中考英语书面表达热点话题《情感与态度》1723.pdf

中考书面表达热点话题情感与态度 话题突破 表达情感、表明态度是对中学生的一项重要要求,也是中考常考的热点话题。研究近 5年全国中考书面表达试题可以发现,情感态度话题的考查几率很大,。此话题范围比较广泛,主要从以下几方面进行设题:1.情感表达,如感恩他人、表达爱和幸福;2.生活态度,如诚信、宽容、分享;3.励志激励,如学会自立自强;4.应对烦恼、困惑,如学会解决问题、自我减压等。主题（一）直击热点 Writing 1 2020 春节由于疫情当前，今年的寒假显得格外的长。你的好朋友 Lin Lin 在家经常与父母亲争吵，与同学的交往中也遇到了烦恼，他写邮件向你寻求帮助。请你以李华的身份给他写一封邮件提出你的一些建议。建议内容包括：遇到问题多倾诉，多与他人分享情绪，尊重他人，与人为善，诚实守信 要求：l词数 60-80，开头结尾己给出，不计入总词数；2可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。3文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息。参考词汇:share solve respect friendly be honest to Dear Tony,Im sorry to hear that you have problems with your parents and classmates:Im glad to help you._ I hope everything will go well with you soon.yours,Li Hua Writing 2 微博（MicroBlog）是一个信息分享、传播以及获取平台。微博用户通过网络、短信或彩信，发布短消息，快捷、创新的沟通方式吸引着越来越多的“生人明星”和“网络草根”加入，成为一道亮丽的文化风景。越来越多的同学有自己的微博。对于微博 不同的人持有不同的意见。请你结合下面的信息发表自己的观点 写一篇英语短文。有的人认为网络不安全；有的人认为分享快乐与不开心的事情;有的人认为太花费时间；有的人认为得到朋友的建议和帮助；我的观点是.要求:1）词数:80 左右，开头已经给出,不计入总词数;2）可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。Microblogs are getting more and more popular with teenagers these days.Different people have different opinions on microblogs._ 主题二 典型剖析(一）（2019 年河北省）文明礼貌从我做起，从现在开始，从点滴小事做起。请根据下面的提示和要求，以“When to Say Thank You”为题，写一篇短文。提示:1)When should we say“thank you”at home?2)When are we supposed to say“thank you”at school?3).要求:1)短文须包括提示中的两个要点和一个补充要点，可适当发挥。2)短文中不要出现真实的地名、校名和人名。3)词数 80 个左右。(开头已给出，不计入总词数)参考词汇:wash,encourage,open When to Say Thank You Its polite to say“thank you”when others help us or say something kind to us._ 教你审题 看完题目后,同学们应首先明确以下问题:1.主题:When to Say Thank You 2.体裁:记叙文。3.人称:描述他人时用第三人称,表述自己的观点时用第一人称。4.时态:表达情感态度,时态以一般现在时为主。.5.思路点拨:可以采用三段式作文。第一段引入主题。第二段举出一些例子说明什么时候要说谢谢,第三段总结全文，提出倡议。思路导图 佳作赏析 When to Say Thank You 引入主题 举出一些例子 When to Say Thank You 总结全文，提出倡议 Its polite to say“thank you”when others help us or say something kind to us.when they cook for us.when they wash clothes for us When the teachers help us work out questions When the teachers and classmates encourage us,When someone open the door for us If everyone is polite to others,the world will be more and more beautiful.When to Say Thank You Its polite for us to say“thank you”when others help us or say something kind to us.Being polite is a good tradition in our country.Nobody likes a person who is impolite.Its important for us to be polite.We should say“thank you”to parents when they cook for us.We should say“thank you”when they wash clothes for us.We should also be polite at school.When the teachers help us work out questions,we should say“thank you”to them.When we get bad grades and the teachers and classmates encourage us,we should say“thank you”.When someone open the door for us,we should say“thank you”.We should say“thank you”as often as possible.If everyone is polite to others,the world will be more and more beautiful.运用了 its+形容词+for sb to do sth 做某事对某人来说怎么样及使用不定代词+形容词的表述，一些友好的话 something kind。动名词充当主语。使用了 who 引导的定语从句。help sb do sth 帮助某人做某事 使用短语 get bad grades取得坏成绩 使用短语 as often as possible.尽可能经常的 使用 if 引导的条件状语从句。满分积累 提分短语 做某事对某人来说怎么样 说一些友好的话 良好的传统 洗衣服 在学校 计算出 取得坏成绩 尽可能频繁 提分句子 开篇句:当别人帮助我们或对我们说一些友好的话时，我们说“谢谢”是有礼貌的。礼貌在我们的国家是一个很好的传统。没有人喜欢一个人是不礼貌的。对我们来说有礼貌是很重要的。结尾句:如果每个人都对别人有礼貌，世界会越来越美丽。点睛句:我们应该尽可能多地说“谢谢”。礼貌是人生习惯的第一件大事。一个人的礼貌是一面照出它的肖像的镜子 有礼貌不一定总是智慧的标志，可是不礼貌总使人怀疑其愚蠢 礼貌是博爱的花朵 礼貌使有礼貌的人喜悦，也使那些受人以礼貌相待的人们喜悦。好话一句三冬暖,恶语伤人六月寒。主题二 典型剖析(二）当今社会,很多家庭对孩子过分溺爱,导致当他们面对问题时手足无措。因此对孩子们来说,学会自立相当重要。请根据以上所述,结合表格所提供的图片及文字信息,以Learn to Be Independent为题写一篇 100 词左右的短文。社会 现象 你的 观点 家长应相信孩子,不要包办一切;孩子不要过度依赖父母,学做家务,照顾自己;勇于面对并解决困难;提出合理建议,让孩子自己做决定;要求:1.短文须包含所有信息,语句通顺、意思连贯,可适当发挥;2.题目与开头已给出,不计入总词数。参考词汇:make decisions;depend on;look after;on the one hand.on the other hand.Learn to Be Independent Nowadays,many children are treated as little emperors at home.教你审题 看完题目后,同学们应首先明确以下问题:1.主题:Learn to Be Independent。2.体裁:本文属于图片和提纲相结合的议论文。3.人称:描述他人时用第三人称,表述自己的观点时用第一人称。4.时态:表达情感态度,时态以一般现在时为主。5.本题提供了两幅图,一幅是父母包办一切,另一幅是孩子遇到问题不知道怎么办。表格中分别针对家长和孩子给出了不同的建议。鉴于以上分析,我们可以把作文分为四段:第一段,描述图片展示的社会现象;第二段,针对父母提出建议;第三段,针对孩子发表看法;第四段,总结全文。像这种图片和表格结合的作文,同学们要认真审题,注意不要遗漏要点。思路导图 Learn to Be Independent 社会现象（图片信息）As for parents As for children 结论 Parents show so much love to their children that when they face problems,they dont know what to do believe in their children give children proper advice and more chances to make their own decisions.shouldnt depend on their parents too much learn to do chores face difficulties bravely never give up.佳作赏析 Learn to Be Independent Nowadays,many children are treated as little emperors at home.Parents show so much love to their children that when they face problems,they dont know what to do.So its important for children to learn to be independent.In my opinion,parents should believe in their children and never do everything for them.Its necessary to give children proper advice and more chances to make their own decisions.As for children,they shouldnt depend on their parents too much.On the one hand,they should learn to do chores.It helps to develop their independence and teaches them how to look after themselves.On the other hand,they ought to face difficulties bravely and try to solve them.Besides,they had better learn to never give up.In a word,the earlier children learn to be independent,the better it is for their future.赏析:使用了 show.to sb.,so.that 结构和 when 引导的从句,句式结构复杂,为得高分奠定了基础。使用固定句型 Its+adj.+for sb.to do sth.,自然又恰当地引入主题。使用了 in my opinion,believe in 等短语。使用了 Its necessary to do 句型,give sb.advice,make ones decisions 等高级短语,提升文章档次。使用 as for children 自然地转换对象;还用了depend on 短语。on the one hand与下文的 on the other hand呼应,使文章脉络清晰,结构紧凑。使用了 ought to do,try to do 等短语。besides,had better 使表达内容更简明清晰。用 in a word 总结全文;句式the+比较级.,the+比较级.的运用显示了深厚的语言功底。满分积累 提分短语 提分短语 被视为 给 在我看来,相信 给一些建议 自己做决定 取决于 一方面 Learn to Be Independent 另一方面 应该 最好 总之 提分句子 开篇句:父母对他们的孩子表现出如此多的爱，当他们面临问题时，他们不知道该做什么。因此,重要的是孩子们学会独立。结尾句:总而言之,越早让孩子学会独立,对他们的未来更好。点睛句:在我看来,父母应该相信他们的孩子,从来没有为他们做一切。有必要给孩子适当的建议和更多的机会做出自己的决定。对于孩子,他们不应该太依赖他们的父母。一方面,他们应该学会做家务。它有助于发展他们的独立性，教他们如何照顾自己。另一方面,他们应该勇敢地面对困难,试着解决它们。之外,他们最好学会永不放弃。有志者事竟成。一切皆有可能。成功总是留给有准备的人。世上无难事,只怕有心人。主题（三）真题回放 Writing 1 2019 南平质检母亲节即将到来,假如你是李华,请根据以下内容提示,写一篇 80 词左右的感恩信,感谢母亲给予你生命,呵护你健康成长,让母亲感受到你真挚的爱。注意:(1)文中不能出现真实的姓名和校名,开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数;(2)文章必须包含所提供的主要信息,并作适当发挥。_ Writing 2(2019 年湖南长沙).假如你是李华，你们班输了上周的篮球赛。Henry 认为是他未能投进最后一球所造成的，有的队友也因此而责怪他。请你写一封英文邮件安慰他，谈谈你对此事的看法，并就如何取得队友的理解提出建议。要求：（1）80 词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；（3）信中不得出现真实人名和校名。Dear Henry,I learned that you are feeling sorry and upset because of losing the basketball game _ 主题（四）实战特训 Writing 1 每一代人都有他们不同的生活习惯，每一代人都有不同的思维方式，于是“代沟”就悄然形成了。它如同一座大山一样，把不同时代的人截然分开，使他们不能彼此理解。经常听到有些孩子抱怨父母不理解他们，父母与孩子之间存在着代沟。假设你是一位父亲或母亲，你会怎样处理与孩子之间的关系？要求：语句通顺，过渡自然，80 词左右。提示：1）多交流，增进相互了解；2）不要总是抱怨孩子，应当多鼓励；3）给孩子适当的娱乐时间；4）为孩子树立一个好榜样。If I Were a Parent _ Writing 2 假设你是李华，望子成龙”、“望女成凤”是很多父母的想法和心愿，这些父母仅仅是将孩子看成了自己愿望的接力棒而已，或许在他们看来，生孩子就是为了实现自己未能实现的梦。在家里你的父母总是对你有很多要求，有时你是否会感到厌烦呢?你是怎样解决的?请你根据下列表格提示用英语写一篇短文。父母的要求 每天打扫房间;不能玩电脑游戏;晚上 10 点前必须睡觉.你的看法 虽然太严厉，但理解他们.你的解决方式 与父母多交流；为父母做些家务.要求:1）文章必须包括表格中所给提示内容，可以展开思路，适当发挥。2）不能出现真实的校名、人名和其他真实信息。3）词数 80 左右。Writing 3 每个人在自己的成长过程中都有自己的烦恼，都有自己的成长体验，而青少年面临越来越多的烦恼，主要体现在精神压力太大请以此为话题写一篇 80 词左右的短文 要点提示：1）导致青少年精神压力大的主要原因：学业 与他人相处 2）减少压力的措施：积极参加课外活动 多与他人交流沟通 3）简要谈谈你对压力利弊的看法（至少一点）注意：1）文章开头已给出，不计入总词数.2）文章必须包含所给要点提示，要求语句通顺，行文连贯.3）不可逐词翻译，应有独自的见解并适当发挥.4）文章中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名.We teenagers have more and more pressure while growing up._ 主题（一）直击热点 Writing 1【参考范文】Dear Lin Lin,Im sorry to hear that you have problems with classmates.Im glad to help you.Here are some suggestions for you.First,when you have difficulties,you should talk to your parents,your teachers or your friends and share your sadness and happiness with them.They will help you solve the problem.Second,when you get along with your friends,you are supposed to respect them.Third,you should be friendly to people around you.You can help each other.Last but not least,you have to be honest to your friends.Then you will make more friends.I hope everything will go well with you soon.Yours,Li Hua Writing 2【参考范文】Micro blogs are getting more and more popular with teenagers these days.Different people have different opinions on Micro blogs.Many people think it is good for teenagers to share their opinions on Micro blogs.They can share their joy and sadness on Micro blogs.Micro blogs make it easier for teenagers to get help and advice from friends.But many other people say the interment is not safe enough and it takes too much time.They say Micro blogs are only for adults.I think it is good for teenagers to use Micro blogs.But we shouldnt spend too much time on them.主题二 典型剖析(一）满分积累 提分短语 做某事对某人来说怎么样 its+形容词+for sb to do sth 说一些友好的话 something kind 良好的传统 good tradition 洗衣服 wash clothes 在学校 at school 计算出 work out 取得坏成绩 get bad grades 尽可能频繁 as often as possible.提分句子 开篇句:当别人帮助我们或对我们说一些友好的话时，我们说“谢谢”是有礼貌的。Its polite for us to say“thank you”when others help us or say something kind to us.礼貌在我们的国家是一个很好的传统。Being polite is a good tradition in our country.没有人喜欢一个人是不礼貌的。Nobody likes a person who is impolite.对我们来说有礼貌是很重要的。Its important for us to be polite.结尾句:如果每个人都对别人有礼貌，世界会越来越美丽。If everyone is polite to others,the world will be more and more beautiful.点睛句:我们应该尽可能多地说“谢谢”。We should say“thank you”as often as possible.礼貌是人生习惯的第一件大事。Politeness is the first great thing in life.一个人的礼貌是一面照出它的肖像的镜子 A mans courtesy is a mirror to his image 有礼貌不一定总是智慧的标志，可是不礼貌总使人怀疑其愚蠢 Good manners are not always signs of wisdom,but bad manners always make one suspect of folly 礼貌是博爱的花朵 Politeness is the flower of universal love 礼貌使有礼貌的人喜悦，也使那些受人以礼貌相待的人们喜悦。Politeness pleases those who are polite,and those who are treated with courtesy.好话一句三冬暖,恶语伤人六月寒。A good word is warm in winter,but a bad word hurts in June.主题二 典型剖析(二）满分积累 提分短语 被视为 be treated as 给 某人 show sth to sb.在我看来 In my opinion 相信 believe in 给一些建议 give some advice 自己做决定 make ones own decisions.取决于 depend on 一方面 On the one hand,另一方面 On the other hand 应该 ought to 最好 had better 总之 In a word 提分句子 开篇句:父母对他们的孩子表现出如此多的爱，当他们面临问题时，他们不知道该做什么。Parents show so much love to their children that when they face problems,they dont know what to do.因此,重要的是孩子们学会独立。So its important for children to learn to be independent.结尾句:总而言之,越早让孩子学会独立,对他们的未来更好。In a word,the earlier children learn to be independent,the better it is for their future.点睛句:在我看来,父母应该相信他们的孩子,从来没有为他们做一切。In my opinion,parents should believe in their children and never do everything for them.有必要给孩子适当的建议和更多的机会做出自己的决定。Its necessary to give children proper advice and more chances to make their own decisions.对于孩子,他们不应该太依赖他们的父母。As for children,they shouldnt depend on their parents too much.一方面,他们应该学会做家务。On the one hand,they should learn to do chores.它有助于发展他们的独立性，教他们如何照顾自己。It helps to develop their independence and teaches them how to look after themselves.另一方面,他们应该勇敢地面对困难,试着解决它们。On the other hand,they ought to face difficulties bravely and try to solve them.之外,他们最好学会永不放弃。Besides,they had better learn to never give up.有志者事竟成。Where there is a will,there is a way.一切皆有可能。Nothing is impossible.成功总是留给有准备的人。Success will always come to a ready man.世上无难事,只怕有心人。Nothing is difficult if we put our heart into it.主题（三）真题回放 Writing 1【参考范文】Dear Mom,Mothers Day is coming.I would like to say Happy Mothers Day in this letter.You give me life and take good care of me.Thanks for preparing breakfast for me in the early morning.You took me to the hospital when I was sick.You teach me to be brave.When I have problems with my study and life,you are patient to encourage me.Also,I develop the good habit of learning with your help.Yours,Li Hua Writing 2【参考范文】Dear Henry,I learned that you are feeling sorry and upset because of losing the basketball game.Its not easy being in your situation,and its normal to have these feelings.Anyway,dont be too hard on yourself.You know,basketball is about team effort.Its never just one persons fault.What matters is that you should learn from the games as well as your mistakes.Besides,you need to think about how you can do better next time.As a whole,teammates should support and believe in each other.Why dont you sit down and communicate with them?And you could promise that you will spare no efforts to better your skills.If all of you pull together,youre sure to win the next one.Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua 主题（四）实战特训 Writing 1 【参考范文】If I Were a Parent If I were a parent,I would try to communicate with my child.I wouldnt say I was not like this or that at his age.I would allow him to develop his hobbies,such as listening to pop music,watching action movies,choosing his own clothes,making his own friends,etc.If I were a parent,I would encourage my child to have more fun after school.The most important thing is that I would set a good example for him and win his respect.Writing 2【参考范文】My name is Li Hua.There are too many rules in my family.I have to clean the room every day.I am not allowed to play computer games in my free time.I cant go out on school nights.I must go to bed by 10:00 pm.I think my parents are too strict with me.Sometimes I feel bored.But I understand.they really love me.Ill communicate with my parents as much as possible.and share my happiness and sadness with them.And Ill also often help them do housework.These will be good ways to get on well with them.Writing 3【参考范文】We teenagers have more and more pressure while growing up.The main reason for pressure is schoolwork and getting along with others.Students have been competing with each other since they were very young，which brings them too much pressure.Some students dont know how to get along well with others.They feel lonely.This can also bring them pressure and worries.Ill give you some ways to relieve pressure.First of all,you need to take part in all kinds of class activities，such as sports meetings,football games and singing competitions.In addition,you should be active in group work in class and be brave enough to express your ideas.Try to communicate with your classmates as often as possible.In my opinion,pressure is not a bad thing.Proper pressure is beneficial to our growth and development.If a person doesnt have pressure,he will become lazy easily.We should learn to face pressure in our life.