2020届高三英语一轮复习Polishyourcomposition教学突破ppt课件.pptx

Welcome to My Class没文化的人：哎呀我去没文化的人：哎呀我去,你看那个太阳太好看了！你看那个太阳太好看了！有文化的人：落霞与孤鹜齐飞，秋水共长天一色有文化的人：落霞与孤鹜齐飞，秋水共长天一色没文化的人：我的天啊！上个山太难了！没文化的人：我的天啊！上个山太难了！有文化的人：有文化的人：噫吁嚱，危乎高哉噫吁嚱，危乎高哉！蜀蜀道之难，难于上青天！道之难，难于上青天！我喜欢这个剪纸，它非常漂亮。我喜欢这个剪纸，它非常漂亮。没文化：没文化：Ilikethepaper-cutting.Itisbeautiful.稍有文化：稍有文化：Iamfondofthepaper-cutting.Itisattractive.知识青年：知识青年：Thepaper-cuttingwhichImfascinatedbyisgorgeous.高考英语作文评分标准高考英语作文评分标准1.完全完成试题规定的内完全完成试题规定的内容容2 覆盖所有内容要点覆盖所有内容要点3.应用较多语法结应用较多语法结构和词汇构和词汇4.使用较复杂结构或使用较复杂结构或 较较高级词汇高级词汇;具备较强的语具备较强的语言运用能力。言运用能力。5.有效地使用了语有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。使全文结构紧凑。第五档作文第五档作文(21-25分分)6.完全达完全达到预期写到预期写作目的作目的Polish your composition2.丰富的句式丰富的句式3.恰当的连接词恰当的连接词1.运用高级运用高级词汇与短语词汇与短语华丽变身三原则华丽变身三原则1.运用高级运用高级词汇与短语词汇与短语华丽变身三原则之一华丽变身三原则之一Advanced words/phrases1.The paper-cutting is good.2.These activities are interesting.3.I will thank you if you accept my invitation.4.To take this opportunity is helpful.5.I want your reply.1.The paper-cutting is good.wonderful;fantastic;amazing;splendid;excellent2.These activities are interesting.amusing;entertaining;3.I will thank you if you accept my invitation.I would appreciate it if.I am grateful ifI will show my gratitude if.4.To take this opportunity is helpful.To take this opportunity is of help.To take this opportunity is beneficial.5.I want your reply.look forward tobe keen to/onbe longing for 2.丰富的句式丰富的句式华丽变身三原则之一华丽变身三原则之一There is nothing I couldnt give you.There is nothing I would deny you.Nothing will change my love.Open your heart to me.强调句强调句定语从句定语从句名词名词性从句性从句With复合结构复合结构被动句被动句双重否定句双重否定句非非谓语动词谓语动词倒装句倒装句状语从句状语从句1.Study hard,and you will succeed.Study hard,or you wont succeed.2.Time passed by quickly,and I improved a lot.As the time passed by quickly,I improved a lot.With the time passing by quickly,I improved a lot.3.Our English teacher will give us an open class in a very cold classroom.An open class will be given in a very cold classroom by our English teacher.We will be given an open class in a very cold classroom by our English teacher.4.Everything is possible.Nothing is impossible.5.There will be lots of interesting activities.From these activities you will have a clearer picture of China.There will be lots of interesting activities,from which you will have a clearer picture of China.6.To his surprise,the woman with no make-up looks like a ghost.a.What surprised the boy is that the woman with no make-up looks like a ghost.b.It is surprising that the woman with no make-up looks like a ghost.7.The girl is standing there.I know her.I know the girl standing there.8.My brother is brave and intelligent.So I admire him very much.My brother is brave and intelligent.Thats why I admire him very much.9.You like Chinese culture most.a.It is Chinese culture that you like most.b.It is you who like Chinese culture most.10.Because I know that you like Chinese culture most,Im writing to invite you.Knowing that you like Chinese culture most,Im writing to invite you.11.We will not only have some shows,but also some activities.Not only will we have some shows,but also some activities.Brainstorming一句多译：一句多译：众所周知，地球绕着太阳转众所周知，地球绕着太阳转。3.恰当的连接词恰当的连接词华丽变身三原则之一华丽变身三原则之一表文章顺序：表文章顺序：first of all;to start with;first and foremost;firstly,secondly in the end;表并列补充：表并列补充：whats more;besides;moreover;in addition;not onlybut also表转折关系表转折关系:but;however;while;表因果关系：表因果关系：because;so;thus;therefore;as a result;for;since表总结关系表总结关系:in short;briefly speaking;in a word;in conclusion;generally speaking;表条件关系表条件关系:if;unless;as long as;on condition thatin addition;therefore;although;as soon as;for;on one hand,on the other hand;on condition that;whats worse;before;when;1.He must be ill,_ he is absent today.2.I shared the cost of the gas with my friends._,I saved$80.3.Eating sugar is bad for our teeth._,it may make us fat.ThereforeWhats worse for 4.Xiao Ming was walking in the street _ he heard someone crying for help.5._he heard the cry for help,he jumped into the water to save the girl.As soon as when in addition;therefore;although;as soon as;for;on one hand,on the other hand;on condition that;whats worse;before;when;in addition;therefore;although;as soon as;for;on one hand,on the other hand;on condition that;whats worse;before;when;6.It was not long _ the police came.7.There will be a paper-cutting exhibition._,there will be lots of activities.8.Nothing is impossible _ you try.before on condition that In additionin addition;therefore;although;as soon as;for;on one hand,on the other hand;on condition that;whats worse;before;when;9._ he is poor,she loves him.10._,the sharing bicycle is convenient._,it is environmentally-friendly.Although On one handOn the other handPractice某学生作文范文 OurschoolwillholdaChinesepaper-cuttingexhibition.BecauseIknowthatyoulikeChinesetraditionalculturemost.Imwritingtoinviteyoutotheexhibition.Theexhibitionwillbeheldinthemuseum.Itwilllastforonlyoneday.Wewillnotonlydisplayworks,butalsowewillhaveagoodsetofpaper-cutting.Therewillbelotsofinterestingactivities.FromtheseactivitiesyouwillhaveaclearerpictureofChina.Iwillthankyouforacceptingmyinvitation.Iwillwaitforyourreply.secret Word phrase sentenceConjunction adds significanceAdd a little confidenceYou will make a difference.Homework Polish the composition of the weekly Polish the composition of the weekly test.test.Thank you!