2023年新高考英语作文读后续写高分万能句05 话题分类+个人成长型(人与自我).docx
专题05话题分类十个大成长型(人与自我)目录:1 .精选名校最新2022年12月2023年1月名校联考、模拟试题.读后续写话题分类背诵模板2 .读后续写话题分类写作步骤.读后续写话题分类写作热词3 .读后续写话题分类高分佳句1. (2022年福建厦门外国语学校高三模拟)阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。Lightning flashed through the darkness over Sibson's bedroom skylight(天窗).Sibson was shaken by a clap of thunder before he knew what was happening. The stonn had moved directly through his two-story wooden house. Then he heard the smoke alarm beeping.Sibson rushed down (he stairs barefoot to check. He opened the door to the basement, and Hames exploded out. Sibson ran back upstairs to call 911 from his bedroom. t4I felt glad because the room had a separate outdoor stairway,“ he explained to the media later.But the phone didn't work, and when he tried to go down the outdoor stairway, he was stopped by a wall of Hames. Sibson realized he was trapped. Suddenly, a piece of wood fell from (he roof. Sharp pain raced through his body as he looked down and found his leg bleeding.Sibson's house was three kilometers off the main road and was so well hidden by trees that he knew calling for help would be fruitless.Up a hill nearby lived Sibson's neighbor, Huggons. He was lying in bed when something like a smoke alarm struck his cars. He jumped out of bed, took his phone and flashlight, and headed down the hillside toward the noise. Thal was when he saw the rolling heavy smoke.Huggons dialed 911, and the operator warned him not to enter the house. But Huggons said, “There is no way I am going to listen to Sibson scream and die in that fire.”“Anyone there?” Huggons called out. Then he heard “Help! I'm trapped!” coming from the second floor balcony. He entered the house, but soon had to run back to catch his breath.After one more attempt to get inside the house, Huggons gave up and circled around back. The wind parted the smoke just enough for him to catch sight of Sibson. But there was no way to get to him.With the wind fueling the fire, there was no time to waste and the second floor seemed to be falling down in the next minute.she should treat him to some fruits. The man smiled and accepted.Their conversation was mainly about places they had been and places they wanted to go. Jessie soon found out that he was traveling alone too and as soon as he started mentioning that he was staying in the same hotel as her, Jessie swiftly rose from her seat to get another drink.Searching through her bag Jessie found that her wallet was gone! Immediately she realized she took the wrong bag. Her wallet was in another bag. Jessie didn't panic at first until it hit her that without it, she had not one penny in hand. She was starving. Worst of all, she had generously proposed a treat to the man.注意:I .续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Paragraph 1:Without explaining the situation, Jessie ran back to the hotel.Paragraph 2:The man was still there.【答案】Wiihout explaining the situation, Jessie ran back to ihc hotel. As soon as Jessie saw the receptionist she burst into tears. She told her the embarrassing situation in the pub and the receptionist burst into laughter. She said that she shouldn't have worried too much since she had found she ordered her hotel. Jessie ran to her room and wallet as soon as possible. She must go back to the pub or she would be regarded as a cheat. Luckily the pub was near and soon Jessie got there.The man was still there. When he saw Jessie again he was completely puzzled. He stood up but didn't know what to say. Jessie smiled and (old him (he situation which made him burst into laughter too. But he jokingly told Jessie "If I hadn't proposed an offer of beer, you wouldn't have realized that you hadn't bring money with you. So treat me to two beers please!” They both laughed. Of course they became friends.【导语】本文以人物为线索展开。Jessie独自去爱尔兰首都都柏林旅行,进了当地一家酒吧,遇到了一位 男士。男士邀请她喝啤酒,Jessie邀请他吃水果。就在他们聊得兴起,Jessie想要再买一杯啤酒时,她发现 自己没有带钱包。为了不想那位男士认为自己是一个骗子,于是,她跑回酒店,拿回了钱包。男士很惊讶, 随后Jessie告知他发生了什么事。他们都笑了,最后成了朋友。第一步:段落续写:由第一段首句内容“杰西没有解释情况,就跑回了酒店。“可知,第一段可描写Jessie回酒店拿钱包的经 过。由第二段首句内容“这位男士仍然在那里。”可知,第二段可描写Jessie赶回来,男士很困惑,得知发生 了什么之后,开心地笑了。最后两个人成为了好朋友。第二步:续写线索:跑回酒店告诉接待员经过拿到钱包一赶回酒吧得知原因成为朋友第三步:词汇激活【行为类】.看见:see/mcet/comc across.返 I可:go back/return【情绪类】.尴尬的:embarrassing/awkward.困惑的:puzzled/confused【点睛】高分句型 IJ.Shc said that she shouldn't have worried too much since she had found she ordered her hotel.(由 that引导的宾语从句和since引导的状语从句)高分句型 2.Jessie smiled and told him the situation which made him burst into laughter too.(由关系代词 which引导的限制性定语从句)(2023年广东广州高二广州市第六十五中学校考期末)Prissy Baker was in Oscar Miller's store New Year's morning when her uncle, Richard Baker, a bachelor, came in. He did not look at Prissy, nor did she wish him a happy New Year. Uncle Richard had not been on speaking terms with her or her father for eight years. When she had been a little girl they had been great friends; but that was before the quarrel.When Prissy had been nine years old, Richard and Irving Baker had quarreled over the division of a piece of property. The fault had been mainly on Richard's side, and that very fact made him all the more stubborn. He had never spoken to his brother since, and he declared he never would. Prissy and her father felt very badly over it, but Uncle Richard seemed to have completely forgotten them.Richard told Mr. Miller that he was on business but that he didn't like it.4Well, I always like a good dinner on New Year's J said Richard. "It's about the only way I can celebrate. I got everything ready last night, but I won't get back before one o'clock, so I think I'll have to put up with a coldAfter Richard had driven away. Prissy walked thoughtfully home. She had planned to spend a holiday with a new book. She did not even mean to cook dinner, for her father had had to go to the town that morning and would be gone the whole day. There was nobody else to cook dinner fbr. Prissy's mother had died long ago.Suddenly an idea popped into Prissy's head. Dared she? Oh, she never could! But he would never know. There would be plenty of time!Prissy had no trouble breaking into Uncle Richard's house, fbr the woodshed door was unfastened. She tripped into the kitchen with rosy cheeks and mischief sparkling in her eyes. In a short time, the kitchen was full of appetizing odors. As the clock struck twelve, Prissy had the table set.Prissy was about to slip away when the door was pushed open.When the meal was over, he talked to Prissy kindly and politely.【答案】Prissy was about to slip away when the door was pushed open. It was his uncle Richard who opened the door! lie was surprised to see that Prissy was in his house. <vWhy are you here, little Prissy?” "I am here to cook fbr you, Uncle Richard. Because I heard in Oscar Miller's store that you have no time to cook." "Oh!" Uncle Richard replied with a lump in his throat. With Prissy's company, he went to the dining room, where he smelt the appetizing odors created by Prissy immediately. Then, they had a perfect dinner together.When the meal was over, he talked to Prissy kindly and politely. Overwhelmed by pleasure, Uncle Richard said, “How time flies! Eight years has passed. I always want to apologize but I am afraid that my brother wouldn't accept it.n Hearing his explanation. Prissy knew she did a right thing. She invited Uncle David to come to her home the next day when her father would be at home, saying that love can eliminate all hatred. Prissy's father was extremely happy to reunite with his brother. So, with love, all would turn out all right.【导语】本文以故事发展线索展开,讲述了 Prissy在商店遇到了 8年未讲过话的叔叔David,听到叔叔和 别人说自己新年一般吃一顿好的庆祝,但是这一年有事要忙,可能得吃冷饭。新年那天,Prissy 一个人在 家,爸爸出门一整天,因此不需要为爸爸做饭。想来想去,她决定去叔叔家帮他做好饭,然后偷偷离开。 没想到被叔叔撞见。两个人一起吃了 Prissy准备的美味。然后好好地聊了一下。Prissy得知叔叔想要道歉 想要和解,因此邀请他第二天去自己家。她爸爸很开心见到弟弟。由此可见,爱可以消除仇恨。第一步:段落续写:由第一段首句内容“Prissy正准备溜走时,门被推开。”可知,第一段可描写Prissy的叔叔撞见她之后, 两个人之间的交流,并一起吃了 Prissy准备的饭。由第二段首句内容“吃完饭之后,他友好礼貌地和Prissy聊天。”可知,第二段可描写两人沟通之后,叔 叔答应Prissy的邀请,去Prissy家拜访她爸爸,一家人和解。第二步:续写线索:Prissy与叔叔商店偶遇听到叔叔和他人对话内容偷偷去帮叔叔煮饭被叔叔撞见和叔叔聊 天邀请叔叔来家做客 第三步,词汇激活【行为类】晌复,问答:reply/answer.陪伴: with Prissy's company/in company with Prissy 【情绪类】.惊讶的:surprised/shocked.开心'的:overwhelmed by pleasure/pleased【点睛】高分句型 1J. He was surprised to sec that Prissy was in his house.(由连接词 that 引导的宾语从句作 see 的宾 语)高分句型 2. She invited Uncle David to come to her home the next day when her father would be at home, saying that love can eliminate all hatred.(由关系副词when引导限制性定语从句)(2022年全国高三阶段练习)It was a rainy winter evening. Joe could see an old lady on the side of the road waiting for help. So he stopped his car and got out of his car. When he came closer to her, the lady looked in despair. No one had stopped to help her fbr the last hour or so. Was he going to hurt her? He didirt look safe. Joe could see that she was scared. Knowing how she felt, Joe said quickly, 'i'm here to help you, ma'am. It is too cold outside. Please go and stay inside the car. By the way, my name is Joe.Well, all she had was a flat tire, but for an old lady, that was bad enough. While Joe was changing the tire, the lady rolled down the window and started to talk to him. She told him that she was only passing through. She was very grateful that he came to help her. Joe just smiled as he put the flat tire in the trunk (后 备箱).“How much do I owe you?” the lady asked, then adding that any amount would be all right. Joe, however, rejected the payment. uYou don't owe me a thing. Tm only passing through. Someone once helped me out. Just the way I'm helping you. If you want to pay me back, please pay it forward. Don't let the chain (链条; 连续)of love end with you. Joe responded. He waited until the old lady had started her car and driven off. It had been a cold and depressing day, but Joe felt joyful as he set off for home.Paragraph 1: A few miles down the road the lady saw a small cafe.Paragraph?: There were tables to clear and people to serve, but the pregnant (怀孕的)waitress felt a rush of warmth.【答案】A few miles down the road the lady saw a small cafe. She went in to grab a bite to eat. It was a dirty-looking restaurant. The lady noticed the waitress was nearly eight months pregnant, but she always had a sweet smile. After the meal, she paid with a one hundred dollar bill. The waitress quickly went to get change, but the old lady had slipped right out of the door by the time she came back. The waitress wondered where the lady could be. Then she noticed something written on the napkin,4tYou don't owe me anything. Someone once helped me out the way I'm helping you. If you really want (o pay me back> here is what you do: Do not let (his chain of love end with you." Under the napkin were four more $ 100 bills. Totally touched, she failed to utter a single word, tears blurring her eyes.There were tables to clear and people to serve, but the pregnant waitress felt a rush of warmth. That night when she got home from work and climbed into bed, she was thinking about the money and what (he lady had written. How could the lady have known how much she and her husband needed? With the baby due next month, it was going to be hard. She knew how worried her husband was, and as he lay sleeping next to her, she gave him a soft kiss and whispered soft and low, '"Everything is going to be all right”. It is then that the waitress decided to pass the chain of love on.【导语】文章主要讲述了在一个多雨的冬夜,Joe看到一位老太太在路边等待帮助。于是他停下车,邀请 老太太上了她的车。当老太太提出给她报酬时,他说:“有人曾经帮助过我,就像我帮助你一样。如果你 想还我钱,请让爱继续传递下去。”第一步:段落续写:由第一段首句内容“沿着这条路走了几英里后,这位女士看到了一家小咖啡馆。”可知,第一段可描写老 太太在咖啡馆看到了需要帮助的人,并提供帮助。由第二段首句内容“有桌子要清理,有人要服务,但怀孕的女服务员感到一阵温暖。”可知,第二段可描 写受到了帮助的女服务员决心将爱传递下去。第二步:续写线索:进咖啡馆一看到怀孕的女服务员艰难地工作一提供帮助感到温暖爱心传递 第三步:词汇激活【行为类】注意、到:notice/spot/observe帮助:help/aid/assist回报:pay back/reward【情绪类】感动:moved/louched担忧的:worried/ anxious/concerned【点睛】高分句型 1 Totally touched, she failed to utter a single word, tears blurring her eyes.(过去分词作状语,独立主 格结构)高分句型 2 That night when she got home from work and climbed into bed, she was thinking about the money and what (he lady had written.(where限制性定语从句,whal引导的宾语从句)高分句型 3 It is then that the waitress decided to pass the chain of love on.(强调句)6. (2022年江苏泰州高三统考期中)Nellie and I have been best friends for if long as I can remember. We were born only a few days apart, so every year we planned a combined birthday. When we were in seventh grade, our moms said we could invite boys to our party.We were writing out (he invitation list when my mom came up. "What about inviting John?” Mom asked.John had been in our class fbr only two months, but he got better grades in math and science than anyone else in class. He was a loner, though, and hadn't made many friends.I wrinkled my nose. "Mom. he wears the same pants every day. How could he even afford a costumc?“The same pants? Mom frowned.“Yes. Brown corduroy ones'sighed.After school the next day, as Nellie and I were cutting paper for decorations, Mom handed me an envelope.“Nellie's mom and I thought it'd be nice fbr you two to give this to John J Mom said as she headed back to her office.I opened the envelope delicately. Inside was a gift certificate for our favorite department store. Staring at the certificate in shock, we both knew how many cute clothes that would buy.“So, arc wc going to hand it to 1 asked.“How embarrassing that would be!” Nellie said.Indeed, John would be ashamed if wc gave him money for clothes. "What if wc slip it into his desk when no one is looking?,' I proposed.“He'd probably give it to the teacher, and then we'd have to say it was fbr him in front of the whole class. Nellie rolled her eyes. More embarrassing. We had to think of something else.“I have an idea.” Nellie snatched the envelope.“What?”“I won't tell you." Nellie sang as she ran away.Paragraph 1:For days I watched Nellie and John carefully.Paragraph 2:John finally came in a dingy shirt, with the same brown corduroy pants.【答案】Para 1:For days I watched Nellie and John carefully. But, there were no new pants. I kept wondering what might have happened to the certificate. Maybe, John was just saving (hem for the parly. I even doubted if Nellie had used it fbr herself. But, in a moment, I told myself that she wouldn,t do that. For days, I just watched in vain fbr new pants to appear until (he day of our party when my guests arrived in smart costumes.Para 2:John finally came in an old shirt. wi【h the same brown corduroy uanis. Nobody seemed to care, though. I was still thinking about the certificate when Nellie announced there was a math game for a prize. As it turned out, John had the last laugh and became the winner. Nellie took out a box, in which was the very envelope! i couldn't be too proud to have a friend like Nellie. The next week, John wore a pair of new pants eveiy day, bearing a big smile on his face.【分析】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了作者和好朋友Nellie发现班上的新同学John总是穿同样的裤子, 于是Nellie想了办法,在不伤害John情感的情况下,给了 John 一张百货公司的礼券。第一步:段落续写:由第一段首句内容“一连几