英语Unit5Revealingnature表达作文巧升格学案.docx

Unit 5 Revealing natureGuided Writing表达。作文巧升格biaodanucWezqiacshezc;匚文体指导一观察日忐本单元写作项目是描写植物生长过程的观察日志。基本框架1 .开头(beginning)写作目的；2 .主体(body)植物成长的过程；3 .结尾(ending)你的感受。常用词块1. growth condition of the plant 植物生长条件2. a hole large enough 一个足够大的洞3. put the earth back in the hole 把土回填到洞里4. up to 20 feet in length 长度达 20 英尺5. select proper seeds挑选合适的种子6. a light application of fertilizer 使用微量的肥料常用语句精彩开头1. Do you heive an experience of planting a kind of plant?你有过种植植物的经 历吗？2. Let me share you with the process about my experience of growing watermelon? 让我和你分享我种植西瓜的经历。3. I once lived in the countryside and planted some garlic in the garden. 我曾经在乡村住过，在菜园里种过大蒜。丰满主体1. Check to see if there are any local requirements about digging.检查当地是否有关F挖掘的要求。2. Take a suitable shovel and dig a hole that is 4 - 5 times the width of the root ball, more than enough so it will fit.用一把合适的铲子挖一个比球宽45倍的洞，足够大，这样就合适了。3. Use the garden cultivator to loosen the dirt al 1 around the hole to make it easier for the roots to spread.用园艺耕耘机把洞周围的泥土松掉，使根部更容易散开。余味结尾1. Seeing the flowers, I was too excited to express my feelings.看到这些花，我太兴奋了不能表达我的感受。2. I can't wait to show my grandparents the fruit trees I have planted.我迫不及待地给祖父母看我种的果树。3. No pains, no gains.不劳无获。升格示例假定你是正在英国留学的李华，在生物课上，老师要求同学们课后观察一种植物的生长 过程，并用日志的形式将该过程记录下来。请你写一篇日志介绍草莓的生长过程，内容包括:1 .幼苗(seedling)植入土壤;2 .两周后：幼苗叶子变大，呈伞状；3 . 一个月后：长出花苞(bud)：4 .两个月后：雌蕊(pistil)变成草莓，约5天后，草莓成熟(mature) .注意：1.词数80左右；5 .可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。学生习作Strawberries are many people* s favourite fruit. Some people want to plant strawberries. The growth process of them is pretty long.The leaves of the seedlings grow into larger umbrella-shaped leaves after they have been planted in the soil for two weeks. One month later, small buds begin to appear. It takes about two months for the pistils to grow into real strawberries. Five days later, we can enjoy fresh mature strawberries.点评：1 .草藏生长过程记述详尽；2 .结尾处没有涉及感受；3 .句与句之间的衔接还不太紧凑。升格作文Strawberries are many people* s favourite fruit and some people even want to plant strawberries by themselves. Actually» the growth process of them is pretty long. Here is my observation about them.The leaves of the seedlings gradually grow into larger umbrella-shaped ones after they have been planted in the soi1 for two weeks. One month later, smal1 buds begin to appear. The following process is a little longer, taking about two months for the pistils to grow into real strawberries. And five days later, we can have fresh mature strawberries.Isn， t it interesting to watch the growth process?学以致用假如你是李华，请你写篇短文，描述你种植绿豆(mung)的经历。1 .购买种子，种在菜园里；2 .几天后，绿豆长出地面；3 .又过了几天，长出绿叶；4 .给绿豆浇水，长得很好；5 .绿豆不断生长，三个月后终于开花结籽。注意：1.词数：80左右;6 .可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：长出地面come up；长叶子come into 1 eaf；洒水sprinkle water；开花 结籽 go to seed【参考范文】Last summer I planted some mung in my garden.First I bought some seeds from a seedman. Then 1 sowed them in the garden. A few days later, I went to the garden and found the mung were beginning to come up. Another few days passed and the mung were coming into leaf. Now and then I sprinkled water on them so that they grew we 11.The mung I planted kept growing, and finally three months later they began to go to seed.I was very happy to see the fruits of my work.