高考英语正反观点对比.ppt
高考应试作文写作训练5.正反观点对比作为一个中学生作为一个中学生,你肯定经历过多次考试你肯定经历过多次考试,体验过成功体验过成功,也遭遇过失败也遭遇过失败.请你根据提示内容请你根据提示内容,简要概述中学生普遍存在的对考试失败的两种简要概述中学生普遍存在的对考试失败的两种态度态度,并结合自身实际并结合自身实际,说明你的观点说明你的观点.态度一态度一:当考试结果不尽人意时当考试结果不尽人意时,情绪低落情绪低落,丧失丧失信心信心,不再继续努力不再继续努力.态度二态度二:当考试失败时当考试失败时,分析找出失败的原因分析找出失败的原因,鼓励鼓励自己自己,增强自信增强自信,避免再犯同样的错。避免再犯同样的错。你的观点你的观点:失败乃成功之母失败乃成功之母,要求要求:1.词数词数:100词左右词左右.2.可根据内容要求适当增加细节可根据内容要求适当增加细节,以使行文以使行文连贯连贯.书面表达书面表达审题审题体裁体裁:时态时态:人称人称:要点要点:说明说明现在时现在时第一人称第一人称(1)我们中学生我们中学生经历过多次考试经历过多次考试,体验过体验过成功成功,也遭遇过失败也遭遇过失败.(2)态度一态度一:当考试结果不尽人意时当考试结果不尽人意时,情情绪低落绪低落,丧失信心丧失信心,不再继续努力不再继续努力.(3)态度二态度二:当考试失败时当考试失败时,分析找出失败分析找出失败的原因的原因,鼓励自己鼓励自己,增强自信增强自信,避免再犯避免再犯同样的错。同样的错。(4)我的我的观点观点:失败乃成功之母失败乃成功之母,构思构思-文章结构文章结构正反正反观点观点对比对比类的类的文章文章提出问题提出问题不同观点对比不同观点对比说明自己观点说明自己观点构思构思-文章结构文章结构(1)我们中学生经历过多次考试我们中学生经历过多次考试,体验过成功体验过成功,也遭遇过失败也遭遇过失败.(2)对考试失败大致有两种态对考试失败大致有两种态度度.(2)态度一态度一:当考试结果不尽当考试结果不尽人意时人意时,情绪低落情绪低落,丧失信心丧失信心,不再继续努力不再继续努力.(3)态度二态度二:当考试失败时当考试失败时,分分析找出失败的原因析找出失败的原因,鼓励自鼓励自己己,增强自信增强自信,避免再犯同样避免再犯同样的错。的错。(4)我的观点我的观点:失败乃成功之母失败乃成功之母,提出问题提出问题不同观不同观点对比点对比说明自说明自己观点己观点构思构思-句型短语句型短语(1)我们中学生经历过多次考试我们中学生经历过多次考试,体验过成功体验过成功,也遭遇过失败也遭遇过失败.对考试失败大致有两种态度对考试失败大致有两种态度.have/takemanytestsorexamsdowellintheexamsachievesuccesssufferfromfailure,fail(in)theexams(take)differentattitudestowards构思构思-句型短语句型短语(2)态度一态度一:当考试结果不尽人意时当考试结果不尽人意时,情绪低落情绪低落,丧失信心丧失信心,不再继续努力不再继续努力.(3)态度二态度二:当考试失败时当考试失败时,分析找出失败的原因分析找出失败的原因,鼓励自己鼓励自己,增强自信增强自信,避免再犯同样的错。避免再犯同样的错。beinlowspiritshavepassiveattitudesloseheart/confidencenolongerstudyhard/tryonesbestfindout/analyzethecauses,have/takeactiveattitudesencourage,buildupself-confidence,avoidHowever,ontheotherhand,onthecontrary,unlikedifferentfrom,(4)你的观点你的观点:失败乃成功之母失败乃成功之母,构思构思-句型短语句型短语inmyview/opinion,Iagreewith,Asforme,inbrief,inaword,insummaryFailureisthemotherofsuccess.We middle school students have had manytests or exams.We have both achieved successand suffered from failure.Different studentstake different attitudes to failure.Some fall in low spirits when they dont do well in the exams.They usually lose heart and no longer study as hard as before.However,most students take an active attitude towards failure.They encourage themselves to be self-confident.They find out and analyze the causes so that they will no longer make similar mistakes.A Version:As for me,I agree with those with active attitudes.As we all know,failure is the mother of success.Even great men may have failed many times before they succeeded.So we must deal with failure correctly.Read and correct 2:vAsstudents,wehaveexperiencedmanyexams,endingupwitheithersuccessorfailure.Thereexisttwoattitudestowardsexamsamongmiddleorseniorstudents.vSomestudentsmayloseheartwhentheresultturnsouttobeunsatisfied.Theywillfeeldownandevenwontkeepontryinganymore.Ontheoppositeside,otherswillanalyzetheircausesforfailure.Byencouragingthemselves,theywillgainself-confidenceandavoidmakingthesamemistake.vInmyopinion,failureisthemotherofsuccess.Failurecanteachusalotintheprocessofreachingourgoals.Onlybytastingfailurecanweenjoythefruitofsuccess.Read and correct:1vSincewestaredtostudyinschool,wehavehadmanyexams.Sometimeswesucceedandsometimeswefailedintheexams.Mostschoolstudentshavetwodifferentattitudewhentheyfailed.vSomestudentswillbecomesaddownwhentheyfailed.Theyalwayslosttheirconfidenceandmaynotgoonworkhard.Andsomestudentshavetheoppositeattitude.Theywilltrytofindoutthereasonwhytheyfailedintheexam.Insteadoflosingheart,vtheywillencouragethemselvesandbecomemoreconference.Thentheywilltrytoavoidtomakethesamemistakes.vAsastudent,Ialsooncefailedinexams.Ihavealsonearlygivenupandlostmyconfidence.ButIrealizedthatcouldnthelpyou.SoIthinkwemustgoonworkhardandencourageourselves.Wecanregardthefailureasagoodexperience.表示不同观点的套语v总起总起:Differentpeopleholddifferentopinions.Opinionsaredivided.Peoplehavetaken/adopteddifferentattitudestowardsPeoplehavedifferentopinionsonthisproblem.Peopletakedifferentviewsonthisquestion.v表达不同观点表达不同观点:ofthemholdtheopinionthat.ofthemareinfavoroftheideathatPeoplewhoarefor/againsttheideathinkSomepeoplebelievethat.Othersarguethatv不同观点之间的衔接不同观点之间的衔接:vHowever,ofthemholdadifferentview./ofthemholdtheoppositeopinion.vPeoplewhoareagainstitdontthinkso.vHowever,eachcoinhastwosides.vDifferentfromthose.,peoplethink.vOntheotherhand,peopleobjectthat.v并列关系：并列关系：and,aswellas,also递进关系：递进关系：besides,inaddition,moreover,whatsmorev比较、对比：比较、对比：like,unlike,onthecontrary,ontheotherhand
