专题10书面表达-2021-2022学年八年级英语下学期期末考试好题汇编（牛津译林版）（解析版）.docx

专题10书面表达A经典基础题NO.1 2021江苏扬州你的家乡扬州发生了巨大的变化。习主席说：“扬州是个好地方！''扬州是一个有着2500多年历史的古城, 你作为扬州人，请你介绍一下你美丽的家乡扬州吧！请以“My hometown”为题，根据以下问题展示完成作文。 提示：(1) What is in your hometown? (three points)What things can people do in your hometown? (three points)(2) How do you like your hometown? (two points)要求：1 .内容必须包括以上提示，可适当发挥；.要点齐全，语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；2 .词数100左右，不得使用真实姓名、校名与地名。My hometown【参考范文】My hometownYangzhou is my hometown. It has a long history. There are many places of interest in Yangzhou. The Slender West Lake is the most famous one. Besides, there are lots of delicious foods such as roast goose and fried rice with eggs. What's more? Many great people were born in Yangzhou. Do you know Jian Zhen? He brought Chinese culture to Japan.Now Yangzhou is a modern and popular city. Big shopping stores, restaurants and cinemas arc everywhere. If you come here, you can go to Dongguan Street to buy souvenir, take pictures and taste different kinds of local foodI think my hometown is a good place. The life in Yangzhou is better now than before. Welcome to my hometown.1 .我家位于市中心，周围绿树环绕，闻到花香。2 .邻居们经常相互帮助，解决各种问题，我们住在像这样的社区很幸运。3 .有很多事可做。购物，价格不贵，。品尝中西方食品。在当地剧院多了解中国艺术。4 .路线：沿着鼓楼街走，在第二个十字路口向右拐，直走，你会看见一个学校。我家在学校隔壁。5 .很期待见到你。Dear Amy,I'd like to invite you to visit Taizhou. First, let me tell you something about my hometown.Yours,Mary【参考范文】Dear Amy,rd like to invite you to visit Taizhou. First, let me tell you something about my hometown. My home is in the center of the city, surrounded by green trees, and vc can smell the flowers anytime and anywhere. Neighbors often help each other with all kinds of problems. We are lucky to live in such a community. If you come here, there are many things to do such as shopping.The price is not very high. You can taste Chinese and western food and learn more about Chinese art at the local theater. My home is next to the school. Go along drum tower street, turn right at (he second crossing, go straight and you will see a school. I'm looking forward to seeing you.YoursMary【解析】这篇书面表达是写一封邀请信，主要是介绍自己的家乡泰州。这是篇材料作文，所给要点给的较详细，只要把握好所有要点，作文内容就比较充实。切记不要逐字翻译。在写作时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，这样才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体NO. 5江苏南通市写一篇短文介绍自己的家庭情况，词数80-90。要点如下：1我家有三口人。2我爸爸是一名办公室人员，他在离家很远的一家公司上班，所以他每天开车上班。3妈妈是一名女警。她在瞥察局工作，她每天很忙。4我是一名学生，我擅长英语。我学校在我家附近，我步行上学。5我的家在市中心的一株高楼里，住12楼，我的邻居们友好且乐于助人。住在像这样的居民区我很幸运。 【参考范文】Hello, everyone. Td like to tell you something about my family. There are three people in my family. They are my father, my mother and I. My father is an office worker. He works in a company far away from home, so he often drives to work every day. My mother is a policewoman. She works in (he police station. She is very busy every day. I am a student. Tm good at English. My school is near my home, so I go to school on foot. My home is on the 12,h floor of a tall building in the city center. My neighbors are friendly and helpful. I'm lucky to live in a neighborhood like this.【解析】这篇作文要求我们根据提示介绍自己的家庭情况，题目中给出了具体的写作内容，我们应根据这些内 容，用正确的英语表达出来。写作时，应合理安排写作内容，审题可知，短文可以按总分的结构来叙述， 先从整体上介绍自己家一共几口人，然后分别介绍每个人的职业以及相关情况，最后介绍自己居住的环境。 短文应使用一般现在时叙述，根据表达需要使用合适的人称，应以第一人称和第三人称为主，注意谓语动 词的正确形式，尤其是第三人称单数形式的变化。写作时应注意英语的表达习惯与汉语是不同的，不能按 提示逐词翻译，写汉语式的英语，应从句子的整体结构考虑，写完整的句子。可以简单句结构为主，穿插 使用并列句或复合句结构，调整文章节奏。同时注意语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文意连贯。【点睛】这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求介绍了自己的家庭情况。短文有如卜.几个特点：首先文章内 容完整，包含了题FI中要求的所有信息，没有遗漏要点。短文从整体到局部，合理安排了文章里的各个内 容，叙述条理、清晰。其次短文中使用了正确的人称和时态，文章以一般现在时、第一人称和第三人称来 叙述，符合表达的需要，谓语动词的形式正确，尤其是注意了第三人称单数形式的变化，这是学生们学习 中的一个难点。句式结构以简单句为主，能满足表达的需求，叙述清晰、简洁。最后短文里使用了一些较 好的短语和句型，如 I'd like to tell you something about my family. There are three people in my family.、He works in a company far away from home, so he often drives （o work every day.、Fin good at English.、My home is on the I2lh floor of a tall building in the city center.、I'm lucky to live in a neighborhood like this.等等。NO. 6 2020江苏苏州湾实验初级中学假如你是苏州某中学的学生刘伟。美国初中生Matt原本计划今年暑假来苏州旅游，但是由于疫情的影 响不得不取消出行计划。他通过网络联系到你，想通过你了解苏州。请认真阅读卜.面的邮件，并根据信中 的内容和实际情况用英语回信，可以有适当的发挥。Dear Liu Weijt's really a pity that I can't go to Suzhou fbr a visit this summer because of the novel coronavirus. But I still want to know something about Suzhou. I am so interested in it. Can you answer the following question and help me to learn about Suzhou? Where is Suzhou? What's the environment like there? What do you like about this city? What's your hope ft）r Suzhou?I hope things will go better and I can travel to Suzhou to see it with my own eyes. I'm looking forward co hearing from you soon.Best wishes.Matt2.要求：1）词数90左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；2）表达中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。Dear Matt,I'm sorry that you cannot come to Suzhou now. I will introduce it to you.Take care,Liu Wei【参考范文】I：Dear Matt,I'm sorry that you cannot come to Suzhou now. I will introduce it to you.In the south of Jiangsu Province, there's a city called Suzhou. The air is fresh here. You can smell the flowers and hear the birds sing.Suzhou is a fantastic city with a long history. It is famous for the elegant Chinese gardens. There arc trees, pools and small hills here. There are also many different kinds of trees. Every year, lots of visitors come to enjoy the wonderful views in the gardens.Suzhou is also a modern city. If you like shopping, Suzhou is really a good place to go. There are many big shopping malls in the city centre. People here live a comfortable life. They can go jogging in the parks near their communities.Suzhou is my hometown and I like it very much. I hope it will be more beautiful in the future. Tm looking forward to meeting you here someday.Take care,Liu Wei【参考范文】2：Dear Matt,I'm sorry that you cannot come to Suzhou now. I will introduce it to you.Suzhou is located to the north-west of Shanghai. The air is fresh here and you can see green trees everywhere. The beautiful sounds birds make will make you feel comfortable.Suzhou is also a modern city. There are many tall buildings like shopping malls, so you can buy things you want. If you don't live near them, don't worry. You can take the underground there. It's very convenient.Suzhou is famous for its gardens. Every year, many foreign visitors come to see them. People in Suzhou arc proud of them, so am I.Suzhou is great. I hope it can become more popular around the world. Hope to see you here soon.Take care.Liu Wei【解析】1.题干解读：这是封回复的电子邮件。以第人称为主，主体时态为-般现在时。要根据以下问题作答:(1) Where is Suzhou?苏州的地理位置What's the environment like there?苏州的环境如何(2) What do you like about this city?你喜欢这个城市的哪些方面What's your hope for Suzhou?你对这个城市有何期望2 .例文点评：两个例文都回答了 Matt在邮件中询问的四个问题。运用了不同的形容词对苏州进行了描述， 让人非常想要去苏州旅游。有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，句子形式多样，灵活的运用了复杂句式。行 文连贯，语言流畅。3 .高分亮点: 形容i司：fresh; fantastic; elegant; wonderful; modern; comfortable; beautiful; convenient; famous; proud; popular。 短语：be in the south of; be located to the south of; with a long history; be famous for; a good place to go; live a comfortable life; be proud of。句型：there be句型；if引导的条件状语从句。NO. 7 2021江苏扬州扬州中国大运河博物馆通过学英语报招募暑期志愿者，具体要求如下，请你以李华的名义，写一封自 荐信。Volunteers wanted!you are interested in being a volunteer in China GrandCanal Museum in Yangzhou（扬州中国大运河博物馆）,write to us soon!Your letter should include（包含）ihe information below:Who are you? （name, age, hobby.）What are you like?Why do you want to be a volunteer?How can you help?1表达中必须包含所给要点，可以适当发挥。2词数10()词左右。3表达中请勿提及真实校名和姓名。Dear Sir/Madain,I would like to be a volunteer of China Grand Canal Museum in Yangzhou.I'm looking fbnvard to hearing from you soon.Yours faithfully,Li Hua 【参考范文】Dear Sir/Madam.I would like to be a volunteer of China Grand Canal Museum in Yangzhou. My name is Li Hua, I am 18 years old. My hobby is swimming, reading and travelling.This program is a golden opportunity for those children to learn more, this making a difference to their future. As a member of our association, 1 have a good command of English. Tve been learning English for ten years, so I can communicate with other members in fluent English. Besides, Tm outgoing and warm-hearted, which makes it easy for me to make friends with students from other countries. If accepted, I will tell the visitors some history stories.I'm looking fbnvard to hearing from you soon.Yours faithfully.Li Hua【解析】1 .题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。以李华的名义，写一封自荐信。2 .写作指导：本文主要采用一般现在时。在自荐信里先介绍自己的个人信息，再介绍自己的性格，为什么想 成为一名志愿者以及自己会如何做。写作时要保持主谓一致性，逻辑性要强，无语法和标点错误。NO. 8江苏南京假如你是Alice,你想写一封推荐信，推荐你的同学Daniel获得今年的新星奖.推荐 信字数为10。词左右。开头，结尾已给出，不计入总字数。Excellent qualities（优秀的品质）Good examples（好的事例）乐于助人1 .经常帮助同学做家庭作业。2 .经常与同学们一起打扫公园。3 .在公交车上（至少一点）聪明1 .学东西快，学好所有的学科，计划好所有的事情。2 .当我们去野营时他会搭建帐篷。勇敢一个周日的早晨，一个小女孩掉到湖里，他跳进湖里，把小 女孩从水里救了上来，最后并送她回家。有礼貌经常向老师问好，经常帮老师擦黑板。Dear Sir / Madam,I would like to recommend Daniel fbr this year's Young Star Award.Daniel is a helpful boy.He is clever.He is brave, too.He is polite.All the students in our class think that Daniel should get the award. We look forward to hearing from you soon.Yours faithfully,Alice【参考范文】Dear Sir/Madam,I would like to recommend Daniel for this year's Young Star Award.Daniel is a helpful boy. He often helps his classmates with their homework. He often cleans up the park with his classmates. He always gives his seat to sonieone/others on the bus(in need).He is veiy clever. He learns things quickly. He works hard at all his subjects.(He is good at all his subjects.)He plans everything well. He can put up a tent when we go camping.He is brave, too. One Sunday moming a girl fell into the lake. He jumped into the lake and saved her from the water. At last he sent/took her to her home.Daniel is polite .He often says “hello“ to the teacher. He often helps the teacher to clean the blackboard.All the students in our class think that Daniel should get the award. We look forward to hearing from yousoon.Yours faithfully,Alice【解析】本篇书面表达要求根据提纲内容推荐Daniel获得今年的新星奖，内容包括表格内所有的信息。根据对题目 的分析可知，书信要用一般现在时来陈述，并采用第三人称来写作。为了使行文流畅、上下文衔接自然， 写作时要灵活运用连接词或过渡语言，使文章有一定的连贯性。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结 构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；要灵活运用自己熟悉的高级词句，以提高文章的档次。最后必须认真 检查是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。【解析】.题干解读：该题属于话题作文，作文要求介绍自己的家乡扬州。题目给出的三个问题即为写作要点： 家乡有什么？（3点）；人们在你的家乡可以做什么？（3点）；你觉得你的家乡怎么样？（2点）。注意文章 字数限制在100词左右。1 .写作指导：由于作文主要介绍家乡扬州，所以作文时态为一般现在时，人称为第三人称。作文可以采用“三 段式''结构，第一段介绍扬州有什么，第二段介绍人们到扬州可以做什么，第三段表达自己对扬州的看法。 作文完成后注意检查语法、单词拼写和标点。NO.2 2021湖南隆回假如你校英语杂志要刊登关于中国热门旅游城市的简介，请你用英语写篇短文推荐个城市，要求 包含以下几方面的内容：1. What's the weather like in.?2. What do you think of it?3. What are the people like there? 4. What about the food there?要求：1.内容应包括所有的提示信息，也可适当发挥；.语言表达要准确，语意要通顺、连贯；2 . 60词左右。【参考范文】I think Dali is a beautifi.il old city. It's warm in winter and cool in summer. So many people like to go there on vacation. When you walk along the street of the city, you can see some old buildings. People there are very friendly. They like to help others. The food there is also delicious. There arc some stores in the center of the city. You can buy your favorite things there.Welcome to Dali. It's really an interesting and relaxing place.【解析】.题干解读：该题目属于说明文写作。在写作时应根据题目要求介绍城市的天气情况，环境、城市的人以及 美食。1 .写作指导：本文时态以一般现在时为主，人称以第三人称为主，从天气、环境、人及美食这几个方面介绍 城市，要叙述完整，条理清晰。NO. 3 2021 江苏扬州市梅岭中学亲爱的同学们，暑假就要来了，你想邀请你的好朋友们去你家所在的小镇玩，请从以下的几个方面介绍一下你的家乡吧!位 置离阳光城不远，乘火车大约50分钟的路程。环 境空气清新，青山绿水。园林广受欢迎。博物馆里琳琅满目，精彩纷呈。购物和餐饮有多个购物超市和餐馆，物美价廉。交通交通便利(convenient),如公交车，出租车等，骑自行车游览更好玩。市民友好，礼貌，乐于助人。(举一到两个例子)注意：1.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；2.要点齐全，语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写 规范；2 .词数100左右，开头与结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。My hometownI hope you can visit my hometown in the summer holiday.【参考范文】My hometown is not far from Sunshine City. It's about 50 minutes from the center of Sunshine City by train.The air is fresh and there is less pollution here. The mountains are covered with trees and flowers. The rivers are very clear and there are many kinds of fish in them. There is a park here. People all like to go there to go and boat. A museum is next to the park. You can see all kinds of collections there and 1 am sure you will enjoy yourselves here. There are also some supermarkets. When you stay here, you can buy all things you need. You can also go to the local restaurant to enjoy the delicious food. They arc cheap! The transport is very convenient. You can take a bus or taxi. But it is much better to ride a bike. The local people are friendly and kind. They always smile at you when they meet you. And if you need help, they will try their best to help you.This is my hometown. It's beautiful. I hope you can visit my hometown this summer.【解析】题干解读：本文属于说明文，根据表格内容，介绍一下你的家乡，包括位置.、环境、购物、餐饮、交通、 市民等方面。本文采取三段式。第一段介绍家乡的位置。第二段介绍环境、购物等方面，最后一段邀请人 们来参观。写作指导：本文的时态为般现在时，写作时，表格内的各个方面都要涉及，切记不要遗漏要点，可以适 当增加情节，使文章通顺连贯。NO. 4 2019江苏苏州你生活在怎样的城市呢？请以“What I like about Changshu”为题并根据以下要点和要求用英语写一篇短 文，描述常熟这个城市。1 .要点：介绍常熟的地理位置及环境：你喜欢这个城市的什么；(3)你对这个城市有何期望。2 .要求：(1)表达中必须包含所给要点，可以适当发挥，不要简单翻译:词数90左右；表达中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。What I like about Changshu【参考范文】What I like about ChangshuMy hometown Changshu is a beautiful city. 1( is in the soulheast/soulh of Jiangsu Province.And it is very close to Suzhou. The air is fresh here. You can see many trees, lakes and green hills. There is also a beautiful park in the city center.People in Changshu arc kind and friendly. They arc willing to help people in need. This is what I like most about my hometown.I hope soon there will be trains in Changshu so that I can travel to different places more easily.【解析】.题干解读：题目要求以“What I like about Changshu”为题，根据所给要点及要求写一篇英语短文。1 .写作指导：本文主要以第一、三人称写作，时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时。写作时要认真审题，根 据提示的内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作；可以围绕主题 准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等；语言的表述要符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习 惯；层次要分明、条理要清晰。呼1优选提升题；NO. 1 2021内蒙古呼伦贝尔市海拉尔区假如你和你的家人去年暑假去了桂林旅游，请根据下面表格的内容写一篇短文，介绍你的旅游经历和 感受。要求：1 .文章应包括所有要点并围绕要点适当发挥；.文中不能出现真实的人名、校名等；2 .词数70词左右。How was your trip?Wonderful.How did you go to Guilin?By train.How long did you stay there?For five days.What did you see there?Green hills, clean water and so on.What did you do?Go boating in Lijiang River.【参考范文】i went to Guilin with my family last week. We had a wonderful time there. We went there by train. We stayed for five days. Wc saw beautiful green hills, clean water and so on. Wc went boating in the Lijiang River. We visited some places of interest. Many people visit them every day. The food in Guilin is very delicious. People are also very friendly.Guilin is a very beautiful place. I hope to go there again one day.【解析】.题干解析：这是一篇材料作文，要求写一篇70字左右的英语短文，介绍去桂林旅游的经历和感受，要做 到要点齐全，可以适当发挥。1 .写作指导：全文主要使用第一人称，时态使用一般过去时和一般现在时。可采用两段式写作，一段介绍去 桂林旅游的经历，另段说明自己的感受，适当使用短语和句型，为文章增加亮点，同时要做到没有单词 和语法错误。NO. 2 2021江苏镇江市外国语学校假如你想养一只宠物，并且在班级举行的一次关于养宠物的调查中填写了调查表。现在请你根据下面 表格中的内容用英语写一篇短文，表达你的意愿和想法。要求：1.文章须包括表格中的所有提示内容，部分内容需自拟；2.语言连贯，书写工整；3.80100词，短文的结尾已经给出，但不计入要求词数。What do you want to have?A calWhy do you like it?Clean, lovely .What should it be like?How will you look