初中英语写作公开课(九年级).ppt
ALessonofWritingExample:Imagine that you are Li Ming,write a composition about the changes taken place in your hometown.Key points:1.Topic（主题）（主题）:changes 2.who:Li Ming3.Where:Li Mings hometown4.tense(时态时态):past tense&present tense 一般过去时一般过去时&一般现在时一般现在时LivingconditionCellphonesjobstransportationchangeshousecars(头脑风暴头脑风暴)educationshopsfoodroadscomputersclothesbuildingworkingtools农耕工具农耕工具reasongovernmenteffortslive in a low houselive in a tall buildingplant crops with the help of farm animalsplant crops with the help of farm machinesstudy in an old schoolstudy in a modern schoolLivingconditionWorkingtoolseducationLivingconditionWorkingtoolseducationchanges(正文正文)a.Changes in living conditions.b.Changes in working tools.C.Changes in education.OutlineTitle题目题目:Changes in Li Mings HometownHeading开头开头：Great changes have taken place inBody正文正文:a.Changes in living conditionsb.Changes in working toolsC.Changes in educationConclusion结尾结尾:Thanks to the governments efforts(努力努力),Li Mings hometown is becoming better and better.提纲提纲Changes in Li Mings Hometown Great changes have taken place in Li Mings hometown since the reform and opening-up.In the past,people lived in low houses.The farmers planted crops only with the help of farm animals.Children studied in old schools.But now,most people live in tall buildings.The farmers can plant crops with the help of farm machines.And children study in modern schools.Thanks to the governments efforts,Li Mings hometown is becoming better and better.One possible version:heading开头开头body正文正文conclusion结尾结尾A Writing PracticeWrite your own composition about Great changes in my Hometown.以以GreatchangesinmyHometown为题，按为题，按下列提示要求写一篇下列提示要求写一篇80词左右短文，介绍自己词左右短文，介绍自己家乡的变化。家乡的变化。1、过去过去生活贫困，房屋破旧阴暗；道路窄交通不便。2、现在现在住房宽敞、明亮；现代学校，孩子可接受良好的教育；马路宽广，许多人有小车，交通方便；人们生活大为改善。3、未来未来会更加富饶和美丽4、我的感受是希望记住过去，展望未来是很重要的。可能会用到的词汇：poorandbackward贫穷落后的；traffic交通；convenient方便的；Thanksto多亏；thecountryandthegovernment国家和政府；takeplace发生；education教育；modern现代；dreamabout憧憬Requirement:1.topic:2.who:3.Where:4.What changes：5.Tense时态时态:greatchangesI/myselfmyhometownliferoadshousespasttense&presenttense Livingconditiontransportationchangeshouse(头脑风暴头脑风暴)educationroadsbuildingExample:Outline提纲提纲Title题目题目:Great changes in my HometownHeading开头：开头：Body正文正文:a.Changesinb.Changesinc.ChangesinConclusion结尾结尾:LifeHouseRoadshouselifeeducationtransportationnowUsedtobeOnce曾经曾经pastManyyearsagois/areInthepastAtpresentbeforenowadaystodayWas/wereMakesentences.eg:1.Inthepast,myhometownwaspoor.2.Myhometownusedtobepoor.Then:(时态时态)LivingconditionCellphonestransportationwideroadscleancars(正文正文)dirtybetternarrowpoorclothesConvinent方便的方便的improveeg:1.Manyyearsago,theroadsinmyhometownwasnarrowanddirty.2.Nowadays,theroadsinmyhometownarewideandclean.3.Today,manyfamilieshavecars.schoolhouse(正文正文)以以GreatchangesinmyHometown为题，按为题，按下列提示要求写一篇下列提示要求写一篇80词左右短文，介绍自己词左右短文，介绍自己家乡的变化。家乡的变化。1、过去生活贫困，房屋破旧阴暗；道路窄交通不便。2、现在住房宽敞、明亮；现代学校，孩子可接受良好的教育；马路宽广，许多人有小车，交通方便；人们生活大为改善。3、未来会更加富饶和美丽4、我的感受是希望记住过去，展望未来是很重要的。可能会用到的词汇：poorandbackward贫穷落后的；traffic交通；convenient方便的；thanksto多亏；thecountryandthegovernment国家和政府；takeplace发生；education教育；modern现代；dreamabout憧憬TheChangesinMyHometownIamLiMing,todayIhaveinterviewedmygrandmother.Shehaslivedinmyhometownformorethanseventyyears.Shehasseenthechangesinmyhometownherself.Inthepast,myhometownwasverysmallandpoor.Theroadswerenarrow.Thepeoplecouldntgetenoughfood.Butnow,theroadsweresowide,andtherearemoreandmorekindsoffoodtosatisfypeoplesneeds.Andnow,eachfamilyhastelephones,TVs,computersandsoon.Ithinkmyhometownwillbemoreandmorebeautifulinthefuture!ChangesinMyHometownMyhometownusedtobeabackwardplace,becauseitwasdeepinthemountains,wheretherewerenonicebuildingsandtheroadsweresonarrowanddirty.Peoplelivedapoorlife.Whileinrecentyears,withthedevelopmentofsociety,myhometownhasbeengreatlychanged.Nowtheroadsaregettingmuchwider.Treesandflowersareplantedonthetwosidesoftheroads.Theycanprovideuswithoxygenandfightagainstthepollutions.Sotheskybecomescleanerandbrighter.Whatsmore,youcanseemanymodernandbeautifulbuildingseverywhere,andthelivingconditionsareimproving.Peopleareenjoyingacomfortablelifenow.
