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2020年7月浙江省高考读后续写精讲whowhatwhenwhereElli and I,polar bearsto photograph polar bearsa research camp outside.,CanadaQ:What was taking pictures of polar bears like?one fallOne fall,my wife Elli and I had a single goal:to photograph polar bears.We were staying at are research camp outside the polar bear capital of the world-the town of Churchill in Manitoba,Canada.Taking pictures of polar bears is amazing but also dangerousamazing but also dangerous.Polar bears-like all wild animals-should be photographed from a safe distance.When Im face to face with a polar bear,I like it to be through a camera with a telephoto lens.But sometimes,that is easier said than done.This was one of those times.As Elli and I cooked dinner,a young male polar bear who was playing in a nearby lake sniffed and smelled our garlic bread.The hungry bear followed his nose to our camp,which was surrounded by a high wire fence.He pulled and bit the wire.He stood on his back legs and pushed at the wooden fence posts.Terrified.Elli and I tried all the bear defense actions we knew.We yelled at the bear,hit potshard,and fired blank shotgun shells into the air.Sometimes loud noises like these will scare bears off.Not this polar bear though-he just kept trying to tear down the fence with his massive paws(爪子).I radioed the camp manager for help.He told me a helicopter was on its way,but it would be 30 minutes before it arrived.Making the best of this close encounter(相遇)I took some pictures of the bear.Elli and I feared the fence wouldnt last through 30 more minutes of the bears punishment.The camp manager suggested I use pepper spray.The spray burns the bears eyes,but doesnt hurt them.So I approached our uninvited guest slowly and,through the fence,sprayed him in the face.With an angry roar(吼叫),the bear ran to the lake to wash his eyes.Q:What was taking pictures of polar bears like?One fall,my wife Elli and I had a single goal:to photograph polar bears.We were staying at are research camp outside the polar bear capital of the world-the town of Churchill in Manitoba,Canada.Taking pictures of polar bears is amazing but also dangerous.Polar bears-like all wild animals-should be photographed from a safe distance.When Im face to face with a polar bear,I like it to be through a camera with a telephoto lens.But sometimes,that is easier said than done.This was one of those times.As Elli and I cooked dinner,a young male polar bear who was playing in a nearby lake sniffed and smelled our garlic bread.The hungry bear followed his nose to our camp,which was surrounded by a high wire fence.He pulled and bit the wire.He stood on his back legs and pushed at the wooden fence posts.Terrified.Elli and I tried all the bear defense actions we knew.We yelled at the bear,hit potshard,and fired blank shotgun shells into the air.Sometimes loud noises like these will scare bears off.Not this polar bear though-he just kept trying to tear down the fence with his massive paws(爪子).I radioed the camp manager for help.He told me a helicopter was on its way,but it would be 30 minutes before it arrived.Making the best of this close encounter(相遇)I took some pictures of the bear.Elli and I feared the fence wouldnt last through 30 more minutes of the bears punishment.The camp manager suggested I use pepper spray.The spray burns the bears eyes,but doesnt hurt them.So I approached our uninvited guest slowly and,through the fence,sprayed him in the face.With an angry roar(吼叫),the bear ran to the lake to wash his eyes.Q:What does“that”refer to in this sentence?thatOne fall,my wife and I had a single goal:to photograph polar bears.We were staying at a research camp outside“the polar bear capital of the world”-the town of Churchill in Manitoba,Canada.Taking pictures of polar bears is amazing but also dangerous.Polar bears-like all wild animals-should be photographed from a safe distance.When Im face to face with a polar bear,I like it to be through a camera with a telephoto lens.But sometimes,that is easier said than done.This was one of those times.As Elli and I cooked dinner,a young male polar bear who was playing in a nearby lake sniffed,and smelled our spaghetti and garlic bread.The hungry bear followed his nose to our camp,which was surrounded by a high,wire fence.He clawed,bit,and shoved the wire mesh.He stood on his hind legs and pushed at the wooden fence posts.Terrified,Elli and I tried all the bear defense actions we knew.We yelled at the bear,banged pots,and fired blank shotgun shells into the air.Sometimes loud noises like these will scare bears off.Not this polar bear-he just growled and went back to trying to tear down the fence with his massive paws.I radioed the camp manager for help.He told me a helicopter was on its way,but it would be 30 minutes before it arrived.Making the best of this close encounter,I snapped some pictures of the bear.Elli and I feared the fence wouldnt last through 30 more minutes of the bears punishment.The camp manager suggested I use pepper spray.The spray burns the bears eyes,but doesnt hurt them.So I crept up to our uninvited guest and,though the fence,sprayed him in the face.With an angry roar,the bear ran back to the lake to wash his eyes.Q:What does“those times”refer to in this sentence?those timesOne fall,my wife and I had a single goal:to photograph polar bears.We were staying at a research camp outside“the polar bear capital of the world”-the town of Churchill in Manitoba,Canada.Taking pictures of polar bears is amazing but also dangerous.Polar bears-like all wild animals-should be photographed from a safe distance.When Im face to face with a polar bear,I like it to be through a camera with a telephoto lens.But sometimes,that is easier said than done.This was one of those times.As Elli and I cooked dinner,a young male polar bear who was playing in a nearby lake sniffed,and smelled our spaghetti and garlic bread.The hungry bear followed his nose to our camp,which was surrounded by a high,wire fence.He clawed,bit,and shoved the wire mesh.He stood on his hind legs and pushed at the wooden fence posts.Terrified,Elli and I tried all the bear defense actions we knew.We yelled at the bear,banged pots,and fired blank shotgun shells into the air.Sometimes loud noises like these will scare bears off.Not this polar bear-he just growled and went back to trying to tear down the fence with his massive paws.I radioed the camp manager for help.He told me a helicopter was on its way,but it would be 30 minutes before it arrived.Making the best of this close encounter,I snapped some pictures of the bear.Elli and I feared the fence wouldnt last through 30 more minutes of the bears punishment.The camp manager suggested I use pepper spray.The spray burns the bears eyes,but doesnt hurt them.So I crept up to our uninvited guest and,though the fence,sprayed him in the face.With an angry roar,the bear ran back to the lake to wash his eyes.those timesThis time,it was going to be dangerous!Orientationsetting the sceneOne fall,my wife and I had a single goal:to photograph polar bears.We were staying at a research camp outside“the polar bear capital of the world”-the town of Churchill in Manitoba,Canada.Taking pictures of polar bears is amazing but also dangerous.Polar bears-like all wild animals-should be photographed from a safe distance.When Im face to face with a polar bear,I like it to be through a camera with a telephoto lens.But sometimes,that is easier said than done.This was one of those times.a dangerous encounter with polar bearsComplication series of eventsWhat happened?How was it going to be solved?As Elli and I cooked dinner,a young male polar bear who was playing in a nearby lake sniffed and smelled our garlic bread.The hungry bear followed his nose to our camp,which was surrounded by a high wire fence.He pulled and bit the wire.He stood on his back legs and pushed at the wooden fence posts.Terrified.Elli and I tried all the bear defense actions we knew.We yelled at the bear,hit potshard,and fired blank shotgun shells into the air.Sometimes loud noises like these will scare bears off.Not this polar bear though-he just kept trying to tear down the fence with his massive paws(爪子).I radioed the camp manager for help.He told me a helicopter was on its way,but it would be 30 minutes before it arrived.Making the best of this close encounter(相遇)I took some pictures of the bear.Elli and I feared the fence wouldnt last through 30 more minutes of the bears punishment.The camp manager suggested I use pepper spray.The spray burns the bears eyes,but doesnt hurt them.So I approached our uninvited guest slowly and,through the fence,sprayed him in the face.With an angry roar(吼叫),the bear ran to the lake to wash his eyes.our dinner attracted a young polar bearActions of my wife and IReactions of the polar bear 1try bear defense actions23yell at;hit potshard;fire blank shotgun shellsmaking loud noises to scare bears offkeep trying to tear down the fenceradio sb for helpa helicopter,30 m to arriveuse pepper sprayapproach slowly,spray in the facean angry roar,run to wash his eyesOrientationsetting the scenea dangerous encounter with polar bearsComplication series of eventsWhat happened?How was it going to be solved?our dinner attracted a young polar bearwe tried many ways but in vainOrientationsetting the scenea dangerous encounter with polar bearsComplication series of eventsWhat happened?How was it going to be solved?our dinner attracted a young polar bearwe tried many ways but in vainparagraph 1:A few minutes later,the bear headed back to ourcamp.ResolutionHow was the problem solved?paragraph 2:At that very moment,the helicopter arrived.What character traits of my wife and I do you find in the passage?provide clues from the text.adventurousone single goal to photograph polar bears-amazing but dangerousdeterminedMaking the best of this close encounter I took some pictures of the bear.kindto scare bears off;the spray burns the eyes,but doesnt hurt themWhat would be the possible reason(s)that lead the bears to the camp?1.sniff and smell our garlic bread2.follow his nose3.sometimes loud noises will scare bears off-but not this oneThe polar bear was in desperate need of food.Why would a polar bear living in its natural habitat be so hungry?1.climate change lead to food shortage2.Lose its way to its home3.Illness prevents it from hunting for food4.two adventurous and kind fans of photographya hungry and angry bearThey both wanted to protect themselves,one from hunger,the other from the attack.Can the situation be solved peacefully?Theme:can animals and humans live harmoniously with each other?He pulled and bit the wire.He stood on his back legs and pushed at the wooden fence posts.he just kept trying to tear down the fence with his massive paws.With an angry roar,the bear ran to the lake to wash his eyes.Vivid descriptionsThen,finally,the bear got angry,rose up on his hind legs,and began to growl.The bear began to chase him and Keesh ran away.But as Keesh ran,he dropped a little round ball on the ice.The bear stopped and smelled it,then swallowed it.This continued,and then the bear suddenly stood upright and roared loudly in pain and ran around wildly,beating its paws madly against its body.After a while the bear grew weak and tired,for he was very heavy and had been jumping around violently.Finally he went off to the ice along the shore,shaking his head slowly from side to side,and sitting down now and then to squeal and cry.-Keesh by Jack LondonThe sun caught the ends of the hairs along his back.Shining black and silky the bear stood on its hind legs,half up,and studied Brain,just studied him,then lowered itself and moved slowly to the left,eating berries as it rolled along,wuffling and delicately using its mouth to lift each berry from the stem,and in seconds it was gone.Gone,and Brian still had not moved.His tongue was stuck the top of his mouth,the tip half out,his eyes were wide and his hands were reaching for a berry.-Hatchet by Gary PaulsenBut then she stopped,turned,and charged straight for me.She was on top of me,biting my arms,shoulders,and backpack.The force of each bite was like a sledgehammer with teeth.Over and over she bit me.After what felt like hours but was merely minutes,she disappeared.She slammed down on top of me and bit my shoulder and arms.Suddenly she stopped.There was dead silence except for the sound of her heavy breathing and sniffing.I could feel her breath on the back of my neck and her front claws digging into my lower back below my pack,where she stood.I could smell the terrible,pungent odor she emitted.For 30 seconds,she stood there crushing memy chest smashed into the ground,my forehead in the dirt.And then she was gone.-The Unbelievable True Story of the Hiker Who Survived Back-to-Back Grizzly Bear AttacksA few minutes later,the bear came back.With two bloodshot and swollen eyes,he let out a deafening roar,charged at the fence and shoved the mesh with his full strength.The fence couldnt help trembling.Moaning and groaning,which deeply wrung our heart.It would have devastated anything in its way and attack us in a few minutes.We have no aternative but to anxiously wait for the helicopter.With a cracking noise,the bear rushed in,approaching us rapidly.We tried pepper spray again,but in vain.Elli and I were forced to flee separately to escape the outrageous claws.At the very moment,the helicopter arrived.With the bear chasing behind,“Elli,come on,”I yelled,attracting the bear to an opposite direction,but unfortunately,I was trapped to a narrow corner,where I could almost hear the gasps of it.At the very moment,several gunshots echoed to scare it off.The bear lifted his face and stared at the giant figure of the helicopter.Slowly,he flinched.Relieved yet enhausted,I climbed into the helicopter,hugging tightly with Elli.It was such a breathtaking experience,but as I developed the film later,it all just became worthwhile.点评：本文通过细腻的描写勾画出了千钧一发之际的惊险，（字数超出规定，不忍删减，当然也会跟学生探讨这个问题）；最后“洗出的照片”很完美地回照了前文！Afewminuteslater,thebearcameback.Nosetwitchingandmouthwideopening,heslammedonthebrokenfencewith hispowerfulpaws.Wecouldevensawthesharpteethinsideandheardthedeepvoicefromthebottomofhisthroat.He was absolutelyonedge.Wepacedback,lookedstraightintohiseyesandpretendednottobeafraid.Onthevast snowfield,nothingcouldbeheardexceptourrapid heartbeatswiththecracksfromthefence.Suddenly,ahuge shadowpouncedonuswithoutmercy.Achillspreadingdownmyspine,whatwecould dowaslyingdownandpraying.Attheverymoment,thehelicopterarrived.Anarrowwith specialmedicinewasshot,whichcameintoeffect immediately.Thebearfaintedontothegroundjustseveralmetersawayfromus.Wequicklypackedourbaggage,boardedthehelicopterandfinallybreathedasighofrelief.Lookingoutside,themassivebearseemedhelplessespeciallyinthisfrozenisland.Themanagerexplainedthatitwasthe climatechangethatforcedpolarbearsintosuchhungry situation.Weraisedourcameraandshootthelonelybear withthemeltedglacier,hopinghimto be safe and sound.点评：本文部分描写语言略显生涩，