中考英语作文指导--环境保护课件.ppt
【话题解读话题解读】环保是当今社会的一个热点话题，和我们环保是当今社会的一个热点话题，和我们每个人息息相关。它能考查学生对现实生每个人息息相关。它能考查学生对现实生活的关心程度、对事物的观察能力，而且活的关心程度、对事物的观察能力，而且能够培养学生的环保意识。考查形式通常能够培养学生的环保意识。考查形式通常是要求考生介绍一些保护环境的做法，或是要求考生介绍一些保护环境的做法，或针对一些环境现象或环保措施发表自己的针对一些环境现象或环保措施发表自己的观点，也会要求考生写环保倡议书。观点，也会要求考生写环保倡议书。【真题回放真题回放】为响应我市全面创建国家卫生城市的为响应我市全面创建国家卫生城市的号召，某校开展了号召，某校开展了“绿色港城，健康绿色港城，健康生生活活”为主题的英语征文活动。请你以为主题的英语征文活动。请你以“The Green City,the Healthy Life”为为题，根据表格中的图片及文字提示，题，根据表格中的图片及文字提示，简要描述并适当发表自己的观点，写简要描述并适当发表自己的观点，写一篇英语短文。一篇英语短文。主题主题绿色港城，健康生活绿色港城，健康生活做法做法骑车出行，减少空气污染；垃圾骑车出行，减少空气污染；垃圾入箱，保持城市整洁；多种树入箱，保持城市整洁；多种树木，保护自然环境。木，保护自然环境。观点观点(至少至少2条条)注意：注意：1)词数词数90 左右，短文开头己给出，不计入左右，短文开头己给出，不计入总词数总词数；2)不得提及考生所在学校及自己的姓名不得提及考生所在学校及自己的姓名。The Green City,the Healthy Life As a citizen of Lianyungang,its our duty to _(2016 江苏连云港江苏连云港)【真题分析真题分析】这是一篇命题作文，题目为这是一篇命题作文，题目为“The Green City,the Healthy Life”，写作时要紧紧围，写作时要紧紧围绕这个话题展开。根据文字提示，可分两绕这个话题展开。根据文字提示，可分两段来写：第一段介绍一些环保的做法；第段来写：第一段介绍一些环保的做法；第二段发表自己对这一主题的观点。在介绍二段发表自己对这一主题的观点。在介绍环保的做法时要注意语言的条理性；在发环保的做法时要注意语言的条理性；在发表观点时可以从自己对环保的认识、环保表观点时可以从自己对环保的认识、环保对健康的影响等方面来阐述对健康的影响等方面来阐述。【标准范文标准范文】The Green City,the Healthy Life As a citizen of Lianyungang,its our duty to help build a green city so that wecan live a healthy life.What can we do?We can reduce air pollution by travelingaround by bike.Its also good for our health.Its necessary for us to put rubbishinto the rubbish bin.In this way,we can keep our city clean.And wed better plant more trees to protect the natural environment.As a citizen of Lianyungang,Ill try my best to make our city cleaner and morebeautiful.In my opinion,everyone can do something to make a difference.【高分突破高分突破】The Green City,the Healthy Life As a citizen of Lianyungang,its our duty to help protect our citys environment and make it a greener place to live.Here are some small things we allcan do and should do:First of all,we can ride bicycles to and from school as much as possible to reduce air pollution.Secondly,wherever we go,we should throw rubbish into rubbish bins to keep our city clean and tidy.Last but not least,we should plant as many trees as possible to protect our citys natural environment.In my opinion,a green city is the key to a healthy life.If everyone makes acontribution to building a green city,Lianyungang will become a better place tolive.Lets take action now!【高分揭秘高分揭秘】1.习作内容紧扣主题，段落层次清晰，习作内容紧扣主题，段落层次清晰，语言准确地道语言准确地道；2.在介绍一些环保的做法时作者用了在介绍一些环保的做法时作者用了first of all,secondly和和last but not least，使，使得习作富有条理性得习作富有条理性；3.在表达观点时作者用了两个短语在表达观点时作者用了两个短语the key to和和make a contribution to，提升了习作，提升了习作的语言档次的语言档次。4.在结尾部分作者用了一个在结尾部分作者用了一个Lets开头的祈开头的祈使句来号召大家一起行动，为创建绿色使句来号召大家一起行动，为创建绿色家园而努力，语言简洁、生动、有力家园而努力，语言简洁、生动、有力。【素材积累素材积累】1.词汇词汇观点：观点：in my opinion,from my point of view,as for me其他：其他：climate change,global warming,green,recycle,reusable2.句子句子If we go on polluting the earth,it wont be fit for us to live in.Thats a problem we Chinese must pay special attention to.The development of private cars has brought about a series of problems.I believe we can make our earth a better place to live.Lets take action and be a green person!【写作任务写作任务】荣光学校九年级荣光学校九年级(2)班就班就“环境问题环境问题”召召 开了一开了一 次班会次班会，并且以，并且以“Our Environment in Ten Years:for Better or Worse?”为题进行了一次讨论。许多同学为题进行了一次讨论。许多同学对未来表示乐观，但也有些同学对未来有对未来表示乐观，但也有些同学对未来有些担心。请根据表格中的内容提示，用英些担心。请根据表格中的内容提示，用英文写一篇短文。文写一篇短文。乐观者的观点乐观者的观点 1.越来越多的人将成为环保主越来越多的人将成为环保主义者。义者。2.政府将采取更多的措施改善政府将采取更多的措施改善环境。环境。担心者的观点担心者的观点 1.大量的树木仍将被砍伐。大量的树木仍将被砍伐。2.私家车将越来越多。私家车将越来越多。你的观点及打你的观点及打算算学生自拟学生自拟(至少两点至少两点)提示：提示：1.不得出现真实的人名和地名。不得出现真实的人名和地名。2.短文中应包含至少短文中应包含至少4个要点。个要点。3.书写工整、语句通顺、连贯，词数不少书写工整、语句通顺、连贯，词数不少于于80。注意：文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。注意：文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：参考词汇：optimistic adj.乐观的乐观的 government n.政府政府 take measures to 采取措施采取措施private adj.私有的私有的Our Environment in Ten Years:for Better or Worse?Many students are optimistic about our environment in ten years._(2016 湖南衡阳湖南衡阳)Our Environment in Ten Years:for Better or Worse?Many students are optimistic about our environment in ten years.In fact,theythink that the world will be a better place than it is now.More and more people arebecoming volunteers to protect the environment.Also,the government will take more measures to improve the environment.However,other students are worriedabout the future.They think that moretrees will be cut down and there will be more private cars on the roads.They saythe environment will become worse.In my opinion,our world will become better because more and more peoplehave realized the importance of environmental protection.As for me,I will try my best to protect the environment.
