2023年[高中英语概要写作]高中英语议写作指导.docx

2023年高中英语概要写作高中英语议写作指导上海市共和中学杨家贵英语作文教学向来是英语教学中的难点,学生写作的确也存在着各种各样的问题,如果让学生从基础抓起,一条条地去克服,显然对于学习任务繁重,而有不得不时时紧张备考各门功课的学生来说,是耗不起如此巨大的精力与时间的.但是,只要我们英语教师不断地钻研作文的辅导方法,积累更多的切实可行的英语作文写作模式教与学生,这也不失为快速有效全面地解决问题,提高学生英语写作水平的好方法.分析了高中英语议论文的相关要点，提供两种类型的议论文写作模式,用于对学生的指导，使其能利用所提供的议论文模式轻松地完成写作任务一、英语议论文写作要点议论文通过议论或说理来表达作者见解和主张.作者对某一问题持有一种看法,为了使读者同意自己的看法,提出若干理由,企图说服他人.高中英语议论文的写作要注意以下要点:1.论点要鲜明、确切一篇议论文只能有一个中心论点论点一般在开头提出，然后加以论证2.论据要充分、可靠一般是以事实为论据，也可以利用成语，格言，名人名言作为论据3.论证要严密、得法归纳法（induction）和演绎法（deduction）是议论文常用的论证方法归纳法的例子为基础，从几个例子和现象中，归纳出某种道理和看法例如：报纸是一种媒体（medium），人们可以从中得到现代信息；电视是一种媒体，人们也可以从中获得信息；广播也是媒体，人们同样可以从中获得现代信息因此我们可以得出结论，其他媒体，如网络等，一定会给人们信息演绎法以一个或多个看法为基础，从一般论断，演绎到不同事例，再加以论述，最后再回到一般论断上来例如：所有的媒体都可以给人们提供信息，网络是媒体，因此人们可以从网络中获得信息在归纳中要注意使用的例子要充分，不能以点概面如：（课本高二上P81）：Iborrowedabookfromthelibrarylastweek.Itwasveryboringanddifficult.Ireadonlytenpages.Therefore,Ithinkthatalllibrarybooksareuseless.评注:Itdoesnothavealogicalargument.Thewriterdislikeonelibrarybook,butnotalllibrarybooksarethesame.Thewritershouldnotmakeageneralstatement(Alllibrarybooksareuseless)basedonhisreactionstoonesinglebook.二、议论文的写作步骤:1.引言(introduction)由于英语作文受时间，字数的限制因此，在引言段中作者就必须简单解释要讨论的问题，并明白地亮出自己的观点，如提倡什么，支援什么，反对什么2.主体段（mainbody）主体段是议论的过程，作者必须有足够的证据（adequateproofs）来论证自己的观点一般可提出一个或两个proofs,并对此用一两句话分别进行阐述3.结论（conclusion）结论段可以用一两句话来结束文章同时要注意与引言段呼应，但不能照搬前面的原话例：课本高二上P78第一封信Tutorialcenterishelpful.Ihavestudiedatatutorialcenterfortwoyears.MycommandofEnglishhasimprovedconsiderablysinceIstartedthiscourse.Atmycenter,thefeesarereasonable.Mytutorsarequalifiedteachers.Ihavebeenhelpedalotbythem.Theyaresincereandkind.OneofmyteacherswasBritish.Atfirst,Icouldnotsayanythingtoher.ButlaterIlearnedhowtocommunicateinEnglishwithawesterner.IthinkthatthetutorialcenterhasgivenmealotofconfidenceinusingEnglish.评注:第一段提出论点,体现家教中心是helpful(段划线部分),主体段分别从几个方面(划线部分)来阐述家教中心的确有帮助,结论段重申家教中心的作用(划线部分),且语句表达与第一段中的不重复.三、议论文的写作模式1.议论文的类型英语议论文根据命题特点，从形式上来看可分为如下类型:“一分为二”的观点如“轿车大量进入家庭后，对家庭、环境、经济可能产生的影响”“两者选一”的观点如，期中考试作文题，“乘火车还是乘飞机”“我认为”型如“你对课外阅读的看法”“怎样（howto）”型如“怎样克服学习中碰到的困难”图表作文通过阅读图表中的数字与项目得出一个结论或形成一种看法按照高二上学期的写作要求，学生主要应掌握两种类型的议论文的写作在第种类型中命题涉及某一事物或现象的正反两个方面：通过正反两个方面的对比，得出结论是利大于弊，还是弊大于利论证要围绕所要得出的结论来展开，若利大于弊，则有利的一面要多阐述一点反之亦然在第种类型中，命题要求在A或B两者之间作一比较或选择，两个对象往往各有优势，所以结论部分有两种情况：a.要么支持A，要么支持B;b.A、B优势均难的割舍，只好依情况而定在结论部分说清楚在什么条件选A,在什么条件选B下面重点介绍第、种类型议论文的写作模式.2.“一分为二”观点的议论文模式Introduction第1段:Nowadaysmoreandmorepeople/playsanimportantpartin.likeeverythingelse,has/havebothfavorableandunfavorableaspects/bothadvantagesanddisadvantages.Generally,thefavorableaspects/advantagescanbelistedasfollows.Mainbody第2段：Firstly,.Secondly,Inaddition/Whatsmore第3段:Everycoinhastwosides.Thenegativeaspects/disadvantagesarealsoapparent/obvious.Tobeginwith;Tomakemattersworse;WorseofallConclusion第4段:Throughaboveanalysis/Allthingsconsidered,wecanseethatthepositiveaspects/advantagesoutweighthenegativeones/disadvantages.Therefore例文1.看电视的利与弊AdvantagesanddisadvantagesofwatchingTVNowadaysmoreandmorepeopleliketowatchTV.SoTVplaysaveryimportantpartinourlife.ButwatchingTVhasbothadvantagesanddisadvantages.Generally,theadvantagescanbelistedasfollows.Firstly,youcanexpandyourknowledgebywatchingTV.Asweallknow,learningthingsbyTVismuchfasterthanbylisteningtotheradioorjustbyreadingbooks.Forithascolorfulpicturesaswellaswonderfulmusic.Secondly,youmayknowanybodyyouwanttoknowsuchasfamoussingers,superstars,scientistsandsoon.Whatsmore,youcangoeverywherebytravelingprograms.Letssuppose,ifyouliketravelingverymuch,butyouhavetoworkonweekendsorholidays,youmustbeverysad.AndnowopenyourTVanditlltakeyoutoanywhere.Everycoinhastwosides.Thedisadvantagesarealsoobvious.Forexample,watchingtoomuchTVcaneasilybecomeshort-sighted,especiallyforchildrenandstudents.Tomakemattersworse,someyoungstudentsarekeenonwatchingTVsothattheygiveuptheirstudiesgradually.Throughaboveanalysis,IthinkwatchingTVisawayofstudying,itisgoodforustowatchTV.ButwhenwewatchTV,weshouldmakeaplanotherwisewatchingTVwilldestroyourlife.例文2.谈谈出国留学的利与弊WheretoattendacollegeNowadaysmoreandmoreyoungpeoplearegoingtostudyabroad.Likeeverythingelse,studyingabroadhasbothfavorableandunfavorableaspects.Generally,thefavorableaspectscanbelistedasfollows.Firstly,theythinkbyattendingacollegeinaforeigncountrytheycanlearnnotonlyusefulknowledge,butalsothecultureandcustomsofothernations.Secondly,theycantakeadvantageofthisopportunitytogainagoodcommandoftheforeignlanguagetheyarelearningveryquickly.Moreover,theycanmeetdifferentpeopleandexperiencedifferentcultures,whichmayhelptobroadentheirviews.Everycoinhastwosides.Thenegativeaspectsarealsoapparent.Thecostsaremuchhigherthanthoseintheirnativecountry.Mostoverseasstudentshavetoworkforaliving,whichcantallowthemtopayalltheirattentiontostudy.Whatsmore,theymayfeelverylonely.Throughaboveanalysis,wecanseethatthepositiveaspectsoutweighthenegativeones.Therefore,Iaminfavorofgoingabroadtostudy.写作练习：谈谈校服（schooluniforms）.提示：近年来，越来越多的中小学要求穿校服对此引发了学生中由对这个问题的讨论，请写一片英语短文阐述你的观点Reference:someofthemainargumentsforandagainstschooluniforms.FORAGAINST1.Studentslookneatandtidy.1.Uniformsareexpensive.2.Thepublicknowswhichschoolyouarefrom.2.Childrengrowfast,neednewuniforms.3.Parentsallpaythesamemoney.3.Someuniformsareveryuncomfortable.4.Studentsdontworryaboutfashions.4.Studentsalllookthesame,cantbeindividuals.5.Teacherscanidentifystudentsonschooltrips.5.Getboredwithsameclotheseveryday.6.Gooddisciplineforstudents.说广告（aboutadvertisement）.提示：有人说广告在现代社会是很重要，有人认为广告的促销成分太多，你认为3.“两者选一”观点的议论文模式模式:A、B两者优劣势分析,要么选A,要么选B.Introduction第1段:Somepeopleholdtheopinionthat(A)issuperiorto(B)inmanyways.Others,however,arguethat(B)ismuchbetter.Personally,Iwouldprefer(A)becauseIthink(A)hasmoreadvantages.Mainbody第2段：TherearemanyreasonswhyIprefer(A).ThemainreasonisthatAnotherreasonisthat(赞同A的原因)Conclusion第4段:Butifallthesefactorsareconsidered,(A)ismuchbetterthan(B).fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove,wemayfinallydrawtheconclusionthat(总结观点)例文:Whichisbetter?Carsorbikes?Somepeopleholdtheopinionthatprivatecarsaresuperiortobicyclesinmanyways.Others,however,arguethatthebicycleismuchbetter.Personally,IwouldprefertheuseofcarsbecauseIthinkcarshavemoreadvantages.TherearemanyreasonswhyIprefercars.Themainreasonisthatcarsbringconvenienceandmobilitytotheowners.Whatsmore,acarisfarmorecomfortabletotravelin,especiallyinthechangeableweather.Anotherreasonisthat,whenmorepeoplebuycars,theautomobileindustrywilldevelopmorequickly.Thegrowthoftheautomobileindustrycanmotivatetheriseofotherrelatedindustriessuchasironandsteelproduction.Ofcourse,bicyclescantakeyoutoanywhereyoulikeintownanddoesnotneedalargeparkingplace.Besides,itisnotasexpensiveasacarandthereforeeveryfamilycanaffordtobuy.Butifallthesefactorsareconsidered,carsaremuchbetterthanbicycles.Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove,wemayfinallydrawtheconclusionthatpeoplecanlivebetterwiththeuseofcars.模式:A、B优势相当,依情况而定,有条件地选择A或B.Introduction第1段:Whichwouldyoupreferifyouarefacedwiththechoicebetween(A)and(B)?Beforeyoumakethedecision,youhadbettermakeaclosecomparison.Mainbody第2段：Itistruethat(选择A的优势之一).Itisalsotruethat(选择A的优势之二).But(选择A的劣势).第3段:Though.(选择B的劣势),(选择B的优势之一).Furthermore,(选择B的优势之二).Conclusion第4段:Therefore,ifyou,youshouldchoose(A),butifyou,youshouldchoose(B).(总结观点,提出建议)例文:Listeningtotheradioorreadingthenewspapers?Whichwouldyoupreferifyouarefacedwiththechoicebetweenlisteningtotheradioandreadingthenewspapers?Beforeyoumakethedecision,youhadbettermakeaclosecomparison.Itistruethatlisteningtotheradioisquickandconvenient.Itisalsotruethatwecanlistentotheradiowhilearedoingsomethingelse.Sowecansavealotoftime.Butradioprogramshavetheirowntimeschedule.Youcannotgettheinformationyouneedeverytimeyouturnonyourradio.Thoughnewspapersarenotasquickasradio,readingfromthenewspapercancertainlybringusnewsmoreclearlyandmoreexactly.Furthermore,whilereading,wehavetimetothinkaboutwhatwearereading,tojudgeit,toanalyzeit,andthenwewillbemoreawareofitscauseandeffect.Wearelivinginaninformationage.Wehavetomakefulluseoftheinformationwecangetifwearetoachieveourgoals.Therefore,ifwewanttogetthelatestnews,wecanlistentotheradio,butifwewanttogettheexactwords,wedbetterreadthenewspaper.写作练习:健康与财富(HealthandWealth)提示:健康与财富哪个更重要一直是一个热门话题(hottopic),请简述你的观点.哪里住更好(Wheretolive?)提示:有的人喜欢往城里挤,有的人喜欢往乡下搬.各有所好,孰是孰非,你以为如何?参考文献:1.OxfordEnglishforSeniorHighSchoolStudents(Shanghaiedition),OxfordUniversityPress,1996.2.王长喜十二句作文法,王长喜,北京:中国社会出版社,2023.73.英语高分指导.写作.高中卷,郭凤高,第二版,上海:上海交通大学出版社,20234.高考英语作文直通车,曹越宇,上海:上海社会科学院出版社,2023附录(Appendix):一、写作常用逻辑衔接词根据衔接词本身在文章中所起的作用,主要分为以下四类,即“起”“承”“转”“合”.1.表示“起”的常用词语.用于开篇引出扩展句.atfirstatpresentcurrentlyfirst(ly)inthebeginningtobeginwithfirstofallinthefirstplacelatelytostartwithnow2.有关“承”的常用词语.用来承接上文,表递进.After/afterthat/afterwardsAfterafewdaysAfterawhileAlso/tooAtanyrateAtthesametimeBesidesFurthermoreInadditionInadditiontoInfactInotherwordsInparticularparticularlyInthesamewayIncidentallyIndeedMeanwhileMoreoverNodoubtObviouslyOfcourse3.有关“转”的常用词语.用来表示不同或相反的意思.AfteralleventhoughAllthetimeneverthelessAnywaynohelessAtthesametimestillConverselyinfactIn/bycontrastasamatteroffactDespiteespeciallyFortunatelyhoweverInspiteofluckilyThough/althoughnodoubtOnthecontraryotherwiseUnfortunatelyunlikeWhereasyet4.有关“合”的常用词语.用于小结上文或结束本段落的内容.AboveallinsumAccordinglyinsummaryAsaconsequenceonthewholeAsaresultthereforeAshasbeennotedthusAsIhavesaidtospeakfranklyAtlasttosumupAtlengthtosummarizeBrieflysurelyBydoingsotoconcludeConsequentlynodoubtEventuallyundoubtedlyFinallydoubtlessHencetrulyInbriefsoInconclusionobviouslyInshortcertainlyAllinall高中英语议写作指导飞雪