高考读后续写遇险类写作积累学案-高考英语作文备考.docx
高考读后续写遇险类写作积累高考真题遇险类A few minutes later, the bear headed back to our camp. With great rage, the bear roared and tried to tear down the fence with all his might(力量). I gathered up my courage and tried to spray him again. Unfortunately, he managed to escape and my heart froze in my chest. At this moment, Elli came up with a crazy idea and threw our garlic bread at the bear. To my great surprise, the bear stopped and bowed down to eat the bread. Seeing this, all of us let out a sigh of relief. Before long, however, the hungry bear finished eating and then pushed the fence again. The fence was about to fall down!At the very moment, the helicopter arrived. Shocked by the noises, the bear stopped and turned around. Seeing the people equipped with guns, he ran away and disappeared in the woods as if he knew who they were. We finally got our breath and Elli and I embraced tightly with still racing heart. After we calmed down, the locals told us that the bears were losing their homes and food because of human activities and climate changes. On the way back home, I checked the precious pictures in the camera, lost in thought. This experience would be remembered, forever. 题目原文如下:重点是(词汇+套路讲解在下方)One fall,my wife Elli and I had a single goal:to photograph polar bears. We were staying at a research camp outside “the polar bear capital of the world”-the town of Churchill in Manitoba,Canada.Taking pictures of polar bears is amazing but also dangerous. Polar bears-like all wild animals-should be photographed from a safe distance. When I'm face to face with a polar bear,I like it to be through a camera with a telephoto lens. But sometimes,that is easier said than done. This was one of those times.As Elli and I cooked dinner,a young male polar bear who was playing in a nearby lake sniffed,and smelled our garlic bread.The hungry bear followed his nose to our camp,which was surrounded by a high wire fence. He pulled and bit the wire. He stood on his back legs and pushed at the wooden fence posts.Terrified,Elli and I tried all the bear defense actions we knew. We yelled at the bear,hit pots hard,and fired blank shotgun shells into the air. Sometimes loud noises like these will scare bears off. Not this polar bear though-he just kept trying to tear down the fence with his massive paws(爪子).I radioed the camp manager for help. He told me a helicopter was on its way,but it would be 30 minutes before it arrived. Making the best of this close encounter(相遇),I took some pictures of the bear.Elli and I feared the fence wouldn't last through 30 more minutes of the bear's punishment. The camp manager suggested I use pepper spray. The spray burns the bears' eyes,but doesn't hurt them. So I approached our uninvited guest slowly and,through the fence,sprayed him in the face. With an angry roar(吼叫),the bear ran to the lake to wash his eyes.优秀语块1.With great rage, the bear roared and tried to tear down the fence with all his might:熊大发雷霆,咆哮着,试图用尽全力拆掉栅栏。2.my heart froze in my chest:我的心仿佛在胸腔里冻住了3.a sigh of relief:松了一口气4.stop and bow down to eat the bread:停下脚步,弯下腰吃面包5.Seeing the people equipped with guns, he ran away and disappeared in the woods as if he 6.knew who they were. 看到那些装备有枪的人,他跑开了,消失在树林里,好像他知道他们是谁。7.embrace tightly:紧紧的抱着8.lost in thought:陷入沉思9.a racing heart:不停跳动的心10.the locals:当地人roar v. 吼叫,咆哮;(人群)用欢呼声激励,为.喝彩,为加油;哄笑,大笑;(尤指车辆)轰鸣着疾驶,呼啸而过;翻译:1.过往车辆的轰鸣声使我几乎什么也听不见。_I could barely hear above the roar of traffic.2.他离开办公室后,大家哄堂大笑。_After he left the office, everyone roared with laughter.3.突然传来一声咆哮,就像昨晚的暴风雨一样震耳欲聋。_There was a sudden roar, a roar as terrible and loud as last night's thunderstorm.4.水势迅猛异常。_The flood roared on, swift and violent.tear down v. 扯下;诋毁;拆卸;逐条驳斥翻译:1.然后他撕掉墙上那张愤怒的小纸条。_He tore down the angry notice from the wall.2.几年后,我们决定拆掉这个难看的房子,建一座带花园的漂亮房子。_Years later, we decided to tear down our ugly house and build a beautiful one with a garden.语填:They have struggled over the years _( tear )down outdated values and prejudicial systems. to tearequip ·v. 装备,配备;使有所准备,使能够胜任·翻译:为了安全起见,高层建筑必须安装消防水龙头。_For the sake of safety, all tall buildings must be equipped with hoses.在这个科技时代,很少人没有电脑。_In this world of technology, only a minority of people are not equipped with computers.历险类故事构造“三大套路”更详细内容,可点击预测:续写主题(生活类-亲情友情趣事类)+(脱险类-灾请迷路篇)·套路一:恶劣环境要烘托·1. So, my dad and I put on our new cowboy hats, got on our horses, and headed slowly towards the mountains(慢慢地向山走去). (17年11月浙江高考 )2. Never had I seen such a lovely creature in my life, so I followed its track without thinking twice(不假思索地追随它的足迹).(17年11月浙江高考 )3. In the process of seeking for it, I was totally immersed in the charm of nature(完全沉浸在大自然的魅力中). (17年11月浙江高考 )4. What's worse, he didn't have any food or water with him, let alone his cell phone or other supplies(更不要说他的手机和其他日用品). (江苏省如皋中学2021届高三第一学期教学质量调研试)5. We were in the middle of nowhere, wearing only underwear, with our supplies burnt into ashes(把我们的物品烧成灰烬), including our cellphones. (湖北省宜昌市第二中学2021届高三起点考试英语试题)·套路二:转折思维技巧好·1. Ultimately, we were back, safe and sound(安然无恙). (17年11月浙江高考 )2. We jumped into the warm vehicle and the forester drove us to the ranger station(开车送我们去巡逻站), where we were given clothes and were able to call our parents.(湖北省宜昌市第二中学2021届高三起点考试英语试题)·套路三:万能升华要牢记·1. Sitting in the guestroom, I found it really blissful to be accompanied by our beloved ones.(有我们所爱的人陪伴真的很幸福).(17年11月浙江高考 )2. Despite feeling weak, Nicholas was generally in a good condition,and he was really happy as he was carried back to the ski resort to reunite with his family(和他的家人团聚).(江苏省如皋中学2021届高三第一学期教学质量调研试)3.As our van chugged(发动机缓慢运转时)发出突突声) down the freeway, I thought this trip might not be so bad after all. Good-bye, regular old summer vacation. HelloTrip of a Lifetime(一生一次的旅程)(2021.03 十校联盟续写讲评)学科网(北京)股份有限公司