如何写好英语作文 示范课.pptx

如何写好英语作文如何写好英语作文 示范课示范课It is known to us all that some students cheat in It is known to us all that some students cheat in It is known to us all that some students cheat in It is known to us all that some students cheat in examinations at school.examinations at school.examinations at school.examinations at school.As students,we often take examinations at school,As students,we often take examinations at school,As students,we often take examinations at school,As students,we often take examinations at school,but sometimes we have too many examinations which are but sometimes we have too many examinations which are but sometimes we have too many examinations which are but sometimes we have too many examinations which are too difficult for us.On the other hand,some of us are too difficult for us.On the other hand,some of us are too difficult for us.On the other hand,some of us are too difficult for us.On the other hand,some of us are lazy and donlazy and donlazy and donlazy and dont work hard at their lessons.So when t work hard at their lessons.So when t work hard at their lessons.So when t work hard at their lessons.So when taking examinations,they sometimes cheat in order to taking examinations,they sometimes cheat in order to taking examinations,they sometimes cheat in order to taking examinations,they sometimes cheat in order to get better results to please their parents and teachersget better results to please their parents and teachersget better results to please their parents and teachersget better results to please their parents and teachersIn my opinion,it is wrong to cheat in examinations In my opinion,it is wrong to cheat in examinations In my opinion,it is wrong to cheat in examinations In my opinion,it is wrong to cheat in examinations because it breaks the rules of schools.We students because it breaks the rules of schools.We students because it breaks the rules of schools.We students because it breaks the rules of schools.We students should be honest and try to get good results by should be honest and try to get good results by should be honest and try to get good results by should be honest and try to get good results by studying hard instead of cheating in exams.What s studying hard instead of cheating in exams.What s studying hard instead of cheating in exams.What s studying hard instead of cheating in exams.What s more,we should improve our study methods and get well more,we should improve our study methods and get well more,we should improve our study methods and get well more,we should improve our study methods and get well prepared for examinationsprepared for examinationsprepared for examinationsprepared for examinations范文范文Myopiniononcheatinginexamination第1页/共22页评评评评分分分分原原原原则则则则 Clear idea 5 Correct grammar5 Complete passage5 Beautiful language 5 Beautiful handwriting 5考场作文考场作文TIPS第2页/共22页Problems in your compositions王洁王洁1.词汇量与短语积累过少，很多句子不会表达。词汇量与短语积累过少，很多句子不会表达。2.考试时间分配不合理，在写作文时时间过少。考试时间分配不合理，在写作文时时间过少。3.语法运用不灵活，作文多为简单的句子。语法运用不灵活，作文多为简单的句子。杨柳杨柳1.逻辑性不强。逻辑性不强。2.想表达的句子表达不出来。想表达的句子表达不出来。3.遇到的陌生单词不会遇到的陌生单词不会王鸽王鸽1.想用一些不同句式表达相同的意思却无法想出来。想用一些不同句式表达相同的意思却无法想出来。2.某些句子有时不知如何表达。某些句子有时不知如何表达。第3页/共22页Problems in your compositionsProblems in your compositions马强马强1、做前面题耗时太多，给作文留的时间不足、做前面题耗时太多，给作文留的时间不足,没没时间打草稿，只能想一句写一句。时间打草稿，只能想一句写一句。2、不会使用从句，不会将散句写为整句、不会使用从句，不会将散句写为整句3、有的单词写不出来、有的单词写不出来4、字不够整齐、字不够整齐张瑶张瑶1、每当写作文时对于句式变化总结不清、每当写作文时对于句式变化总结不清2、运用从句时总是表达错误、运用从句时总是表达错误3、对一些同义词不是很了解、对一些同义词不是很了解4、有时作文写着写着就跑题了、有时作文写着写着就跑题了第4页/共22页Problems in your compositionsProblems in your compositions苏一晴苏一晴1、平常积累的词汇量不少，写作文的时候用不了好词语、平常积累的词汇量不少，写作文的时候用不了好词语2、许多句型没记住，作文没亮点、许多句型没记住，作文没亮点高根宝高根宝我觉得自己写的是汉语式英语，不会使用英语句型，如：我觉得自己写的是汉语式英语，不会使用英语句型，如：倒装，并且没有掌握新颖的英语单词，所用单词太普遍。倒装，并且没有掌握新颖的英语单词，所用单词太普遍。积累的词汇量过少。积累的词汇量过少。张成龙张成龙1、不会造句、不会造句2、某些单词不会、某些单词不会3、句型不会、句型不会4、语法不会、语法不会第5页/共22页五个基本句型五个基本句型1）主语）主语+谓语动词谓语动词2）主语）主语+谓语动词谓语动词 +表语表语3）主语）主语+谓语动词谓语动词 +宾语宾语4）主语）主语+谓语动词谓语动词 +宾语宾语 +宾补宾补 5）主语）主语+谓语动词谓语动词 +间宾间宾 +直宾直宾请观察请观察:（1）_+_是英语是英语句子必不可少的两要素；句子必不可少的两要素；（2）_在前在前,_在后在后 （3）_有人称，数，时态有人称，数，时态和语态的变化。和语态的变化。主语主语谓语谓语主语主语谓谓 语语谓谓 语语第6页/共22页1.Sentence lengthening exerciseIt is coldIt is cold todayIt is very cold todayIt is rather/so cold a dayWhat a cold day it is!It is colder than it was yesterday 第7页/共22页2.Sentence lengthening exerciseCome to eat!Come to eat with me!Come to eat with me by the sea!If you are free,come to eat with me by the sea!Do you agree to come to eat with me by the sea?if you are free,第8页/共22页3.Sentence lengthening exercisesHes swimming.Hes swimming in the river.Hes swimming in the river with Tim.Hes swimming in the river with Tim at the moment.第9页/共22页4.Sentence lengthening exercisesI am a student.I,Maqiang,am a student.I,Maqiang,am a student,who is in Class One Grade three.I,Maqiang,am a student,who is in Class One Grade three,studying in Huashan Senior Middle School.第10页/共22页Organization(组句成篇组句成篇)Ioftenvisitmuseumsandcomputerroomsanddrawpicturesinmysparetime.Sincereducingthelearningload,mylifehasbecomemuchmoreinteresting.In the evening,I alsohavetimetowatchTVandreadnewspapers.In short,Iamquitesatisfiedwithmylifenow.Inolonger stayuplate;on the contrary,Igotobedatabout10pm.Correctorder:第11页/共22页(1)(1)*The girl is my classmate.*The girl won the first prize.Join up sentence exercises The girl who won the first prize is my classmate.Practice 1第12页/共22页（2 2）*I stayed at home this weekend.*I didnt go shopping with my friends.Join up sentence exercises I stayed at home instead of going shopping with my friends this weekend.第13页/共22页（3 3）*Today is my birthday.Today is my birthday.*My friends gave me a lot of presents.*My friends gave me a lot of presents.*I received the University admission toady *I received the University admission toady *How happy I am today!*How happy I am today!Join up sentence exercises Today is my birthday and my friends gave me a lot of presents.Whats more,I received the University admission toady.How happy I am!第14页/共22页写作基础训练1.1.谈到这个话题的时候，不同的人有不同的观点。谈到这个话题的时候，不同的人有不同的观点。2.2.该是我们采取措施解决这个问题的时候了。该是我们采取措施解决这个问题的时候了。Whenitcomestothetopic,differentpeoplehavedifferentopinions.It is high time that we took(should take)measures to solve the problem.第15页/共22页写作基础训练写作基础训练1.1.正如这句俗话所说，正如这句俗话所说，“健康比财富重要健康比财富重要”。2.2.众所周知，吸烟影响我们的健康。众所周知，吸烟影响我们的健康。3.3.我坚信如果烟民有顽强的决心，他们绝对能够戒烟。我坚信如果烟民有顽强的决心，他们绝对能够戒烟。Asthesayinggoes,“Healthismoreimportantthanwealth.”Itsknowntoallthatsmokinghasabadeffectonourhealth.Imconvincedthatifsmokershavestrongdetermination,theycanabsolutelygiveupsmoking.第16页/共22页写作基础（引出个人观引出个人观点点）1.As for me/As to me/As far as I am concerned/Personally,2.To be honest(frank)/To tell the truth/3.Generally(frankly,strictly,honestly)speaking,4.To my surprise（delight,joy,amazement,disappointment）,第17页/共22页写作基础（添加信息添加信息）Besides,Also,In addition,Additionally,Furthermore,Moreover,Whats more,To make the matters worse,第18页/共22页写作基础 (对比观点对比观点)展开展开展开展开转折转折转折转折Firstlysecondly(besides)thirdly(finallFirstlysecondly(besides)thirdly(finally)y)For one thingfor anotherFor one thingfor anotherwhats morewhats more On one handon the other On one handon the other hand moreoverhand moreoverOn the contraryOn the contraryhowever,a coin has two however,a coin has two sidessides第19页/共22页A note asking for sick leaveA note asking for sick leaveDear Miss Liu,Im sorry to tell you that Im not feeling well today.I have a bad cold,and the doctor told me to stay in bed for two days,so I cant go to school today,I hope I will be better tomorrow and be back to school soon Thank you.Yours _1111homework第20页/共22页Thanks for attendingBye-bye第21页/共22页感谢您的观看。感谢您的观看。第22页/共22页