2023年新高考英语满分作文读后续写高分万能句03精彩开头(无灵主语-—如何写出夺分句)9028.pdf

专题 03 读后续写精彩开头（无灵主语）什么是无灵主语句？【无灵主语句的意义】无灵主语句，指用无生命的事物做主语，用人或社会团体的行为或动作做谓语，因此这类句子常常自带拟人化的修辞色彩，把没有生命的东西，赋予生命力，从而增加了主语的多样性，使语言更加生动化。例如：普通句：He cried sadly.无灵主语句：A sadness came over her.她伤心不已。同样是表达“她哭了”，比起普通句式中的常见句子，无灵主语句中这种“悲伤抓住了她”的拟人化表达，瞬间提升了高级感！【无灵主语句的运用】1.用于情感状态的抽象名词作主语+谓语 常见的情绪名词：happiness,joy,delight 开心快乐；excitement 兴奋；surprise,astonishment 惊奇惊讶；shame 羞耻羞愧；anger 愤怒；despair 绝望；regret 遗憾后悔；sorrow 悲伤；horror 惊恐；anxiety 焦虑；disappointment 失望沮丧；satisfaction 满意满足；puzzlement 困惑不解；eagerness 渴望等。常见的谓语动词：seize 侵袭；choke 噎住堵住；flood 充满；creep 不知不觉产生；grip 紧抓；give way to；wash over 洗涤侵袭；deserted 丢弃遗弃；well up 涌出等。在续写中写到人物的情绪或心理时，别总用 sb feel/is.,使用上述词构成的无灵主语句，句子瞬间得到升华。A lump came to his throat.他哽咽欲哭。Anxiety tore him into pieces.他焦虑万分，肝肠寸断。Despair seized him at the thought of his failure in the exam.一想到考试的失败，他就万念俱灰。A wave of nervousness washed over him.一阵紧张的情绪涌上他的心头。A chill of horror suddenly swept over him.他突然感到不寒而栗。A wild excitement took hold of her.她兴奋极了。2行为动作的名词作主语+谓语 常见的行为动作类名词：thought 想法,glance 一瞥,look 看到,idea 想法,feeling 感受,walk 走路；sight 看到等。常见的谓语动词：overwhelm 压倒；strike 打击侵袭；arouse 唤起；remind 想起；fill.with 充满.；change 改变；bring 带来等。在续写中描写人物动作或思考行为时，无灵主语句将人的动作和思考行为拟人化，让续写的表达更多样生动。The story reminds me of a saying that“Never judge a person by his appearance”.这个故事使我想起来一句谚语“不能以貌取人”。The sight of the scene filled me with horror.看到这个情景我心中充满了恐惧。A terrible thought suddenly struck me.我突然想到一个可怕的想法。A ten minutes walk brought us to the hotel.我们步行十分钟就到了旅馆。The thought of seeing her son very soon filled her heart with great happiness.想到不久就要见到她的儿子，她心中感到十分快乐。His name didnt register in my mind.我想不起来他的名字了。3 身体部位/音容笑貌类名词+谓语 常见的部位外貌类名词：face；laughter；smile；tear；words 说的话等。常见的谓语动词：light up，brighten 照亮；linger 继续存留；well up 涌出；flash 闪烁；crumple 弄皱等。在续写中描写人的外貌和性格时，写一个无灵主语句更高级！A frown stood on his face.他皱起了眉毛。Her face brightened when I gave her the present.我给她礼物时，她的脸上焕发出了光彩 His words sent me a quiver through my body.他的话让我全身不寒而栗 Laughter lingered around the room.笑声在房间里萦绕 Tears welled up in Lilyss eyes.泪水从 Lily 的眼中涌出 His face burned with embarrassment.他尴尬的脸都红了。真题链接：【2022 年新高考全国 1 卷】His usual big toothy smile was absent today.今天他那大大的笑容不见了。4 时间/地点/场景类名词+谓语 常见的时间、地点类名词：silence，hush 安静沉默；dusk 黄昏；dawn 黎明破晓；morning；afternoon；night等。常见的谓语动词：see 看见；witness 见证；find 发现；fall 降临进入等。The post war years in Germany saw honors heaped upon the great scientist.德国战后的岁月里，这位伟大的科学家得到了种种荣誉。Beijing has witnessed great changes in recent years.北京见证了最近几年的的巨大变化。The year 1949 witnessed the founding of the Peoples Republic of China.1949 年中华人民共和国成立了。Dusk found the little girl crying in the street.黄昏时分人们发现小女孩在街上哭。That chilly afternoon witnessed him trudging in the snow.那个寒冷的下午，他在雪地里跋涉。Night has fallen over the country.夜幕已经笼罩着乡间。5 自然现象类名词+谓语 常见的自然现象类名词：sun；sunshine；moon；moonlight；fog，mist 雾；rain；earthquake 地震等。常见的谓语动词：blanket 覆盖；come；bring；prevent 妨碍阻止；strike 打击侵袭；threaten 威胁/即将来临等。An earthquake comes like a thief in the night,without warning.地震到来，犹如夜贼，不做预告。A heavy rain visited the city.这个城市刚下过一场大雨。The rain prevented me from coming.因为下雨，我不能来。The thick fog blanketed the field.浓雾笼罩着整个大地。The snow scrunched underfoot.雪在脚下发出嘎吱嘎吱的声音。In the severe winter,another snowstorm attacked the whole world.寒冬，又一场暴风雪侵袭了整个世界。6 事物类名词+谓语 具体事物类名词：watch,car,pet 等。谓语则是一些有灵动词充当，这样无生命的事物被赋予了生命特征，具有拟人化的修辞效果，使表达栩栩 My watch says it is eleven.我的手表显示是十一点。The out-of-town shopping centre kill local trade.城外的购物中心令本地商业难以为继.7 用 it 作形式主语，其逻辑主语是后面的短语或从句 It was very wise of you to bring an umbrella.你带了雨伞是明智的。It is hardly likely that Tom may have forgotten to post the parcel.Tom 几乎不太可能忘记这个包裹。真题链接：【2022 年新高考全国 1 卷】It was no more important whether he won the first place or not.他是否赢得了第一名并不更重要。8 there be 句型 In the 1950s and 1960s,there emerged an awareness in Western societies that resources for the provision of fossil fuel energy were finite and exhaustible.在 20 世纪 50 年代和 60 年代，西方社会开始意识到提供矿物质燃料能量的资源是有限的且有可能枯竭。There is no doubt that radio and television are important means of communication.毫无疑问，广播和电视是重要的交流手段。There is a growing concern over the population growth.对于人口的增长人们越来越担心。9 谚语中的无灵主语句 Constant dropping wears a stone.水滴石穿。A stumble may prevent a fall.小惩大戒。A clear conscience laughs at false accusations.，不作亏心事,不怕鬼叫门。Fortune knocks once at least at every mans door.人人都有好运的一天。Need makes the old wife trot.事急老妪跑。Practice makes perfect.熟能生巧。