写作如何写好高中英语作文Englishwriting.pptx
如何写好高中英语作文？Howtowriteanexcellentcomposition？给阅卷人以好的第一直观印象给阅卷人以好的第一直观印象整整体体三三部部分分1.Heading点题；一两个句子；概括性；暗示性2.Body 中心记述部分；层次分明3.Ending 小结；呼应主题高中英语作文的三个层次。第一层次：第二层次：第三层次：简单句基础篇短语连词升华篇从句非谓语动词终极篇稳拿及格分，略有盈余：9-11优等分数:12-13卓越得分13-15简单句基础篇DearTom,IrememberthatyoutoldmeyouwantedtoworkinChina.Now,ourschoolneedsateacherfromothercountries.Youcanhaveatry.YoucanteachSpokenEnglish,EnglishWriting,BritainTodayandAmericanToday.Youwillteachhighschoolstudents.Youneedtowork10hoursaweek.Youonlyneedtoteachthreecourses.YoucanalsobeanadvisortoourstudentsEnglishcluborourschoolsEnglishnewspaper.Ifyouwanttocome,pleasetellme.Icanhelpyou.Yours,Wanglin短语连词升华篇DearTom,IrememberthatyouinformedmethatyouwerefondofworkinginChina.Now,ourschoolwillemployaforeignteachertoteachsomecoursestoseniorhighstudents.Youcanhaveatry.Ifyoucome,youcanchoosethreeofthefollowingfourcourses:SpokenEnglish,EnglishWriting,BritainTodayandAmericanToday.Meanwhile,youneedtowork10hoursaweek.Besides/Inaddition,youcanalsoworkasanadvisortoourstudentsEnglishcluborourschoolsEnglishnewspaper.Pleaseletmeknowinadvanceifyouareinterestedandifyouhaveanyotherquestions.Idbemorethanhappytohelp.Imlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,Wanglin从句非谓语动词终极篇DearTom,HavingbeeninformedthatyouwerefondofworkinginChina,Iwillshareapieceofgoodnewswithyou.Ourschoolwillemployaforeignteachertoteachsomecoursestoseniorhighstudents.Youcanhaveatry.Working10hoursaweek,youcanchoosethreeofthefourcourseswhichareSpokenEnglish,EnglishWriting,BritainTodayandAmericanToday.Besides/Inaddition,youcanalsoworkasanadvisortoourstudentsEnglishcluborourschoolsEnglishnewspaper.Pleaseletmeknowinadvanceifyouareinterestedandifyouhaveanyotherquestions.Idbemorethanhappytohelp.Imlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,WanglinIrememberthatyoutoldmeyouwantedtoworkinChina.Now,ourschoolneedsateacherfromothercountries.Youcanhaveatry.IrememberthatyouinformedmethatyouwerefondofworkinginChina.Now,ourschoolwillemployaforeignteachertoteachsomecoursestoseniorhighstudents.Youcanhaveatry.HavingbeeninformedthatyouwerefondofworkinginChina,Iwillshareapieceofgoodnewswithyou.Ourschoolwillemployaforeignteachertoteachsomecoursestoseniorhighstudents.Youcanhaveatry.YoucanteachSpokenEnglish,EnglishWriting,BritainTodayandAmericanToday.Youwillteachhighschoolstudents.Youneedtowork10hoursaweek.Youonlyneedtoteachthreecourses.YoucanalsobeanadvisortoourstudentsEnglishcluborourschoolsEnglishnewspaper.Ifyoucome,youcanchoosethreeofthefollowingfourcourses:SpokenEnglish,EnglishWriting,BritainTodayandAmericanToday.Meanwhile,youneedtowork10hoursaweek.Besides/Inaddition,youcanalsoworkasanadvisortoourstudentsEnglishcluborourschoolsEnglishnewspaper.Working10hoursaweek,youcanchoosethreeofthefourcourseswhichareSpokenEnglish,EnglishWriting,BritainTodayandAmericanToday.Besides/Inaddition,youcanalsoworkasanadvisortoourstudentsEnglishcluborourschoolsEnglishnewspaper.Ifyouwanttocome,pleasetellme.Icanhelpyou.Pleaseletmeknowinadvanceifyouareinterestedandifyouhaveanyotherquestions.Idbemorethanhappytohelp.Imlookingforwardtoyourreply.技技 巧巧1.使用高级词汇使用高级词汇3.使用连接使用连接词词书面表达书面表达高分高分的技巧的技巧2.使用丰富使用丰富的句式的句式定语从句英语作文常用连词First/Firstofall,首先Inthefirstplace,首先ToBegin/startwith,首先Second/Secondly,其次Lastbutnottheleast,最后一点，也是非常重要的点条理:表举例:forinstance例如forexample例如表对比和转折:however,但是onthecontrary,恰恰相反nevertheless,尽管如此，然而otherwise,否则instead,相反ontheonehand,一方面ontheotherhand,另一方面Because(of)因为Therefore,.所以Asaresult/consequence,.结果Thanksto.因为表因果:furthermore,此外而且inaddition,此外而且whatsmore,此外而且besides除了,此外而且notonly.butalso不仅而且表递进AsfarasIamconcerned,就我而言Inshort，.总之Inbrief，.总之Inconclusion总之Insummary总之Allinall总之Inaword总之表总结语篇训练（定语从句在写作中的应用）以下是你们班班长李华的相关信息：李华是我的好朋友，她的妈妈是我的英语老师。李华总是乐于助人，这使得她在班上很受欢迎。曾经有一段时间，她因为生病学习受到影响。在她的努力之下，她终于赶上了班上的同学。她的梦想是成为偏远地区的一名志愿者，那里的人们非常需要帮助。1.李华是我的好朋友，她的妈妈是我的英语老师。Lihuaismygoodfriend.HermotherismyEnglishteacher.2.李华总是乐于助人，这使得她在班上很受欢迎。Sheisalwaysreadytohelpothers.Itmakesherpopularamongthewholeclass.3.曾经有一段时间，她因为生病学习受到影响。Lihua,whosemotherismyEnglishteacher,ismygoodfriend.Sheisalwaysreadytohelpothers,whichmakesherpopularamongthewholeclass.Therewasatimewhenherstudysufferedbecauseofherillness.她的梦想是成为偏远地区的一名志愿者，那里的人们非常需要帮助。Now,herdreamistobecomeavolunteerintheremoteareas.Peopleareingreatneedofhelp.Now,herdreamistobecomeavolunteerintheremoteareas,wherepeopleareingreatneedofhelp.联合国教科文组织某考察团正在我国某乡村参观考察。假定你是接待人员,请根据下列提示以发言稿的形式简要介绍这个村的情况：1)大小：近100户人家，约500口人。2)变化：过去很穷，78年后变化很大。人们生活比以前好多了。现已旧貌换新颜。3)教育：原来的学校很小，现已经过改建。新建的教学楼有4层，是村里最美的建筑物。村所有学龄儿童在此免费就读。注意：1）要点齐全，前后连贯。2）词数：100-120之间。Ladiesandgentlemen,Welcometoourschool.Thisvillageisverysmall.Ithasnearly100familiesandabout500people.Itusedtobeverypoor.Ithaschangedalotsince1978.Peopleherearericherthanbefore.Nowitistakingonanewlook.Theschoolherewasverysmall.Nowithasbeenrebuilt.Thenewlybuiltteachingbuildinghas4storeys.Itisthemostbeautifulbuildinginthevillage.Alltheschool-agechildrencanstudyhere.Theyenjoyfreeeducationinit.Thankyou.改写文章要求：1.扩展句子内容；2.变高级词汇；3.变定语从句；4.加短语和连词Ladies and gentlemen,Welcome to our school!This village is a small one with/which has nearly 100 families and about 500 people.It used to be very poor.However,it has changed a lot since 1978 and has been developing very fast.People here live a much better life than before.Now it is taking on a new look.In the past,the school here was very small and most children couldnt afford to go to school.But now it has been rebuilt and the newly built teaching building which has 4 storeys is the most beautiful one in the village.All the school-age children can study here.Whats more,they enjoy free education.May you enjoy your stay here/May you have a pleasant time here!Thank you.常用开篇句式：1.hasbothadvantagesanddisadvantages既有利又有弊。2.plays animportantrole/partin在中扮演重要角色起重要作用。ObviouslytelevisionhasbothadvantagesanddisadvantagesLivinginacityhasbothadvantagesanddisadvantagesComputersplayanimportantroleinscienceandtechnologyEducationplaysanimportantpartindevelopingourmind3.Withthedevelopmentof随着的发展，4.Whenitcomesto,somepeoplethink.AsfarasIamconcerned,Withtherapiddevelopmentofscienceandtechnology,peoplecan
