中考英语作文专题训练50套-含参考范文11120.pdf

试卷第 1 页，共 58 页 中考英语作文专题训练 50 套含范文 一、材料作文 1为响应我市“创建国家卫生城市”的号召，6 月 3 日，5000 多名市民以绿色出行的方式参与了“生态鄂州环洋澜湖健步走”活动。请以“共建绿色城市”为主题，根据以下文字提示，并适当发表自己的观点，写一篇英语短文。要求：80110 词(首句已给出，不计算在总词数内)。参考词汇：吐痰 spit 垃圾箱 dustbin 交通拥堵 traffic jams 环境 environment As a middle school student of Ezhou，its our duty to help build a green city._ _ _ _ 【答案】As a middle school student of Ezhou,its our duty to help build a green city.We can avoid the traffic jams and reduce the air pollution by riding bikes or walking.We mustnt throw rubbish or spit anywhere.In this way,we can keep our city clean and tidy so that we can live a comfortable life.And wed better plant more trees to protect the environment and make our city beautiful.试卷第 2 页，共 58 页 In my daily life,I can pick up rubbish and put it into the dustbin wherever I go.I can also save the energy by turning off the lights when leaving the room.In a word,everyone can play a part in building our city.【详解】试题分析：本文属于材料作文。以“共建绿色城市”为主题，根据以下文字提示，并适当发表自己的观点，写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文，一定要谈谈自己的看法。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；语言表达要符合英语习惯。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。【亮点说明】：这是一篇比较优秀的作文，本文很好地完成了试题规定的任务。覆盖所有内容要点；应用了我们熟悉的句型和短语 And wed better plant more trees to protect the environment and make our city beautiful.，play a part in 等，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，用词准确、句子通顺、行文连贯。2随着互联网和科技的发展，手机的功能越来越强大。然而，对手机的过度依赖却成了社会的一种普遍现象。请根据以下要点写一篇英语短文。过度依赖手机的现象 1.熬夜玩手机；2.作业不会查手机；3.过马路看手机；可能导致的危害 1.睡眠不足.；2.课上不必认真听讲；3.你的看法和建议 注意事项：1.短文须包括所有内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；2.根据情况作适当发挥；3.90 个词左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；4.文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名及地名。With the development of the Internet and technology,many people are depending too much on their mobile phones.【答案】The smart-phone has brought us great convenience.However,it has also brought us 试卷第 3 页，共 58 页 some problems.First of all,some students stay up late using the smart-phone.Some students prefer to surf the Internet to search for the answer rather than think it by themselves even when they do their homework.Some use the smart phone when they crossing the street.As we all know,the smart-phone can store a great deal of information,which makes our memory worse and worse.Besides,no one can ignore the fact that a growing number of people are occupied in chatting online and Wechat so that it will be difficult for them to communicate with others face to face in real life.In addition,some teenagers are addicted to playing Internet games,resulting in their suffering a poor sleep,which does great harm to their health.They cant listen to teachers in class carefully.In my opinion,we should use the smart-phone correctly instead of depending on it too much in our daily life.【详解】这是一篇给材料作文。本文所给材料比较详细，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态，主语是第一人称，注意时态语时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中正确使用比较形式，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。3乐于助人是我们中华民族的传统美德。作为一名中学生，在日常生活中要学会帮助他人。假如你叫张华，最近正在和美国笔友 Tonny 通过邮件讨论“帮助”的话题，他想了解在日常生活中你是怎样帮助他/她人的。请你根据他的问题回复邮件。注意：1.词数 90 左右，已给出部分不计入总词数。2.可适当发挥，使短文通顺、连贯。3.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。Dear Tonny,Nice to hear from you.As a middle school student,Im always ready to help others._ Yours,Zhang Hua 试卷第 4 页，共 58 页【答案】Dear Tonny,Nice to hear from you.As a middle school student,Im always ready to help others.I still remember I helped a girl with her maths when we were in Grade Eight.Li Hong,one of my classmates,was not good at maths,but I did well.So one day,I went to help her.Her big smile made me feel good.From then on,whenever she had problems,she would ask me for help,and I was patient to explain them to her.Little by little,her maths improved with my help.At the same time,I found my maths better too.Everyone may have trouble in life and we should help each other.In fact,helping others is helping ourselves.Yours Zhang Hua【详解】这是一封信的格式，信中让叙述是怎样帮助他/她人的，根据提示如果举例叙述过去是怎样帮助别人的，句子应该用一般过去时，句子的主语用第一人称，要从提示的三个方面来写，一是你帮助了谁；二是被帮助的人怎么啦，或者说有什么困难或问题；三是你怎样帮助他的。所写的句子应该符合英语语法，要使用自己熟悉的词汇及句型。短文用了一些短语和句式，如:help sb with sth 帮助某人做某事；be patient to do sth 耐心去做某事；at the same time 同时。用了 when，that（宾语从句中可省略）引导的从句，增加了文章的亮点。点睛：1.仔细审题，明确要求。审读所给信息，弄清楚所要表达的内容要点，然后对所给的信息进行梳理，可根据内容要点适当调整写作顺序，使文章行文连贯。2.列全要点，即提纲要点化，然后写作成文。此时我们就必须在大脑中将各种信息点补充完整，适时使用高级词汇和复杂句式。要根据提示将要点表达清楚，使文章的内容完整、饱满、要点齐全，注意适当增加细节。同时注意句子与句子之间，段落与段落之间要有合理的过渡衔接。3.检查核实，确保无误。4最近你班上的同学都在为毕业后是否出国读书展开了热烈的讨论，请根据以下要点提示谈谈出国读书的 优点和缺点，并将你的选择及理由告诉同学。试卷第 5 页，共 58 页 注意：1.词数在 80 词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数）；2.不能透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。These days,our classmates are having a hot discussion about studying abroad._ This is my choice.Will you agree with me?【答案】These days,our classmates are having a hot discussion about studying abroad.Some students prefer to study abroad because of the following reasons.First,there will be less homework and more free time when studying abroad than in China.Second,there are fewer people in foreign countries,especially in the western countries,than in China.Third,better environment can be experienced due to less pollution.However,other students would rather study in China.The first reason is that studying in China is much less expensive than studying abroad.Second,students must do part-time jobs when study in western countries.Third,studying abroad means leaving family and being far away from friends.As far as I am concerned,I will choose to study abroad when I am eighteen.At the age of 18,I have finished high school.And I will have been an adult.I think its time for me to learn to look after myself instead of depending on my parents.They have the same thought.This is my choice.Will you agree with me?【详解】这是一篇给材料作文，谈谈出国读书的优点和缺点，并将我的选择及理由告诉同学。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般将来时，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：Some students prefer to；there will be；there are；better environment can be；studying abroad means；I will；its time for sb to do sth,I think等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。点睛：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我们的同学关于出国学习进行了激烈的讨论，接下来介绍出国学习的优点和缺点，最后指出表达我的观点。此处 prefer to do sth,due to,would rather do sth,mean doing sth,far away from,as far as I am concerned,choose to do sth,instead of,agree with sb 等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。5暑假快到了，同学们都在议论着假期的计划。请根据下面的提示，用英语写一篇短文，介绍几位同学和你自己的想法。试卷第 6 页，共 58 页 注意：1.词数 80 字左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）；2.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。Many of my classmates are discussing the summer vacation plans.Anna _【答案】The summer holiday is coming.Our class have had a discussion about what to do during the holiday.Some are in favor of staying at home.Anna want to do voluntary work for the old.She would like to make new friends.Peter thinks it is better to travel in order to relax himself and learn about culture there.However,he will spend more money and meet some difficulties while traveling.Kelly would like to visit his grandma in the hometown.He also wants to cook himself.In my opinion,it would be much better to stay at home for I can do what I like,such as reading books,watching TV,and helping my parents with the housework.【详解】这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如 have a discussion，what to do，during the holiday，in favor of，would like to do，in order to，In my opinion，stay at home，such as 等。而 Peter thinks it is better to travel in order to relax himself and learn about culture there./In my opinion,it would be much better to stay at home for I can do what I like/I will be happy if I can be a member of your club.等多种从句结构的运用更是为文章增色不少。点睛：这是一篇材料作文。根据提示内容可知用一般将来时，按照提示内容逐条翻译试卷第 7 页，共 58 页 成英文，同时进行适当的发挥。6近日，某中学“iPad 进课堂”的消息引起了学生和家长们的讨论。你们学校的English Newsletter 正在以 iPads,coming into the classrooms 为题举行征文活动，请根据右侧表格提示的内容，用英语写一篇征文。学生们认为 1.不需要背沉重的书包去上学 2.很新鲜，学习更感兴趣 3.家长们认为 1.影响孩子视力 2.增加家庭负担 你的观点 1.2.注意：1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；2）所写内容必须包括表格中所有的相关信息，观点可作适当发挥；3）词数：90 词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。iPads,coming into the classroomsCan you use an iPad in the classroom?The answer is yes!Recently,students and parents are arguing about the new teaching method._【答案】iPads,coming into the classrooms Can you use an iPad in the classroom?The answer is yes!Recently,students and parents are arguing about the new teaching method.The students dont think they have to carry heavy bags any more.Its cool to have lessons over iPads.Its very interesting to study like that.They believe that they will learn more and better.However,parents think using ipads for too long will influence childrens eyesight.And some poor families cant afford to buy iPads.试卷第 8 页，共 58 页 I think in some ways iPads are good for us.We can search for information on the Internet at any time.Its easy for us to chat with our classmates and teachers about our lessons.【详解】根据题目要求，需要书写一篇议论文，探讨 iPad 进课堂这一现象，以及人们对此的不同观点和态度。文章需要使用一般现在时态，第三人称。结合观点式议论文的段落格式，首先在第一段提出问题现象，第二段表达支持这种行为做法的原因和好处，第三段描述反对人的观点及原因，最后一段表达自己的观点。注意多使用固定短语，固定句型，使文章增色。点睛：对立观点式 第一段：提出现象。第二段：Some people are in favor of the idea of doing X.They point out the fact that _支持 X 的第一个原因。They also argue that _支持 X 的另一个原因。第三段：However,other people stand on a different ground.They consider it harmful to do X.They firmly point out that _反对 X 的第一个理由。An example can give the details of this argument:_一个例子。第四段：There is some truth in both arguments.But I think the advantages of X overweigh the disadvantages.In addition to the abovementioned negative effects it might bring about,X also may X 的有一个坏处。7假设你叫李明，初中就要毕业了，你和你的好朋友林峰就要到不同的学校学习。在毕业之际你给帮助过你很多的林峰写一封信。信中应包括以下内容：1.表达你对林峰的感谢；2.简述感谢林峰的原因，适当举例；3.对林峰的祝愿 注意：1 词数 80 左右 2 文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数 Dear Ling Feng,_ _ _ _ _ 试卷第 9 页，共 58 页 _ Yours，Li Ming【答案】Dear Ling Feng，I would like to thank you at the end of our middle school education.You have been very kind and helpful since we knew each other.You have given me so much help that I will never forget.Last term，I caught a bad cold and had to stay at home for a week.When I was worrying about the lessons,you came to my home after school and helped me with every subject.With your help，I didnt fall behind others.I think Ill try to help others just like you.Thank you again.Even though we may go to different schools，Ill always stay in touch with you.I wish you success for the future.Yours，Li Ming【详解】这是一篇给材料作文，在毕业之际你给帮助过你很多的林峰写一封信，可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般过去时，人称为单数第一人称和第二人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：I would like to，You have given me，When I was，I think，I wish等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。点睛：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头表达你对林峰的感谢；接下来简述感谢林峰的原因，适当举例；最后表达对林峰的祝愿。此处 would like to,at the end of,catch a bad cold,stay at home,worry about,try to do sth,stay in touch with sb 等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。8随着互联网的发展，智能手机(smartphone)已被广泛使用。我们身边的“低头族(phubber)”随处可见。请根据图中所示，结合表格所提供的信息，以“Refuse to be phubbers”为题写一篇短文。试卷第 10 页，共 58 页 要求：1.短文须包含所有信息，语句通顺、意思连贯，可适当发挥；2.词数：80 个词左右（题目与开头已给出，不计入总词数）；3.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。Refuse to be phubbers With the development of the Internet,smartphones are widely used among people.Phubbers can be seen here and there._ _ _ _ _【答案】Refuse to be phubbers With the development of the Internet,smartphones are widely used among people.Phubbers 试卷第 11 页，共 58 页 can be seen here and there.While eating with family members or getting together with friends,some people are always using their smartphones.It can have bad effects on their relationships.Even worse,when some people cross the street,they still concentrate on their phones,which can be dangerous.And others stay up late at night playing games on their phones.I think it is really harmful to their health,studies or work.In my opinion,we should make good use of smartphones and not depend on them too much.And I do believe that face-to-face conversation is more enjoyable than chatting online.Lets put down our smartphones and refuse to be phubbers from now on!【详解】这篇作文要求我们以 Refuse to be phubbers 为题，介绍一下如何正确使用手机，拒绝做“低头族”。题目中给出了具体的写作内容：第一部分是根据图片的描述，介绍现在很多人都非常喜欢玩智能手机这一现象，引出“低头族”这个词汇；第二部分是这种现象的弊端；最后一部分介绍自己的观点，如何正确使用手机。这三部分组成了整篇文章的内容，学生写作时也可以加上一些过渡句，使整篇文章内容统一、充实。通过分析可知，这篇作文应使用一些限制时态，注意正确使用动词、名词、介词、形容词，句子表达应符合英语的习惯，不要写汉语式的英语。还应使用一些好的句型、短语，使整篇文章意思连贯，表达流畅。点睛：这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求介绍了“低头族”这一人群，以及这种现象的危害，并提出了自己的建议。短文内容完整、充实，上下意思连贯、统一。这篇短文使用了正确的时态，句式表达符合英语的语法规范，正确使用了动词、名词、形容词等。作文里还使用了一些较好的句式，如 With the development of the Internet,smartphones are widely used among people.、While eating with family members or getting together with friends,some people are always using their smartphones.It can have bad effects on their relationships.、Even worse,when some people cross the street,they still concentrate on their phones,which can be dangerous.、In my opinion,we should make good use of smartphones and not depend on them too much.And I do believe that face-to-face conversation is more enjoyable than chatting online.等。9假如你是林芳，你的朋友琳达这个星期天去东湖绿道游玩，来信询问有关情况，请你根据下列内容用英文写一封回信。内容要点如下：1.东湖绿道大约 28.7 公里长，宽 6 米。沿途可以欣赏到许多美丽的景色；2.东湖绿道包括四大主题绿道：湖中道（Lake Road），湖山道（Hushan Road），磨山道试卷第 12 页，共 58 页（Mill Hill Road），郊野道（Country Road）；3.东湖绿道只允许行人和自行车通行；4.如果想要走完整个绿道，差不多需要一整天的时间；5.补充一至两点个人对东湖绿道的看法。注意：1.书信的开头和结尾已给出，不记入总词数；2.词数：60-80；3.内容要连贯得体。参考词汇：scenery 景色 theme greenway 主题绿道 spend 花费 Dear Linda,_ Lovely yours Lin Fang【答案】Dear Linda,The Green Road of east Lake is about 28.7 kilometers long and 6 meters wide.There are many beautiful sights along the way.The Green Road of east Lake includes the four theme greenway,:Lake Road,Hushan Road,Mill Hill Road,Country Road.The Green Road of east Lake allows only pedestrians and bicycles to pass.It takes almost a whole day if you want to walk the whole way.I think you may spend some time enjoying scenery there when you are free.Lovely yours，Lin Fang【详解】这篇作文要求我们以林芳的身份给好朋友 Linda 写信，给她介绍东湖绿道的情况，以方便她去那里游玩。题目中已经给出了具体的写作内容，我们需要用正确的英语将这些内容表达出来，注意不要遗漏要点，以及英语表达和汉语不同的地方，不能逐词翻译，写汉语式的英语，而应该从句子的整体考虑，使用适当的词汇、短语和句型去表达，正确使用动词、形容词、副词、介词短语等。通过分析可知，这篇短文应使用一般现在时态，注意动词第三人称单数形式的变化。写作时，应注意文章的条试卷第 13 页，共 58 页 理性、连贯性和表达的流畅性，使用一些丰富的句型和短语，增强文章的表现力。点睛：这是一篇优秀的作文，短文按照题目要求介绍了东湖绿道的一些情况。首先这篇短文内容完整，包含了题目要求的所有信息，没有遗漏要点。各个内容的安排非常有条理，层次清楚。其次短文使用了正确的人称和时态，尤其是注意到了动词形式的变化，如 There are,The Green Road of East Lake includes等等，语法准确，词汇使用得当。最后短文中有一些较好的句型，如 There are many beautiful sights along the way.、The Green Road of east Lake allows only pedestrians and bicycles to pass.、It takes almost a whole day if you want to walk the whole way.、I think you may spend some time enjoying scenery there when you are free.等等。10题目学校组织过很多社会实践活动，请你写一篇短文，介绍一下你参加的一次活动，在这次活动中你去了哪里，做了什么，你的感受是什么。提示词：Agriculture Carnival（农业嘉年华）,the Science and Technology Museum,the Capital Museum.提示词：Where did you go?What did you do during the activity?How do you feel?_【答案】Last week,I visited Agriculture Carnival（农业嘉年华）,the Science and Technology Museum,the Capital Museum with my best friend,Liu Bing.It was my first time to go there.The moment we arrived there,we found that the building was grand.When we walked into it,there was a big hall in front of us.And then there were several rooms to show different kinds objects.There was a room for collecting scripts and paintings.There was another room to store clothes and shoes in the old times.The next room was for collecting the daily necessities in the old days.In a word,all the things in it had a long history.I learnt some knowledge from it.【详解】请在此填写本题解析!11假如你班要就“如何为中考做准备”开一个主题班会，请你根据以下内容写一篇发言稿，谈谈你认为在中考准备过程中要注意的事项以及理由：1.保持良好情绪。不要焦虑和紧张，否则会没有面对困难的勇气；试卷第 14 页，共 58 页 2.制定合适的目标。太低的目标使人懒散，太高的目标使人失去信心；3.不要熬夜，以确保上课时精力旺盛，注意力集中；4.多与父母、老师、同学交流沟通，以便走出困