高考英语写作专项训练三十.ppt

so besides while unless althoughwhat is worse what is more as a result however as well as instead as if all of a sudden not until so that as soon as not only but also neither norwhether or not after all first of allabove all first then next finally on the other hand as long as the moment suddenly immediately because if soAt first he didnt hear anything at all.But then a sudden knock on the door woke him up.Following that came a mans voice,saying,“Come out,or I will break in.”Several minutes later,he heard someone leave.Finally he got up,opened the door and looked around.At firstEarly in the morningThis morningOn day The other daySoonAfter a whileBefore longSeveral minutes later,ThenAfter some time,FinallyIn the endAt lastAndButhoweverImmediatelyAt oncebe doing-when-be about to do-when-suddenlysee/notice sb doing-hear sb doing-1 今天早晨，我正要去送信，突然乌云密布，不一会，下起了大雨。2 我们正在上英语课，突然有人敲门。3 我正要出门，突然电话铃响了。Homework:1.写事背一背写事背一背2.写事写一写写事写一写 38-9How to express ones thanks:The mother was so thankful that she did not say anything.He gave/expressed his hearty thanks to us and left.He thanked her.New York is built on a group of islands on theeast coast of the USA at a point where several rivers flow into the ocean.-lies in-is in-China lies in the east of Asia with an area of 9,600,000 squarekilometers.Shanghai _ a group of islands _ of China _ _ several rivers flow intothe ocean.is built onon the east coastat a pointwhere My motherland-China is a great country _ a long history and rich culture.It _ in the east of Asia,_ 9,600,000 square kilometers and _ 1.3 billion.Beijing isher capital.There are many beautiful mountains and rivers,_ rich nature resources in China.The Changjiang River,as we all know,is among the longest rivers in the world,and Great Wall is one of the seven wonders on theearth.The Chinese people are a hard-working and brave people.Their hardwork and wisdom have brought great changes inChina in the past 20 years.withlieswith an area of(with)a population ofas well asOur School Campus Our school has a nice campus.Facing the school gate,there is a red office building with a large glassentrance.To the east of it is an old classroom building,and to the west is a new one,modern and well-equipped.Inside this new building,there are lecture halls,language labs and bright classrooms.Behind these buildings is a large sports ground,which consists of a running track,a football field,two volleyball courts and four basketball courts.Around the sports ground,there are a lot of trees.Here are some words and phrases that can help you make a contrast:but,however,while,on the contrary,in contrast,on the other hand Over the past twenty years or so,great changes have taken place in our life.Take my family for example.My parents contacted others mainly by sending them lettersin the past,but now we call long distance at home.And oncemy parents listened to the radio for news and other information,but now we watch the news and other programs on TV.Another change is in the housing conditions.When they got married about twenty years ago,my parents lived in a smallroom crowded with furniture,but now we have moved intoa big new three-room apartment.In short,changes in our lifein the past twenty years have brought us comfort and convenience.(2004)表达对比和变化的经典句型：表达对比和变化的经典句型：1 过去父母们主要通过写信彼此联系。2 但是现在我们可以在家打长途电话。3 过去我们甚至在周末还要上课，写没完没了的作业。4 现在我不再熬夜，大约10点睡觉。5 在过去的20多年里，我们的生活发生了很大的变化。6 我很高兴告诉你自从减负我们 生活的变化。7 总之，自从学校减负以来，有了很大的变化。8 总之，过去20多年的变化使我们的生活更舒服方便。9 到2008，北京将成为一个美丽、现代、国际化的大都市。In the past my parents contacted others mainly by sending letters.But now we call long distance at home.We used to have to attend classes even at weekends anddo endless homework as well.I no longer stay up late,on the contrary,I go to bed at 10 pm.In the past 20 years,great changes have taken place in our life.Im very pleased to tell you the changes in my life since our homework has been reduced.(AB)Change in my villageGreat changes have taken place in my village.Ten years ago,the small and low houses of my village lay on the north ofa lake.They produced much waste.As a result,the lake wasseriously polluted.To the west of the village was a sandy field,which was the source of much dust whenever wind was blowing.Worse still,a brickyard on the southwest sideof the lake used up a great deal of good soil.Now the poor houses have been replaced by green trees andthe brickyard by tall buildings.The sandy field that the villagers used to plough has been covered with fruit trees.On the lake,now clean and clear,the villagers often spend their spare time boating and fishing.In a word,my village has become a modern and green one.老教学楼原操场新操场老教学楼图书馆新教学楼（2001）假设你是李华在一所中学读书。最近收到美国朋友）假设你是李华在一所中学读书。最近收到美国朋友Smith先生的来信，希望了解学校变化情况，给他写回信介绍变化。先生的来信，希望了解学校变化情况，给他写回信介绍变化。-Dear Mr Smith,I was so pleased to hear from you and I am writing to tellyou something about my school.You are right.Quite a fewchanges have taken place.On one side of the road there is a new classroom building.On the other side,where the playground used to be now stands another new building-our library.In it there are allkinds of books,newspapers and magazines.The playgroundis now in front of the school.We have also planted a lot of trees in and around the school.I hope you come and see for yourself some day.Best wishesYours,Li Hua1.60%of the students are against/for the idea of-2.40%think/believe-3.Two thirds of the students agree/disagree to this idea.Two thirds of the students agree/disagree that-4.The other 20%have never thought about it or dont care a bit.5.In my opinion,2001年高考书面表达 假设你是李华，你的澳大利亚朋友Dick听说中国的中小学正在减轻学生的学习负担，来信询问有关情况。请你根据下表提供的信息，写一封回信，谈一谈减负给你的学习和生活带来的变化。注意：1、词数100左右 2、开头已为你写好 生词：减轻学习负担reduce learning load*Dear Dick,How nice to hear from you again._周末活动（减负前）周末活动（减负后）白天：上课、做作业白天：参观博物馆、学习电脑、绘画等晚上：做作业晚上：看新闻、读书、看报就寝时间：11：30就寝时间：10：00满分作文 Im very pleased to tell you the changes in my life_._,learning during the day was very simple.Having classes and doing homework was _ we should do.In the evening,we _ had a lot of homework to do.We could _ go to bed _ 11:30._,_ reducing the learning load,my life has become _ interesting.I _ visit museums and computer rooms _ draw pictures _.In the evening,I _ have time to watch TV and read newspapers.I _ stay up late,_,I go to bed at about 10 p.m._,I am quite satisfied with my life now.since our homework has been reducedBefore thatthe only thingalsonotuntilNevertheless 然而 sincemuch moreoftenandin my spare timealsono longeron the contrary 相反In shortXinghua High SchoolBeijing,102600 ChinaMay 6,2004President George HopkingsPace Middle SchoolNew York,NY 10038USA Yours sincerely Li XiutingPresident of Xinghua High SchoolDear Mr.Hopkings,1.你近来如何？2.收到你的来信很高兴。3.我很高兴知道-4.这是关于-的信息。5.顺便提一下，6.请你-好吗？7.我真盼望着-8.给你最好的祝愿。1.How are you?How have you been?How is everything going on with you?2.How nice to hear from you.3.Im glad to know-4.Here is the information about the coming sports meet.I am writing to tell/ask you-You want to know what is going on in schools in China?Now,I will tell you about it.5.By the way,6.Would you please-?7.Im really looking forward to-8.Best wishes.Best regards.All the best to you.Homework：求职信 1996你是李华，从报纸上看到北京某公司招聘一名英文秘书的启示。你根据启示写应聘信，寄北京2703信箱说明你的简历，并请经理考虑予以答复。李华，1986年2月出生在大连，学历：1992-1998光明小学；1998-2004大连市第六中学，主要课程：语文、数学、英语、物理、化学、电脑。特长：英语、电脑（去年在全校电脑竞赛中获第一名）。业余爱好：游泳、滑冰、集邮、流行音乐。本人通信处：北京0325信箱写信时间：2004年5月8日apply for the position of English language secretary Li HuaMr.Manager BeijingP.O.Box2703 May 8,2004Beijing Dear Manager,I am writing to apply for the position of English language secretary in your company,as listed in the newspaper.I hope very much to be accepted by your company.Ill work hard to prove my abilities.I am looking forward to an early reply,and thank you very much for your attention.Faithfully yours,Li HuaMy name is Li Hua.I was born in Dalian,Liaoning Province in February 1986.I started school in 1992when I was seven.I studied in Guangming Primary School from 1992 to 1998.After that I went to No.6 Middle School of Dalian and graduated this summer.The main subjects I studied at school included Chinese,maths,English,physics,chemistry and computer.I likeEnglish and computer best and I am very good at them.Last year I won first prize in the school computer competition.In my spare time I enjoy listening to popularmusic and collecting stamps.My favorite sports are swimming in summer and skating in winter.Feb.20,2004Dear Alice,How nice to hear from you.You want to know what is going on in schools in china?Now I will tell you about it.In the past,exam-oriented education forced us to listen to our teachers while taking notes in class.We did all kinds of exercises without end,though it was 5oclock in the afternoon.After supper,we had to continue our exercisesfar into the night.Now,quality-oriented education has made our life colourful.We are active in class.In order to train the ability,we often do research on/into study.Sometimes one of us teaches ourselves.We have various outside activities,such as singing,dancing,English corner and taking computer lessons.Basketball and football are our favourite sports.In the evening we can watch news on TV,do experiments by ourselves and discussions about our subjects.Please make sure that our school life is getting more and morecolourful and interesting.Best wishes.yours,Li HuaNoticeThe StudentsUnion May 4,2004Announcement Ladies and gentlemen,Dear friends,Boys and girls,May I have you attention please?Attention,please!Thats all.Thank you.Ladies and Gentleman,Attention please!Im very glad to tell you that an English lecture will be heldat 2:00 pm on May 4.It will be held in the reading-room.It will be given by Professor Donald White from Illinois University.He is on a visit to our school.Professor Whitewill give us a talk on the difference between American English and British English pronunciations.I think you willbe interested in it.After the lecture,well have a discussion on the subject.Im sure well learn a lot from it.Please attendthe lecture on time.Dont forget to take notes while listening.Thats all.Thank you.Ladies and Gentleman,Attention please!Thats all.Thank you.Im very glad toI thinkIm surePlease attendthe lecture on time.Dont forget to take notes while listening.NoticeIt has been decided that an English writing compositionwill be held in our school.All the students are welcometo take part in the competition.The compositions mustbe about the lives of us students.First prize will be givento the five best compositions,second prize to ten compositionsand third prize to twelve compositions.The writing composition will be judged by our English teachers and five winners will be chosen to take part in the English writing competition of the city,which is to be held in August.The Students Union May 4,2004NMET 1994你校学生会将为来访的美国朋友举办一个晚会，要在学校广播中宣布此事，并欢迎大家参加。为使美国朋友能听懂，请你用英文写一篇广播通知。宗旨：欢迎来访的美国朋友组织者：学生会时间：8月15日（星期六）晚 7：30地点：主楼楼顶花园活动内容：音乐、跳舞、唱歌、交换小礼物（请包装好、签名 并在包装外面写上几个祝愿词）roof garden exchange gifts sign your name wrap it up The Student UnionMay I have your attention,please?I have an announcement to make.The Student Union is going to hold a party on Saturday evening,August 15,to welcome our friends fromthe United States.The party will be held in the roof gardenof the Main Building.It will begin at 7:30 p.m.There be music,dancing,singing,games and exchange of gifts.Will everybody please bring along a small gift for this purpose?Remember to wrap it up,sign your name and write a fewwords of good wishes.Dont forget:7:30,Saturday evening,roof garden,main building.Theres sure to be a lot of fun.Everybody is welcome.