Unit 3 书面表达-冀教版八年级英语下册.pptx
书面表达书面表达UNIT 3 Animals Are Our Friends一、话题分析一、话题分析 本单元的话题是“动物”,介绍了动物是人类的朋友,一些稀有动物的数量正在减少等内容,呼吁我们要维护生态平衡,把保护动物当作我们每个人的责任和义务。二、写作方法二、写作方法“三要素法”写保护动物类作文:1.动物外貌;2.习性及现状;3.措施及感想。三、素材积累三、素材积累1.保护动物类作文常用词汇:look cute/lovely animals/live in/feed on/like to/the number of/protect them/.2.保护动物类作文常用句型:There are many.in.They are humans friends.Its necessary and important to.They are in great danger.We must do something to protect.We should keep the number of.in balance.四、写作任务四、写作任务 每年的3 月3 日是联合国“世界野生动植物日”,我国提出了“维护全球生命共同体”的主题。我们的世界因这些生物而变得丰富多彩,妙趣横生。保护它们,就是守护我们的未来。下面,让我们一起来听听熊猫惜惜的倾诉吧!假如你是熊猫惜惜,请根据以下信息给人类朋友写一封80 词左右的书信。要求:1.信中包含所给信息内容;2.适当增加细节,使行文连贯。注意:书信的开头和结尾已为你写出,不计入总词数。1.基本信息:13 岁,来自四川,中国的象征;爱好(自主发挥);2.我的烦恼:朋友少,家园常常遭到破坏;3.我的愿望或建议(自主发挥)。写作模板写作模板高分作文高分作文Dear friends,My name is Xixi._Yours,Xixi_Dear friends,My name is Xixi.I am 13 years old and I come from Sichuan.I am fat with black and white fur.Im the symbol of China.I like eating bamboo very much.However,for some reasons,I have few friends because many of us have been killed.The number of us is falling quickly.And our homes are often destroyed._Our living places are becoming fewer and fewer.Also we cant find enough food to eat.Were good friends of humans.I hope humans will stop cutting down the bamboo trees.Well be able to live in peace and enjoy our lives happily.Yours,Xixi 单词：pet,gentle,loyal,brave,protect,kill,hunt,feed,forest,environment短语：in danger,cut down,the number of,in balance,food chain,lose ones home,look after句 型：1.Animals are important in the food chain.2.We should think of animals as friends.3.We should do our best to protect animals.环顾四周，你会发现许多人拥有自己的宠物，请根据下面的提示，写一篇英语短文来谈一谈养宠物的好处。可适当发挥。80 词左右。提示：1.To improve yourself.(look after;make friends)2.Develop a good relationship with family members.(talk about)审题指导1.体裁：议论文 2.人称：第三人称为主3.时态：以一般现在时为主思路构建开篇点题 Now many people have one or two pets.分层介绍养宠物的好处Children who have pets are better at sharing and looking after others.Keeping pets will improve the relationship between the family members.If you have a pet,youll make friends more easily.Keeping a pet can make us feel less lonely.总结In a word,its fun to have a pet.种树的重要性Trees are important to people.Trees can give food to people and animals.They can make the air cleaner.They can make the earth more beautiful.Trees can protect the soil.范文赏析Now many people have one or two pets.Keeping a pet can make us feel less lonely.Its always gentle and loyal.And if you have a pet,youll make friends more easily.Because pets are often regarded as friends.Children who have pets are better at sharing and looking after others.They can learn something when they take care of pets.And familymembers can talk about their pets together.Keeping pets will improve the relationship between the family members.In a word,its fun to have a pet.Do you want one?点评：1.要点齐全。养宠物的四点好处都有所描述。2.过渡自然。and,if,because 等连词的运用使文章衔接自然，文笔流畅，语句丰满。许多人把宠物视为家庭中的一员，它们不仅陪伴我们度过了美好的时光，有时还会带给我们惊喜。请以“A Special Family Member”为题，根据以下提示，写一篇英语短文，描述一下你家里的宠物。80 词左右。提示：1.Whats your pet?2.What happened between you and your pet?A Special Family Member_A Special Family MemberThere is a special member in my familya lovely dog named Ben.It has lived with us for three years,and we all love it.Last weekend my parents took me and Ben to a park.At noon,when my parents were busy getting ready for the picnic,I walked to a river,and Ben followed me happily.I fell into the river when I was trying to pick a_flower.Ben barked and jumped into the water at once.When my parents heard Ben barking,they ran to the river quickly and they saw Ben was pushing me to the bank with its mouth.Now we love Ben more than before,and we consider it as a member of our family.
