英语写作四级六级雅思.ppt

English Writing 多写1.对四级、六级、雅思、托福、GRE等考试写作的出题思路和题目构成有一个清晰全面的了解。2.在练习时注意在规定的时间内完成。离考试三个月要力求写得精彩。三个月以内要加快速度。（不一定写整篇文章，可以进行段落论证的写作。开头段、结尾段、某种论证方法、常用句型的造句练习。）保持两天写一篇以上。）多读读时着眼三方面：1.考官范文是如何提出观点并进行论证的，运用了那些论证手法。2.范文是如何安排段落的，段落之间以及句子之间是如何连接的，运用了哪些衔接手段。3.范文里有哪些精彩的词，词组和句型值得模仿。多改1.在规定时间内完成作文，然后对照范文，找出自己作文中存在的问题，问问自己以下问题：A.审题有没有错误？B.结构是否混乱？C.有没有表达不清的地方？2.仔细琢磨范文是如何展开论证的。3.重新论证不够充分的地方，修补关联不当的地方，改正错误。CET-4 DirectionsFor this part,you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic.You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese:段落长度以及文章是否跑题（digression）Stress is the reason why many people stay off working and go back to school,write an essay to state what causes the stress and suggest measures to reduce it.Sample answerSample answer:It is a curious phenomenon that nowadays more and more people are quitting their jobs and returning to school.Many of them claim that unbearable claim that unbearable stress is the primary reason why they leave the workplace.My present concern is where that stress originates and how to reduce it.Three origins of stress can be identified clearly.First,it comes from superior.In any workplace,superiors always impose great pressure on their subordinates in the form of issuing orders,setting deadlines or giving reprimands.People working under such conditions are tortured both mentally and physically.Therefore,they tend to want to stay away from work.Second,stress stems from fierce competition among colleagues.Every person aspires to success.This very desire pushes people to scramble for limited positions and resources at all costs,creating intense pressure on everyone.Third,people are confronted with job insecurity.Fear of losing ones job,which is ones only means of livelihood,compels one to work harder all the time.The three kinds of stress mentioned above jointly contribute to the great pressure people feel in the workplace.To relieve it,I wish to suggest three appropriate measures.For a start,people should look at pressure from a proper perspective.It is better to regard pressure as a positive driving force instead of as a dark,uncomfortable psychological experience.Second,people must try to eliminate mistakes in their work as far as possible.In other words,they must try to deny other people any chance to find fault with them.Third,it is wise for people to engage in one or two secondary jobs,besides their primary ones.Consequently,by not clinging to only one job,people do not face disaster if they are discharged by their major employer.In conclusion,although every employee has to put up with a certain amount of stress in his or her work,this is no excuse for us to shy away from our posts.We are able to cope with this stress in a variety of ways,and finally make it a force which serves us.CET-4(1)观点论证/阐述主题型2011年12月（Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong Will）2003年1月（It pays to be honest）1999年1月（Dont hesitate to say“No”）1997年1月（Practice Makes Perfect）观点论证型题目特点1.express your opinion about 2.How do you think about.3.Whats your opinion about 4.Comment on the statement that 观点论证型解题思路观点论证型解题思路1.Takeapositiveperspectivewithexamples2.Takeanegativeperspectivewithexamples3.TakeanuetrualpositionanddiscussfrombothperspectiveswithexamplesFollow the outlineIt Pays to be HonestDirections:For this part,you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic It Pays to Be Honest.You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese:1当前社会上存在许多不诚实的现象；2诚实利人利己，做人应该诚实。It Pays to be Honest It is true that most of us value honesty highly.However,nowadays we often confront confidence crisis such as cheating,overcharging,fake commodities and so on.I think that we should be honest because being honest is not only beneficial to ourselves but also to others and the whole society.The reasons can be listed as follows.Firstly,only honest people can be truly respected by the others and can make more friends over a long period of time.Secondly,honesty,which is the traditional virtue of the Chinese people,can make our life easier and more harmonious.For example,consumers will not be afraid of being overcharged if dealers are honest,and thus dealers can win over more customers.Thirdly,honesty can make our society more stable.A case in point is that Singapore,a society featuring trustworthiness and integrity,has a comparatively low criminal rate.It goes without saying that being honest is of great benefit to both the community and individuals.There is no doubt that we should foster the spirit of honesty.In conclusion,laying stress on honesty will become the public morals in our society.观点论证/阐述主题类：模板1It is true that(指出普遍存在的观点).However,(谈不同的观点).I think(提出自己的观点，即文章的论点).(过渡句，转向观点的论证，根据情况选择具体的词)can be listed as follows.Firstly,(论证理由一).Secondly,(论证理由二).For example,(举例具体说明理由二).Thirdly,(论证理由三).A case in point is that(举例具体说明理由三).It goes without saying that(转折句，提出执行该观点时应注意的事项).There is no doubt that(得出结论).In conclusion(总结全文).观点论证/阐述主题类：模板2 A famous saying goes that（名言或谚语。)It means that（释义：an paraphrase or interpretation of the quotation）。An example of this case is that(举例和解释）Another case in point is that(举例二)I like the saying(名言)，which encourages me (陈述理由。)学生习作（1）Dont Hesitate to Say No1.别人请求帮助时，在什么情况下我们会说不2.为什么有些人在该说不的时候不说不3.该说不时不说不的坏处Dont Hesitate to Say NoTo help those who are in need is always regarded as a traditional Chinese moral.However people have to know well what the need is before the help is offered.When the need is just for some minoritys benefit and against most peoples interests,or when it is immoral or unlawful,people should not hesitate to say No.Otherwise they will put themselves into trouble.Unfortunately,there are so many such examples around us that people end up their leadership in jail or bury their glory in shame simply because they dont say No while they should.Some people are reluctant to say No in front of all kinds of briberies as they want to swamp their power for money.They cant resist the temptations of accumulating wealth in a fast but illegal way.For their own good and their friends favor,these people would sacrifice millions of RMB Yuan for an unproportional commission and therefore stake there future on scales of law.Other people dont say No because of misinterpreted friendship and lack of sense of law.They never hesitate to do whatever their friends ask them to do.They believe they are helping their friends even when they are actually violating the law or local regulations.Such people will also be punished according to the degree of their misbehavior.Therefore,to be helpful is not always doing good.People should learn to say a No when the help might hurt other peoples interests.主题阐述类文章应注意的一点：首句照抄题目，要扣分，正确的做法是“改写”。（paraphrase and interpretation）eg,“The university should not provide so much theoretical knowledge but give students more practical training.”It has been a common belief that practical training,instead of theoretical knowledge,is what university students truly lack and therefore should become the major task of university education.Ability from Courage Change will never happen when people lack the abilityability and couragecourage to see themselves for who they are.-Bryant H.McGill Success comes from the old ABC,which is ability,breaks and courage.Courage Courage must come from the soul within,The man must furnish the will to win.So figure it out for yourself,my lad.You were born with all that the great have had,With your equipment they all began,Get hold of yourself and say:I can.(Recited by Dr.George Washington Carver during his commencement address at Selma University,Selma Alabama on May 27,1942)-Edgar A.Guest,from the poem Equipment Myopiniononability As is known to all,ability is of great importance in our daily As is known to all,ability is of great importance in our daily life.It is ability that makes us have the stength to deal with many life.It is ability that makes us have the stength to deal with many things.things.As a college student,what we do everyday is to learn the ability As a college student,what we do everyday is to learn the ability about our major.Ability varies from person to person,what they about our major.Ability varies from person to person,what they have in common is that it makes a person have in common is that it makes a person stronger.Meanwhile,ability is a complex thing.It includes the ability stronger.Meanwhile,ability is a complex thing.It includes the ability to deal with our job,the ability to solve the probelm,the ability to to deal with our job,the ability to solve the probelm,the ability to make friends with others,the ability towork with others and learn make friends with others,the ability towork with others and learn from each other.If you want to do something magnificant,you from each other.If you want to do something magnificant,you should develop your personal special ability.should develop your personal special ability.In my opinion,from now on,we should learn to realise our In my opinion,from now on,we should learn to realise our special ability and make the fullest use of it.Only in this way can we special ability and make the fullest use of it.Only in this way can we have the opportunity to compete with other peer.have the opportunity to compete with other peer.Dont Be Afraid of Failure Having the courage to win shows that you are not in fear of failure.Dont be afraid of failure.Just step up and move on.Afterall failure is the stepping stone for success.CET4-(2)比较优缺点型比较优缺点型题目特点比较优缺点型题目特点AdvantagesanddisadvantagesBenefitsanddangersStrengthsandweaknessMeritsanddrawbacksPositiveandnegative比较优缺点型解题思路比较优缺点型解题思路主体一般分为两部分：AdvantagesdisadvantagesSample:Sample:With the development of transportation,travelling by air becomes very popular in China.However,travelling by air has both favorable and unfavorable aspects.Generally,the advantages can be listed as follows:TheAdvantagesandDisadvantagesofAirTravel1.现在很多人喜欢乘飞机旅行2.乘飞机旅行的优点3.乘飞机旅行的缺点 Firstly,air travel is quicker than other transport tools and can save you a lot of time.We can fly from one big city to another in dozens of minutes.Secondly,it is very comfortable to have a medium-long flight.The air hostess will look after your every need and there are music and film to entertain you on the plane,which makes you feel like home.The third point is that air ticket becomes relatively cheaper in recent years,which attracts many people to be in favor of travelling by air.But every coin has two sides.The negative aspects are also apparent.To begin with,flying in bad weather is dangerous,and passengers have to wait in the airport if they come across strong storms or hurricane.Next,the passengers often become too exhausted after a long-distance trip and confused by the time changes due to jet lag.Nevertheless,from the above discussion,we can see that although flying involves inconvenience and slight risk,the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.Therefore,traveling by air is a priority to all other choices.On Students Choosing Lectures Nowadays,there is a hot debate about whether students should be allowed to have optional choices of their teachers.A number of factors contribute to students decision on choosing teachers.On the one hand,teachers personalities play a significant role in this issue,which include a good sense of humor,being easy to communicate with and open-mined.On the other hand,it is likely that opinions from other students have an impact on the decision.Clearly,there are both advantages and disadvantages as to the view of this matter.For one thing,students enjoy more freedom than before.For another,some top teachers might be ignored if they are not able to meet students taste.In general,both students and teachers rights should be respected.比较优缺点型：模板1 Whenever we hear people say that(主题)，well instantly have the idea that it is a goodbad Indeed,(主题)have advantages to We can take as an exampleIt will benefit(优点一).In addition,(优点二).In the meantime,we must realize those disadvantages of(主题).First of all,(缺点一)。Second,(缺点二).To sum up the above arguments,I think a proper attitude towards(主题)，is that(作者观点).CET4-(3)原因分析型Why Is There So Much Traffic Congestion in Big Cities?1.大城市的交通十分拥挤2.造成交通拥挤的原因3.结论 Nowadays,traffic jams in big cities have been increasingly serious.There are many causes of traffic jams,but in general,they come down to three major factors.For one thing,with the rapid development of motor industry,too many transportation tools are brought into use.Automobiles are especially responsible for a remarkable number of traffic jams.For another,the traffic systems in big cities were mainly established in the 1960s,so the roads are too narrow to bear such heavy traffic.Perhaps the prime reason is that the fast growth of population in big cities makes it impossible for the city to provide better traffic conditions in time.From the discussion above,we can see that traffic congestion is a problem that needs immediate concern.Governments of all levels should take positive measures to solve it.CET4-(4)How to型/problem-solving(问题解决型)How to Overcome Your Difficulties in Learning English 1998年1月（My View on Fake Commodities）2000年1月（How I Finance My College Education?）2001年1月（How to Succeed in a Job Interview?2010年6月（Due Attention Should be Given to Spelling）问题解决型题目特点Give your opinions and give some recommendations Give reasons and make some suggestions.问题解决型解题特点问题解决型解题特点如何提出问题如何分析事情原因如何提出解决方案或建议Generation gap between parents and children Nowadays,there are more and more misunderstanding between parents and children which is so-called generation gap.It is estimated that(75 percentages of parents often complain their childrens unreasonable behavior while children usually think their parents too old fashioned).Why have there been so much misunderstanding between parents and children?Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows.The first one is that(the two generations,having grown up at different times,have different likes and dislikes,thus the disagreement often rises between them).Besides(due to having little in common to talk about,they are not willing to sit face to face).The third reason is(with the pace of modern life coming faster and faster,both of them are so busy with their work or study that they dont spare enough time to exchange ideas).To sum up,the main cause of XX is due to(lake of communication and understanding each other).It is high time that something were done upon it.For one thing(children should respect their parents).On the other hand,(parents also should show solicitude for their children).All these measures will certainly bridge the generation gap.问题解决型：模版 1Nowadays,there are more and more XX in some big cities.It is estimated that(1).Why have there been so many XX?Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows.The first one is that(2).Besides,(3).The third reason is(4).To sum up,the main cause of XX is due to(5).It is high time that something were done upon it.For one thing,(6).On the other hand,(7).All these measures will