【2021中考英语作文热门话题】话题11-经历与感受课件.pptx

话题话题11 经历经历与感受与感受(2017；2016；2011)命命题题探索探索教材教材链链接接三三阶阶攻关攻关目目 录录写作写作练练兵兵写作技巧写作技巧9 用用it作形式主作形式主语语和形式和形式宾语宾语返回目返回目录录话题话题11 经历经历与感受与感受分析河南分析河南近近10年中招真年中招真题书题书面表达可知面表达可知，“经历经历与感与感受受”这这 一一话题话题主要考主要考查查：自己的自己的经历经历与感受，与感受，如如2017年年“I did it！”，2016 年年“The biggest personal change I ve ever made”；他人他人 的的经历对经历对自己的影响，如自己的影响，如2011年通年通过过刘刘伟伟的故事得到什么的故事得到什么样样的的启示。启示。命 题 探 索返回目返回目录录话题话题11 经历经历与感受与感受教 材 链 接返回目返回目录录话题话题11 经历经历与感受与感受典例剖析典例剖析(2017河南河南)我我们们每天都要做很多事情，有些每天都要做很多事情，有些还还很棘手。很棘手。请请 以以“I did it！”为题为题并根据要点和要求，用英并根据要点和要求，用英语语写一篇短文，写一篇短文，审标题审标题：棘手的事情我做到了：棘手的事情我做到了描述一件你完成的棘手事情描述一件你完成的棘手事情。审审文体：文体：记记叙文叙文 审审人称：第一人称人称：第一人称审时态审时态：一般：一般过过去去时时一 阶审 好 题二 阶写 好 句三 阶练 语 段&成 篇章返回目返回目录录话题话题11 经历经历与感受与感受2.要求：要求：1)文中不得出文中不得出现现真真实实姓名和学校名称；姓名和学校名称；2)词词数数80左右。左右。1.要求：要求：1)你做了什么事情；你做了什么事情；2)你是如何做那件事情的；你是如何做那件事情的；3)你你做完那件事情后的感受做完那件事情后的感受。审时态审时态：一般：一般现现在在时时一 阶审 好 题二 阶写 好 句三 阶练 语 段&成 篇章返回目返回目录录话题话题11 经历经历与感受与感受角度角度 1介介绍经历绍经历一 阶审 好 题二 阶写 好 句三 阶练好好句句记记 背背1.Two years ago,I didnt have the courage to answer questions in class.2.It was that time that I decided to help more people in need.3.My father told me a story on my way home and he helped me to语 段&成 篇 章plan my time properly.返回目返回目录录话题话题11 经历经历与感受与感受4.She encouraged me to be kind to others and learn to communicate with others.5.The young man next to our table spoke and laughed loudly.6.I was about to take a shower when the phone rang last night.一 阶审 好 题二 阶写 好 句三 阶练语 段&成 篇 章返回目返回目录录话题话题11 经历经历与感受与感受3.在回家的路上，我在回家的路上，我发现发现地上有一个地上有一个钱钱包。包。一 阶审 好 题二 阶写 好 句三 阶练句句子子仿仿写写1.三年前，我没有勇气承三年前，我没有勇气承认认自己的自己的错误错误。Three years ago,I didnt have the courage to admit my mistakes.2.就是在那个就是在那个时时候我决定努力学候我决定努力学习习。It was that time that I decided to study hard.语 段&成 篇 章On my way home,I found a wallet on the ground.返回目返回目录录话题话题11 经历经历与感受与感受4.我的老我的老师师鼓励我鼓励我积积极参加极参加课课外活外活动动。My teacher encouraged me to take an active part in afterclassactivities.5.坐在我旁坐在我旁边边的女孩大声的女孩大声说话说话很很长时间长时间。The girl next to me spoke loudly for a long time.6.我正准我正准备备打打扫扫教室的教室的时时候我的好朋友候我的好朋友进进来了。来了。I was about to clean the classroom when my best friend came in.一 阶审 好 题二 阶写 好 句三 阶练 语 段&成 篇 章返回目返回目录录话题话题11 经历经历与感受与感受角度角度 2介介绍绍感受感受一 阶审 好 题二 阶写 好 句三 阶练 语 段好好句句记记 背背1.She lost her favorite notebook.She lost her favorite notebook.How upset she was!2.I could hardly think clearly after that terrible earthquake.I was so scared that I could hardly think clearly after that terrible earthquake.八八(下下)Unit 5 P38&成 篇 章返回目返回目录录话题话题11 经历经历与感受与感受3.I have no idea on how to remember new words quickly.I often feel stressed because I have no idea on how to remember new words quickly.4.I won the first prize in the reading competition.I won the first prize in the reading competition.I was really happy that day.一 阶审 好 题二 阶写 好 句三 阶练 语段&成 篇 章返回目返回目录录话题话题11 经历经历与感受与感受I got a better result in the monthly exam.How excited I was！2.He didnt know what to say.(扩扩 写写 感感 受受)He was so nervous that he didnt know what to say.3.I dont want to speak in front of so many people.(扩扩写感受写感受)I feel so worried and afraid because I dont want to speak in 一 阶审 好 题二 阶写 好 句三 阶练 语句句子子扩扩写写1.I got a better result in the monthly exam.(扩扩写感受写感受)段&成 篇 章front of so many people.返回目返回目录录话题话题11 经历经历与感受与感受4.They said there were no tickets left.(扩扩 写写 感感 受受)They said there were no tickets left.I was unhappy that day.5.I talked back to my parents yesterday.(扩扩写感受写感受)I talked back to my parents yesterday.I feel regretful now.一 阶审 好 题二 阶写 好 句三 阶练语 段&成 篇 章返回目返回目录录话题话题11 经历经历与感受与感受1.His story taught me not to give up my dream and work hard to make it come true.2.From his experience,I realized that helping others can make the world more beautiful and can let others respect us at the same time.3.His words touched my heart and I would remember them一 阶审 好 题二 阶写 好 句三 阶练角度角度 3他人他人经历对经历对自己的影响自己的影响好好句句记记 背背语 段&成 篇 章forever.返回目返回目录录话题话题11 经历经历与感受与感受2.从她的从她的经历经历中，我意中，我意识识到了微笑在日常生活中的重要性。到了微笑在日常生活中的重要性。From her experience,I realized the importance of smiling in3.他温暖的他温暖的话给话给了我勇气和自信，我会永了我勇气和自信，我会永远记远记住他的支持。住他的支持。His warm words gave me courage and confidence and I would一 阶审 好 题二 阶写 好 句三 阶练 语 daily life.段&成 篇 章remember his support forever.句句子子仿仿写写1.这这次次经历经历教会我不要小瞧教会我不要小瞧别别人。人。This experience taught me not to look down upon others.返回目返回目录录话题话题11 经历经历与感受与感受_(棘棘手手 的事的事情情).I didnt know what I should do at first.And I felt_(对对事情的感受事情的感受)Then(Last year,I met a difficult situation.I failed the exam/couldnt understand what the teacher said in class/.asked the teacher for help/reviewed the lessons carefully/.disappointed/stressed/.经历经历及感受及感受一 阶审 好 题二 阶写 好 句三 阶练 语练语练语段段语语段段练练习习1段&成 篇 章应对应对的的办办法法).返回目返回目录录话题话题11 经历经历与感受与感受Finally,I got a high score in the final exam/made progress in English/.(最后的最后的结结果果).I was so satisfied/was excited/.(对结对结果的感受果的感受)一 阶审 好 题二 阶写 好 句三 阶练 语 段&成 篇 章返回目返回目录录话题话题11 经历经历与感受与感受Liu Wei lost his left arm by accident but he didnt giveup his dream of being a pianist/She/He failed many times to他人他人经历对经历对自己的影响自己的影响一 阶审 好 题二 阶写 好 句三 阶经历经历).As a student,Ive learned a lot from his/her story.练 语 段&成 篇 章 do the research,but she/he didnt give up/.(简单简单描述励志的描述励志的语语段段练练习习2返回目返回目录录话题话题11 经历经历与感受与感受(影响影响 1).No matter howhard life is,We may meet a lot of difficulties in our life,but we should believe that our dream will come true by working hard/_never lose confidence in ourselves/.we wont fail unless we give up our hope/weshould keep on going/.(影响影响2)一 阶审 好 题二 阶写 好 句三 阶练 语 段&成篇 章返回目返回目录录话题话题11 经历经历与感受与感受I did it!How nervous I was when I was told to give a speech in front of my classs!It was my first speech and I didnt know what to do.My teacher encouraged me and gave me some useful advice.After I chose a topic I liked best,I watched videos about how to be a good speaker and I learnt a lot of skills.Then I practiced and practiced.Finally,the big day came.I did it!Everyone loved my speech.I was so proud of myself.一 阶审 好 题二 阶写 好 句三 阶练 语 段&成成篇章成篇章篇 章返回目返回目录录话题话题11 经历经历与感受与感受写写 作作 练练 兵兵人生中有很多第一次做的事，如第一次游泳，人生中有很多第一次做的事，如第一次游泳，第一次第一次赢赢得比得比赛赛你你记忆记忆最深的是什么呢？最深的是什么呢？请请根据以下要点根据以下要点 和要求用英和要求用英语语写一篇短文。写一篇短文。1.要点：要点：1)这这件事情是什么；件事情是什么；2)这这件事情件事情发发生的生的过过程；程；3)你的感受。你的感受。2.要求：要求：1)文中不得出文中不得出现现真真实实姓名和学校名称；姓名和学校名称；2)词词数数100左右。左右。2020 新新变变化化返回目返回目录录话题话题11 经历经历与感受与感受写 作 练 兵As we all know,everyone has his unforgettable memories.I still remember the first time I climbed the mountain.Three years ago,all students in my class were asked toclimb a mountain.It was my first time to do things like this.Ifelt very excited at first.We set off at 8 am.in the morningand I supposed it might be an easy journey.However,as time went by,someone wanted to give up.返回目返回目录录话题话题11 经历经历与感受与感受写 作 练 兵The teacher encouraged us to reach the top of the mountain.Although in the end we were tired,we were really attracted bythe scenery at the top and our feelings cant be expressed bywords.From that time,I learned not to give up when facingdifficulties.Only when I keep doing it and finish it can I have a sense of achievement.返回目返回目录录话题话题11 经历经历与感受与感受当不定式当不定式(短短语语)、动动名名词词(短短语语)或从句在某个句子中作或从句在某个句子中作宾宾语时语时，为为保持句子保持句子结结构平衡，避免句式构平衡，避免句式结结构的混乱，常用构的混乱，常用it作形作形 式式宾语宾语，而将真正的，而将真正的宾语宾语放在句尾，此放在句尾，此时时it仍只起先行引仍只起先行引导导作用，作用，本身无本身无词义词义。巧 用 it 作 形 式 主 语 和 形式宾 语返回目返回目录录话题话题11 经历经历与感受与感受1.it作形式主作形式主语语：We should learn English well.Its important.It is important for us to learn English well.2.it作形式作形式宾语宾语：We must finish the task on time.We find it hard.We find it hard to finish the task on time.巧 用 it 作 形 式 主 语 和 形句式句式连连接范例接范例式宾 语返回目返回目录录话题话题11 经历经历与感受与感受小小试试牛刀牛刀1.我我们们做决定的做决定的时时候到了。候到了。It is time for us to make decisions.2.这这个个问题问题太太难难以至于不能解决。以至于不能解决。The question is too difficult to solve.3.我我发现发现通通过这过这种方式学种方式学习习很容易。很容易。I find it easy to learn in this way.巧 用 it 作 形 式 主 语 和 形 式宾语返回目返回目录录话题话题11 经历经历与感受与感受4.We should take action from now on.Its important.(用用it作形式作形式 主主语语)Its important for us to take action from now on.5.Is it necessary to wait in line?What do you think？(用用it作形式作形式 宾语宾语)Do you think it necessary to wait in line?巧 用 it 作 形 式 主 语 和 形 式宾语