初中英语书面表达写作指导课件.ppt
初中英语书面表达初中英语书面表达写作技巧指导写作技巧指导中考作文评分标准中考作文评分标准第一档(第一档(13-15分)分)信息完整,表达流畅,无语言错误或基本无语言错误。信息完整,表达流畅,无语言错误或基本无语言错误。第二档(第二档(10-12分)分)信息基本完整,表达较流畅,有少量语言错误,但不影响意思表信息基本完整,表达较流畅,有少量语言错误,但不影响意思表达。达。第三档(第三档(7-9分)分)能传达部分信息,表达不够流畅,语言错误较多,但句子基本可读。能传达部分信息,表达不够流畅,语言错误较多,但句子基本可读。第四档(第四档(4-6分)分)只能传达少量信息,表达不流畅,语言错误多,只有少量句子可读。只能传达少量信息,表达不流畅,语言错误多,只有少量句子可读。第五档(第五档(1-3分)分)只能传达个别信息,表达不清楚,只有个别句子可读。只能传达个别信息,表达不清楚,只有个别句子可读。健康很重要。在学习和健康很重要。在学习和工作的压力日趋增大的工作的压力日趋增大的今天,会休息的人才会今天,会休息的人才会有健康的身体。人们是有健康的身体。人们是如何度过假期的呢?国如何度过假期的呢?国际健康组织对此作了一际健康组织对此作了一次调查,右图是他们此次调查,右图是他们此次的调查结果。根据你次的调查结果。根据你所得的信息,请为国际所得的信息,请为国际健康组织写一篇完整的健康组织写一篇完整的调查报告调查报告,并提倡大家并提倡大家进行假日休闲。进行假日休闲。作文练习作文练习travelstay at homevisit friends or parentsworktravelStay at homevisit friends or parentswork认真认真审题审题,找出文章要表达的中心。找出文章要表达的中心。写作第一步审审健康很重要。在学习和健康很重要。在学习和工作的压力日趋增大的工作的压力日趋增大的今天,会休息的人才会今天,会休息的人才会有健康的身体。人们是有健康的身体。人们是如何度过假期的呢?国如何度过假期的呢?国际健康组织对此作了一际健康组织对此作了一次调查,右图是他们此次调查,右图是他们此次的调查结果。根据你次的调查结果。根据你所得的信息,请为国际所得的信息,请为国际健康组织写一篇完整的健康组织写一篇完整的调查报告调查报告,并提倡大家并提倡大家进行假日休闲。进行假日休闲。审审travelstay at homevisit friends or parentsworkHealth is very important.(Cui Zixuan)How do people spend their vacation?We made a survey and here is our survey report(miss zhang)Last Sunday,I asked some students about what they did on vacation(Yan pengwei)用简单的句子或短语用简单的句子或短语列出列出文章要文章要点。点。列列写作第二步 根据以下关键词及图表用简单的句根据以下关键词及图表用简单的句子列出文章的要点子列出文章的要点如何度假如何度假调查报告调查报告倡议假日休闲倡议假日休闲stay at homeworkvisit friends or parentstravel A lot of people travel.Some people stay at home.Some other people visit friends or parents.A few people work.Enjoy your vacation.列列加加加首尾加首尾,使结构完整。可以采取总分总结构或者总分结构,开头或结尾的句子应注意简洁,漂亮。写作第三步:A lot of people travel.Some people stay at home.Some other people visit friends or parents.A few people work.How do people spend their vacation?We made a survey and here is our survey report.Come and enjoy your vacation.People who relax well work well.a nice heada nice taila nice bodyHow do people spend their vacation?We made a survey and here is our survey report.A lot of people travel.Some people stay at home.They watch TV or surf the internet.Some other people visit friends or parents.A few people work.Come and enjoy your vacation.The people who relax well work well.连连恰当运用关联词句,使得文章层次清晰,各个部分衔接自然。写作第四步:1.表示并列或递进表示并列或递进:and,as well as,bothand,2.表示选择表示选择:or,3.表示转折表示转折:but,however,though,4.表示因果表示因果:because,so,5.表示条件表示条件:if,6.表示解释表示解释:for example,such as,that is to say,7.表示顺序表示顺序:firstly,first(of all),second(ly),next,later,finally,in the end;8.表示强调表示强调:also,actually,in fact,9.表示结论表示结论:in a word,in my opinion,generally speaking,关联词关联词How do people spend their vacation?We made a survey and here is our survey report.According to it,most people travel.And some people stay at home.Also some other people visit friends or parents.However,a few people work.Come and enjoy your vacation.People who relax well work well.连连改改选好词句,修改修改文章。注意语言的正确性。在有把握的情况下展示自己的语言功底。写作第五步:书面表达写作技巧书面表达写作技巧审审列列加加连连改改