parents.A few people work.Come and enjoy your vacation!(the ending)Chooseget away fromworld-holidays Most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays.Writing skill(二二):Give some examples to prove the facts or opinions.Most people choose to travel to get away from choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays.the busy world during the holidays.Some people stay at home.扩：Some people_ stay at home,()watching()or()()Internet to()()()rest.some people prefer to stay at home,like watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest.Writing skill(三三):Use some similar but higer level words or sentence patterns.Most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays.Some people prefer to stay at home,watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest.Some other people visit friends or parents.扩：It_ visit friends or parents.A few people work.扩：A few people（）（）work.Come and enjoy your vacation!Most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays.Some people prefer to stay at home,like watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest.It makes them relaxed to visit friends or parents.A few people have to work.Come and enjoy your vacation!4.Sentence connectionsentencespassageLinkingwords（连接词）Try to use some linking words to make your writing more fluentlyWriting skill(四四):Use some linking words to make your composition more fluently.并列and;as well as;also;选择or;eitheror;or else;otherwise原因because;owing to;due to;according to;thanks to结果so;therefore;thus;as a result 时间when;soon after;before;later;first;and then;next;finally;afterwards.比较on the contrary;on the other hand;like 转折but;yet;however;although;in spite of;instead;递进besides;moreover;even;in addition;also举例for example/instance;such as;that is;namely ;总结after all ;in short;in general;generally speaking;in a word 语篇衔接的过渡词语连(connect)How do people spend their vacation?We made a survey and here is our report.（the beginning）Come and enjoy your vacation!（the ending）Most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays.Some people prefer to stay at home,watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest.It makes them relaxed to visit friends or parents.A few people have to work.(the body)连(connect)How do people spend their vacation?We made a survey and here is our report.According to it,most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays.Then some people prefer to stay at home,like watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest.And it also makes them relaxed to visit friends or parents.However,a few people have to work.Come and enjoy your vacation!Writing skill(五五):Choose one or two proper proverbs(谚语)to beautify your composition.As the saying goes,Most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays.Some people prefer to stay at home,likewatching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest.It makes them relaxed to visit friends or parents.A few people have to work.(the key points)Come and enjoy your vacation.People who relax well work well.（the ending）Come and enjoy your vacation!As the saying goes,“All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.”（the ending）只会用功不玩耍，聪明孩子也变傻Proverb（谚语）5.CheckinguSpelling(拼写)uTense(时态)uGrammar(语法)uHandwriting(书写)uPunctuation marks(标点符号)How do people spend their vacation?We made a survey and here is our report.according to it,most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the Holidays,Then some people like to stay at home,watching TV or surfing the Intenet to have a good rest.And it also make them relaxing to visit friends or parents.However,a few people have to work.Come and enjoy your vacation.As the saying goes,“All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.”How do people spend their vacation?We made a survey and here is our report.According to it,most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays.Then some people like to stay at home,watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest.And it also makes them relaxed to visit friends or parents.However,a few people have to work.Come and enjoy your vacation!As the saying goes,“All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.”6.Copying out u书写规范，卷面整洁誊：誊写。将检查后的作文整洁 地抄写在横线上 卷面整洁不一定加分，卷面潦草一定要扣分。第五档：（1-3分）2分，卷面不整洁，字迹缭乱第四档（一般）：（4-6分）5分，再减去书写、卷面分。第三档：（7-10分）9分，再减去书写、卷面分。进入九年级，同学们学业压力变重，在学习和工作的压力日趋增大的今天，会缓解的人才会有健康的体魄。中学生是如何度过假期的呢？某杂志社想对中学生作一次调查，右图是他们此次的调查结果。根据你所得的信息，请为杂志社投稿写一篇完整的调查报告,并提倡大家进行假日休闲。visit friends or parentstravelstay at homework How do people spend their vacation?We made a survey and here is our report.According to it,most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays.Then some people prefer to stay at home,like watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest.And it also makes them relaxed to visit friends or parents.However,a few people have to work.Come and enjoy your vacation!As the saying goes,“All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.”优秀作文展示14分复习和强化训练要求 1.背:系统地熟读和背诵课文中关于话题的套用句型和短文,积累写作素材。2.说:对考纲上和课本中列出的热点话题逐一 进行口头训练，培养造句能力和语感。3.写：有计划地进行限时训练，提高应试能力。借鉴和模仿（背诵）是提高英语写作的有效办法。10分钟80词-习惯（框架，句型）-得心应手 书面表达备考指导书面表达备考指导中考英语复习中考英语复习 中考中的书面表达题，主要有中考中的书面表达题，主要有“补全对话补全对话”、“看看图填词图填词”、“看图写话看图写话”、“看图作答看图作答”、“看图完看图完成短文成短文”、“看图完成句子看图完成句子”和和“根据提示的内容，根据提示的内容，完成某项写作完成某项写作”等形式。这类题型的考试目的在于：等形式。这类题型的考试目的在于：通过书面形式测试考生口头会话和作简单书面表达的通过书面形式测试考生口头会话和作简单书面表达的能力。能力。下面作一简单介绍：下面作一简单介绍：一、测试要点一、测试要点 一般说来，测试的主要内容都是以日常生活一般说来，测试的主要内容都是以日常生活 为背景，为背景，进行简单的会话或写作。例如：进行简单的会话或写作。例如：问候、问路、看病、问候、问路、看病、打电话、购物、自我介绍等功能意念项目和简单的应打电话、购物、自我介绍等功能意念项目和简单的应用文用文，例如：便条、通知、短信等。一个题目写，例如：便条、通知、短信等。一个题目写1010个个左右的句子，字数为左右的句子，字数为8080100100个左右。个左右。二、日常训练与应试注意事项二、日常训练与应试注意事项 1.1.平时要注意句型与对话的学习，注意听说训练，积平时要注意句型与对话的学习，注意听说训练，积极参与听说训练的教学活动，以达到会话相当熟练的极参与听说训练的教学活动，以达到会话相当熟练的程度。程度。2.2.在会话中，注意常在情景中使用的习惯用语、套在会话中，注意常在情景中使用的习惯用语、套语的归纳和应用，做到脱口而出，应对如流。语的归纳和应用，做到脱口而出，应对如流。3.3.注意口语与书面语的区别及一些特殊的表达方法，注意口语与书面语的区别及一些特殊的表达方法，做题时一定要瞻前顾后，既要看到前面的内容，又要做题时一定要瞻前顾后，既要看到前面的内容，又要看到后面的语句；既要符合习惯用法，又要注意表达看到后面的语句；既要符合习惯用法，又要注意表达的准确性。的准确性。4.4.要经常进行日常应用文和命题作文的学习与训练。要经常进行日常应用文和命题作文的学习与训练。如何学习写英语作文。如何学习写英语作文。一、围绕中心，拟定提纲一、围绕中心，拟定提纲我们在进行写作时，要根据短文的中心思想考虑如何我们在进行写作时，要根据短文的中心思想考虑如何开头、展开和结尾，设想几个承上启下的连词。将主开头、展开和结尾，设想几个承上启下的连词。将主要句型、关键词语草草记下，形成提纲，写时切忌结要句型、关键词语草草记下，形成提纲，写时切忌结构分散，废话连篇，严重跑题。英语作文，内容广泛，构分散，废话连篇，严重跑题。英语作文，内容广泛，题材多样，要弄清写作的要求是写人、叙事、介绍、题材多样，要弄清写作的要求是写人、叙事、介绍、通知、评论、图表、书信、日记、通知、便条还是看通知、评论、图表、书信、日记、通知、便条还是看图作文或改写缩写。如果是日记，要写明（年、）月、图作文或改写缩写。如果是日记，要写明（年、）月、日和天气情况，如果是书信，则要注意书信的格式，日和天气情况，如果是书信，则要注意书信的格式，注意短文字数不要低于或超过规定的字数太多。注意短文字数不要低于或超过规定的字数太多。二、语言通顺，表达准确二、语言通顺，表达准确 、避免使用汉语式英语，尽量使用自己熟悉的句、避免使用汉语式英语，尽量使用自己熟悉的句型。几种句型可交替使用，以避免重复和呆板。型。几种句型可交替使用，以避免重复和呆板。、多用简单句型，记事、写人一般都不需要复杂、多用简单句型，记事、写人一般都不需要复杂的句型。可适当多使用陈述句、一般疑问句、祈使句的句型。可适当多使用陈述句、一般疑问句、祈使句和感叹句。不用或少用非谓语或情态动词等较复杂的和感叹句。不用或少用非谓语或情态动词等较复杂的句型。句型。、注意语法、句法知识的灵活运用。、注意语法、句法知识的灵活运用。语态、时态要准确无误。语态、时态要准确无误。主谓语要一致。主语的人称和数要和谓语一致。主谓语要一致。主语的人称和数要和谓语一致。注意人称代词的宾格形式。注意人称代词的宾格形式。注意冠词用法，例如：注意冠词用法，例如：He is an honest student.He is an honest student.中的中的 an an 不能写成不能写成 a a。标点符号特别注意汉英的不同。例如：标点符号特别注意汉英的不同。例如：汉语汉语 英语英语 A.A.句号句号 。.B.B.省略号省略号 C.C.顿号顿号 、无无 、描写人物时，要生动具体、描写人物时，要生动具体 外表特征：外表特征：（tall,short,fat,thin,tall,short,fat,thin,strong,weak,ordinary-looking strong,weak,ordinary-looking 等）等）服饰颜色：服饰颜色：（red,yellow,blue,white,red,yellow,blue,white,green,brown,black green,brown,black 等）等）内心境界：内心境界：（glad,happy,sad,excited,glad,happy,sad,excited,interested interested 等）等）感情描写：感情描写：（love,like,hate,feel,love,like,hate,feel,laugh,cry,smile,shout laugh,cry,smile,shout 等）等）动作描写：动作描写：（come,go,get,have,take,come,go,get,have,take,bring bring 等）等）三、不会表达，另辟蹊径三、不会表达，另辟蹊径中考作文给分是以要点和语言准确度而定，不中考作文给分是以要点和语言准确度而定，不以文采来打分。造句越简单准确越好。造复合以文采来打分。造句越简单准确越好。造复合句容易出错