第十五周图表作文的写作.ppt
从近几年高考题来看,图表作文体裁多为议论文、从近几年高考题来看,图表作文体裁多为议论文、应用文和说明文,要求考生通过数据分析,表达图表含应用文和说明文,要求考生通过数据分析,表达图表含义,得出合理的结论。义,得出合理的结论。Chart 1 shows the sleeping time that senior 3 students can have every day.62 percent of the students sleep for less than 7 hours a day,while 37 percent of them can sleep for 7 to 8 hours.However,only 1percent can sleep for more than 8 hours.From chart 2,we learn that too much homework causes half of the surveyed students to be short of sleep.35 percent of them have to stay up late studying hard for better scores.8 percent say their lack of sleep results from rules of their school for them to arrive at school early.7 percent say they have to study from family teachers into the night.In fact,we should sleep well at night to wake up feeling more refreshed.So we should make the best of daytime and study better in an effective way.1写作攻略写作攻略(1)图表描述要图表描述要突出重点突出重点,抓住图表中的,抓住图表中的极值极值。如:最大。如:最大或最小、最多或最少、最好或最差;或最小、最多或最少、最好或最差;(2)表格提供大量数据,应认真分析表格中各数据之间的表格提供大量数据,应认真分析表格中各数据之间的内在联系,发现各项目的变化规律。看出总的趋势,内在联系,发现各项目的变化规律。看出总的趋势,抓住特征,阐述规律现象或特征的原因抓住特征,阐述规律现象或特征的原因,总趋势的描,总趋势的描述必须准确;述必须准确;(3)图表往往提供大量数据,应仔细观察分析,从中选择图表往往提供大量数据,应仔细观察分析,从中选择有效信息,有效信息,对于图表上资料、数据的描述必须有重点对于图表上资料、数据的描述必须有重点地选择地选择,不能事无巨细,面面俱到,全部列出;,不能事无巨细,面面俱到,全部列出;(4)充分利用图表中提供的文字或说明,对于图表中没有充分利用图表中提供的文字或说明,对于图表中没有的信息,不能凭主观任意捏造;的信息,不能凭主观任意捏造;(5)说明、描述图表时应该注意时态,说明、描述图表时应该注意时态,属于过去发生的应属于过去发生的应该用一般过去时,属于经常发生的应该用一般现在时该用一般过去时,属于经常发生的应该用一般现在时。(6)不同观点应分开写,最好分段写不同观点应分开写,最好分段写,注意连词的褒贬搭,注意连词的褒贬搭配,语气恰到好处。首段提出论点,主体摆论据,配,语气恰到好处。首段提出论点,主体摆论据,尾段必须陈述自己的观点;尾段必须陈述自己的观点;一、句式积累一、句式积累1As is obvioustly shown in the chart above.正如上表所明显呈现的正如上表所明显呈现的250%of the people surveyed express the satisfaction with.,while only 40%of them are satisfied with.在调查中有在调查中有50%的人的人对对满意满意,而仅有,而仅有40%对对满满意意。4There might have been two main reasons for.对于对于也许有两个主要原因。也许有两个主要原因。5First,from 2009 up to now.首先,从首先,从2009年到现在年到现在6to account for/form/comprise/make up.percent占百分之占百分之7As far as.is concerned,much progress has been made.就就而言,已经取得了很大进步。而言,已经取得了很大进步。8.remains steady/unchange保持稳定保持稳定/几乎不变几乎不变.experiences a decrease/decline.有了减少有了减少9There is an increase of about.percent,compared with.与与相比较,大约增加了相比较,大约增加了10In a word,.should make efforts/measures to improve.总之,应总之,应努力努力/采取措施来提高采取措施来提高二、范文观摩二、范文观摩 近日,教育部语言文字应用管理司表示,中央电视台近日,教育部语言文字应用管理司表示,中央电视台台标完全使用英文是不规范的。按照统计,在全国的上星台标完全使用英文是不规范的。按照统计,在全国的上星卫视频道中,约卫视频道中,约40%的台标需要修改。某网站就中央电视的台标需要修改。某网站就中央电视台台标由英文缩写台台标由英文缩写CCTV改成汉字标识一问题对网民作了改成汉字标识一问题对网民作了一次调查,结果如下:一次调查,结果如下:请根据以上内容,写一篇请根据以上内容,写一篇120词左右的英语短文。词左右的英语短文。参考词汇:标识参考词汇:标识logo n网民网民netizen n全球化全球化globalize v.As is shown in the chart above,different people hold different opinions about the change of CCTVs logo.More than half of the interviewees suggest that CCTV should use a Chinese logo instead of an English one.There might have been two main reasons.First,the law is the law.Nobody has any excuse to break it;second,as the most famous and powerful TV station in China,it ought to set a good example to other TV stations that are using foreign languages as their logos.Compared with the supporters,there is about one third of the people saying there is nothing wrong to use an English logo.For one thing,CCTVs name has been used for decades and has become a household word.It will not be acceptable for the audience if it changes.For another,it is impossible to keep any language free from foreign influence in todays increasingly globalized world.The netizens who dont voice their opinions account for ten percent.返回你们班会的讨论主题是“上大学是高中生唯一的出路吗?”请你根据下面图表及汉语提示,写一篇短文,并阐述你的个人观点。提示:1.增长学识,提高素养,利于择业。2.无所谓,成功的路不只一条。3.不上大学,学费高,就业难。参考词汇:tuition n.学费qualities n.素养返回Is It The Only Way Out To Go To College?We had a discussion about whether it is the only way out for senior students to go to college.Views vary from person to person.From the chart,we can see the majority of us consider it very necessary to go to college.They think it can widen their knowledge and improve their qualities.Only in this way can they find better jobs after graduation.Only about ten percent of the students,think it no use going university,because the tuition is too high for their family to afford.Whats more,its rather hard for college graduates to seek satisfactory jobs.Thirty percent of the students,however,believe“All roads lead to Rome.”Therefore it doesnt make any difference whether they go to college or not.In my opinion,we can receive a better education at college so that we can serve our motherland.Only by this can we live a happy and meaningful life.三、跟踪演练三、跟踪演练 (2012杭州模拟杭州模拟)近日,某报对我市几所小学的学生展近日,某报对我市几所小学的学生展开了一项关于开了一项关于“什么样的人可以当班长什么样的人可以当班长”的调查。请根据下的调查。请根据下面的图表写一篇英语短文,介绍调查结果并谈谈你认为什面的图表写一篇英语短文,介绍调查结果并谈谈你认为什么样的人可以当班长。么样的人可以当班长。注意:注意:1开头已为你写好,不计入总词数。开头已为你写好,不计入总词数。2词数不少于词数不少于120左右。左右。The primary school students have different opinions on what kind of person can become a monitor.The primary school students have different opinions on what kind of person can become a monitor.We can see from the pie chart that about 4.41%of the students believe that those who have good relationship with others are likely to become a monitor.More students around 6%,however,think that the most important character of a monitor is having responsibility.Interestingly,there are about 11.04%considering that a monitor should have a good look while 11.75%of them suppose that teachers usually appoint their favourite students as monitors.The majority of students,about 67%believe that only when they do well in their studies can they have the chance to become a monitor.On the one hand,I think,being a monitor requires high grades in study so that you can set a good example to the fellow students.On the other hand,being responsible is of equal importance to studying well.You need to be a good assistant to your teacher to help deal with some daily affairs in class,and sometimes when the headteacher is away,you are to be in charge of the class.